Bfmvrocks Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 This is my first try at a fanfic, <_<.=========================================================A mature, yet cocky, teenager known to the world as Damion, woke up one morning. He yawned, wiped his eyes, and sat up, and looked at a picture of his deceased parents, and put it back. He got up, and grabbed clothes from his dresser, and went into the bathroom to take a shower. *15 minutes later* Damion grabbed his backpack, filled with cards that he may need, and different Decks, and put on his duel disk. He walked into the other room. "Time to wake up Alex, it's time to get ready," he told the sleeping boy. Alex started talking in his sleep."No... Mom... Dad... Don't leave me... Don't die... Please... I need you...," he cried out. Damion looked at the floor, feeling guilty for some odd reason. Alex woke up, yawned and got out of bed. Damion repeated himself. "Let's go then," he told Damion. Alex grabbed his backpack, also filled with cards, and put on his duel disk, as they headed out the door. They walked outside, and noticed that it was seemingly different then every other day, it was darker. "Do you notice something, oddly different about today?" Damion asked Alex."Yeah, I know what you mean. I feel a strange prescence about the city today," Alex replied. All of a sudden, a scream shot out, crying in the dark skies. Damion and Alex looked at eachother, nodded, and ran towards the scream. They reached the location of where the scream was coming from. It was a little girl, and a man in a cloak. "Who are you, and what are you doing to that little girl?" Damion asked fiercely. The man turned, but his face seemed to be covered but shadows."My name is Atrum, and you must duel me," the shady man demanded. Damion looked at Alex, who looked worried."And if I decline?" Damion asked."Then this girl loses her soul," Atrum answered. Damion became serious."Let's duel!" he cried. He stepped back, and activated his duel disk. "Ladies first," he told Atrum, who became a tad enraged. Atrum drew 5 cards from his Deck, and then one for his turn. "I set one monster in face-down defense position, and then I set two cards and my turn is over," Atrum said, seeming confident."My move," Damion said, drawing a card. "since you have more monsters than I do, I can Special Summon my Ice Dragon from my hand." Damion continued, as a sparkling Ice Blue Dragon appeared, with it's Crystal Blue eyes glaring at the evil within Atrum. "Then, I tribute my Ice Dragon for a newer monster, Ice Dragon - Crystal Slasher," Damion said, as the Ice Blue Dragon disappeared, and a bigger Dragon with sharp, long, vicious claws appeared. "when I summon him by tributing an Ice Dragon monster, I can tribute one monster instead of two, then with his effect, I can destroy two Spells or Traps on your side of the field." Damion explained him. The two set cards were destroyed, and Atrum seemed uncaring."You destroyed my two face-down Statue of the Wicked's, so I get to Special Summon two Wicked Tokens in attack position," Atrum said."Thanks, easier for me to wipe you out," Damion smirked. "Ice Dragon - Crystal Slasher, destroy his Wicked Token!" Damion commanded. The Icy Dragon slashed the Wicked Token with it's large claws.Life PointsDamion - 4000Atrum - 2200 "Then I'll set one card face-down and end my turn", Damion declared. Atrum drew a card with anger, and stared for a second, but then started to laugh. "IT'S OVER!!" Atrum screamed as in expecting victory.=========================================================To be continued... So, what do you think?Long?Short?Boring? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bfmvrocks Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Um...Bump?Is this bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 Well a little short but I like it just add a little more next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joenorman Posted January 31, 2008 Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 needs more tex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bfmvrocks Posted January 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2008 I wanted to see if I could have suspense, I guess not.I will be writing the rest of this part in a little while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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