Sotos Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 There, another Halo tag... I think its biggest problem is the flow...Also, any advice about fitting in text would be much welcome... Anyway...[spoiler=Tag][spoiler=Version 1][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/6521/68626910.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Version 2][img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/7619/346w.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Version 3][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/2368/70174106.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Version 4][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/2065/10948800.png[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler]CnC... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Even though I am not very good at rating stuff, the text from version 1 is HORRIBLE. V2 is much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 It's very monotone and the right hand side is VERY dark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Buddha Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 text is horrible in the right corner the pink ends of the weapon don't work with the lightning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 I'll try to work on the lighting and the colors... Any advice about the text? EDIT: Added another version...Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 If you must add text, imagine a medium size rectangle around your render in the middle of it. Place your text in any of the four corners for best results. Don't use too fancy fonts, simplicity is the answer here. Way too much contrast from the left to right as others have said. I'm finding it hard to pinpoint any other flaws in it but there's something not right about it. I think it's the colours, not enough contrast and (personally) maroon red is absolutely horrid. Not bad attempt but seriously needs rethinking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 So, less contrast, simple font, no maroon... Added another one, how's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Get rid of the text in V3. It pretty much just kills it. In V2, I don't know what happened. It goes from a purple to a red really quick. It just ruins it. As for V1, I don't see much other than a tad bit more light. This one is the best IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I unfortunately must agree. I don't really like the text, don't choose something too default-y and it looks put in at the last minute. Make sure the colour matches the overall tag. Try light purple, dark pink or camouflage green and see what happens. [url=http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=501]Try browsing these fonts for your text.[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Yeah...I know...I didn't like it either, but I couldn't find a good font... Thanks for the suggestions, I'll be sure to try them... Although I did try to color the text and it was just awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Added another one... I still can't find a text color that I like...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 It's getting better, try and improve the font colour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 V4, IMO, doesn't have enough light. It makes the image look bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 I thought of another one...What do you think? (It's now in V.4, I deleted the 3rd version because it really sucked...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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