Spirit of DMG Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 w00t. We got stickied. Despite going the full day without a single post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Yay! A stickie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Lmao. On the upside, I caught up fully. This idea for the YMB3 sounds great. I'm more eager than ever :3 I could even help with the writing if you guys want me to ;o oh, and that breathing commercial was win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 This place got stickied? Well that's cool xD DL, that would help a lot actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Well, I can edit it to make it better, help out with plot and stuff, but you should be the main writer, I trust your writing skills ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Maybe. I'll let you handle any action sequences though. If we even have any, since all the action is supposed to take place in the actual match. I guess we'll make brief descriptions of the end of the fight, like for a landslide we say the guy won easily and for close matches we write out some action and then declare the winner at the end of it. So far, Creator and I are rotating, but we can fit you in easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Any Fanfic about me must feature Anime Girls, oh and they must have Big Boobs too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Well, you're a lulzy doctor in mine. But you're going to Japan with us, so that sounds very doable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Action scenes...hmm, I can do :3 Altho in truth, you need to practice yours, to get better for DEF ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 I know :/ Japan should...give me some practice. Oh yeah dude, did you read the new DEF yet? I think I just spoiled it for you if you didn't... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1294805874' post='4929057'] I know :/ Japan should...give me some practice. Oh yeah dude, did you read the new DEF yet? I think I just spoiled it for you if you didn't... [/quote] I can just teleport here. ;] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Lolteleportation I wonder if mankind will ever harness technology capable of doing such.. Japan will probably be 1 of the first to do it. Or China. Basically, the Asians will beat us to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1294806314' post='4929076'] Lolteleportation I wonder if mankind will ever harness technology capable of doing such.. Japan will probably be 1 of the first to do it. Or China. Basically, the Asians will beat us to it. [/quote] It will be Japan. China wont do it because if they do, everyone must have them because they are f***ing communist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Lmao xD Also, no, I have not read the new DEF. *goes read new DEF* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Huh, this thing managed to get stickied again..... .-. Also... *doesn't go read new DEF* ;3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 I said I wouldn't review the new DEF....but I wanna now, after the first few sentences made me gag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 >__> Just pay attention to the story man.. Cuz I'm not gonna bother wasting an hour replying to another of those -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 As long as you read and take into account what I point out, which will probably improve your writing (probably) I don't mind not receiving explanation for why you, say, made Jake interested in tobacco. And I DO pay attention to the story too >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 But you don't comment on specific stuff like usual when you review :T And huh? Did I have Jake smoking something... Oh you meant with Andex. A prop that blows bubbles man, that's all it is.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 you'll read what I mean when you read my comment.... Oh, and it may seem like I'm just poking fun at random times, but there's always a reason I stop the story (well, usually) so pay attention to anything that might be wrong with thast segment if I don't point it out. I'm around a third of the way done with the review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 *facedesk* So you're actually going through with it... Fine, but I'll just skip out the times you point out mistakes, no point in replying "Ah you're right.." or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Fusion, remember when [b]you[/b] were telling [b]me[/b] to accept DL's reviews? ;333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Yeah :/ You're lucky, only getting them twice and stuff.. I know it's constructive criticism, so I don't mind it, but I mind that either my writing's detracting DL's enjoyment from the chapter or that I might spend a good hour replying to it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Lawl But for both of those things, my review serves in 1. You will write better, and thus be able to avoid your writing "detracting from my enjoyment". 2. You won't get much long reviews, or long reviews at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 Well alright. I'll admit I didn't really use any advice from your 2nd review in writing 21 because I was away and had other stuff going on (aaaand I wanted the Xmas special to be out relatively soon after Xmas ended >.>), but for the next chapter I'll try to be more thorough with grammar and stuff. Dude, have you caught up in El's fic yet .__. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.