Naruto: Shining Above [OOC / Started / Not Accepting]

[Ghoulish]

hey guys i'm back nice drawing by the way Blu!And no offence to Auralady...but maybe Hotaru would be more suited to this rp warrior

btw the post by Auralady was way below par IMO, in ur first post u have u protecting everyone from the avanlanche....but then she does? Also her character in the rp wasn't even the slightest bit worried about the avalanche, thyat's the obvious sign that the person isn't of the highest standard.

[Hotaru987]

Probably a dumb, and obvious question (Which I am sadly known for....) But do you count Senbon as normal ninja gear? I'd raher get it right then quess and be wrong.

[Hotaru987]

Second question!!!

We're only allowed two nature types (the second comming from a Kekkei Genkai) right.

Ok, my app I have an Ice Kekkei Genkai, but in order to make ice you need the tw elements of Wind and Water. Like with Yamato, he uses Water and Earth to make Wood. And you said a genin won't know more than two different natures. So I was wondering if it'll be ok if I did that, and not know any Wind style tecniques yet, beside a wind style shadow clone so I can have some knowladge in wind to be able to use the combination of chakras. This way I can still have my kekkei genkai and not be over powered.

*fingers crossed*

EDIT: It might be easier to see my app. I'm almost finished with it anyway, and then you can critique it which ever way you deem fit.

Second Edit:

[spoiler=app]

[b][u]Personal[/b][/u]

[b]Username:[/b] 98413278

[b]Name:[/b] Kikyo Fuyume

[b]Ninja Registration #:[/b] 093396

[b]Birth date:[/b] April 18

[b]Age:[/b] 13

[b]Height:[/b] 5’0

[b]Weight:[/b] 120

[b]Blood Type:[/b] AB+

[b]Gender:[/b] Female

[spoiler=[b]Clan:[/b]]Fuyume Clan: You’re probably wondering why you’ve never heard of this clan before. Right? Well that’s because for the past few decades or so it’s been slowly dying out. Native to the Land of Snow (If that’s cool), an already small country; The Fuyume clan was just as small, with only a fourth actually being in the clan. Even though the clan isn’t known by actual name, of course not including the Kage’s; everyone, at some point, had heard about “The Ice Masters of The South”. Two distinct features of this clan are the bright blue eyes, common to all Fuyume clan members. The second, although bordering on the line of common and rare, is the extreme light blue, almost white, hair few of the Fuyume’s are born with. There is a rumor that a skilled Fuyume Clan member, who has trained profusely with their ability, is able to freeze almost anything by a simple glance. Because of this some believed that along with Ice techniques, they had a Dojutsu, but let it be known that the Fuyume Clan does not possess a Dojutsu and if there ever was the knowledge of it has diminished, along with the clan slowly doing the same.

While their Kekkei Genkai is in use, the user’s iris fades from blue to white. The strength of the user’s ice abilities are easily figured by the color of their eyes; the brighter the eyes, the stronger the techniques, and the duller the eyes the weaker the techniques, the weakest color being grey, with the pupil being green. As the eyes brighten, and the user’s strength increase, green lines starting from the edge of the iris and traveling to the pupil are seen.There are five in total. In the clan there are five signature Ice Release techniques, and with each line seen one of the techniques was supposed to be learned. The two stated below are indications that you have completely mastered the Kekkei Genkai; the five lines being seen, and all five signature techniques learned .

In terms of which style is best for this clan the list would be as such; Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and then Taijutsu. Ninjutsu is the type most commonly used by this clan, and by far the strongest arsenal in this clan. Genjutsu, although not as common, can be utilized well by this clan. There are some who specialize in this field and forgo Ninjutsu all together. As for Taijutsu, it’s extremely rare that anyone would chose to master in that. The clan isn’t known for extreme strength, albeit very swift. Out of every other clan, the Fuyumes are probably the worst off when it comes to Taijutsu. Although not impossible, it is improbable that any Fuyume member would choose this field to study. [/spoiler]

[b]Affiliation:[/b] Konohagakure

[spoiler=[b]Appearance:[/b]] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/20b1pxi.jpg[/IMG]

The picture says everything about appearance, but let allow me to reveal the attire of said person. Let’s work our way up shall we? Kikyo hates the sandals that are issued to every ninja simply because they are open toed. So instead she wears shoes, vowing to never put on sandals if she can help it. Instead of wearing pants, she wears shorts that stop right where the knee begins. However, underneath the shorts there are bandages on both of her legs; on the right leg the bandages stop where the shoes start, and on the left leg they end at the same spot the shorts do. Her kunai holster is on her left leg, and another is lying on the small of her back for either hand to grab. Her top is a dark blue, though not too dark, long sleeved, kimono top that folds right over left and a white sash that tie around the waist and is knotted on the right side. There are two slits on either side giving the top a front and a back flap that ends right at the middle thigh. On the hem on the front, back and cuffs of the kimono are decorated with snowflake patterns, and on the back is a large snowflake, with other small white dots around it making it resemble falling snow. The Konoha headband is tied around her sash, in the front, and right next to the knot. She normally lets her hair hang, but when it isn’t down its most likely in a pony tail.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=[b]Personality:[/b]] Off the field Kikyo isn’t exactly the picture of perfection. She’s an extreme tom-boy, preferring to train and study, rather than sit around worrying about the next fad or the cutest boy. Not afraid to speak her mind, being surprisingly blunt at times, and seems to have a natural penchant for getting into trouble; breaking things, losing things, and knocking stuff over are the common ones. Why? Well it’s pretty simple….She is a clumsy oaf!! For the life of her she cannot seem to stand on her own two feet for more than an hour without tripping, or falling over something! Funny enough her clumsiness is often what saves her in battle, as she’ll suddenly vanish from sight only because she tripped and in turn dodging the attack. On missions she’s…Well…Not as clumsy, and surprisingly enough Kikyo is superb at stealth missions, which is a mystery all on its own.

Even though Kikyo isn’t one to get mad (HA! What a bold face lie!....Oh, sorry), she hates it when people call her “Fuyu-chan”, which quite literally meant “Snow child”. It was the nickname that her friends gave her just to see her angry (which apparently they found fun.). Fortunately, that's being more annoyed than mad, but when she really gets mad you better hope a glare doesn't come your way because you'll suddenly feel as though a bucket of ice water was tossed dwn your back. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=[b]Biography:[/b]] Ok, well this is how her story begins. Her mother and father went to their house and got bus-What? Not what you ment?...Oh…Well…This is awkward. Second chance?

Here’s the real story. Kikyo was born in the Leaf Village of Konohagkure, and grew up always wondering why she looked so different from everyone else. However, it wasn’t until she was 10 years old did her parents tell her why. You see before she was born her parents decided to leave the Land of Snow. They weren’t persecuted, or exiled and nothing of the sort. They simply believed that if they stayed there, there was nothing for their child to gain. The clan was dying, and it was as plain as the constant snow. The elders knew it, the clan members knew it, and even some of the children knew that something wasn’t right. Why raise a child in a dying civilization? So they packed their bags and left for the leaf village. They moved at a slow pace, because Saya (Kikyo’s mother) was pregnant at the time, and Kai (the dad!) didn’t want to rush their path. Just over 3 hours away from Konoha Saya went into labor. Of course Kai didn’t know what to do. He was no midwife, and wasn’t anything close to the sort. Luckily a team of ANBU were passing by and the female with them, who by the way was a medical ninja, spotted them. Long story short, they manage to get her to a hospital before Kikyo popped out (lol?).

So Kikyo was born; blue eyed like every other Fuyume, however there was an added bonus! Her hair was so light blue is looked white! It resembled the snow when the sun hit it just right and it was white but had a bluish tint, or glow to it. Saya always kept Kikyo’s hair cut short, but not just short, it was in a boyish style; and behold! There wasn’t a single person, who at first glance, thought that Kikyo was a girl. Not that it really bothered her at the time because all she used to hang around with was guys. At the time girls were boring to be around. It wasn’t until she turned 10 did she get permission to let her hair grow, which she did, and unfortunately her clumsiness did as well.

Kikyo trained long and hard when she was in the academy, doing her best to get through with the academy as quickly as possible. Sadly do to her clumsiness she was slowed down. After it seemed like her clumsiness would prevent her from graduating, the Hokage invited her on a C-Ranked mission. No one knows why. Maybe he was drunk at the time, or lost a bet, or maybe he simply had belief in Kikyo's ability. Whatever the case, it was a good in Kikyo's favor. True she was still as clumsy, but she proved that she could in fact carry out a mission. After that she passed the academy and became a Genin.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Combat[/b][/u]

[spoiler=[b]Kekkei Genkai:[/b]] Ice Style Jutsu: Although it can be used in any type of climate it gets stronger in colder climates, so even if the user isn’t that skilled with it, the kekkei genkai can still be formidable in terms to durability and destructive force. So it’s best to be in a cold climate, but if that’s not possible it recommended that a jutsu affecting the climate in some way is learned. Also due to this being a kekkei genkai affected ability, it's stronger than those without a kekki genkai, but who knows ice jutsus.

The user also has the ability to control snow, moving and bending it to the user’s will. Unfortunately, it’s not an automatic thing. The user has to consciously move the snow to either block or defend. Another drawback is that the only way to move the snow is by pouring chakra into the desired amount you want to use. So although it’s quite handy, it’s very tiring as a lot of chakra is used. Lastly, to do this you must have substantial, and precise, chakra control in order to move the millions of tiny particles of snow.

Weakness in general are Fire style and Lightening style. Even though the strength of the user and the climate effect can allow the user to fend off the attacks, the two styles will still have effect even if the attacks are weak. While Earth style is durable, it holds no advantage of ice. Wind and water are natural to the Ice style.[/spoiler]

[b]Nature Type:[/b] Wind and Water, Kekkei Given: Ice

[b]Special Ability:[/b] Ice Jutsu….

[b]Combat Specialty:[/b] Mid-to-Long Range

[b]Weapons:[/b] Uses standard ninja tools, but prefers to use senbon needles.

[spoiler=[b]Jutsu List:[/b]]
[u][b]Standard Jutsu[/b][/u]

Substitution Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Head-Hunter Jutsu
Illusion Jutsu

[u][b] Wind[/b][/u]

Wind Release: Wind Clone Jutsu
Wind Release: Wind Blade Jutsu

[u][b]Water[/b][/u]

Water Release: Water Dragon Jutsu
Water Release: Water Clone Jutsu
Water Release: Water Cyclone Jutsu

[u][b]Ice[/b][/u]

Ice Release: Snow Storm
Ice Release: Ice Shark Jutsu
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[.:Blu:.]

@Bluster, thanks for the compliment and rep on my drawing

@Hotaru, I lol at what you put for Affiliation, it's Konohagakure not Konohamaru

[Hotaru987]

*facepalm*

oh......

[Warrior_Tal]

[b]@ Blu:[/b] I'll add your photo of the opponent you are facing momentarily.

[b]@ Hotaru:[/b] Any projectile weapons are accepted from the Naruto series. So yes I will accept senbon as a ninja tool/weapon. As for your second question; my character has an ability in the Ice techniques as well. So considering all that you did I will accept it and I will accept your application for your character. I am willing to open another spot up for you to join in. This is the only exception. No one else will be allowed to join, however. Welcome to the RP just do any edits to your app that you see fit.

[b]@ Auralady:[/b] Well lets say; this is the third time I spoke to you about your application holding several mistakes. I have a feeling that you did not read the rules in this. And as much as I hate to say it.... even though I am in a RP of yours (please don't get mad at me) but I am going to have to deny your application. I am sorry, but it seems you did not read the rules that I placed up.

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Now that does anyone else have any questions to ask of me?

[Hotaru987]

Yayness!! I'm gonna go finish my app now! ^^

Edit is finished. So how exactly should I come in? I mean all three warriors are taken are they not? Also thanks for allowing me to join! I'm really looking forward to it.

[Warrior_Tal]

Now for those who are wanting to have a photo of the enemy they are facing in the character's section please post it here along with a name and brief description of the character. It does not have to be long, but it will help so I don't have to type a description of. [b]Blu[/b] I added yours up and put a description in. I hope you like what I said about Aohi. There are still 4 shinobi in the RP that we are facing down. Until all gets situated it will remain that way.

[.:Blu:.]

Thanks for adding it Warrior, and welcome to the team Hotaru

[Warrior_Tal]

I'm going to say lets wait in the IC thread so everyone can post. I don't want anyone scrambling through the IC thread reading everything over and being confused. So those who have posted please refrain from posting again until everyone is caught up with their applications being done. I know we still have one more who has a reserved to post his application. So please lets hold out. [b]Hotaru[/b] once you have finished your app go ahead and post in the IC thread. After evrything is done will be when I make my next post okay guys.

---Hotaru: you can enter anyway you wish. We are all traveling next to the caravan. FOur enemy shinobi. I will have five once all is said with another app, and then I think six... but not sure. Have to count the number of RP'ers involved right now.

[.:Blu:.]

Cool, I didn't want to double post or post too early anyways, I understand we have to let things smooth out first

[Ghoulish]

Im thinking my opponent would be something like this:

[spoiler=opponent]
http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://www.the-nextlevel.com/reviews/xbox/mortal-kombat-deception/deception-sub-zero.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.kotaku.com.au/2010/05/please-name-all-the-ninjas/&usg=__DCxVqrFCLlLKq5bQN0Fozpu6E64=&h=336&w=252&sz=17&hl=en&start=73&zoom=1&tbnid=KyAprVg9o_n4SM:&tbnh=116&tbnw=86&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dice%2Bninjas%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26biw%3D1362%26bih%3D529%26gbv%3D2%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C1243&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=1125&vpy=65&dur=4140&hovh=259&hovw=194&tx=153&ty=125&ei=MXMWTarpF4-cvgOI3-T_DQ&oei=AXMWTcugGoK6ugPGvo3ODQ&esq=12&page=4&ndsp=27&ved=1t:429,r:8,s:73&biw=1362&bih=529

except the armour would look more like blues drawing, I think maybe he excessive use with armour is a good contrast from Komaru as he is a more agttackive style fighter


Personality: a single monotone expression that only changes when he is threatened, he demeans every opponent's abilities and believes he tells is like it is, when really it's just his own opinions. He is ruthless and acts more as a defensive style fighter using counter attacks against his enemies.

(What else would you like me to add?)[/spoiler]

[Warrior_Tal]

Funny [b]BusterSoldier[/b] I was just about to use a photo like that for my opponent, but hey it is cool. You can have it like that. Also post 81 I edited slightly on here. BusterSoldier do you have a name for your opponent?

[.:Blu:.]

It seems as though Auralady didn't read the OOC because she continued to post in the IC

[Ghoulish]

ill pom her and tell her where to go, lol whatever warrior u can use if u want lol umm i was thinking maybe....i dunno lol not to good with japanese names.

[Warrior_Tal]

Even so, when you have not been accepted you shouldn't really be posting until you are accepted. I don't want this RP to go down the drain or anything or get locked.

[Ghoulish]

i know what u mean man, anyway i wontbe able to post much tioday, going out for most of the day, ill be able to later on tonight though

[Warrior_Tal]

That's fine we are waiting anyway one any other reserved apps of anyone else. I have my IC reply ready; just having to wait so the other individual will be able to read without hassle.

[Warrior_Tal]

Hope everyone had a good christmas and received what they wanted from Santa. Now many are still recovering from the holidays. Anyway, [b]Hotaru[[/b] do you have a photo description of the enemy shinobi you are facing, a name, and a brief description. I will also be posting in the IC thread soon so keep an eye out for it

[Hotaru987]

[spoiler=Mako][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2isvy8i.jpg[/IMG]
A shinobi of the snow that takes everything in life as a joke. He finds joy in making others suffer, and has a sick enjoyment from seeing his enemies bleed. Mako is always seen with a smile, that is more of a mocking nature than a senscere one. hiding his more crazed and demented nature. He also has the tendency to giggle, almost girlishly, when having "fun" with his enemy. Not known for strong ninjutsu, but with his knowladge is taijutsu and mastery of Genjutsu, to him ninjutsu is a waste of his extra time. [/spoiler]

hope thats ok....

[.:Blu:.]

Pretty awesome enemy you got there Hotaru

I hope Mysterium gets better soon and makes his app, he's the person we're waiting for

[Hotaru987]

same here, cause im ready to continue.

And thanks!

[Warrior_Tal]

Yeah I really don't want to rush into this or anything

[Hotaru987]

Of course not. Take your time, besides patience is a vurtue.

Speeking of that, any of you saw a movie called Warrios of Vurtue?

[.:Blu:.]

Isn't virtue spelled with i? No, I haven't seen that movie, is it good?