Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Okay this is the first series' plot of my manga: First off the main character is NOT human, but an alien. He looks like a giant walking lizard, but he's not. Yes, an alien. And this isn't the good one, but it's good enough. In his world, Kongou is 16 year old, but in human years, he is almost 25,000 year old In a different galaxy, there is a Jupiter-sized Earth looking planet with unique features named Riden. The life forms in Riden are called Chromo Ultima, they had very long life spans. They came from an ancient universe that died from old age, so they moved to this current universe. The past is a secret to almost everybody. The Ultimans are literally planet-makers in the past. In Riden there is an alien named Kongou Nishimura. The home he lives in looked like the Middle Ages, because of their mega superhuman abilities, they don't need to be advanced. Well one day, Kongou stolen and hid two out of eight precious and powerful gems somewhere in the universe. When someone founded out what Kongou did, he was punished. So the emperor of Riden, his father, Czalader, banished him from the planet by imprisoned him in a special kind of car-sized crystal rock prison that came beneath Kongou and sent him to another planet..is it obivous, he was sent to the planet Earth traveling half lightspeed and in wormholes, because his planet is in a different galaxy. Somehow, when he got to Earth, the special crystals weakened him, and turned him human, and weakened his abilities. When Kongou arrived at Earth's atmosphere. Even the rock prison was burning up, it wouldn't dissolve because it was harder than diamond. As Kongou crashed, the crash was so great that it was lucky that it hitted in the Sahara Desert. Because the impact was so great that it could had wiped out half the USA and it also cracked the rock prison a bit, enough to break free barely. The world went to a crisis, but Kongou, still in human form, redo the damage and erased the impact of the crash in people's memories but it had weakened him even more because the redo abilities was a one-timer only. Also he knew that he was going to be sent in this planet, so that's why he hid the two powerful gems in Earth. But because in Earth's core was the exact same crystals in Kongou's prison, Kongou even in his normal form, his abilities are half. So 17 years later... In 17 years, it doesn't even affected Kongou's age because he had a very long life span. Kongou was moved around the world to not his real identy, but he learned how to turn human to disguise himself. Then when he moved to Japan one day, he bumped into a beautiful 15 year old high school girl named Hiromi Suki with her childhood friend, Takeshi Shundo, an 15 year old silver haired boy with bully problems. The trio became friends at the first time. Then Kongou wanted to go to the same high school as Hiromi and Takeshi for no reason or is there? After two months, an problem went off, something like a giant nuclear missle was going to the same area where Kongou and the others. Kongou was looking for Hiromi, she was shopping with friends, the missle was near where she was. Kongou wanted to do something, but he don't want to be found out, but he had no choice, when the missle was dropping, Kongou created a wall of flames around the city and grabbed on the missle and tried to go to his real form but the missle wasn't normal, on it was the crystals that was on Kongou's rock prison, so he couldn't went back to his real form, which was trouble because in his real form, any human object is unaffect to him, but not in his human form, but he still moved the missle with unimaginable speed to the atmosphere and finally the missle exploded. Hiromi was shocked what just happened, then she was crying, but right front of her was the crisped body of Kongou grinning on here, saying it's okay to run away from him because he is a monster, but Hiromi declined it because friends don't do that. After the problem, Kongou told Hiromi and Takeshi everything about him and why he was on Earth. He even shown them his real form, Hiromi was calm, but Takeshi was freaking out. Then a madness alien breakout happens, wolf-like aliens came from these dimensional holes and were secretly possessing weak humans for hunger. Konogu knew who sent those monsters, but didn't said it. One day, Takeshi was walking to school, one of the bullies jumped him in an alley, but while beaten, Takeshi felt stronger than normal so he tried to punch the bully, the bully didn't saw the punch and was hit in the face by a such of force that he became unconicous and the impact was so strong that it destroyed the wall behind the bully. Takeshi was stunned about what just happened so he pretend nothing had happened. After school, Takeshi was getting worried because he felt stronger and stronger, so he asked Kongou what is going on. Kongou told him that because Kongou is on Earth and he had enormous alien "chakra" that is affecting any nearby humans that have precious possessions that will become their source of their newfounded powers. Because Takeshi had a necklace from his grandfather, it became his power source which it can transform into a sword with special powers, meanwhile it also made him stronger and faster than any unaffected human would ever be. Kongou also thought that if Takeshi was affected then that means Hiromi was also affected, just it turned out, Hiromi was affected by Kongou's alien chakra. Her hair bow is her source of her powers, her powers is a magic gun that can do magic attacks. So Kongou wanted to teach Hiromi and Takeshi how to control and use their powers more better to fight off the monsters, because those two aren't the only ones that are affected by Kongou. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Um... Whats the topic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 We're discussing Kongou's manga plot OR deciding weither or not to collab together to draw out my rp "Struggle of Powers" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 we are dicussing about your "Struggle of Power" manga I just posted that randomly to have more posts in here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 lol... I'm working with him on that plot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 [quote name='¤ßϯ¤' timestamp='1295437403' post='4944502'] lol... I'm working with him on that plot [/quote] Yah, he's right (I'm just being nice) He and i are making my manga into cards, first season Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 [spoiler=some drawings][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/9775/01162011115114pm.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6051/01162011115046pm.jpg[/img][/spoiler][img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/019/6/5/octopus_head_by_peetzaahhh2010-d37kgy0.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 awesome again since i already saw them. But the other members didn't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 They're alright . . . anybody willing to show me how good they can copy a picture of Yaming from SoP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 who the hell is yaming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Oh yeah BT you've never been a part of the Struggle of Powers RP so you wouldn't now. Yaming is the person below [IMG]http://i833.photobucket.com/albums/zz255/Jake-the-Sage/Struggle%20Of%20Powers/Heroes/Yaming.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 I will! because it's a pretty girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Alright if you could have her hands in front of her, as if she's praying, and make her hair wavy upwards with a wind effect that'd be great- this is also a nice test to see how good you are ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Okay, never tried that pose but no problem. Man, i need to have a catch phrase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 19, 2011 Report Share Posted January 19, 2011 Well the title of 'Doodle King' is MINE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 Sure, that isn't a fitting name for me Maybe something like "handsome Manga-ka" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 Well let me see how good you can and I'll give you a title ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 I think we should have rankings... EDIT: do I get a title?Guys: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/236819-my-first-line-art/page__view__findpost__p__4943694__fromsearch__1"]Lineart of Kongou's manga's main character (Kongou [i]how original[/i])[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 I don't think we should have RANKS, titles yeah, but no ranks as we are all artists in our own rights. As for the artwork not bad . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 thnx and ok thats true... need a nickname! EDIT: I got one... Pete the 1337 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 I already claimed 'The Doodle King' 83 but BT you think you can draw what I asked Kongou to do as well? Or would you like a different "assignment"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 i can read you know >83 And that drawing was a prototypeAnd i need a co-leader for my club, for helping organizing and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BTÂ Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1295483730' post='4945615'] I already claimed 'The Doodle King' 83 but BT you think you can draw what I asked Kongou to do as well? Or would you like a different "assignment"? [/quote] I'm no good at manga drawings v.v Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 [quote name='Kongou Nishimura' timestamp='1295484117' post='4945621'] i can read you know >83 And that drawing was a prototype And i need a co-leader for my club, for helping organizing and stuff [/quote] @1 yes you can @2 I helped with 1st affliate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blace Posted January 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 hey bagon, what took you so long to post, hmm? And you can the co-leader if you want to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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