Jolta Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 OK, I'll make a Base there and you two will still be cos. Well, Imma ready... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Here's the Prologue - Part 1 of my fan-fic! I haven't made a name for the fan-fic yet, but I'll make it later! So.. as promised, Jolteon Clan gets first look at Prologue. Remember, this is just Part 1. So it's kinda short. So please comment, rate, C+C, enjoy! [spoiler=Prologue (Part 1)]Celebi stared at the dark void, that is surrounding Ilex Forest. Why is this happening?, she thought, with a horrid look on her face. She sped through the forest, searching for Pokémon in danger. Nothing. There is no Pokémon in the forest. Jirachi appeared behind the anxious Legend. Celebi turned to him, tears slowly forming in her eyes. “Why is this happening to this world?” she asked Jirachi, panicking. He frowned at Celebi, as the dark void begins to overwhelm the core of Ilex Forest. “This... is the work of Dialga and Palkia together”, he said. As he said those words, darkness swirled between the two Pokémon, as the once-green leaves flew across to the unknown horizon. As they glide, their colour changed to bright orange, before they withered, sighing. Jirachi turned to the next wave of leaves, swarming towards them. He started to speak,” Something happened to Dialga and Palkia. I think they- no...” He stopped, and faced Celebi sadly. “Palkia is the ruler of space. Without space, there is no land”, said Jirachi softly. Celebi turned to see the land disappearing by seconds. Jirachi continued, ”Dialga is the ruler of time. Without time, there is no day nor night. Just complete darkness”. As he finished, the eluding leaves halted in mid-air. Celebi's tears dropped to the shadows below, but stayed, as if it was paralysed. She stared at the now-chaotic Ilex Forest. The intense heat of the forest caused Celebi to lose control of herself, staggering back before plummeting down to the complete darkness. Jirachi swiftly teleported to the crashing Legendary. He narrowly saved her from death's grasp, by catching her at the most slightest time. Celebi's eyes shot open, as she stared blankly at Jirachi's relieved face. “I need to find a safe location for you. But this will sap all of my energy”, said Jirachi, panting. As he opens up the portal, his soul begins to fade away. Celebi gasped as she dragged his arm. “Please, don't open it. You will die”, she pleaded, as she shed more tears. Jirachi turned around, smiling at Celebi. “Don't worry”, he replied gently. Celebi grew silent. Why do I have this solitary feeling? Why do I feel like I'm never going to see Jirachi again?, she thought. “Go in”, commanded Jirachi. Celebi faced the portal. It was a small, white portal. This portal is unusual. It's... too strong, she thought. She glanced over to the smiling Pokémon beside her. After a moment, she flew into the portal, without hesitating. Celebi turned to face Jirachi one last time before the portal swallowed her up. I continue to have this feeling... where this is my last time with Jirachi, she thought sadly. A vision of Jirachi's soul fading, appeared again to Celebi. I hope Jirachi can maintain Earth's destruction, she thought before she blacked out. Jirachi... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 That is pretty well written, and works well. I don't like the fact you are sorta saying Jirachi won't get out alive, seeing as Jirachi embodies my username and all and I love Jirachi.One thing. There's intense heat in a frozen, disappearing forest? Does that even make sense? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 No, just Celebi won't see Jirachi ever again. Just intense fire was burning before the dark void actually appears so there's still heat in 'em trees. Anyways, I G2G now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 When they die, everyone and everything goes with them. Celebi saves teh dae. The Realm Trio still exists... IN MY FANFIC! Cya Sol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 I'm back... for a moment! No, the main characters are Pikachu and some other Pokemon! Celebi is just a recurring character. I'm handwriting Part 2 of Prologue now. Part 3 will have Darkrai and Cresselia actually working together now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 I can see Darkrai and Cresilia working together, if only because they are one of the few relationships in Forsaken (OCRAP I spoiled it for ya didn't I? DAMNIT) Bianca is mean. She used her Super Potion which ended up with the death of Jason. R.I.PJasonPurrlionMaleLv 6I guess my sincere promise was hollow... I'm sorry.Cant remember - 9th of July 2011 The first death. A sad one.Oh well. At least the female lives, right? Whish is good, considering Ky-Nim's fic had the first female as the first death. Pa. The. Tic. Hopefully Xana won't die either. Not the way she's going. Not now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Getting the ROM for Pokemon Black. Seems fun. Here's teh Jolteon I drew taht I mentioned earlier: BTW, I'm YellowHusky on that forum taht we'll make a club on. Does anyone here have an iScribble account? Add me as a friend; I'm SwagWolf there :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 iScribble? What is that? I never was a fan of MSPaint drawing...... (Dude, MSPA ARE AN EXCEPTION. Pixelart.) It looks kinda vcool though. Though I nor sure I really understand what the thing on the left is.... A person with goggles? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Well, I'll try to get a ROM for Blazblu or Guilty Gear. Omigawd that looks badass. Funny horseshoe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 iScribble? What is that? I never was a fan of MSPaint drawing...... (Dude, MSPA ARE AN EXCEPTION. Pixelart.) It looks kinda vcool though. Though I nor sure I really understand what the thing on the left is.... A person with goggles?iScribble.net is a site where you can draw some random shiez together with random perverts in realtime. Kinda fun, but I don't have an idea where I put my tablet so I suck. And the person is just a random skier. Please join :3 Unfortunatley, the registration only supports email adresses from ymail and rocketmail. Ima make an iScribble room for this club now :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tentacruel Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Okay guys, I thought of an idea for my fic. Tell me what you think. The main character is a girl who is around 10... *shot* *get's back up* who is frail and sickly and travels the world for a purpose I haven't decided yet with her Absol who is also frail and sickly, but due to old age. The Absol saved her life when she was younger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 That's good, I suppose. I was gonna make a Pokemon Trainer who travels around the world. But there's too much of that, so.. I did the PMD type of fan-fic. Prologue Part 2 is almost finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 I have an idea for you.She's travelling so she can find a cure for a disease only she has. YEAH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Articuno~ Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Here's the Prologue - Part 1 of my fan-fic! I haven't made a name for the fan-fic yet, but I'll make it later! So.. as promised, Jolteon Clan gets first look at Prologue. Remember, this is just Part 1. So it's kinda short. So please comment, rate, C+C, enjoy! [spoiler=Prologue (Part 1)]Celebi stared at the dark void, that is surrounding Ilex Forest. Why is this happening?, she thought, with a horrid look on her face. She sped through the forest, searching for Pokémon in danger. Nothing. There is no Pokémon in the forest. Jirachi appeared behind the anxious Legend. Celebi turned to him, tears slowly forming in her eyes. “Why is this happening to this world?” she asked Jirachi, panicking. He frowned at Celebi, as the dark void begins to overwhelm the core of Ilex Forest. “This... is the work of Dialga and Palkia together”, he said. As he said those words, darkness swirled between the two Pokémon, as the once-green leaves flew across to the unknown horizon. As they glide, their colour changed to bright orange, before they withered, sighing. Jirachi turned to the next wave of leaves, swarming towards them. He started to speak,” Something happened to Dialga and Palkia. I think they- no...” He stopped, and faced Celebi sadly. “Palkia is the ruler of space. Without space, there is no land”, said Jirachi softly. Celebi turned to see the land disappearing by seconds. Jirachi continued, ”Dialga is the ruler of time. Without time, there is no day nor night. Just complete darkness”. As he finished, the eluding leaves halted in mid-air. Celebi's tears dropped to the shadows below, but stayed, as if it was paralysed. She stared at the now-chaotic Ilex Forest. The intense heat of the forest caused Celebi to lose control of herself, staggering back before plummeting down to the complete darkness. Jirachi swiftly teleported to the crashing Legendary. He narrowly saved her from death's grasp, by catching her at the most slightest time. Celebi's eyes shot open, as she stared blankly at Jirachi's relieved face. “I need to find a safe location for you. But this will sap all of my energy”, said Jirachi, panting. As he opens up the portal, his soul begins to fade away. Celebi gasped as she dragged his arm. “Please, don't open it. You will die”, she pleaded, as she shed more tears. Jirachi turned around, smiling at Celebi. “Don't worry”, he replied gently. Celebi grew silent. Why do I have this solitary feeling? Why do I feel like I'm never going to see Jirachi again?, she thought. “Go in”, commanded Jirachi. Celebi faced the portal. It was a small, white portal. This portal is unusual. It's... too strong, she thought. She glanced over to the smiling Pokémon beside her. After a moment, she flew into the portal, without hesitating. Celebi turned to face Jirachi one last time before the portal swallowed her up. I continue to have this feeling... where this is my last time with Jirachi, she thought sadly. A vision of Jirachi's soul fading, appeared again to Celebi. I hope Jirachi can maintain Earth's destruction, she thought before she blacked out. Jirachi... Awwwwh... Sadness...*Ahem*. That's great Takashi! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Reminds me of those old classics where you run around the Earth searching for a meaning in life. Like Casshern Sins or something. Why is Absol so popular nowadays? I guess its OK... Very broken for its Tier. A whopping Attack and Supato Raku. With Supato Raku.But then again, Sickly Absols have too much Pressure on them. [/lamepun] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 My Prologue Part 2 is ALMOST typed up. And you guys will experience the unexpected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Hopefully when I get back I can see it ^_^ Squadala, I'm off! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Bye, Jolta. Yup, gonna be really amazing. Probably better than Part 1. Once I finish the Prologue, I'll post the Prologue altogether! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Good, I wanna read. If I get food :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Food? Here, a cookie *tosses Daemon a huge cookie* Part 1 is at the top of Page 126, in case you're wondering. Here's Part 2! [spoiler=Prologue - Part 2]Dialga and Palkia’s disappearance had a major impact on Earth, causing chaos in every region. Time stopped in some cities, while dark void destroyed others. The Legendaries tried stopping this disaster with all their power. But they realized that Dialga and Palkia are the only ones to reverse this. Celebi was the only one to escape the human world. But it was a mistake to allow her to leave. Now the Legendaries are in danger. Entei sighed at the burning sun. His breath turned into a small, everlasting fire. Suicune tapped the fire, releasing an icy atmosphere that immobilized the eternal fire. “When will this tremor... STOP?!” yelled Raikou, as lightning zapped on the earth, creating a strong blast. “Stop that”, Suicune hissed, as he stood up with a flash. He sighed, before continuing. “All we do now is wait”, he said, composed. “But it has been 3 days since Dialga and Palkia disappearing. All these occurrence should be blamed on those two”, growled Raikou. “Something happened to Dialga and Palkia 3 days ago. We shall wait for Ho-Oh’s arrival”, said Entei softly. The noble Pokemon stared down, as Raikou glanced over to Suicune sadly. Days passed without any news, and the three Legendary Dogs grew weak and frail over time. Ho-Oh soon flew over Burned Tower, his rainbow wings covered with blood. Entei was the first to be aware at that sight. “Ho-Oh, what happened?” he asked. Ho-Oh swayed weakly, before he slumped over the ground of Burned Tower. Entei’s two companions glared at the injured phoenix. His eyes glanced at the three Legendary Dogs slowly, showing a slight smile. “This is a painful wound”, he said slowly. Ho-Oh closed his eyes, as he cried in agony. “Who did this to you?”, asked Suicune. Ho-Oh twitched slightly before replying. “Ugh, Jirachi”, he replied. The Legendaries gave a gasp of shock and horror. He continued, ”He betrayed us. That... traitor! In truth, he came from a parallel universe. Where Celebi is, injured badly”. Ho-Oh stopped and stared at Entei carefully. Raikou stood, growling at the sky. “Where is he? I want to rip everything out of him”, he said. “No! He is strong. His power is unbelieveable!” said Ho-Oh, growling, as his voice echoed throughout the Burned Tower. Raikou trembled as he stepped back. Ho-Oh’s smile returned, as he lay motionless on the wooden floor. “My role in the mortal world will end soon. Please... stay away from Jirachi”, he whispered weakly. As he finished, his eyes closed slowly. Entei frowned, as he turned to Raikou and Suicune. “Ho-Oh’s dead”, he said quietly. The Legendary Dogs stood up, as they began to leap away into the surrounding cities and routes. An energy ball flew into Burned Tower, causing a massive explosion in the tower. A small figure stood at the tip on the rooftop, glaring angrily at the Legendary Dogs. They struggled to get out of the strong flames. Soon, they faced the attacker, growling at the figure at the same time. “Going... somewhere?!”, snarled Jirachi, an energy ball hovering at the tip of his fingers. The Legendary Dogs howled, before the sounds cease forever. All that was left of Burned Tower, was the ashes of the flames. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 *Nums of cookie while reading*Thank yew :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 YOU DAMNED BASTARD.HOW DARE YOU MAKE JIRACHI A TRAITOR.WHAT DID HE DO TO YOU, I ASK. *deep breath* ....Meanie.So Ho-Ohs dead. DAMMIT. he was one of the sensible ones in Forsaken....... pooh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Ok, Celebi's power is time-travelling, but if she does so... eh, it'll say why Jirachi is a traitor and why he helped Celebi escape. But rather.. he destroyed the final hope of the Legendaries, he made Celebi escape so she can't time-travel to the past. And if she does, she'll still end on the parallel universe. As for the Celebi x Jirachi thing, Jirachi stayed long enough (about 150 years) to make Celebi.. trust him. But how the plan started, was the day that Celebi trusted Jirachi and- I said too much. You'll see the reasons and stuff later on in the fan-fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 I am not going to read more, you killed Ho-Oh. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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