Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 27, 2012 Report Share Posted July 27, 2012 I'd like a copy as well And I promise to read it on time ths time xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 27, 2012 Report Share Posted July 27, 2012 [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343371788' post='5990040'] It's about thirty six chapters (each one is only about five pages, so it's fairly short) and if you like, I can send you a couple chapters about the time i get around to sending out my DEF spin-off. [/quote] Sure, that sounds like a good- [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343371788' post='5990040'] sending out my DEF spin-off. [/quote] Oh right, this is the one about the Dark Magician, right? ...wait [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343371788' post='5990040'] [b]sending out[/b] my DEF spin-off. [/quote] What's that mean? @Remo-Good to hear man, I'm going to try writing 1 or 2 more chapters and then I'll come to a decision. Expect something within the next couple of days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 27, 2012 Report Share Posted July 27, 2012 Umm the one about the dark magician was a one shot. I'm writing one set in the DEF universe, focusing on... Finish up SHC and then you'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 27, 2012 Report Share Posted July 27, 2012 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1343367892' post='5990020'] But you guys will totally send me fan letters when DEF comes out, right? Right? Totally. [/quote] Fusion if you ever publish DEF I'll see about getting my cousin to try and animate it for you. [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343371788' post='5990040'] It's about thirty six chapters (each one is only about five pages, so it's fairly short) and if you like, I can send you a couple chapters about the time i get around to sending out my DEF spin-off. [/quote] Thirty six chapters, five pages each, is honestly kind of . . . short (Oo) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 I like quick reads. Like how [i]The Ghost Next Door[/i] is written. Can't stand works that go into a lot of detail. That's why I never finished [i]Jane Eyre[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Well neither do I, which is why I stopped reading the Eragon series, but having it that many pages per chapter it has to be [i]extremely[/i] good if you ask me. The one type of style I want to see be used in a major novel is the "pick your adventure" type. Anyone remember those? You read so far and then it gave you an option were to take the story then told you which page to flip too. Imagine a novel like that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 LOL! I loved those books! I always read them twice a day: before bed, and after I wake up. Before bed I'd take a mild approach (Well, as mild as they'd let me) and then in the morning, I'd make the adventure fairly terrifying. They were awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 As my cousin also keeps telling me but they just dragged on way too long for me to find any interest in them. I literally had to force myself to read the second one before promising myself that I wasn't going to do the same thing again when the third book came out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 What if someone did a fanfic like that? Like, after each chapter they had have a fresh poll for which approach should happen that way, the audience engages directly with the story (much like how we kept harassing Fuse about our characters) and the writer has to do extremely difficult writing as a sort of challege Like, what if the main protagonist has to go from a white knight to a villian protagonist? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Thatd be a pretty sweet approach. Not to mention challenging. It'd take a really talented writer. Who around here could pull it off, though? ... DL, Fusion, where are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 DL doesn't come around that often but when it comes to Fusion I think he could do it . . . if given enough time On a side note I'm learning how to Hack Brawl (>8D) [s]If only I could find my SD Card Reader |||(>>)[/s] *facepalm* My computer can read SD Cards . . . sometimes I don't know wither I'm smart or a dumb ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nath~ Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Oh my, Gems are truly, [i]truly[/i], [b][i]truly[/i][/b] outrageous. Of course, no one knows who the Gem Knight is, what an under-rated guy. As usual, so many talented writers are hidden all over the internet. [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1343448166' post='5990752'] DL doesn't come around that often but when it comes to Fusion I think he could do it . . . if given enough time On a side note I'm learning how to Hack Brawl (>8D) [s]If only I could find my SD Card Reader |||(>>)[/s] *facepalm* My computer can read SD Cards . . . sometimes I don't know wither I'm smart or a dumb ass [/quote] And sadly, the same goes for me. I've been using an external device this whole time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343408149' post='5990251'] Umm the one about the dark magician was a one shot. I'm writing one set in the DEF universe, focusing on... Finish up SHC and then you'll see. [/quote] Right right, but what do you mean by sending it out? Like to Creative Writing? Or a publishing company? [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1343429588' post='5990535'] Fusion if you ever publish DEF I'll see about getting my cousin to try and animate it for you. [/quote] Thing is...I dunno if I can write DEF anymore. The Dark Knight Rises has prevented me from writing my Inactive Master Plan. [spoiler=Explanation regards movie spoilers] >TDKR bad guy holds city hostage with a nuke >DEF bad guy holds city (and rest of the planet) hostage with a nuke >TDKR bad guy is bald, buff strongman >DEF bad guy is bald, buff strongman You see the problem here?[/spoiler] [quote name='iRemo' timestamp='1343447565' post='5990739'] What if someone did a fanfic like that? Like, after each chapter they had have a fresh poll for which approach should happen that way, the audience engages directly with the story (much like how we kept harassing Fuse about our characters) and the writer has to do extremely difficult writing as a sort of challege Like, what if the main protagonist has to go from a white knight to a villian protagonist? [/quote] That'd be a fun challenge, provided it wasn't too long a story. But I don't have the time for it :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Alright. Originally, I was gonna send it out by mass pm like the last few KS and SHC. Then I just said "Know, why, forget this" and put it in Creative writing. Link in siggy, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Well Fusion that really isn't how Bane is supposed to be, it's just an interpretation from Christopher Noland. Besides I think there is a big enough difference that you can still publish DEF DMG gonna go look at it when I have the time, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Or Fuse could change up Life in a DEF re-write One of those two could work bro =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Well I still think he really shouldn't change Life since, I mean, there really isn't that big of a difference. [i]Maybe[/i] turn the bomb into something else that could destroy the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1343525697' post='5991414'] Well I still think he really shouldn't change Life since, I mean, there really isn't that big of a difference. [i]Maybe[/i] turn the bomb into something else that could destroy the Earth [/quote] But to what though is the issue I'm having at the moment. And it doesn't matter if it's just Nolan's interpretation, everyone in our generation cluster will remember the Dark Knight movies and they'd recognize if something remotely like one of its plots was used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 I don't think so Fusion because you got to remember that unless it is word for word it isn't a copy. Also our generation won't be reading it when it's published, nor do I believe people will remember Dark Knight Rises for very long; however Dark Knight Returns will be remembered for the best Joker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Let's look at Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann and Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's. Pretty sure you're fine, Fuse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Eh I guess the [i]worst[/i] that could happen is something like the comparison [i]The Hunger Games[/i] got from [i]Battle Royale[/i]. I'm thinking that I might redesign Life anyway though. Or embellish him a little more (well, I definitely need to do that). About TTGL and 5Ds, how exactly are they similar? The whole rising to galactic levels, the Spiral Energy/Crimson Dragon or the over the top chanting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 The Arc Cradle/Divine Temple is Teppelin Ener-D/Momentum is clearly Spiral Power Z-ONE is a villain whose plan is eerily similar to Lordgenome/The Anti-Spiral. The characters are like shitty expies. Etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 TTGL never mentioned playing a children's card game on motorcycles. Totally something I would do. And 5D's never used the phrase "naked ape". And Simon only has one hair color and no face tattoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Fuse I have a confession to make I FREAKING [i]LOVE[/i] DEADPOOL no homo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1343535312' post='5991543'] The Arc Cradle/Divine Temple is Teppelin Ener-D/Momentum is clearly Spiral Power Z-ONE is a villain whose plan is eerily similar to Lordgenome/The Anti-Spiral. The characters are like shitty expies. Etc. [/quote] Okay, good points. I dunno if they're all expires necessarily, but I can definitely agree everyone lost their awesomeness eventually after Dark Signers. [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1343581126' post='5991893'] TTGL never mentioned playing a children's card game on motorcycles. Totally something I would do. And 5D's never used the phrase "naked ape". And Simon only has one hair color and no face tattoo [/quote] But Kamina has a shitload of arm tats. Still, no question which is the better anime.[quote name='iRemo' timestamp='1343584023' post='5991931'] Fuse I have a confession to make I FREAKING [i]LOVE[/i] DEADPOOL no homo [/quote] Yeah man, he's amazing. I can't wait for his video game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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