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[quote name='Professor Layton' timestamp='1294524197' post='4920961']
:D

I wish my N64 controller wasn't f***ed up, I want to play DK64 so much right now.
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It was see-through but it was moving as if I was on it.

I think you were supposed to go in it a one point during development.

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[quote name='Shadow Zero' timestamp='1294608314' post='4923579']
Oh hush you. I mostly just want to see what Ice can come up with. Besides, things get boring here with the lack of activity. I could use something to kill some time with.
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Well, you could always kill something.
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[spoiler=Teaser for the Fic. Work in progress. You have been warned.]
A man with a purple-black cloak speedily walked through an empty hallway, his hood covering his face. He paced through the hallway silently, trying to get somewhere fast. A sound echoed from the end of the hallway. At the moment this happened, he started to move faster, until he eventually reached a huge room. People wearing the same clothing as him filled the room, all of them facing one direction. He sighed as he turned towards the direction everyone else was facing as he took off his hood. He had medium length purple hair, like all of the other males in the room, ending at his shoulders. Over his right eye was a symbol shaped like the Pokemon Unknown. It seemed to be Unknown C, like the two people standing next to him. He focused on a stage on the far back of the room. There, a lone podium stood with a small microphone on the top. A few minutes later, the lights started to dim and a lone light focused on the podium. A man walked up to it with a small smirk plastered onto his face. He had pitch black hair that was in similar length to the other males in the room. He was wearing a purple-black jacket with a symbol shaped like Unknown R on the upper left corner of his shirt, along with similar colored pants. He tapped the microphone to check if it was on, and nodded in approval when it the tapping sound echoed through the speakers. “People! The time has come! The line has been set! Everything is in motion! We will finally fix everything that has been wronged! It is our time! A new millennia!”
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On the topic of Unown...

[img]http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/3/39/Spr_5b_561.png[/img]

Does that eye look familiar to you?

Plus it said it was a guardian to a ancient city...

It just looks like a Unown covered in some sort of armor..

And it's psychic *redundant*
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A few things Ice:

1 ) It's Unown, not Unknown.
2 ) Spacing is essential, people besides your die-hard fans do not tend to like walls of text.
3 ) Are these guys going to be like Team Rocket (or other region based teams)? I mean, worshipping the Unown is fine and all, but they do give the 'Bad People working to the greater good' vibe.
4 ) Why was the man trying to be stealthy when he seemed to be running through a stone (I assume stone) hallway, his feet banging on every stone. More to the point, why be stealthy when you are in the sanctuary of your own comrades?
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[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1294628988' post='4924504']
A few things Ice:

1 ) It's Unown, not Unknown.
2 ) Spacing is essential, people besides your die-hard fans do not tend to like walls of text.
3 ) Are these guys going to be like Team Rocket (or other region based teams)? I mean, worshipping the Unown is fine and all, but they do give the 'Bad People working to the greater good' vibe.
4 ) Why was the man trying to be stealthy when he seemed to be running through a stone (I assume stone) hallway, his feet banging on every stone. More to the point, why be stealthy when you are in the sanctuary of your own comrades?
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1)ohmybad.
2) It was supposed to be a lone paragraph. Sorry if the unintelligent people (Shadow) dislike paragraphs. Die-hard fans? I HAVE THEM?!*shot*
3) They're really just sadistic fucks. They don't worship Unown. They just use it as they're symbol.
4)He wasn't supposed to be late and didn't want people to know, thus him running quietly. Thought I made it cryptically obvious.
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[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1294629806' post='4924546']
The 3rd and 4th contradict each other. Why would you be late when there is the possibility of a virgin sacrifice? It's like being late for an all you can eat muffin buffet for fat people.
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Read [i]sadistic fucks[/i].

The leader/admins wouldn't hesitate killing him if he was late.

They aren't working to make the world better, by the way. They think they are, but the leader wants to just kill people.

SUCH A 3D CHARACTER!
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[quote name='BrokenHeart15' timestamp='1294631098' post='4924626']
[b]They're[/b] implies 'they all are', including the one who was late. If I were part of a sadistic cult I wouldn't want to miss a single minute of cult activities.
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He could be late for multiple reasons, but I should elaborate.

The leaders are. Some members could be too, but I was mainly focusing on the leaders.
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