Create a New Thunder Archetype

[krspaceT1]

[spoiler=Basic Idea and rules]

The Thunder Archetype, a neglected set. While the Batteryman and Watt are nice in my option, I believe that they deserve more, much more. So, I'm starting this contest, whose goal is to create a new thunder archetype. The only rules

*At least 5 Effect monsters and 1 synchro monster. One of the effect monsters must be a tuner

*One or more trap cards

*If they are written cards, they must be described in detail in their appearance.

*A maximum, and minimum, of four contestants

 

 

 

[spoiler=Cost and Prize]

Cost; 10 points

Prize; 100 points to the winner and a rep. The others can gain a rep if I like their designs as well

 

 

 

 

Begin!

[beefman]

As in, "Begin", does that mean we can post?

[~ Dākunaitomon ~]

I join Points Sent Cards Comin

[beefman]

Here are my cards:

 

[spoiler=Electro][spoiler=Electro - Dargen the Warrior][spoiler=Lore]Lore: As long as this card is face-up on the field, any monsters that would be added to your hand by a card effect are Special Summoned to your side of the field instead.

 

[spoiler=Electro - Gon the Specialist][spoiler=Lore]Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Electro" monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Deck to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Electro - Kay the Destroyer][spoiler=Lore]Lore: 1 "Electro" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

"Electro" monsters you control gain 200 ATK and DEF for each face-up "Electro" monster you control. When you Special Summon a monster from your Deck, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard with the same name as that monster.

 

[spoiler=Electro - Belle the Supplier][spoiler=Lore]Lore: When this card is Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon 1 "Electro" monster from your Deck to your side of the field. That monster gains 500 ATK and is destroyed during the End Phase.

 

[spoiler=Electro - Voltt the Beast][spoiler=Lore]Lore: If this card is in your hand during your Standby Phase, you can add 1 "Electro" monster from your Deck to your hand. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Electro" monster with 1500 or less ATK from your hand in face-up Defense Position.

 

[spoiler=Electrifier][spoiler=Lore]Lore: Once per turn, by paying 500 Life Points, you can select 1 face-up monster you control. If the selected monster is not an "Electro" monster, it is treated as one for the rest of the Duel. If the selected monster is an "Electro" monster, Special Summon 1 monster with the same name as the selected monster from your Deck.

 

[spoiler=Electro - Niko the Technical][spoiler=Lore]Lore: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Electro" monsters on your side of the field by 300. Each time an "Electro" monster is Special Summoned to your side of the field, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

 

 

These cards, the Electros, focus on swarming the field and Gon works on adding cards to your hand, while Dargen Special Summons them for you, and Kay feeds off of that to complete the cycle with his own effect.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

No offense, but this contest is poorly made. You need more detailed info, like when we begin, when the cards are due, a list of the entered contestants, where we post the cards or if we PM the to you, stuff like that.

I really like this idea, I'm in.

[beefman]

No offense, but this contest is poorly made. You need more detailed info, like when we begin, when the cards are due, a list of the entered contestants, where we post the cards or if we PM the to you, stuff like that.

I really like this idea, I'm in.

 

Hooray for changes of hearts!

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

^^ just giving a few pointers.

[beefman]

When's the due date?

I don't feel like waiting until the next decade.

If you know what I mean. :P

[dogfish44]

Ba Dum Tish!

 

*applause*

 

Anyhow, I'm in. Sending Points!

[beefman]

Looks like there aren't gonna be any more contestants

[krspaceT1]

I've gotten the points, please post before January 1st if preferable. And now, NO MORE SPACE! Oh, and there is an additional, secret offer given to the winner. This prize can be refused and from there to go to the runner up. I will leave a hint though

 

Silver Turbo

Ghost King

[~ Dākunaitomon ~]

My Archetype is known as the Shock Viziers They Center Their abilities on While you control 1 Thunder monster with a lower level their hidden abilities are activated. Done :D

[spoiler=The Electrifying Shock Viziers!][spoiler=Shock Vizier - Air Cutter]

During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. While you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level equal to or lower than the level of this card This card gains The Effect that If this card attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step only.

 

[spoiler=Shock Vizier - Recharger]

When this card is Summoned you can Change the Battle Position of 1 of your opponent's monsters. While you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level equal to or lower than the level of this card This card gains the effect that If your opponent Activates a Card Effect that Decreases the ATK or DEF points of a "Shock Vizier" monster you control you can Remove From play this card to negate the effect and Deal 800 Damage to your opponent (this effect can be activated from the graveyard.)

 

[spoiler=Shock Vizier - Synchronizer]

Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up Machine-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) If you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level Equal or lower than the level of this card When this card is Sent from the field to the graveyard you can Have 1 "Shock Vizier" monster you control have it's level increased or decreased by 1

 

[spoiler=Shock Vizier - Assault Laser]

If this card was Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Thunder-Type monster you can Deal 300 Damage to your opponent for each Face Up monster with 1800 or more DEF. While you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level equal to or lower than the level of this card You can then Attack twice during the Battle Phase with this card.

 

[spoiler=Enforcing Electromagnetism]

While this card is Face Up on the field all "Shock Vizier" monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF. When you summon a "Shock Vizier" monster place 1 "Enforcer Counter" on this card. Once Per turn If you opponent Activates a Spell or Trap Card you can remove 2 "Enforcer Counters" from this card to negate that Spell or Trap and deal 200 Damage to your opponent.

 

[spoiler=Shock Vizier - EM Blaster]

When this card is Summoned you can Add 1 monster with a lower level than this card from your deck to your hand then shuffle your deck. While you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level equal to or lower than the level of this card You can Deal 800 Damage to Instead of Attacking with this card.

 

[spoiler=Shock Vizier - Lightning Archer]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Thunder-Type monsters

If this card battles a monster whose ATK is equal to or less than the ATK of this card, you can destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without applying damage calculation, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that monster's ATK. While you control a Thunder-Type monster with a level Equal to or lower than the level of this card All Thunder-Type monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF.

 

 

[dogfish44]

My monsters are the Ohm Fighters, which are actually humans, but have intergrated with electricity so much that they have gained powers from it. They focus on "Ohm Counters" and swarming. They arent complete, and they're written cards. Tell me if this is enough detail please...

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Jen the Swordslady]

Ohm Fighter - Jenn the Swordslady

2200 ATK / 1300 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"When this card is Summonned successfully, place 4 Ohm Counters on this card (Max 10). For every Ohm Counter on this card, this card loses 300 ATK. Discard 2 cards to remove 2 Ohm Counters from this card. You can place 2 Ohm Counters on this card to destroy one Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. Whilst this card has 7 or more Ohm Counters, this card can attack directly."

 

Image: A slightly tanned woman, about 28, with blond hair, wearing a full black armour, with yellow trimming. She doesn't wear a helmet however, but a sort of iron mask, which allows her hair to be loose. The mask is mainly black, with eyeholes revealing neon green eyes, and a lightning bolt symbol etchhed in Yellow where the forehead is. The background is made of a small village, with thunder clouds in the background. She holds a sword in her right hand, which is black with a yellow handle, and also has a shield, shaped in the traditional shape. It looks like an electrical circuit, except with black replacing the usual green background. On it, are 10 different lights, which light up in correspondance to the number of Ohm Counters she has."

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Hill the Archer]

Ohm Fighter - Hill the Archer

1800 ATK / 1100 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"You can discard 3 cards to Special Summon this card. If you do this, place 3 Ohm Counters on this card (Max 5). Twice per turn, you can place 1 Ohm Counter on this card to draw 1 card. Remove 5 Ohm Counters from this card to select and remove from play one card from your deck. You can skip your draw phase to add all cards removed from play by this effect to your hand. For every Ohm Counter on this card, this card loses 400 ATK."

 

Image: A slightly tanned male, likely between 18 and 21, wearing black fabric trousers and top. On his back is a Yellow Quiver, with Black Lightning Bolt marks. He fires Yellow arrows with black feathers. He has black hair, and his Bow (which is held in his left hand) like Jenn's Shield, is actually an electrical circuit, except with only 5 lights rather than 10, and yellow instead of the black. In the background id the same small village as that of Jenn's background.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Russ the Scientist]Ohm Fighter - Russ the Scientist

700 ATK / 100 DEF

LIGHT

Tunder / Tuner

Level 3

"When this card is Summonned, you can move as many Ohm counters as you like from other cards onto this card. When this card is used in a Synchro Summon, you can activate 2 of the following effects:

- Gain life points equal to the number of Ohm Counters on this card *200

- Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Ohm Counters on this card *100

- Place Ohm Counters on the Synchro Monster equal to the number of Ohm Counters on this card."

 

Image: A sort of chemistry lab background, with a scientist in the foreground, with yellow shirt and black trousers. Each button is a small black thunder bolt, and the scientist is male and shown to have aged, with grey hair and a balding patch. He is also very lightly tanned, and holds a rusty spanner in his right hand, and a chemical flask in his left, which contains a green liquid.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Sinn the Swordsman]Ohm Fighter - Sinn the Swordsman

200 ATK / 1300 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"When this card is successfully Summonned, place 6 Ohm Counters on this card (Max 10). For every Ohm Counter on this card, this card gains 200 ATK. Remove 2 Ohm Counters from this card to Special Summon an "Ohm Fighter" card from your hand, and negate its effect. Remove from play 2 cards in your graveyard to place 2 Ohm Counters on this card. If there are 2 or less Ohm Counters on this card, this card can attack directly."

 

Image: A tanned man, around the age of 30. He wears armor identical to that of Jenn, except his Helmet is a full one. Apart from that, he is identical to Jenn in terms of appearence, except he wields his shield and sword in alternate hands, and the lightning bolt is not on his helmet, but a small emblem on his chestplate. He also stands in front of the small village, the same one as Jenn and Hill.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Parr the Bard]Ohm Fighter - Parr the Bard

0 ATK / 0 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"For every Ohm Counter on this card, all "Ohm Fighter" monsters gain 100 ATK. Remove from play a spell card in your Graveyard to place 2 Ohm Counters on this card."

 

Image: A standard bard, with yellow hat and black outfit, like the standard Medieval bard would wear. He rests on a tree stump in front of the same village as Sinn, Jenn and Hill. He holds a lute in his left hand, made of black wood. There is a yellow lightning bolt mark on it.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Zenn the Magician]Ohm Fighter - Zenn the Magician

2900 ATK / 2800 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 9

This card can be Tribiute Summonned with 1 tribiute if the tribiute is an "Ohm Fighter" monster. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, you can reduce the battle damage to 0 to place up to 5 Ohm Counters on one card, and remove up to 5 Ohm Counters on another. If there are at least 20 Ohm Counters on this card, you can release this card to destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field.

 

Image: A wizard wearking robes and mask extremely similar to those of Dark Magician, except in black with navy trimming. He holds a black wooden staff, which has a yellow pearl at the end, with green jewels surrounding it. His face is covered by a mask near identical to Jenn's, except there is no mark on it. The background is what appears to be a church from the village.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - King Ohm]Ohm Fighter - King Ohm

? ATK / 100 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Synchro

Level 7

1 "Ohm Fighter" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Ohm Fighter" monsters

When this card is Synchro Summonned, place 10 Ohm Counters on this card. This cards original ATK is equal to the number of Ohm Counters on this card *200. This cards original ATK cannot exceed 5000 with this effect. During your standby phase, you can remove 20 Ohm Counters from this card to destroy up to 3 monsters your opponent controls. If you do this, during the end phase, place 15 Ohm Counters on this card.

 

Image: A man seated upon a throne made of electrical pieces, apparently in the same lab as Russ. He wears Yellow Robes with a Purple Cloak, and Black Crown. The man is old with grey beard, but holds a sword above his lap.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Cradle]Ohm Cradle

Continuous Trap

Pay 100 life points to remove 1 Ohm Counter from 1 card you control, and place 1 Ohm Counter on a card you control.

 

Image: A newtons cradle placed on a cluttered desk, except the usual ballbearings are emeralds, and they are held with white electricity, rather than string. On the desk, it is possibble to see a small pen drive and cell phone, which have a remarkable similarity to the Morphtronic ones.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Great Resistance]Great Resistance

Trap

Activate when an "Ohm Fighter" you control is attacked. You can activate 1 of the following effects:

- Negate all battle damage and draw 1 card

- Remove up to 5 Ohm Counters from 1 card.

- Place up to 5 Ohm Counters on 1 card.

 

Image: Jenn, Hill, Russ, Sinn and Zenn all surrounding a building, fighting of hordes of Dark Blades from all direction, both on the ground and those riding Pitch Black Dragon. Around them is some form of luminous sphere.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Current Change]Current Change

Quick Play Spell Card

Select one monster you control. If the selected card loses ATK for every Ohm Counter on it, it gains an equal amount of ATK instead. If the selected card gains ATK for every Ohm Counter on it, it loses an equal amount of ATK instead. Destroy the selected card during the end phase, and you take damage equal to that monsters ATK.

 

Image: A glowing switch, surrounded by wires running of in every direction.

 

 

 

DONE.

 

(I think that's obvious enough ^.^)

[~ Dākunaitomon ~]

Voila Im Done! at least RAW dude I never knew how neglected the Thunder Archetype was I'm really interested in finishing my Shock Viziers...

[krspaceT1]

True, only two archetypes really in said type, the Battermyan and the Watt, none of them exactly terrifying, and only a few monsters, such as Mist Valley Thunder Lord (more Wing Beast if you ask me), and Twin Headed Thunder Dragon (Does anyone use that card?) and Sanga of the Thunder (Again, does anyone use it?) with more than 2000 attack points. Well, I'd advise Dogfish to be finished with said card designs, and for Shadow Alpha to post his, and then the winner is declared.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

True, only two archetypes really in said type, the Battermyan and the Watt, none of them exactly terrifying

 

You have no idea. My little bro' (Shinato, Demise of Oblivion) uses a batteryman deck with every single batteryman card ever made in it, IT'S IMPOSSIBLE TO DEFEAT!!!! And I've been playing for what, 10 years and I'm not too bad. But that deck is impossible to beat, so so NOT underestimate the power of Batterymen!

 

Dueling that deck is like when Yugi uses Multiply on Kuriboh, they're everywhere! No matter how many times you destroy them, they KEEP COMING BACK FOR MORE!!

[krspaceT1]

Well, I've never really met a powerful Batterymen deck before. Or perhaps I'm just more of the type who can counter Batterymen style. For example, my main deck focuses on Synchro Monsters with a side arm of side strategies (Draco Equites and Spell Counters)

[shelds9]

My monsters are the Ohm Fighters, which are actually humans, but have intergrated with electricity so much that they have gained powers from it. They focus on "Ohm Counters" and swarming. They arent complete, and they're written cards. Tell me if this is enough detail please...

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Jen the Swordslady]

Ohm Fighter - Jenn the Swordslady

2200 ATK / 1300 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"When this card is Summonned successfully, place 4 Ohm Counters on this card (Max 10). For every Ohm counter on this card, this card loses 300 ATK. Discard 2 cards to remove 2 Ohm Counters from this card. You can place 2 Ohm Counters on this card to destroy one Spell or Trap card your opponent controls. Whilst this card has 7 or more Ohm Counters, this card can attack directly."

 

Image: A slightly tanned woman, about 28, with blond hair, wearing a full black armour, with yellow trimming. She doesn't wear a helmet however, but a sort of iron mask, which allows her hair to be loose. The mask is mainly black, with eyeholes revealing neon green eyes, and a lightning bolt symbol etchhed in Yellow where the forehead is. The background is made of a small village, with thunder clouds in the background. She holds a sword in her right hand, which is black with a yellow handle, and also has a shield, shaped in the traditional shape. It looks like an electrical circuit, except with black replacing the usual green background. On it, are 10 different lights, which light up in correspondance to the number of Ohm Counters she has.

 

 

[spoiler=Ohm Fighter - Hill the Archer]

Ohm Fighter - Hill the Archer

1800 ATK / 1100 DEF

LIGHT

Thunder / Effect

Level 4

"You can discard 2 cards to Special Summon this card. If you do this, place 3 Ohm Counters on this card (Max 5). Twice per turn, you can place 1 Ohm Counter on this card to draw 1 card. Remove 5 Ohm Counters from this card to select and remove from play one card from your deck. You can skip your draw phase to add all cards removed from play by this effect to your hand. For every Ohm Counter on this card, this card loses 400 ATK."

 

Image: A slightly tanned male, likely between 18 and 21, wearing black fabric trousers and top. On his back is a Yellow Quiver, with Black Lightning Bolt marks. He fires Yellow arrows with black feathers. He has blach hair, and his Bow, like Jenn's Shield, is actually an electrical circuit, except with only 5 lights rather than 10, and yellow instead of the black.

 

 

So far, so good.

 

I'll have the rest later!

 

*Cough* Binary??? *Cough*

[dogfish44]

*Cough* Binary??? *Cough*

 

And that would be wrong.

 

But the idea crossed my mind =P

 

(Oh, and have fun describing what the binary monsters look like. I couldn't find images for them >__>)

[krspaceT1]

Eh, I'll give Shadow until Friday, BUT ANY LATER AND THIS CONTEST WILL END WITH NO POINT REFUND

[dogfish44]

Or, you could just judge those who have posted?

 

Because otherwise it's not fair on those who HAVE done the work to give no refund and no judging.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

Hey. He's giving some more days to finish, so just sit down and be patient.

[dogfish44]

Sorry, I'm referring to the fact that he WOULD call off the contest with no refunds, not the extension itself.

[krspaceT1]

Not to you guys who have cards I may add

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

Oh, sorry ^_^ I thought you meant "just eliminate the last guy and judge the ones who already have posted", my bad ^_^