I became King of Written Cards... should I be happy with that?

[.Nu-13]

Yeah, I'm writing a fanfic... kind of alternate 5D's storyline. I skipped first 2 seasons and started from WRGP. I wanted to give Team New World some new toys, so here are they. Remember that they'll be fanfic cards, so they can be a bit broken and/or situational plot devices

Machine Imperial Engine | *1 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
You can send 1 "Machine Imperial" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand.
ATK/0 DEF/0

Machine Imperial Grunt Zero | *1 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
If this card battles a monster, destroy it at the end of Damage Step and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK. During the End Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard and the monster destroyed by this card's effect is in your opponent's Graveyard, remove from play this card and Special Summon that monster.
ATK/0 DEF/0

Machine Imperial Grunt Eins | *3 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can return 1 of your removed from play "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" to your Graveayrd to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard and select 1 face-up monster on the field with Level equal to or lower than the sent monster's Level and destroy it. During the End Phase, remove from play 1 "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" from your hand, Deck, Graveyard or field and Special Summon the monster destroyed by this effect.
ATK/1000 DEF/1000

Machine Imperial Grunt Zwei | *6 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can return 2 of your removed from play "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" to your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to select 1 face-up monster on the field with Level equal to or lower than the sent monster's OR that is face-down and destroy it. During the End Phase, remove from play 1 "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" from your hand, Deck, Graveyard or field and Special Summon the monster destroyed by this effect.
ATK/2000 DEF/2000

Machine Imperial Grunt Drei | *9 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by returning 3 of your removed from play "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" to your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. During the End Phase, remove from play 1 "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" from your hand, Deck, Graveyard or field and Special Summon the monster destroyed by this effect. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon as many "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" from your hand, Deck, Graveyard, or that is removed from play.
ATK/3000 DEF/3000

Speed Spell - Infinity Explosion
Normal Spell Card
Activate only if you hane 5 or more Speed Counters. Inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each "Machine Imperial" monster you control.

Speed Spell - Infinity Draw
Normal Spell Card
Activate only if you have 6 or mroe Speed Counters. Remove from play up to 3 "Machine Imperial" monsters from your Graveyard. Draw 1 card for each one removed.

Grunt Recruitation
Continuous Trap Card
Once per turn, you can add 1 of your removed from play "Machine Imperial Grunt Zero" to your hand.

[-DOOM]

The german word for one is "eins", not "ein". And why are the evil grunts named after german numbers ;P

I think they are fine. Grunt zwei seems a bit weak to me though.

[.Nu-13]

Eins? Ok, i'll fix it
Because Machine Imperial Soldiers are named in the same fashion
So how to make Zwei better?

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293197021' post='4879989']
Eins? Ok, i'll fix it
Because Machine Imperial Soldiers are named in the same fashion
So how to make Zwei better?
[/quote]

Maybe, Make it be able to select all face.down cards, not only monsters?

[.Nu-13]

But it'll make it better than Drei

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293197229' post='4879994']
But it'll make it better than Drei
[/quote]

mhm.... Then i have no idea. I guess zwei is fine then xD

[.Nu-13]

I wanted to make something between

Face-up monster with certain Level
X
Any monster

So face-down monster was most fitting IMO

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293197393' post='4880001']
I wanted to make something between

Face-up monster with certain Level
X
Any monster

So face-down monster was most fitting IMO
[/quote]

hm, yes seems reasonable.

BTW what options do you have to rfg zero?

[.Nu-13]

oshit, i forgot to add 1 card. Added it

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293197884' post='4880011']
oshit, i forgot to add 1 card. Added it
[/quote]

ahhhh ok xD Seems good. The speed counters are removed afterwards, aren't they?

[.Nu-13]

No. It's fanfic after all, so duels are on 4000 LP and counters aren't removed, like in anime

[.Nu-13]

Oh, just noticed, you lied to me, Villain

It's not supposed to be [i]Machine Imperial Grunt [b]One[/b][/i], only [i] Machine Imperial Grunt [b]First[/b][/i], so [b]Ein[/b] was completly correct

[-DOOM]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1293216289' post='4881002']
Oh, just noticed, you lied to me, Villain

It's not supposed to be [i]Machine Imperial Grunt [b]One[/b][/i], only [i] Machine Imperial Grunt [b]First[/b][/i], so [b]Ein[/b] was completly correct
[/quote]

"Machine Imperial Grunt First" is already wrong english grammar >_> You can say "First Machine Imperial Grunt" or "Machine Imperial First Grunt", although all names sound a bit wrong to me, and if you want to use first, then you have to say "Machine Imperial [b]Erster[/b] Grunt"

[Premier Alexander Romanov]

Do you mind if I use these as part of a Machine Imperial compilation I am making on YCM Wikia?