Prism Advanced Dueling University (Not Started/Accepting)(PG-16/Lower)

[Lexsuncion]

It's Lex here, with his 2nd RP. (Btw, my first one, although slow, is still going on! feel free to join that one too! >.>)

Here we are with a Duel academy style RP, with something entirely unoriginal! New Dorms! Woo! ...Yeah. Anyway, Here's your plot, baby!


[spoiler='The Plot']The Success of Kaiba Corp's Duel Academy inspired several cheap knock-offs, like "Duel University", "Duel Intermediate School" and "DTT Technical Institute". Most of these schools are just that, cheap knock-offs. However, there are some success stories among these cheap knock offs. You are a student at Duel Academy, which has recently come upon the problem of not having enough room to hold and teach the multitude of students it has. For whatever reason, you've volunteered to go aboard for the sake of your beloved school and its students.
--No matter your year at Duel Academy, you'll be accepted as a First-year student at the newly constructed "Prism-Advanced Dueling University" (PAD-U). Because of this odd set up, first-year students will range from middle-aged beginners to to child prodigies. A Blow to any seasoned duelist's ego, but a necessary sacrifice for the betterment of Duel Academy. You'll be placed into one of six Dorms, Lyna White, Dharc Black, Wynn Green, Hiita Red, Aussa Gray, or Eria Blue. There seems to be an advanced dorm in construction, but since everyone is a first year, it doesn't really matter right now, does it?
--Each dorm, as their obvious names might suggest, has a certain affinity with the elements. the Dharc and Lyna Dorms seem to be the most normal and sought after, due to their easy-to-handle color scheme. Each dorm's architecture is unique in its own way, as well.

[i]And now for the fun stuff...[/i]

Because the construction of PAD-U was overseen by a fairly [b]sane [/b]architect, there are no secret basements, forbidden dorms, or anything out of the ordinary with PAD-U. However, Duel Academy, DTT Tech. and the others aren't so normal. At PAD-U, Its almost as if you're in the center of a hurricane, watching the chaos around your school while everything else remains normal, but for how long?
-Rumors will soon Flood PAD-U about dangers on Duel Academy's horizon, and a Darkness looming over DTT Tech. The Students of PAD-U wont just sit around, but what can they do to stop the coming chaos?

The First year of PAD-U has started, and the school is full of eager First Year students trying to proove that they're the best new student. Many are excited to find not only dueling classes are offered, but piratical, real world classes as well, such as Biology, Calculus and History. Even more shocking is that Basic classes are REQUIRED! Most students coming from other Dueling Schools aren't used to this new requirement of practical knowledge, and struggle to keep up with PAD-U's high standards.

To ease the anguish of the students, the Dean of Students has declared there will be a tournament amongst the Dorms, and finally a Finals match amongst the best in the Dorms to choose the top two Students to go to the regional Dueling Conferance. Even if the students don't win, they're excited to go on the week long trip to meet old friends.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='The Rules']Rules are rules, don't act silly about them, and don't whine about them. They are hear to anno-err, Protect you, so feel protected!

[b]1. Advanced Clause Applies.[/b]
--Posts must be four lines long at least.
--No Script Format dialog.
[b]2. Write the best you can[/b]
--This isn't about winning ever duel, or being the best duelist.
--The more beautifully and poetically you write, the more the others will have fun
[b]3. Regarding Special Powers:[/b]
--You might have them, or develop them, but nothing over the top.
--What makes it special is how unique it is, not how powerful it is.
[b]4. No more than 2 Characters. At least 1 must be a member of PAD-U[/b]
--Yes, this means you could have a Duel Academy Character, but they're icing on the cake, not the cake itself.
--The cake is not a lie.
[b]5. Dorms: They aren't ranked; Dharc isn't better than Lyna, Hiita doesn't have better rooms than Aussa.[/b]
--You dont need to pick a dorm based on your deck's style, but it would be awesome if all of Hiita's Dorm were FIRE users, huh?
--If one dorm gets a significantly larger amount of students than the others, I'll divvy you guys up.
[b]6. Custom Cards: You can have them, but...[/b]
--I, Or a Co-Host has to approve them--Each one of them.
--Don't make the super "God Card" of <Element>, I'll make those for you guys!
[b]7. Read the Posting Format Carefully; feel free to pose concerns or questions before me![/b]
--There's lots of stuff, and its easy to get lost.
--If your posts show you obviously didn't read the Format, your character will die in a car crash.
[b]8. Regarding the PG-16 Rating...[/b]
--I like things to be serious, but this is a SCHOOL ENVIRONMENT; There wont be ax murderers, swearing wackos, or scantily clad prostitutes running around
--However, when the serious stuff starts to pick up, don't be surprised if people get hurt, or in extreme cases, even die![/spoiler]

[spoiler='Application Style'][b]Application[/b]: You can be rejected if you are not of the quality I'm seeking for a GOOD RP. However, most, if not all of us, that I've seen are pretty good!

[b]Name[/b]: (This is a title your parents gave you, so people could call you something aside from "You")
[b]Age/Gender[/b]: (Two lines, for two one-word answers? Bah! *Smush*)
[b]Appearance[/b]: (Pictures are nice, but I want you to write something to show you put thought into this.)
[b]Background[/b]: (Halfway through this, I decided you could be from the other academics, too, Like DTT Tech, Or Dueling U! This is also the section where your Biography goes.)
[b]Duel Spirit[/b]: ([b]I decide this[/b], and me PM'ing this information to your means you've been accepted! It also means you have to put that information on this line!)
Acceptance Card: (Boys will receive their student ID as a Ultimate Rare Six Samurai Card, and Girls will Receive a Charmer. The Student information is on the other side of the card where that swirling brown/tan decoration is.)
[b]Deck[/b]: (It doesn't need a Name, or some ACE CARD, or anything flashy. It does need a brief description, however, such as: It likes to synchro summon strong water monsters, -or- Mills itself to summon its Ace card!)
[b]Desired Dorm[/b]: (Dharc Black sounds cool, huh? "dark black?" Heh...Awesome...Err-- *Ahem*)
[b]Witty Comment[/b]: (Laughing is fun!)
[u][b][i]-Optional Stuff-[/i][/b][/u]
[b]D-Wheel[/b]: (Character must be over 17 years of age, have a valid drivers license, and no history of DUI's (Dueling Under the Influence of alcohol)(Seriously, though, they have to be at least 16)
[b]Special Powers[/b]: (You cannot split the world in two, you can't change fate, but maybe you can "see things" other people can't, or you have some affinity with rocks?)
[b]Other[/b]: Did I forget something?[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Posting Format']The major kicker of this RP is I require a certain format for posting when dueling other people. (You may mercilessly beat the dookey out of unimportant NPCs, but give us some flare!) This is because I've observed several discrepancies in what is going on "where" and "when", and in an attempt to help all of us grow as a community in terms of organization, When posting, please do so in to following format:

[b]Normal Posts[/b]: these are posts that have nothing to do with the character actively dueling. This could be walking to a class, eating a hamburger, or even watching someone else duel. Just so long that the post doesn't have turns to explain, it is a "Normal Post".

Format/Example:

Time(Military please): (This can be a generalization, like 12:00(noon), or you could be specific 12:34(After X-th Period)
Location: (Where this post is taking place)

If your character is on the move, especially if moving quickly, try to give some sort of indication as to where they will be passing through, so others can attempt to bump into you.


Dueling Post: These are slightly more complex, due to the fact that they have turns and such.

-Top of Post-
Player/Turn: (Ex. Jimbo / Turn 4)
Speed Counters(Turbo Duels only): (A number goes here...)
Conditions(Varies): (Ex. Swords of Revealing Light(End on T.6))
Reaction(Varies): (Ex. Playing Trap in Response to ???)

-Pretty Text-
[b]::[/b]Dueling Actions Highlighted with Brakets, , Like setting cards, and summoning Monsters[b]::[/b]
(ex. ::Jimbo then summoned Mega Tickle Pickle:: -Pretty Text- ::Then set two cards and ended his turn:
-Pretty Text-
-Obligatory Childhood Flashback-

-Bottom of Post-
[b]Life Points[/b]:
[b]Field[/b]: (A number indicates Nothing is there)(Field Spells go here too, Ad (Op.)if its your Opponent's)
[1] [2] [Comrade, Swordsman of Landstar: DEF] [Jerry Beans Man: ATK] [5]
------------ 2000/2000 ATK/DEF (Wait, Wtf?!) -------1750/-45 ATK/DEF
[1] [Call of the Haunted: Eq. Jerry Beans Man] [Set] [Set] [5]
[b]Graveyard[/b]: Names, Names, Names (Feel free to Spoiler this if it gets big)

The reason I require the slots your monsters are in is because there are some monster effects and spell/trap effects dependent on the position on the field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='The Dorms']There are Six Dorms, Dharc Black, Lyna White, Hiita Red, Eita Blue, Aussa Gray and Wynn Green. None of the dorms have a higher rank than the other, as of yet. Each dorm is unique in its own way, and sponsors some non-dueling clubs as well. The Overseer of each dorm is in charge of their student's permanent record's and their behavior and conduct. Needless to say, many students look up to the Overseers as beacons of power and wisdom for the heavy burden they've taken on themselves.

The Uniforms are all the same, Either a Black, White, Gray or Tan Blazer and matching slacks or skirt. The Defining part of the outfit is a shawl-like mantle over the sholders which matches a student's dorm, and bears the dorm insigna on the back. The Mantle's trim is decorated with a golden leaf pattern. In winter, girls may wear a heavier skirit, and all students are issued full length coats which bear their dorm in signia on the back and left breast.

Unlike many other schools, PAD-U has many Non-Dueling activities, and even several students who don't take dueling classes. It isn't uncommon for first year students to drop all dueling classes in favor of their required basics, or more advanced academic classes, but no student at PAD-U is without their deck. The entrance exam is a Duel against either several teachers, or several students. The Student is then rated on how they handled themselves and their field with the hand and cards they had.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Accepted Students']
[spoiler='Dharc Black'][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Lyna White']
[spoiler='Mark Felanor Raptor - 1st Year']Name: Mark Felanor Raptor

Age/Gender: 17/Male

Appearance:
Height: 6'3
Weight: 205lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Dark-Blonde (Styled slightly spiky)
Skin Color: Fair
Tattoos/Piercings: Tattoo of a Dragon over his Left Eye.
Clothing Style: Wears White Trainers, Dark Grey Denim Jeans, with a Gold Belt around it, a White shirt with Red stripes down the side's and the sleeves, and sometimes also wears a Black Jacket.
Posture: Tall and firm most of the time.
Righty or Lefty: Left-Handed

Background: Mark was born to a father who was a Professor at Duel Academy, and a Mother who worked in the store of Duel Academy for several years. This was one of the main reason's that Mark was able to get into Duel Academy easily, though he didnt go into Obelisk Blue, because he only got in easily because he learnt from the best, Not because of his Connections. He instead made it into Ra Yellow, and was readying himself for his Second year at the school, when he got word of the problems that the sachool was suffering. Not really minding where he was, as long as it involved dueling, he offered to be transferred to PAD-U. He hopes his cool, calm personality will help him keep a cool head in this new environment, and that his Machine Deck will be good enough to take him to the top.

Duel Spirit: A Mute "Skull Servant". XD

Acceptance Card: [color="#FF8C00"]The Six Samurai - Zanji[/color]

Deck: Mechanical Onslaught - A Deck that Focuses on Machine-types, more specifically the Cyber Dragon's and the V-Z Series, either overwhelming with The Powerful Cyber's, or Disabling with the Tricky Effect's of the V-Z Series.

Witty Comment: If it at first you dont Succeed, GO HOME, IT'S TOO LATE, THERE'S NOTHING YOU CAN DO!!![/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Hiita Red'][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Eita Blue'][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Aussa Gray'][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Wynn Green'][/spoiler][/spoiler]

[Sweetie Belle]

[s]Reserve with a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Terminal_World"]Terminal World[/url] Deck. Will be up later.[/s][hr][spoiler=Character: (Family Name First) 末長く　症子　／ すえながく　しょうこ　／　Ｓｕｅｇａｋｕ　Ｓｈｏｕｋｏ　／ Suegaku Shouko][b]Name／名前:[/b] [size="1"](Family Name First)[/size] 末長く　症子　／ すえながく　しょうこ　／　Ｓｕｅｇａｋｕ　Ｓｈｏｕｋｏ　／ Suegaku Shouko[hr][b]Age:[/b] 18[hr][b]Gender:[/b] Female[hr][b]Appearance:[/b] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/15wza15.png[/IMG]
This is her appearance now. She constantly changes clothes, hairstyle and color, sometimes wears glasses and sometimes doesn't, and even changes her eye color (via contacts). She is a Theatre student, and part of the small troupe at PA Dueling University. [hr][b]Background:[/b] Shouko's name, literally meaning "Seriously Ill Child," is actually a mistake. Her mother wrote the name wrong, when she originally wanted "Small Child," which she is. Shouko stands at only 5'3". She went to Duel Elementary and Middle, and was constantly ridiculed for her name. She made up for it with her Deck. She built and named her deck around her miswritten name. She was she best in both Elementary, Middle, and she went to DTT Institute, and made herself the top student in weeks. She transfered to PA Dueling University, but was appaled to know that her title was stripped. She is now determined to get it back.[hr][b]Duel Spirit:[/b][color="#0000FF"] I don't want one.[/color][hr][b]Acceptance Card:[/b][color="#0000FF"] Eria the Water Charmer?[/color][hr][b]Deck:[/b] Based off of a Terminal World/Timeater combo, where both are used to basically lock the opponent's turn.[hr][b]Dorm:[/b] [color="#0000FF"]Eria Blue[/color][hr][b]Witty Comment:[/b] This happened last Friday, in a convo where we had to explain anal sex to my friend (who didn't know what it was):
[u]Me:[/u] It's also common with gay guys.
[u]Her:[/u] Oh, then my cousin... he does it too![hr][b]Special Powers:[/b] She can heal some illnesses or afflictions.[hr][b]Other:[/b] Nah.[hr][/spoiler][hr]


~RadioKirby

[LightShock]

[b]Name:[/b] Mark Felanor Raptor

[b]Age/Gender:[/b] 17/Male

[b]Appearance: [/b]
Height: 6'3
Weight: 205lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Dark-Blonde (Styled slightly spiky)
Skin Color: Fair
Tattoos/Piercings: Tattoo of a [url="http://www.tattoocollection.widdeng.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Dragon-Tattoo-Design.jpg"]Dragon[/url] over his Left Eye.
Clothing Style: Wears White Trainers, Dark Grey Denim Jeans, with a Gold Belt around it, a White shirt with Red stripes down the side's and the sleeves, and sometimes also wears a Black Jacket.
Posture: Tall and firm most of the time.
Righty or Lefty: Left-Handed

[b]Background:[/b] Mark was born to a father who was a Professor at Duel Academy, and a Mother who worked in the store of Duel Academy for several years. This was one of the main reason's that Mark was able to get into Duel Academy easily, though he didnt go into Obelisk Blue, because he only got in easily because he learnt from the best, Not because of his Connections. He instead made it into Ra Yellow, and was readying himself for his Second year at the school, when he got word of the problems that the sachool was suffering. Not really minding where he was, as long as it involved dueling, he offered to be transferred to PAD-U. He hopes his cool, calm personality will help him keep a cool head in this new environment, and that his Machine Deck will be good enough to take him to the top.

[b]Duel Spirit:[/b] A Mute "Skull Servant". XD

[b]Acceptance Card:[/b] The Six Samurai - Zanji

[Spoiler=[b]Deck:[/b] Mechanical Onslaught - A Deck that Focuses on Machine-types, more specifically the Cyber Dragon's and the V-Z Series, either overwhelming with The Powerful Cyber's, or Disabling with the Tricky Effect's of the V-Z Series.]
[u]Monster Cards[/u]
1. Cyber Dragon
2. Cyber Dragon
3. Cyber Dragon
4. Cyber Dragon Zwei
5. Cyber Dragon Zwei
6. Cyber Dragon Zwei
7. Machina Fortress
8. Cyber Eltanin
9. Shining Angel
10. Shining Angel
11. Shining Angel
12. Cyber Valley
13. Cyber Valley
14. Cyber Valley
15. Cyber Larva
16. Cyber Larva
17. Cyber Larva
18. Honest
19. Honest
20. V-Tiger Jet
21. V-Tiger Jet
22. W-Wing Catapult
23. W-Wing Catapult
24. X-Head Cannon
25. X-Head Cannon
26. Y-Dragon Head
27. Y-Dragon Head
28. Z-Metal Tank
29. Z-Metal Tank
30. Machina PeaceKeeper
31. Machina PeaceKeeper
32. Sangan

[u]Spell Cards[/u]

33. Polymerization
34. Future Fusion
35. Evolution Burst
36. Evolution Burst
37. Limiter Removal
38. Gold Sarcophagus
39. Lightning Vortex
40. Overload Fusion
41. Power Bond
42. Power Bond
43. De-Fusion
44. Burial from a Different Dimension
45. Burial from a Different Dimension
46. Swords of Revealing Light
47. Monster Reborn
48. Mystical Space Typhoon

[u]Trap Cards[/u]
49. Ultimate Offering
50. Return from a Different Dimension
51. Paradox Fusion
52. Roll Out!
53. Formation Union
54. Mirror Force
55. Call of the Haunted
56. Torrential Tribute
57. Bottomless Trap Hole
58. Bottomless Trap Hole
59. Magic Cylinder
60. Magic Cylinder

[u]Extra Deck[/u]
1. VW-Tiger Catapult
2. XY-Dragon Cannon
3. XZ-Tank Cannon
4. YZ-Tank Dragon
5. XYZ-Dragon Cannon
6. VWXYZ-Dragon Catapult Cannon
7. Cyber Twin Dragon
8. Cyber End Dragon
9. Chimeratech Fortress Dragon
10. Chimeratech Overdragon
[/spoiler]
[b]Desired Dorm:[/b] I dont know what colour goes best with Machine's, so I'll go with my Favourite Colour, so 'Hilta Red'. (Even so, IT looks as though I've been placed In [color="#FF8C00"]Lyna White[/color], which is also fine!)

[b]Witty Comment:[/b] If it at first you dont Succeed, GO HOME, IT'S TOO LATE, THERE'S NOTHING YOU CAN DO!!!

[b]Other:[/b] (Having never watched 5D's, I cant do the bike stuff, so I'm only in it for normal dueling ^^; )

[~ Dākunaitomon ~]

[size="4"]Not Done[/size]
Name: Jake Valance
Age/Gender: 13,Male
[spoiler=Appearance:] [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/308/f/7/Dan_K_by_Eswaranma.jpg[/img]
Jake is 5'5 Weighs about 115 Lbs and when serious puts on Black Sunglasses. His Jacket is Leather and his yellow shirt is Nylon you know the soft kind. Unlike his picture he does NOT smile all the time.[/spoiler]
Background: (Halfway through this, I decided you could be from the other academics, too, Like DTT Tech, Or Dueling U! This is also the section where your Biography goes.)
Duel Spirit: So do we put what we want as our D-Spirit and you accept it? if so Sonic Chick.
Acceptance Card: Legendary Six Samurai - Kageki
[spoiler=Deck: basically a billy Deck full of fast monsters]
Royal Knight
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Airknight Parshath
Widespread Ruin
Chthonian Soldier
Zero Gardna
Polymerization x2
Sonic Chick
Road Synchron
Turbo Booster
Turbo Rocket
Speed Warrior
Nitro Synchron
Flamvell Guard
Boost Warrior
Turbo Synchron
Sonic Duck
Second Booster
Changer Synchron
Space Jump
Hyper Synchron
Wild Tornado
Urgent Tuning
Scrap-Iron Scarecrow
Dash Warrior
Rapid Warrior
Swift Scarecrow
Assault Mode Activate x2
[SPOILER=Imperial Dragon/Assault Mode][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4343/211482w.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". The first time a monster(s) is Summoned to your opponent's side of the field each turn you can Special Summon 1 Level 1 monster from your Deck that card's effect is negated and it's ATK and DEF are reduced to 0. this card cannot Attack the turn you activate this effect. During each of your Standby Phases that you control this Face-Up ATK Position monster and 1 other Face-Up ATK Position Level 1 monster Place 1 Imperial Counter on this card (Max.12). You can remove any number of Imperial Counters from this card to activate an appropriate effect:
● 4: Inflict 300 Damage to your opponent for every Spell and Trap card in Their graveyard.
● 7: Draw cards until you obtain a Trap card Set that card immediately and discard the other drawn cards to the graveyard.
● 12: Have 1 other monster you control gain 100 ATK for every monster in both you and your opponent's graveyard. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Imperial Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Extra Deck]
[spoiler=Imperial Dragon][img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/1276/211482b.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner Monsters.
You can Negate the following effect and Pay 1000 Life Points to Remove from play 1 card on the field. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls you can equip it to this card. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for every card equipped to this card. [/spoiler]
[spoiler=Paladin of the Mighty Dragons][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/2166/211482t.jpg[/img]
1 Dragon-Type Synchro Monster + 1 Warrior-Type Monster.
This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon (from the Extra Deck). Once per turn you can Remove from play 1 Dragon-Type Synchro monster in your graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. If you skip this card's battle phase this card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap card effects until the end phase.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Helix Dragon][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3368/211482.jpg[/img]
1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
When this card destroys a monster with lower ATK reduce the battle damage to 0. When this card Destroys a monster with lower ATK or DEF inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's battle position points. You can Pay 800 Life Points to Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and return it to its original position.[/spoiler]
Road Warrior
Armory Arm
Turbo Cannon
Nitro Warrior
Turbo Warrior[/spoiler][/spoiler]
Desired Dorm: Hiita Red
Witty Comment: What 9000? You Ain't got no Pancake Mix!

[Lexsuncion]

I need a bit of Clairification on Imperial Dragon:

[b]You can Negate the following effect and Pay 1000 Life Points to Remove from play 1 card on the field.[/b](1) [b]The first time a monster(s) is Summoned to your opponent's side of the field each turn, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.[/b](2) [b]When your opponent Activates a Spell or Trap card, inflict 300 Damage to your opponent. [/b](3)

(1): What are you negating, exactly? The following effects seem fairly beneficial with no drawback to yourself, and those would be the "Following" Effects, provided you had a colon( there to designate them as effects following the aforementioned statement.

(2): Like Summon reactor's effect?

(3): I would like this to be "the first time", or "Once per turn", like the summoning effect. Aside from that, It's dandy.

(4): A Burn Dragon! Wee!


For the Assault Mode, A bit of grammar clear up, and some clarification on the words.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Assault Mode Activate". The first time a monster(s) is Summoned to your opponent's side of the field each turn you can Special Summon 1 Level 1 monster from your Deck[color="#FF0000"](Period)[/color] this card cannot Attack the turn you activate this effect. [b]During each of your Standby Phases that you control this Face-Up ATK Position monster and 1 other Face-Up ATK Position Level 1 monster Place 1 Imperial Counter on this card (Max.12)[/b](1). You can remove any number of Imperial Counters from this card to activate an appropriate effect:
● 4: Inflict 300 Damage to your opponent for every Spell and Trap card in [b]his/her[/b][color="#FF0000"](Their)[/color] graveyard.
[b]● 7: have your opponent draw 1 card. Reveal that card, and if it is a monster Special Summon that monster to your side of the field[/b](2)
[b]● 12: Have 1 other monster you control gain 100 ATK for every monster in both you and your opponent's graveyard. [/b](3)When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Imperial Dragon" from your Graveyard.

(1): Is this one counter for each Level 1, Or just one?

(2) If the above is for [i]Each[/i] level one, this effect needs some sort of drawback. If not, it's dandy to me, however it cannot special summon monsters that can't be special summoned, or have special requirements.

(3) Oooooh I like this one!


Paladin Guy; Needs tweaking, or its a No. Mainly:

This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon (from the Extra Deck). Once per turn you can Remove from play 1 Dragon-Type Synchro monster in your graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. [b]This card cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap card effects.[/b]

That is a very powerful effect for a monster with that much attack. I would suggest something along the lines of "Can't be targeted", or "Cant be destroyed by spells(only)". If you Want to keep that effect, It'll need some harder summoning requirments. One Dragon Synchro+One warrior isn't hard. (I know, I run warrior decks all the time!)

Aside from that, your appearance needs more words and such. Your acceptance card matches your dorm, and the Legendary Six Sammurai will be for second years . Aside from that I look forward to seeing the rest

[~ Dākunaitomon ~]

thanks for the clear up

there is not one counter for each level one otherwise it would have said "for every..."

[◇ Void ◇]

[b]Name:[/b] Yashiro Akemi
[b]Age/Gender: [/b]14, Male
[b]Appearance:
[/b]Height: 5'7
Weight: 176lb
Eye Colour: Deep Blue
Hair Colour and Style: Cream-White, Spiked downwords with two bangs on each side of his face. The left bangs obstruct his eye most of the time.
Skin Colour: Pale white, Veins showing through thinner parts of his skin.
[b]Background:[/b] Yashiro Strange Apperence, Revoloving with the colour White is due to the contraction of a Variation of the Genetic disease, [i]Oculocutaneous albinism, [/i]Meening the Pigment used in hair and skin colour is Absent. The Albinism was not much of a factor for Yahsiro's Primary and Secondary school years, Execpt for him earning the nickname of "Ghost," and a Intrest in Art. Yashiro recieved on his Twelth Birthday a New deck from a Charity that supports his Genetic Disease, The Fallen Angel Archtype; The design's where originaly some Sketches that Yashiro had drawn During the Summer holidays, Couped inside to protect him from Easy sunburn. He Cherished the Angel's and never let them leave his side. Yashiro was offered a Place in PAD-U's Lyna White dorm After Duel Acdemeny East was willing to accept him, But yet was Overcrouded and Accepted the option of PAD-U.
[b]Duel Spirit: [/b]Happy Lover[b]
Acceptance Card:[/b] [color="#ff8c00"]The Six Samurai - Zanji
[/color][b][Spoiler=Deck: Fallen Angels (Custom Archtype)]
[/b]Yashiro's Fallen angels are a Series of Fairy-Type Monsters which rely on sending Themselves to the Opponents Graveyard to increase there ATK Power. They also depend on Dark Attribute Support and there stronger Synchro forms. They are Suceptable to Decks that depend on Removing Cards from play and Anti-Synchro. In Tag-Duel's they could be a Pest as there Unusal effects meen they are Tricky to Remove from the Graveyard without Sacerficing Vital cards.
[Spoiler=001: Fallen Angel - Andrealphus]
[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=002: Fallen Angel - Azrael]
[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler= 003: Fallen Angel - Kokabiel (Synchro)]
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1390/40118k.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[spoiler=004: Fallen Angel - Lix Tetrax (Synchro)]
[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8573/40118b.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[spoiler=005: Fallen Angel - Lucifer]
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=006: Fallen Angel - Malpas]
[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4710/40118g.jpg[/img][/SPOILER]
[Spoiler=007: Fallen Angel - Mephiles]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=008: Fallen Angel - Uzza (Synchro|Ace)]
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=009: Fallen Pulse (Quick-Spell Support)]
[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=010: Circle Of The Dammed (Field-Spell Support)]
[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/6568/40118.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler]
[b]Desired Dorm[/b]: [color="#ff8c00"]Lyna White
[/color][b]Witty Comment:[/b] Two men walk into a Bar. "Ouch," They Moaned.
[b]-Optional Stuff-
Special Powers: [/b]While asleep, Yashiro is able to peer into other people's Dreams. This is only able to to be sustained for moments and cannot be used for stuff like Mind control or Torture. Effects of overuse include Migrains, Eye strain, Drousyness and in serious cases, Fainting and Memory loss of Recent events. Yashiro also can been seen by the dreamer himself And cannot manifest during nightmares. Nice, Huh?
[b]Other: [/b]Fallen Angel archtype is Incomplete, so i will PM you to approve Cards if thats not much of a Hassle.

[Lexsuncion]

I can't seem to open up the spoiler to your custom cards. Without being able to do so, I can't approve them. =/

[LightShock]

[quote name='Lexsuncion' timestamp='1292634142' post='4860238']
I can't seem to open up the spoiler to your custom cards. Without being able to do so, I can't approve them. =/
[/quote]

IT must be a problem your end, cause I CAN see them...pretty interesting Archetype...

[Sweetie Belle]

[quote name='Lexsuncion' timestamp='1292634142' post='4860238']
I can't seem to open up the spoiler to your custom cards. Without being able to do so, I can't approve them. =/
[/quote]
I can't see them either. Are you running Firefox?

[Lexsuncion]

Had to look at them through a quote, and copy/pasting their imageshack link in the browser bar. [b]Malphas[/b]'s second effect of special summoning himself after being destroyed needs a slight nerf, such as "This card is removed from play when it is removed from the field after being special summoned this way." Or even better, considering the archetype, "This card is sent to the opponent's graveyard when it is destroyed after using this effect", otherwise you have a one-attack defense each turn, and a tuner at that. Note that other tuners with self-summoning ability are removed from play after being removed from the field, or the effect can only be used once.

@ Kirby: Yes

[◇ Void ◇]

Ok, Malpas Nerfed. Is there any more issues with the Appication?

[Lexsuncion]

Seems fine, although I warn you, you wont be able to duel with any cards I have not approved. And if I don't approve some staple-card of your deck, then you will have to go without. Beyond that, Expect and acceptance letter at some point! I has me a busy life of backs and forths, so it takes me some time some times.