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Name: Shusen Lon
Age: unknown
Personality: Agressive fighter Careful Planner
Likes:Being at the Top, Cake, Totally insulting others when they are at their best
Dislikes: Being Insulted, Having superiors
Fears: Losing, Succumbing to his weakness
[spoiler=Appearance][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2uiixrt.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Powers] Maniplate energy to re-charge in the heat of battle
Galic gun- Weak energy beam that is able to penerate and cause loss of limbs
Galick Cannon- A more powerful energy beam that is cabale of annihilation of a regular human being
Big Bang -powerful energy beam that violently explodes upon impact
Big Bang Storm-is what the name suggests (a storm of Big Bangs)
Minimal regeneration of limbs
Final Galick Cannon-Extremely powerful energy beam, capable of destroying a small town[/spoiler]
Weaknesses: Easily caught by surprise, Can only fight once every 3 days, Can recharge once every hour, Big Bang Storm can only be used once every 5 fights and requieres a recharge afterwards, regeneration completely depletes energy, Final Galick Cannon requires a recharge beforehand
Power Grid Score:
Intelligence:4
Strength: 6
Speed: 3
Durability: 2
Energy Projection: 7
Fighting Skills: 6
Total:28
Bio: Orginally from Kasuka Town, he was seperated from his family and used in constant human experimentation. A battered fighter, he escapes his hell hole only to find his family missing and suspicious lead to their capturer. He devoted his life to discovering them at all costs and is willing to cross all boundries to bring them home.

Lol its a saiyan :3
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[s]You read my effing mind[/s]

[quote name='ItacÑ’i' timestamp='1294093775' post='4909579']
Name: Shusen Lon
Age: unknown
Personality: Agressive fighter Careful Planner
Likes:Being at the Top, Cake, Totally insulting others when they are at their best
Dislikes: Being Insulted, Having superiors
Fears: Losing, Succumbing to his weakness
[spoiler=Appearance][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2uiixrt.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Powers] Maniplate energy to re-charge in the heat of battle
Galic gun- Weak energy beam that is able to penerate and cause loss of limbs to normal humans
Galick Cannon- A more powerful energy beam that is cabale of annihilation of a regular human being
Big Bang -powerful energy beam that violently explodes upon impact
Big Bang Storm-is what the name suggests (a storm of Big Bangs)
Minimal regeneration of limbs
Final Galick Cannon-Extremely powerful energy beam, capable of destroying a small town[/spoiler]
Weaknesses: Easily caught by surprise, Can only fight once every 3 days, Can recharge once every hour, Big Bang Storm can only be used once every 5 fights and requieres a recharge afterwards, regeneration completely depletes energy, Final Galick Cannon requires a recharge beforehand
Power Grid Score:
Intelligence:4
Strength: 6
Speed: 3
Durability: 2
Energy Projection: 7
Fighting Skills: 6
Total:28
Bio: Orginally from Kasuka Town, he was seperated from his family and used in constant human experimentation. His ability to manipulate Ki was of interest to the scientists.Keen on preserving his abilities, he escapes his hell hole only to find his family missing and suspicious lead to their capturer. He devoted his life to discovering them at all costs and is willing to cross all boundries to bring them home.

Lol its a saiyan :3
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Name:Tetsuya Lon
Age: unknown
Personality:A ruthless attitude toward others and is skeptical of world peace
Likes:The feeling of revenge, Using his abilities to their furthest capacity
Dislikes: Being belittled
Fears: Losing, Being Killed
[spoiler=Appearance][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2czqbmx.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Powers]Ki Teleportation: Able to teleport a short distance. Max 1 Mile
Ki Cannon: A concentated ball of Ki energy capable of blasting straight through a normal human
Shadow Cannon: A beam of dark Ki energy that similar to Ki Cannon but makes no sound or extra light. Requires Vast amounts of concentration and energy
Manipulate Energy To Recharge
Flight[/spoiler]
Weaknesses: His fear of height makes him shakey and weak in the air, Has no psychic defenses, normally overreacts with a pompous attitude,Is easily willing to trade sides for money or glory, unable to fire more than 3 Shadow/Ki Cannons in one sitting, cannot teleport more than once a day
Power Grid Score:
Intel: 2
Strength:3
Speed:7
Durability: 3
Energy Projection: 7
Fighting Skilz: 6
Total:28
Bio: Tetsuya was born Kasuka Town along with his brother, Shusen. He and Shusen would both regularly train in the small abandoned parts of Kasuka but was always within the shadow of his borhters superior natural strength. When his Shusen was taken in for experimention, he ran away in hopes of train to be stronger with others like him. Possessed by greed and power he became a hitman and regularly killed for the right price. When he heard of his brothers escape, he returned to Kasuka to "motivate" his twin brother to search for him. Whatever the excuse, Tetsuya, for a reason he long forgot, vowed to end Shusen and show his true potential .

@ DMG: [i]Sure[/i]
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lol whats up with the language?

Name: Shusen Lon
Age: unknown
Personality: Agressive fighter Careful Planner
Likes:Being at the Top, Cake, Totally insulting others when they are at their best
Dislikes: Being Insulted, Having superiors
Fears: Losing, Succumbing to his weakness
[spoiler=Appearance][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2uiixrt.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Powers] Maniplate energy to re-charge in the heat of battle
Galic gun- Weak energy beam that is able to penerate and cause loss of limbs to normal humans
Galick Cannon- A more powerful energy beam that is cabale of annihilation of a regular human being
Big Bang -powerful energy beam that violently explodes upon impact
Big Bang Storm-is what the name suggests (a storm of Big Bangs)
Minimal regeneration of limbs
Final Galick Cannon-Extremely powerful energy beam, capable of destroying a small town
Flight[/spoiler]
Weaknesses: Easily tires when using his speed excessively. Muscle tend strain after using his advanced strength. Easily caught by surprise, Can only fight once every 3 days, Can recharge once every hour, Big Bang Storm can only be used once every 5 fights and requieres a recharge afterwards, regeneration completely depletes energy, Final Galick Cannon requires a recharge beforehand
Power Grid Score:
Intelligence:4
Strength: 5
Speed: 5
Durability: 4
Energy Projection: 7
Fighting Skills: 7
Total:32
Bio: Orginally from Kasuka Town, he was seperated from his family and used in constant human experimentation. His ability to manipulate Ki was of interest to the scientists.Keen on preserving his abilities, he escapes his hell hole only to find his family missing and suspicious lead to their capturer. He devoted his life to discovering them at all costs and is willing to cross all boundries to bring them home.
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@ DMG
So? There are a few people with NO powers that can take on superhumans.
I mean, if you equip yourself like you have and had certain training, then you could possibly fight him on even grounds.

EDIT: Oh yeah, Itachi...
I just noticed that you're missing a condition under weaknesses.
Every character here needs a glaring weakness, and you don't really seem to have one.
Most of it is conditions on your special powers, but I still don't think that's enough considering strength and speed...
So yeah, you need a more vivid weakness on each one.
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