Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 [center]So I thought the Monarchs should have a overlord boss monster, so here he is. I got bored, so I named it after a Doll user's title "The Seven-Colored Puppeteer". Enjoy. Also I just realized, Doriado has another use now. I don't know if the attack restriction is a good idea, especially since it nukes your own field if destroyed. This card is making me want to write a fanfic now, but I never made one so I'm not attempting... yet. I would also like some corrections, suggestions and all that. [i]Alistikos the Seven Colored Monarch[/i] [Level 8 ********] [LIGHT] [Beast-Warrior/Effect] [ATK/2900] [DEF/1800] When this card is successfully Tribute Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects from 1 of the appropriate monster's Attribute Tributed for this card's Tribute Summon. -[u][b]LIGHT[/b][/u]: Destroy monsters your opponent controls up to the number of Spell and Traps your opponent controls. -[u][b]DARK[/b][/u]: Remove from play 1 card on the field and the controller of that card takes 900 damage. Then draw 1 card. -[u][b]EARTH[/b][/u]: Flip all face-down cards face-up, then destroy up to 2 of those flipped cards and return the rest to their original position. -[u][b]FIRE[/b][/u]: Return 1 card your opponent controls to the owner's hand and discard 1 random card in your opponent's hand. Then inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. -[u][b]WATER[/b][/u]: Destroy Spell and Trap Cards on the field equal to the number of cards in your hand. -[u][b]WIND[/b][/u]: Return 1 card on the field to the top of the owner's Deck. Then return either all monsters except this card to their owner's hand. [/center] Link to comment
Dementuo Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 *Whistles* Impressive, D, impressive. Very interesting card, very balanced, and very playable. Good job. You get a 10/10 from me. Link to comment
Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Thanks Dementuo, I haven't been on in a long time, and this card has consistently been in my head, so yea. Here he is. I also like how he can be used in about any Deck, an Absolute Zero Deck especially, to clear all your opponent's cards if you have enough cards in your hand to do it. Although he is unusable in Decks with Solidarity, so Alistikos is upset. Also Fuh-Rin-Kah-Zan also makes him more ridiculous for the lolz. Link to comment
Dementuo Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Or, just use DNA Surgery to change every monster's Attribute to DIVINE. Think of it. A Kuriboh being used to destroy Shooting Star Dragon. Of course, Red Nova is safe from this. Link to comment
Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 DNA Transplant seems a bit kinda unneeded, since Scroll of Bewitchment kinda does a better job since he can use 1 Tribute. Though, all cards are pretty unsafe from the DARK, FIRE, and WIND effect, since Stardust can't negate and Red-Nova is still affected. I can still imagine how it looks like in my head. A super huge monster with a multi-colored cape wearing a mirror with silhouettes of the six original Monarchs, lol. Link to comment
YGOTASrules Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 cool card! 10/10 Link to comment
Azuh Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Be reasonable when you make card effects. For one, how are you going to fit all that card text in a card? Link to comment
Brinolovania Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Azuh' timestamp='1294368941' post='4916862'] Be reasonable when you make card effects. For one, how are you going to fit all that card text in a card? [/quote] This. I put the effect into the card maker and got this... [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/443/141822ri.jpg[/img] EFFECT IS TOO LONG Link to comment
Dementuo Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 The card maker shortens the effect. Link to comment
Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Azuh' timestamp='1294368941' post='4916862'] Be reasonable when you make card effects. For one, how are you going to fit all that card text in a card? [/quote] Woah. I didn't really think it was that bad. I'll try and see a way to shorten it. Edit: Well this is the best I can shorten it. Link to comment
Azuh Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='DHeroDogma' timestamp='1294406698' post='4917467'] Woah. I didn't really think it was that bad. I'll try and see a way to shorten it. [/quote] Not saying that its bad, but I'm saying that it isn't really realistic. Yugioh cards mostly have a maximum of 8 or 9 lines of text within the box. Also, with Monarchs, they are really not Type specific. So the line where it changes type doesn't suit the theme. The whole Tributing different Elements thing is great, but needs to be simplified (shorten down). Also, don't add the Divine element in. Its just a waste of text. Other than that, I like your idea of a boss Monarch monster. Good job Edit: lol you beat me to it xD Link to comment
Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Azuh' timestamp='1294407089' post='4917475'] Not saying that its bad, but I'm saying that it isn't really realistic. Yugioh cards mostly have a maximum of 8 or 9 lines of text within the box. Also, with Monarchs, they are really not Type specific. So the line where it changes type doesn't suit the theme. The whole Tributing different Elements thing is great, but needs to be simplified (shorten down). Also, don't add the Divine element in. Its just a waste of text. Other than that, I like your idea of a boss Monarch monster. Good job Edit: lol you beat me to it xD [/quote] Thanks, I was just kinda trying to make it fit into other random Type-related Archetypes, like Beasts or somethin' Well I removed the attack restriction, since he can't be Tributed with 1 Tribute and pretty much slightly shorten'd the Attributed effects. Link to comment
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