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[center]Not much really, just the evolution of my OC.

For the costume change the only thing I used as reference was this.
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6247/letterbee.png


It's really tedious....I've spent probably [s]3 5 [/s] 8 hours doing and then re-correcting myself. T-T Now I still have a few things to do ([s]scarf/hat[/s]), but what's YCM's opinion atm?

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[u][b].:Update:.[/b][/u]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2uz2kwm.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/315egcx.png[/IMG]
Got the scarf on....tried to make it go in front, but nothing looked right...so it's behind him.
I also originally had it gold colored, but I like silver more.
I spent 15 mins thinking of how to shade the part of the scarf coming out from behind his leg. <_<

The hat has been added now...not really liking the proportions, but I need some advice on how to fix.

[b][u]Yes, I took the other two sprites down because it seems a lot of things are being ripped from YCM...I'm keeping my stuff safe.[/u][/b][/center]

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[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1292953879' post='4871050']
Scarfs are easy.
Just "have fun" with it, and make a random line for the base, and then just apply detail/shading to it.
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Around his neck wasn't a problem...it was the other, smaller, part.


[quote name='J-Max' timestamp='1292954154' post='4871061']
Looks like a character from Digimon. I likes it :D
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The original sprite probably came from a digimon character, since it is my favorite show.

Updated, btw.

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[quote name='Sotos' timestamp='1293137423' post='4877698']
Well, overall it looks good, but the hat is like it was put on it in a hurry (which it probably was), and doesn't look realistic enough...Also, you could consider working on the hat's shape a little more...
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Yeah...no. The hat took 3 hours, which is probably longer than you've ever had Gimp open. =/

You don't read do you? I know the shape is off, which is why I asked for advice. I post things here to make them better, not for praise. So maybe your next post could explain what you mean by 'realistic enough' and what to do to help with the shape.

@Seta: I know, but I can't picture how it'll look infront...and capes are cool. XD


just so nobody gets the idea, yes, the hat is suppose to be sideways and I'm keeping it at that kind of angle.
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[quote name='Legend Zero' timestamp='1293139460' post='4877866']
@Seta: I know, but I can't picture how it'll look infront...and capes are cool. XD
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No, they're overused xd
And a suggestion for the hat would be to make the left side of it (from the viewers eye) just a little higher.
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Right...sorry about that, I did read the post in a hurry...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img]
Well, I don't know exactly what doesn't look realistic enough, I think it follows the shape of the head too much, especially on the right (viewer's) side. Try to make it stand out more.
I know I would never have the patience / skill to get to something like that, but I'm just trying to help...
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[quote name='Seta' timestamp='1293139601' post='4877872']
No, they're overused xd
And a suggestion for the hat would be to make the left side of it (from the viewers eye) just a little higher.
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[quote name='Sotos' timestamp='1293139906' post='4877888']
Right...sorry about that, I did read the post in a hurry...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img]
Well, I don't know exactly what doesn't look realistic enough, I think it follows the shape of the head too much, especially on the right (viewer's) side. Try to make it stand out more.
I know I would never have the patience / skill to get to something like that, but I'm just trying to help...
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So both of you together say to make the hat bigger? I can see that working. =O
Will try.

[quote name='Cōyōté Stárrk' timestamp='1293139974' post='4877891']
Great work. <3
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'bout time I get a comment like this. D:
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[quote name='新型神' timestamp='1293215398' post='4880947']
nice job

[b]for so me reason[/b], the shoes look a bit too big in my opinion.
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wut?

[quote name='Seta' timestamp='1293215928' post='4880979']
Thought so, sorry xd
Yeah, well it's a lot better IMO, nice job
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Thanks, bro. I'll probably still tinker around with it when I'm bored.
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