"Space time continuum fissure"

[shonenhikada]

I don't want to get branded with bad ocg so if you can help critique it would be appreciated.

 

"Space time continuum fissure"

 

normal

 

trap card

 

 

remove from play one monster on the field equal to the number of turns that this card was set on the field.

[Parting Shot]

i think it should be more like this:

 

"When you activate this card, select a number of monsters on the field up to the number of turns this card was set. Remove the selected monsters from play."

 

i'm not sure if that's absolutely correct, but if it isn't, it's pretty darn close.

[shonenhikada]

no it's just one monster i want to remove from play.

[Umbra]

Umbra style:

 

Space/Time Dimensional Fissure

Trap Card

Remove 1 monster on the field from play the same number of turns that this card has been face-down on your side of the field.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Alright. No offense you guys, but I have read a few card effects like this before and I think it should go like this:

"When this card is activated, remove from play a number of monsters on the field equal to the number of your opponent's turns this card has been face-down on the field."

 

You can change "your opponent's" to just "your" if you want.

 

Either way, I think the card effect is overpowered. And I feel people shouldn't post a single, written card unless it has an epic effect.

[Abstract [Atrocity]]

I think he means this:

When activated, select 1 Monster on the field whose Level is equal

to the amount of turns this card was Set. Remove the selected card from play.

[shonenhikada]

actually i was kinda of going for like a life shaver kinda theme to the card,but instead of discarding cards it removes the card from the game equal to the number of turns that the card was set on the field.

[Umbra]

actually i was kinda of going for like a life shaver kinda theme to the card' date='but instead of discarding cards it removes the card from the game equal to the number of turns that the card was set on the field.

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Which would be what I said.