~Demyx~ Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 OOC: I don't usually judge cards, so sorry if the review sounds bad. Tyler stood there, seeing Chaos Sonic's created card. He didn't usually hang around the Custom Card sections, he spent most of his time in the Role-Playing District. However, he had suddently had the urge to judge some cards. So there Tyler stood, reviewing the card. Chaos Sonic was looking at White Hallow, who was currently rating the card with him. He studied the card some more, then came to a decision. "Alright, I should say that this card's image is blurry. I've seen better pictures out there that could be here instead of this card's image. Next, the requirments: It's some-what OP'ed. It's a level 8 WIND Synchro monster, and he only needs 1 tuner and 1 non-tuner. From what I've seen, cards like this should use 1 tuner and 2 non-tuners." he stated, looking at Chaos Sonic. Then, he continued. "Now, I must agree on how low the DEF is to even out the high ATK. That part you got right, but maybe you should lower his ATK a bit." he said, smiling to him and almost out of breath. "Finally, I must look at the rest of the effect. It's attack can get ridiculously high from its effect and high ATK. The next thing I notice is that when it's destroyed, you can summon 1 Warrior-type monster from either players Graveyard onto your field." he siad, now out of breath. He panted at how much he had said on the card. Then, he concluded his report on the card. "Overall, it's some-what easy to summon, can become a strong beatdown, and can revive a Warrior-Type when he's destroyed in battle. He also has a terrible picture. Change the image, the effect, and either the level or the requirments to summon the card. That is all" he said, and he looked at Chaos Sonic, completly out of breath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 "..............I give up." Obsidian muttered. With a sigh, she turned away from her work bench. I can make cards, fine..... find a good, not blurry picture for it....no. Pathetic. Shows just how much my resources suck." Getting to her, she looked at her collection of home made cards. There were three Christmas ones, which she'd entered in a contest not to long ago. She was proud of that small collection, even though she'd been eleminated. There was also the Bulbasaur card, which she slotted into it's pocket. Then there were the random ones. Black Diamond Dragon..... The first card she ever made. Maybe some day she could come back and improve it, but she'd have to get much better at card making before she could be proud of it. There was the Nikki Kay set....... That one was pointless, only to pass the time. The Roleplayer Card she'd made for herself and it's duplicate. She intended to use the modified one in a Roleplayer deck she wanted to make. Puhleeze! That's 4 sets on her list. She was never gonna get them all created. Never. Not with her skills of procrasination. And pessimism. And, of course, that other card. When the power went dead in dead in the Card Maker Tower, cards got mixed up. Even though that had happened before she set up permanent residence in YCM City, it affected her too. That stupid card was there, not hers. Some baseball player card. It didn't look that good, but Obsidian hardly ever looked at it, so she could be wrong. Not that she cared. She left the Tower, deciding to go back home, to the Profile City. Her profile building was't exactly a mansion or anything. Just hanging pictures of her friends, which changed occasionally when they changed what they looked like, a list of the buildings she'd built. Places she'd visited recently. Same for everyone else. So had bios about there lives, Obsidian had goals. She just wanted a Roleplay building of hers to reach 15 stories. Just one. She'd be eternally happy. She also wanted to be well known. That goal, harder to achieve. (OOC: I'm assuming a page in a thread equals a storey on a building. Correct me if I'm wrong) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 "Ah-hah-hah! We've got a tie!" Jolta smirked. She laughed like a Yandere. "Actually, we don't. Only one vote more to go. So, who's that YCMer?" Jolta didn't realise she had used the same card for the past 3 1v1s. It was a rather remarkable card, but that was up to the final voter. She started taking off her hoodie, revealing a sleeveless, simple, white, short, dress. She moulded her hoodie into a yellow chair, then she sat on it. "Errr... yeah." OoC: lolPolymorphicHoodies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Nazo left the Card Maker Tower and placed two fingers on his mask. With that he gave a sigh. "Nothing much to do huh?" he said to himself. He then looked up to the sky and sighed yet again. "I gotta stop talking to myself..." he said to himself again. Placing his hand on the ground, he summoned his Kimeramon in a large ball of smoke. He then ran up to the giant creatures head and placed a card in front of it's eye. "Hey look what i made today!" he said. The card was 'Kimeramon - True Envoy of the End'. The Kimeramon grunted in joy and flew into the sky. Nazo pointed in the direction of Pop Culture Town and Kimeramon nodded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [font="Verdana"][b]Thomas continued looking outside and finally gave up he knew that no one would come around. 'I guess my ideas are just not that innovating enough to grab peoples attention. Oh well I should just go back inside and continue cleaning.' Thomas thought to himself and shut the door of his lounge. He felt so disheartned that he grabbed a bottle of drink and a glass and decided to drink it all as he continued to wait for customers to roll in. 'I hope just one person would at least come in so I don't feel so lonely in here.' He thought as he poured a glass and drank it all in a matter of seconds.[/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='ty9239' timestamp='1293852462' post='4902050'] OOC: I don't usually judge cards, so sorry if the review sounds bad. Tyler stood there, seeing Chaos Sonic's created card. He didn't usually hang around the Custom Card sections, he spent most of his time in the Role-Playing District. However, he had suddently had the urge to judge some cards. So there Tyler stood, reviewing the card. Chaos Sonic was looking at White Hallow, who was currently rating the card with him. He studied the card some more, then came to a decision. "Alright, I should say that this card's image is blurry. I've seen better pictures out there that could be here instead of this card's image. Next, the requirments: It's some-what OP'ed. It's a level 8 WIND Synchro monster, and he only needs 1 tuner and 1 non-tuner. From what I've seen, cards like this should use 1 tuner and 2 non-tuners." he stated, looking at Chaos Sonic. Then, he continued. "Now, I must agree on how low the DEF is to even out the high ATK. That part you got right, but maybe you should lower his ATK a bit." he said, smiling to him and almost out of breath. "Finally, I must look at the rest of the effect. It's attack can get ridiculously high from its effect and high ATK. The next thing I notice is that when it's destroyed, you can summon 1 Warrior-type monster from either players Graveyard onto your field." he siad, now out of breath. He panted at how much he had said on the card. Then, he concluded his report on the card. "Overall, it's some-what easy to summon, can become a strong beatdown, and can revive a Warrior-Type when he's destroyed in battle. He also has a terrible picture. Change the image, the effect, and either the level or the requirments to summon the card. That is all" he said, and he looked at Chaos Sonic, completly out of breath. [/quote] Chaos ran his fingers through his hair and sighed. "I-I understand..." he said looking back at the card. This card really was a last minute thing and he really didn't have much time to find a better picture, and the effect...he was hoping that it was good. He sighed again and said,"Thank you Tyler for your help. I will do my best to see that my Oblivion's Guardian monster will better serve its purpose after I edit the things that are wrong with it." Chaos glanced at White Hollow and asked,"Anything you would like to add to critiquing my card??" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='6-Shot Finale' timestamp='1293850490' post='4901953'] Michael grabbed the back of hid head. "Ow ow ow. Jerk. Damn, that girl scares me out. Even when complimented she's still so negative." He sighed as he thought about the idea of making an RP. "Well first I'm going to need clean clothes Plenty of my blood is here so I can probably leave and be back in a few minutes bandaged up and with clean clothes. Secondly, I'm not going to host, got it? Too much work to host. I don't mind co-host but host is just to much." For a mad scientist he was pretty lazy. He suddenly dissappeared and in a few minutes was back with new clothes and a few noticeable band-aids. "Why were we fighting anyway? I forgot. It better not be for some stupid reason involving cookies." [/quote] "Of course not," Atman said in a strange tone as he subtly hid a cookie into his pocket. "So, how about we think of a plot first? Maybe somewhere alo-" Atman was cut halfway by a strange rumbling sound. Then, the grounds started shaking. The fifth tremor in the past month, but not as strong as before, fortunately. The quake's epicenter was somewhere off General City, though possibly it could be felt by the neighboring towns of Introductions and Music. Suddenly, everyone's Messenger gave rang. A message from Falling Pizza that read 'Magnitude 2 Quake in General. Be cautious.' "Huh," Atman said, worried for his friends in the Games and Polls districts. He turned to 6-Shot and said, "Ima go check it out.. come with?" OoC: People near the Card Maker and in the Clubs Section should feel it. Its only magnitude 2, though, so it's not that strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Wynn walks away, snickering to himself. "I figured as much. Pika is quite the enforcer. Even so, I still would like to see how that match would've ended. It was just getting to the best part. Oh well." As he continues to walk, he begins to feel the ground moving ever so slightly. "Infernal earthquakes...I can't move 5 feet before one of them starts up again. Even so, they're getting stronger and stronger a little at a time it seems. This one seemed to be coming from the direction of General City. Perhaps it is time I went there. It seems something is about to happen, and I might want to be there to see it." He begins his journey to General City with an ominous feeling that things have only just begun and that the worst is yet to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Although the earthquake was weak it was unexpected and almost made Michael trip over himself. He kept his balance though with the help of a spear he planted into the ground to hold onto. Michael thought about checking it out. He didn't really have anything else to do other than tinker with some scopes. "I'm in. I've got nothing better to do and I hate these freaking earthquakes anyway. You don't get to many of them in Wisconsin. Well actually none at all. Tornadoes and floods yes. Although pretty low amount. Earthquakes no." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 After hearing the message about the quake in General City, Serenity became more concerned with the situation that had presented itself. [i]These quakes have become more recent and stronger with time. If this continues in this fashion...[/i]"That's it, I'm headed for General. I must get to the bottom of this." He said to know one in general. Standing up, he noticed that FTW was also headed in that Direction. [i]I hope it wont be to crowded, for that is the last thing I need.[/i] With this thought, he set off for General City. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 As Chaos waited for White Hollow to critique his card, he his messenger start ringing. He looked at the message and said,"Falling Pizza?? He usually doesn't talk to someone like myself...this must be important then." He then began to read the message, which said that there was a Magnitude 2 Quake in General. He put his Messenger away and said,"I'm sorry Tyler, White Hollow....but we'll have to continue this little conversation on my card later." He turned away and thought, [i]Whatever happened, I gotta make sure everything is alright![/i] He ran out of the building and headed straight towards General. "I guess its time to show everyone what the Sky Boss of the "Vongola HQ" can really do." he smirked as he rushed towards General, his left hand gripping the hilt of his katana tightly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Demyx~ Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Tyler listened to what Chaos Sonic said carefully when his messenger started beeping to. He picked it up. "It says the exact same thing" he said, worrying. The message was indeed from Falling Pizza, and an Magnitude 2 was happening in General. "Perfect" he mumbled as Chaos Sonic bid them farewell and he ran out of the building of Realistic Cards. "What's happening to this place?" he said to himself. "Now this is getting ridiculous! But I'm worried about General, so I'd better hurry" he thought to himself. Then, he ran out of Realistic Cards himself and came to a stop outside of the RC's building. He then looked around his surroundings and headed towards General. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Before Obsidian could walk far from the Card Maker Tower, the ground shook. "Damn Earthquakes!" She muttered. Then, her Messenger vibrated. She was intending to give it cool music which would play when it rang, but for now just vibrating would suffice. "Now what!" She growled, grabbing it from her pocket. "Magnitude 2 Earthquake in the Gen- Oh hell no! F***!" She put her Messenger back in her pocket, and began walking quickly toward General City. The Clubs District was their, alone with her favorite club, The Jolteon Clan. If there was an Earthquake in that area, she wanted to make sure her friends were Ok. Otherwise she'd kill herself. Literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 "I guess I don't like it. Maybe because I've quit making cards the past 3 years." White Hollow then started walking behind Chaos who was rushing. He could keep up nicely and his mind wandered. "This will get tough. I have a bad feeling about going to General...." Then he opened his PM and looked at his messages just to see if there were any updates. "Nothing still." He closed his PM and realised that Chaos was running holding his katana. "Fine then." He placed his hand at his Zanpakuto and rushed along with Chaos. "What was the message and from who?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 FFR was walking around the Clubs and Organization's district, looking for a new club or organization to join. "It's been so long and YCM looks so different, I'm getting older and older everyday; all my old friends are surely gone." Suddenly there was rumble of the ground but FFR had used his staff to support him so he wouldn't stumble. "That was odd, YCM was never one for earthquakes; however, that was so long ago..." FFR said and started looking around the Clubs and Organizations for someone he'd might know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 "Come on now Lora we have to get going!" I barked aggervated back into the apartment room as my foot tapped rapidly on the ground, making a low rythmic beating as it did, and checked my watch- 1:53 PM, "We're late young lady, I told you to start getting dressed an hour ago . . . Lorana A. Valient if you don't come out of here right now I'm leaving without you!" The sound of Lora walking towards the door stops and there she stands, in what I would assume is normal attire for a teenage girl for her age, but I can't say I'd approve of her jeans being so low . . . or that tight. Placing her hands on her hips she tilts her head a bit with a sly grin, "Okay I'm ready dad, now [i]I'm[/i] the one waiting on you." "Yeah yeah smartass now come on," I laugh shutting the door, locking it, and leaving a safety spell just out of paranoia. we climb down the stairs quickly, avoiding having to wait for the elevator to slowly haul itself up to our floor, and leave the building to enter into the buisy streets. Crossing the road once we see a chance, going against the light even, we make it across as the ground beneath our feet moves in a series of tremors. Lora manages to grab onto a street light . . . I'm not so lucky. Toppeling over myself I hit my head on a postage mailbox and land on my back as the shaking stops. "Dad, did the city ever have earthquakes because I don't remember there ever being any," Lora says stilll gripping the light post, aware of the change another round of small earthquakes could hit. Getting to my feet I shake my head, it was the first time I had ever heard of this place experiencing earthquakes, "No the only time the ground shook was when we were at war . . ." "Oh sh*t we're not going to make it in time!" after looking down at my watch I completely forget about the unusual earthquake which just occured and pull Lora away from the street light. Soon we are running around, through and even [i]over[/i] traffic to get the the roleplay in time . . . or at least now arrive not to late. <OOC: I figured since I was playing as "myself" I should show what I can do in FIRST person.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Nazo was sleeping on his Kimeramon's head when his messanger vibrated in his pocket. He struggled to pull it out however. When he pulled it to his face, he read the message. Apparently, there had been a magnitude 2 earthquake. "Good thing i wasn't down on the ground ey? Although, i guess we wouldn't have really felt it anyways huh?" he smiled. The Kimeramon nodded and landed in AOC City. "Not exactly what i wanted, but it's all good." Kimeramon rolled his eyes as it disappeared in a cloud of smoke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [quote name='White Hollow' timestamp='1293993582' post='4906564'] "I guess I don't like it. Maybe because I've quit making cards the past 3 years." White Hollow then started walking behind Chaos who was rushing. He could keep up nicely and his mind wandered. "This will get tough. I have a bad feeling about going to General...." Then he opened his PM and looked at his messages just to see if there were any updates. "Nothing still." He closed his PM and realised that Chaos was running holding his katana. "Fine then." He placed his hand at his Zanpakuto and rushed along with Chaos. "What was the message and from who?" [/quote] Chaos looked over at White Hollow and said,"The message was from Falling Pizza, not very often does that happen to me." He sighed and then continued saying,"It said that there was a Magnitude level 2 quake in General. I have to make sure everyone is alright..." He kept running, but then a thought crossed his mind. [i]What about Vongola HQ?![/i] he thought. [i]I have to make sure that my HQ is alright....if it isn't Chris Fusion, Daisuke, and Zero won't be able to go back to it.[/i] Now he had another mission on top of making sure the people in General were alright: go to C&O and make sure the Vongola HQ was still standing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catterjune Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 An annoyed tone on her voice as her phone continued beeping, though with less frequency as the status area had been done. "Yes?" A familiar voice entered her ear, and a smile soon spread itself across her face. "Just a minute." She entered the News Section of the world, raising her right hand. A silent tapping on the door, as she knocked twice on the door. She awaited to hear a response. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 When White Hollow heard about the earthquake he mind was hit by a thunder of thoughts "What....? Who did that? Unless a lock occured... Earthquake?" He then stopped and nodded to Chaos to stop too. "Wait a bit..." He drew his Zanpakuto and pointed Chaos. "If I release my Zanpakuto I can gain wings and fly... Its gonna be faster and we will have an avantage.." Then he placed his Zanpakuto near his head "But then I will be kinda low on power" He waited for a respone from Chaos as he wondered about his friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 "Well I don't have to have you fly me there..." Chaos said with a smile. He pulled out a small medicine bottle and then took two small blue pills out of it. "These are called "Dying Will pills...they're from an anime known as Katekyo Hitman Reborn. All I gotta do is swallow these two pills and..." He took them in his hand and tossed them in his mouth and swallowed them. As he did, the fingerless gloves on his hands started transforming into a pair of regular gauntlet gloves that had a blue gem on the tops of them. On his forehead an orange flame appeared and it didn't exactly burn him at all. He turned towards White Hollow and his eyes were a different color. Normally when someone took the pills, they're eyes would turn orange...but Chaos' were two different colors; his right one Amber and his left one Turquoise. He pointed his hands to the ground and then shot flames at the ground and he started to fly. "See? I'll meet you there." Chaos said as he then flew towards General. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 White Hollow smiled as he saw Chaos fly away "Nothing less expected from you pal" He then stabbed his Zanpakuto on the ground and whispered "Enclose, Murcielago" Then a green lighting flame cosumed him and green rain started falling around. He now had grwon two big bat wings, had larger clothing and more grown hollow mask remnants. "Glad I said I would be tired after flying.... I don't have to carry him now.... gee he looked muscular and heavy" He started flying behind Chaos and generated a green energy Javelin weapon in each hand. After some time he landed in General, now suffering from the earthquake "My god... Chaos..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Demyx~ Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Tyler looked around his surroundings. He saw White Hallow and Chaos Sonic in behind him. Thn Chaos Sonic started to fly. He then got an idea. He stopped running and started to think. The thought then came immediatly. He closed his eyes and focused on a bird strong enough to let him fly to General. He never tried summoning birds. All he had tried summoning were wolfs and moles. He focused extremly hard, and he felt the energy inside him being sapped. He felt like he was being drained of his energy. Then, after almost all of his energy was drained, he fell to the floor, exhausted. Then the ground started to shake, and it wasn't from the earthquake. A hole emerged in front of him, and a giant bird appeared. He had never been so amazed and exhausted in his life. He felt really dizzy, and he struggled to get up. Then, he looked at the bird. It looked like a big vulture, except stronger and it had a Pot of Greed for a head. He bowed to the bird, then jumped onto the bird. "Alright vulture, to General!" he said, holding onto the bird for dear life. The vulture spread his wings, and flew up into the sky with a lot of acceleration. He first needed to check on his two clubs, the Squirtle Squad and the Dragon Lords. he hoped that both of the clubs were alright. He saw White Hallow and Chaos Sonic flying ahead of him, and he followed them. Soon, the two landed in General, and he landed near them. Then he looked around General. He was speechless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Chaos saw this and said,"Its worse than I thought.." He looked upon the destruction and then heard a voice. [i]"Got here late and you see this."[/i] the voice said. Chaos looked to his left and saw the spirit of a younger looking teenager that looked like him. Chaos sighed and said,"Nightwing2199....just cause you're my first alias from here, doesn't mean you should start getting upset at me." Nightwing2199, or as he liked to be called Night, said back to Chaos,[i]I'm not being upset...just wish you would've gotten here earlier. But you have to go down there to help out the other members![/i] Chaos smirked and said,"Already on that..." He then flew down towards General as he saw the spirit disappear, hoping to see some survivors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 "God..... Was hoping I wouldn't have to exercise so much during the holidays." Obsidian panted. She was, it seemed, a fast runner, and she had run all the way back to General City from the outskirts of Profile City. It may not seem like a long way, but Obsidian, mind, is only a 12 year old. She's not used to sprinting that particular distance without stopping. "That.... was enough... exercise to.... last me a..... while." She panted. When her breathing returned to normal, she looked around at the destruction the earthquake had caused. Luckily, it wasn't bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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