LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 ya Dane's a emo person who has a dark past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Raine, you need a spot as Co-Host, hows that sound? And Try taking off the mask part and I will consider your app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 ________=the edit in bio ok but can i keep it but not wear it ok how about now [b][/b]Name: [b]Dane -2[/b] Age: [b]13[/b] Gender: [b]Male[/b] Biography: [b]having you[u]r[/u] parents dead is really hard and a rock legend takes you in and rases you as one of their own and then i ran away at age 8. and learn[u]ed[/u]how to play bass[/b] and in a band called [b]SK.0[/b] that got [u]me [/u]famous [u]until i hit rock bottom[/u].[b]and then started to choke my self to get high and get high off of STARBURST YES STARBURST. then at age 12 killed the adopive mother while high. [/b] Personality: [b]easily gets pissed and is [i][u]EMO[/u][/i][/b] apperince: [b][u]profile picture[/u] but wears a [i][u]Jackass[/u][/i] [u]shirt and over it is the Slipknot all hope is gone Jacket and Jackass convers black laces[/u].[/b] Felony: [b]i Killed my adopive mother[/b] Addictions: [b]Getting high but not on drugs and cutting my self but im not here to stop cutting my self. im here to stop getting high[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Ok...Raine what do you think? I'll let you decide on this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 and don't forget the machetes! Sounds nice I have never Co-Hosted before. I can be like Regis Philbin in Who wants to be a Millionaire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 I have a feeling...we shouldn't accept this guy. Bad Grammar + Weird App = Bad Vibes. No offense, Sk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 umm, you know what yah I think I can live with it, but hes on a short lease Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 i took the machetes offand its SK.0 to you mako everyone else even raine it -2 for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 If you feel like you can step up a bit on your grammar your in... Hey Mako, you wanna Co-Host too? You seem pretty good at this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 [quote name='-2 from SK.0' timestamp='1292654867' post='4861164'] i took the machetes off and its SK.0 to you mako everyone else even raine it -2 for you [/quote] Uh...What? Grammar, bro. @Above Why not. Sure. I will probably note out Grammar issues, Op'd apps, the like. Trying to keep it balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 like this? ________=the edit in bio ok how about now [b][/b]Name: [b]Dane -2[/b] Age: [b]13[/b] Gender: [b]Male[/b] Biography: [b]having you[u]r[/u] parents dead is really hard and a rock legend takes you in and rases you as one of their own and then i ran away at age 8. and learn[u]ed[/u]how to play bass[/b] and in a band called [b]SK.0[/b] that got [u]me [/u]famous [u]until i hit rock bottom[/u].[b]and then started to choke my self to get high and get high off of STARBURST YES STARBURST. then at age 12 killed the adopive mother while high. [/b] Personality: [b]easily gets pissed and is [i][u]EMO[/u][/i][/b] apperince: [b][u]profile picture[/u] but wears a [i][u]Jackass[/u][/i] [u]shirt and over it is the Slipknot all hope is gone Jacket and Jackass convers black laces[/u].[/b] Felony: [b]i Killed my adopive mother[/b] Addictions: [b]Getting high but not on drugs and cutting my self but im not here to stop cutting my self. im here to stop getting high[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Still. Lack of Capitalization troubles me, incoherent, and...just weird. The BAD weird. Hey, Fader, am I going overboard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 i just hate capitalizing i just capitalize to show emotion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 do you even know what this is for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loganandjustyn Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 You kind of need a problem for the recover thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 YAY Raine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay so when we gonna Start...Hmmm? Wait never mind...I will wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 wait what about me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 We did start me and Fader have been in conversation for like 5 posts now. Enter your selves and one of us will interact with your character. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232791-legend-school-of-recoverystartedaccepting-in-oocpg-16ic/*short lease being pulled* Have you read the rules 4+ lines per post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Thank you Raine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 I am going to sleep I am tired. See you guys in 7+ hours. SK look at our examples and read the rules, I'm giving you chances but I will take Makos suggestion if I have to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Grammar Nazi Fixing grammar from: A suddin light comes from outside.it was a limo a emo person came out a walked into the school. "see this is why i hate coming here at night you never know where you are going and i cant even see my map." Dane hears voices. walks towards the voices and knocks on the near ist door. Dane hears a person interviewing somebody. someone opens the door."you look tierd and pissed. Dane said "can you tell me where room 2 is im lost?" "your looking at it" says the tired person. to: A sudden light came from outside. It was a limo; an emo person came out and walked into the school. "See this is why I hate coming here at night, you never know where you are going, and I cant even see my map," Dane said. Dane hears voices. He walks towards the voices and knocks on the nearest door. He hears a person interviewing another. Someone opens the door. "You look tired and pissed," Dane said, "can you tell me where room 2 is? I'm lost." "Your looking at it," said the tired person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LVPD-SWAT Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Sorry im only in 7th grade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Quotations, proper sentence structure, and capitalization are learned by now. Sorry but this fairly basic stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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