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[spoiler=Read]Rules: All YCM Rules apply, no spamming, no flaming, no trolling, no joke cards, etc.

Requirements: remake a level 4 or lower vanilla monster and give it an effect(first to post card that meets requirements is my opponent)

Winner: most votes in 3 Days or 3 votes

Prize:1 rep

Other Info: Votes must have reason, if they are based on things like pics or names they won't be counted

 

[spoiler=Votes]Card A:1

Card B:1

 

[spoiler=Card A Synergy's card]299323x.jpg

Lore:Each time your opponent Summons a monster(s), place 1 Ragnarok Counter on this card. If this face-up Defense Position monster is selected as an attack target you can remove all Ragnarok Counters on this card. If you do, for each Ragnarok Counter removed by this effect, destroy 1 card on the field.

 

[spoiler=Card B Hila Nuerfa's card]302788.jpg

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending from your deck to the Graveyard monsters listed in the card text of a "Mavelus" in your Fusion Deck. When this card is Special Summoned in this way Special Summon as many "Blue Winged Corwn"'s as possible from your hand and deck. Each Winged Beast-type monster gains 300 ATK for each Winged Beast monster on your side of the field. When this card is Destroyed activate the necessary effect:

-Destroyed by Battle/Monster Effect: Each monster on your side of the field named "Mavelus" or "Blue Winged Crown" gains 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase.

-Destroyed by a Spell/Trap card effect: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Then you can look at your opponents Deck and send all Spell and Trap cards with the same name as the ones destroyed to the Graveyard.

 

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[spoiler=Mavelus]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending from your deck to the Graveyard monsters listed in the card text of a "Mavelus" in your Fusion Deck. When this card is Special Summoned in this way Special Summon as many "Blue Winged Corwn"'s as possible from your hand and deck. Each Winged Beast-type monster gains 300 ATK for each Winged Beast monster on your side of the field. When this card is Destroyed activate the appropriate effect:

-Destroyed by Battle/Monster Effect: Each monster on your side of the field named "Mavelus" or "Blue Winged Crown" gains 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase.

-Destroyed by a Spell/Trap card effect: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Then you can look at your opponents Deck and send all Spell and Trap cards with the same name as the ones destroyed to the Graveyard.

 

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Hard choice, seeing as how I've watched both of yall make amazing cards... and this takes the cake i think...

Now I'll do my best on the OCG corrections

Synergy OCG

Each time your opponent Summons a monster(s), place 1 Ragnarok Counter on this card. If this face-up Defense Position monster is selected as an attack target you can remove all Ragnarok Counters on this card. If you do, for each Ragnarok Counter removed by this effect, destroy 1 card on the field.

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Hila Nuerfa's OCG

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending from your Deck to the Graveyard monsters listed in the card text of a "Mavelus" in your Fusion Deck. When this card is Special Summoned in this way, Special Summon as many "Blue Winged Crown"'s as possible from your hand and Deck. Each Winged Beast-[bType[/b]monster gains 300 ATK for each Winged Beast monster on your side of the field. When this card is Destroyed activate the necessary effect:

-Destroyed by Battle/Monster Effect: Each monster on your side of the field named "Mavelus" or "Blue Winged Crown" gains 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase.

-Destroyed by a Spell/Trap card effect: Destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Then you can look at your opponents Deck and send all Spell and Trap cards with the same name as the ones destroyed to the Graveyard.

Error Count: 4

 

In terms of OCG, Synergy would get it

In terms of effect itself, Hila would get it... Synergy's effect is OP'd IMO

 

so I think Hila gets my vote, even though there are more OCG errors

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Disregarding OCG, effect-wise alone, Synergy's is UP'ed (as I will mention later), and Hila's is OP'ed to the max.

 

Hila:

You can have the fusion materials in your deck. Therefore, having this one card allows you to Special Summon 4 monsters for the cost of 1. (1600 + 1600 + 1600 + 1300 = 6100!) That's 6100 worth of ATK in one move. in addition, to make matters even worse, they each get a 1200 ATK BONUS! That gives you a monster with 2500, and 3 monsters with 2800 ATK each!!! Therefore, in reality, by playing this one card, you have at least 9900 ATK on the field! OP'ed and broken as hell.... And if that's not enough, then you have two more additional effects. It its destroyed by a monster, all Blue Winged Crowns rise by 1000 ATK. By itself, this is fine, but the other effect is pretty broken. Destroying all Spells and Traps PLUS getting rid of your opponent's Spells and Traps in their decks? (You realize that Heavy Storm was banned for a reason, and this card goes 100 times further than that....)

 

Synergy:

Synergy's card, though at first glance seems powerful, has a varying speed. It could be effective in swarming decks, but would be somewhat slow in other decks. If it is destroyed right away, it would be no more useful than a Man Eater Bug. In addition, it only has 1500 ATK, so it would not be able to stand well by itself anyways. However, the biggest flaw is this: Switching it into FACE-UP defense position. It would most likely die BEFORE its effect could activate. Therefore, this card's effect takes a lot of strategy, luck, and skill to pull off.

 

With that, Synergy gets my vote for being much, much more balanced.

Hila, you have a good idea, but try working on the balance of your cards to prevent OP'edness. :D

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