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I finally started on that Pokemon fic. This is the prologue, but I feel that it's a bit too short. Tell me what you think.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue]

 

 

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Any wish you desire. Yes, anything.

 

If your heart is pure, the Wish Pokémon will grant you this.

 

You can find it in the place where the nightshades bloom,

 

and the earth's guardians bear their fruit.

 

The Messenger will guide you there, but beware

 

the Fallen One. He will try to deceive you.

 

For he has already deceived himself.

 

If you find the Wish Granter, this will be yours little one.

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The sound of a book slamming shut showed that it was time for bed.

 

"Mother, will you read this to me every night until I get better?" Bright eyes wishfully looked up through the darkness, the light of the moon shining in their blue reflection.

 

"Yes, my love," replied a soothing voice. "Every night." The woman combed back the soft hair of the girl as she grew still.

 

The innocent child spoke again, "Do you think the Wish Granter really exists?"

 

"Of course," was the response, the pure little soul not able to see through the loving parent's lie. "Now sleep, the doctor says you need your rest." The woman rose to leave, only to hear her daughter's voice once more.

 

"Mother, do you think I'll get better soon?" Hesitation followed.

 

"Of course my love. Of course."

 

 

 

 

 

Spoiler Alert: She doesn't get better. =S

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I finally started on that Pokemon fic. This is the prologue, but I feel that it's a bit too short. Tell me what you think.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue]

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Any wish you desire. Yes, anything.

 

If your heart is pure, the Wish Pokémon will grant you this.

 

You can find it in the place where the nightshades bloom,

 

and the earth's guardians bear their fruit.

 

The Messenger will guide you there, but beware

 

the Fallen One. He will try to deceive you.

 

For he has already deceived himself.

 

If you find the Wish Granter, this will be yours little one.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

 

 

The sound of a book slamming shut showed that it was time for bed.

 

"Mother, will you read this to me every night until I get better?" Bright eyes wishfully looked up through the darkness, the light of the moon shining in their blue reflection.

 

"Yes, my love," replied a soothing voice. "Every night." The woman combed back the soft hair of the girl as she grew still.

 

The innocent child spoke again, "Do you think the Wish Granter really exists?"

 

"Of course," was the response, the pure little soul not able to see through the loving parent's lie. "Now sleep, the doctor says you need your rest." The woman rose to leave, only to hear her daughter's voice once more.

 

"Mother, do you think I'll get better soon?" Hesitation followed.

 

"Of course my love. Of course."

 

 

 

 

 

Spoiler Alert: She doesn't get better. =S

Too short :<

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*Tries to use reality warping powers*

Darn! I can't make you Fsjal fans! I'll have to resort to another method...

 

I started the previous Fsjal Fad after seeing Opal making one of hers. I hope this second one will go smooth...

inb4justgoogleit.

 

~Jirachi~'s pretteh good, just like ~Jolteon~ even though I'm sticking to mai Miki.

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