Change a vanilla to an effect monster

[Face McShooty]

Alright now that all of you are done, I will judge on who's effect is close enough to the original story, i judge ?/5

Rochster

This monster has four different masks for four different attacks.

This card is also treated as a WATER, FIRE, and EARTH monster. This card can attack 4 times during the same Battle Phase. This card can only attack your opponent 1 time per Battle Phase.

Alright, I like how you used the 4 different masks as treating it as 4 different attributes

The 4 different attacks and attacking 4 times during the same Battle Phase is interesting too

Bolded is a little confusing to me, other than that I think you deserve a 3/5

Naturia Melon

The controller of this card selects the targets of their opponent's attacks.

Story: Manipulates enemy attacks with the power of illusion.

You may think the effect is simple, but it fits perfectly with the story.

Because if it "manipulates enemy attacks" you are able to select the monster it attacks. Unless Maple has anything to add to this I think you deserve a 4/5

dogfish44

LORE: This cannot be Normal Summonned or Set. This card can only be Special Summonned by removing from play at least 2 DARK Attribute monsters in your Graveyard. At the end of every battle phase, this card gains 50 ATK for every monster destroyed. If this card attacks a Normal Monster, it is destroyed without applying damage calculation.

STORY: A monster formed by the vengeful souls of those who passed away in battle.

Very interesting effect, as with Rochster's, bolded is a little confusing to me, how did you get that from its story?

I like how it gains attack for every monster destroyed... IMO i think 50 ATK is too little to gain however

I think you deserve an 3/5

ninjarainbowcloud6!

Lore: Once per turn, You can switch control of this card to your opponent until the end phase of their next turn, During either players battle phase the controller of this card loses 800 life points.

Story: A portrait cursed by the artist, it is said to bring ill fortune to anyone who owns it.

Alright, very nice effect and its very closely related to the story... I think, because where it says "bring ill fortune to anyone who ones it" and in your effect you have "You can switch control of this card to your opponent", very very interesting in my opinion... I give you a 4/5

 

Now if Maple has anything he wants to add to ANY of my scores, he is more than welcome to... and he will judge you guys on OCG

[~{Rochster}~]

Damn! I forgot to add "directly" after opponent! *facenuke*

[dogfish44]

@The bolded section:

 

Look at the card 'Death and Rebirth'. It shows how he destroys 1 Normal monster, but other Normal monsters make his life more difficult. Therefore, he tries to get rid of them. This was a relatively loose link, but a good one (And makes it slightly unique - Sorry gemeni decks :P)

 

And 50 ATK is more than enough - Easy special summon (Brilliant with DAD), and 2000 ATK as it is? I had an issue deciding on 50, or a different ability, but it's your call.

[Heavens Guardian]

Sent my Vote

 

 

[poinl]

to much of an entry fee for me

[ninjarainbowcloud6!]

to much of an entry fee for me

 

The contest already started and is nearly over.