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Slip-Stream travel.

A full portal with current technology would've been impossible. By Slipping between universes though, I could travel (at random sadly) between universes.

Also the MoonStone and all items related to it exist outside of DEF, I've had this for years.

In fact, DEF inspired me to revisit that storyline and add to it.

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Wow...your really going to accredit DEF for an idea I've kept alive for 5 years?

Low blow.

Anyway, Slip-Stream Travel is where you bend reality into the 5th dimension, It only happens for a few seconds, but in that time, one is capable of slipping in between the boundary of a group universes and entering one of them. It takes an incredible amount of power to do this, and it's random as to which universe you enter since your moving at 'I don't know how fast' times the speed of light, in all directions at once.

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[quote name='Hideki Hinata' timestamp='1334802021' post='5918609']
Anyway, Slip-Stream Travel is where you bend reality into the 5th dimension, It only happens for a few seconds, but in that time, one is capable of slipping in between the boundary of a group universes and entering one of them. It takes an incredible amount of power to do this, and it's random as to which universe you enter since your moving at 'I don't know how fast' times the speed of light, in all directions at once.
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... So it's the Tesseract, basically.

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[quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1334802149' post='5918610']
... So it's the Tesseract, basically.
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5th dimension, not 4th.

People are easily confused when counting higher than 2 dimensions so, so don't be worried.

jk, but really though.

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[quote name='Hideki Hinata' timestamp='1334802021' post='5918609']
Wow...your really going to accredit DEF for an idea I've kept alive for 5 years?
[b]No I know you had it before then, but it is the only work in WRITING that has it. Thus unless there is more writing other than DEF, or before it, your technology originated in the DEF world.[/b]

[b]It is how all things go in the multiverse.[/b]
Low blow.

Anyway, Slip-Stream Travel is where you bend reality into the 5th dimension, It only happens for a few seconds, but in that time, one is capable of slipping in between the boundary of a group universes and entering one of them. It takes an incredible amount of power to do this, and it's random as to which universe you enter since your moving at 'I don't know how fast' times the speed of light, in all directions at once.
[b]Never heard of it.[/b]
[b]And I doubt, even with your technology, you'd be able to successfully predict where one of these "Slip-Streams" appeared and get there before it closed.[/b]

[b]No if your counter part ever made it into the multiverse it'd most likely be by accident and through a wormhole.[/b]
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[quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1334802149' post='5918610']
... So it's the Tesseract, basically.
[/quote]

[s]The what now?[/s]

Never mind I looked it up.

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Damn... Been to long since I read A Wrinkle in Time X_X

[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1334802337' post='5918614']
The what now?
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It's a cube thign that is always folding in on itself.

In travel, it's the ability to take

T_____A

and turn it into

T_A, with a drop in the middle.

Think of it as a string between point T and A, random letters, that you can just make them touch or come close, no need to mess with the string between.

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[img]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/55/Tesseract.gif/240px-Tesseract.gif[/img]
^Tesseract

@Jake
Man-Made Slipstream travel, is possible. But view it as you want.

Maybe if I'm bored, one day I'll send all my info to you (abridged obv).

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[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1334803815' post='5918650']
I don't doubt you'd be able to make on in DEF Creator, but making one that'd work and go where you want would be difficult.

Again I doubt Emperor Aito would make or plan on traveling through dimensions.

But we'll let Fusion be the final word in this
[/quote]

Oh, you misinterpreted.

Aito is traveling RANDOMLY through the multiverse. He just goes with the flow.

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[quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1334789143' post='5918328']
NO Remo, that picture just isn't you . . .

Creator you being serious?

*looks at Fusion*

Fusion is he serious? Did you actually make it so that DEF Creator went into the multiverse?
[/quote]

I left it open-ended. In the end, we don't really know what happens to him.
He might be dead.
He might be alive and well.
He might be alive, but his body's f*cked up.
He might have been abducted by aliens.
He might have transcended space and time.
Basically, you believe what you want.
[quote name='Hideki Hinata' timestamp='1334802808' post='5918624']
[img]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/5/55/Tesseract.gif/240px-Tesseract.gif[/img]
^Tesseract
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I can stare at this thing for a while...
[quote name='The Real DL' timestamp='1334794000' post='5918412']
What if Crab had never married Life might be a nice one tho
[/quote]

[spoiler=Challenge Accepted]
After Life and Crab have Xazeon, things turn south fast before they can sweeten. They break apart and Crab keeps Xazeon and Life moves out. Because of this, Aka is never born.
Without Crab to make him feel inadequate in comparison, Life made a comeback in stride against Ragnarok for the position of Yugo's U.N representative and won it. Life becomes a well-known political figure.
The FTK and Akatsuki are never formed because there was no enemy to band them together. Donovyn isn't on good terms with Life, but isn't trying to kill him as he originally did. Rather, he's chosen on refining his strength and intellect so he won't lose to his brother. He forms a rivalry with Ninjew, who actually went to school and lived a normal life, and are the two best street-fighters in the school.
Since there was no FTK or Akatsuki to occupy their time, the DEF trio decide to join a club for the sake of their college resumes. After some convincing with El, they sign up for RP.820, where they meet and befriend Black and Creator. The five become close friends and eventually the school play happens.
However, there's lots of commotion during the play night. Firstly, Ninjew's girlfriend's cousin, Rui Karnon, comes to watch and goes over to tell El he did a good job, which leads to them flirting with one another. However, Ninjew enters this Big Bro Mode and cruises in, which prompts El to shove him away. They get into a tussle and Ninjew kinda kicks his a*s, but he secretly had to make an effort to subdue him.
But no one's paying attention because they see that Life himself came to the play. He was watching with his son, Xazeon, though no one knew he was his dad.
Xazeon becomes the new Cool Kid, while El vows to undergo training to kick Ninjew's a*s. Not wanting to lose to him, DL and Chris join his endeavor and seek out Justin, who agrees to teach them how to be ninja-like. Black and Creator come in later too, feeling they could benefit from the experience.
In the meantime, Remo feels that Xazeon was always a dick and didn't deserve all the praise, so he decides to go snooping for skeletons in his closet. He comes to Creator, having heard he had good tech which could help him. He's able to afford it too since he's rich.
Creator and the rest of the group (sans Black and Chris, who need convincing) get intrigued by the idea and they all end up trailing Xazeon and spy on Life.
They find themselves at this place called YCMaker Ultra Hotel. Life meets with Jake and plans a giant party for important news he has to share.
A week later, the group all manage to infiltrate the hotel and blend in with the party. DEF breaks away and find themselves upstairs, where a bunch of men in black suits congregate in a room. They overhear them saying how they're going to be able to live forever off the money they'll be taking from everyone at the party. They mentioned Life was a genius for thinking of the plan and him only getting 30% was a good deal.
DEF immediately jumps to conclusions and goes to expose Life's charade, but Black, Justin and Creator stay behind to hear more. That's when the men suddenly ambush them and say they knew they were listening in on them.
DEF crashes the stage before Life can make his big announcement and sling a bunch of accusations at him, to which he professes he doesn't know what they're talking about. The 3 ignore them and pick a fight, but Life's able to match the 3 of them through self-defense. Before things can get worse, Ninjew suddenly steps in and beats down all 3 of them, turns out Life recruited him as a bodyguard after seeing him fight Donovyn one time.
And before DEF can be escorted out, gunshots are heard from upstairs. Jake is the first one to get there and sees BCJ fighting a bunch of mafia men, but Justin's been shot. Jake lays a smackdown and makes quick work of them, calling his friend James Max to come and get Justin. That's when Creator notices someone fleeing the hotel, but before anyone can make a move, DEF crashes out and chases him.
*insert epic car chase*
The perp is none other than...XAZEON?
It turns out Xazeon resented his father for leaving his mother when he was born. His mother's rarely happy and he feels his dad's at fault, so he decided to use some of the members in the gang he was in to incriminate his father. One of the gang members wouldn't escape and would confess that Life employed them and evidence would be rigged to seal the deal, and would be bailed out later by Xazeon.
Life's big announcement turned out to be that he and other negotiators came to a compromise with the Pakistani government and were now working to end the war in Afghanistan.
So all the kids in the group make the news for foiling this bust to soil Life's name and get a lot of attention in school. Rui introduces Chris to her friend Rosa, and Kari ends up torn between DL and Justin.
In the end, we get Chris and Rosa happily married with 2 kids, DL and Kana crazily married with 4 kids, Justin and Kari unexpectedly married with one kid, and then the rest of the couples from the original story.
Chris is actually a Mod in this universe. Through Rosa, he befriended Atman, who introduced him to Roxas, who took him on as an apprentice when Chris voiced his wish to beat Ninjew, feeling outclassed from his beatdown. Rosa is a nurse highly skilled in her craft and she gives a new meaning to a loving wife.
DL felt a thrill of adventure from the experience at the Hotel and collaborated with Remo on forming a special detective agency. They're widely known around the city for being able to crack the hardest cases, even managing to clear up 2 other occasions attempting to soil Life's name.
Jake was shaken by how thugs infiltrated his hotel so easily, resulting in him becoming a lot less trusting than before, though Life managed to clear out the scandals tabloids made about the hotel and endorsed it with more money for future occasions.
Black felt a lot more confident about himself with all the praise he received as well as being more physically fit, so he boldly asked Caeda out in front of all her friends, which she initially rejected out of embarrassment, but later found him and accepted. They have 2 more kids after Amelia in this timeline.
El is the exact same, though he and the other 2 in DEF sought out Ninjew a lot more to defeat him. They all become equal to him when they're adults.
Donovyn eventually goes to Creator and confesses they're half-brothers. As adults, Donovyn uses Creator's technology to masquerade as a vigilante while Creator revolutionizes modern technology through his inventions. His plans of world domination are still on the mind, though he's not in as much of a rush with all the success he's met with.
Life immediately bailed Xazeon out of jail and focused on rebuilding their relationship. He also eventually went to see Crab to make up with her for the past. The two aren't as close to him as he'd like, though they have accepted his love begrudgingly. No longer weighed down by his past, Life makes a stir in the world with lots of social reform and eventually did end the Afghani War. Unfortunately, he's assassinated before he can receive awards in his honor, leaving the city in mourning for quite a while. You can find a giant statue of Life in Yugo today in Pop Park, one of the most popular tourist attractions in the city.[/spoiler]

By the way DL, did you see the other one I did in post-apocalypse DEF?

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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1334861912' post='5919051']
I left it open-ended. In the end, we don't really know what happens to him.
He might be dead.
He might be alive and well.
He might be alive, but his body's f*cked up.
He might have been abducted by aliens.
He might have transcended space and time.
Basically, you believe what you want.


I can stare at this thing for a while...


[spoiler=Challenge Accepted]
After Life and Crab have Xazeon, things turn south fast before they can sweeten. They break apart and Crab keeps Xazeon and Life moves out. Because of this, Aka is never born.
Without Crab to make him feel inadequate in comparison, Life made a comeback in stride against Ragnarok for the position of Yugo's U.N representative and won it. Life becomes a well-known political figure.
The FTK and Akatsuki are never formed because there was no enemy to band them together. Donovyn isn't on good terms with Life, but isn't trying to kill him as he originally did. Rather, he's chosen on refining his strength and intellect so he won't lose to his brother. He forms a rivalry with Ninjew, who actually went to school and lived a normal life, and are the two best street-fighters in the school.
Since there was no FTK or Akatsuki to occupy their time, the DEF trio decide to join a club for the sake of their college resumes. After some convincing with El, they sign up for RP.820, where they meet and befriend Black and Creator. The five become close friends and eventually the school play happens.
However, there's lots of commotion during the play night. Firstly, Ninjew's girlfriend's cousin, Rui Karnon, comes to watch and goes over to tell El he did a good job, which leads to them flirting with one another. However, Ninjew enters this Big Bro Mode and cruises in, which prompts El to shove him away. They get into a tussle and Ninjew kinda kicks his a*s, but he secretly had to make an effort to subdue him.
But no one's paying attention because they see that Life himself came to the play. He was watching with his son, Xazeon, though no one knew he was his dad.
Xazeon becomes the new Cool Kid, while El vows to undergo training to kick Ninjew's a*s. Not wanting to lose to him, DL and Chris join his endeavor and seek out Justin, who agrees to teach them how to be ninja-like. Black and Creator come in later too, feeling they could benefit from the experience.
In the meantime, Remo feels that Xazeon was always a dick and didn't deserve all the praise, so he decides to go snooping for skeletons in his closet. He comes to Creator, having heard he had good tech which could help him. He's able to afford it too since he's rich.
Creator and the rest of the group (sans Black and Chris, who need convincing) get intrigued by the idea and they all end up trailing Xazeon and spy on Life.
They find themselves at this place called YCMaker Ultra Hotel. Life meets with Jake and plans a giant party for important news he has to share.
A week later, the group all manage to infiltrate the hotel and blend in with the party. DEF breaks away and find themselves upstairs, where a bunch of men in black suits congregate in a room. They overhear them saying how they're going to be able to live forever off the money they'll be taking from everyone at the party. They mentioned Life was a genius for thinking of the plan and him only getting 30% was a good deal.
DEF immediately jumps to conclusions and goes to expose Life's charade, but Black, Justin and Creator stay behind to hear more. That's when the men suddenly ambush them and say they knew they were listening in on them.
DEF crashes the stage before Life can make his big announcement and sling a bunch of accusations at him, to which he professes he doesn't know what they're talking about. The 3 ignore them and pick a fight, but Life's able to match the 3 of them through self-defense. Before things can get worse, Ninjew suddenly steps in and beats down all 3 of them, turns out Life recruited him as a bodyguard after seeing him fight Donovyn one time.
And before DEF can be escorted out, gunshots are heard from upstairs. Jake is the first one to get there and sees BCJ fighting a bunch of mafia men, but Justin's been shot. Jake lays a smackdown and makes quick work of them, calling his friend James Max to come and get Justin. That's when Creator notices someone fleeing the hotel, but before anyone can make a move, DEF crashes out and chases him.
*insert epic car chase*
The perp is none other than...XAZEON?
It turns out Xazeon resented his father for leaving his mother when he was born. His mother's rarely happy and he feels his dad's at fault, so he decided to use some of the members in the gang he was in to incriminate his father. One of the gang members wouldn't escape and would confess that Life employed them and evidence would be rigged to seal the deal, and would be bailed out later by Xazeon.
Life's big announcement turned out to be that he and other negotiators came to a compromise with the Pakistani government and were now working to end the war in Afghanistan.
So all the kids in the group make the news for foiling this bust to soil Life's name and get a lot of attention in school. Rui introduces Chris to her friend Rosa, and Kari ends up torn between DL and Justin.
In the end, we get Chris and Rosa happily married with 2 kids, DL and Kana crazily married with 4 kids, Justin and Kari unexpectedly married with one kid, and then the rest of the couples from the original story.
Chris is actually a Mod in this universe. Through Rosa, he befriended Atman, who introduced him to Roxas, who took him on as an apprentice when Chris voiced his wish to beat Ninjew, feeling outclassed from his beatdown. Rosa is a nurse highly skilled in her craft and she gives a new meaning to a loving wife.
DL felt a thrill of adventure from the experience at the Hotel and collaborated with Remo on forming a special detective agency. They're widely known around the city for being able to crack the hardest cases, even managing to clear up 2 other occasions attempting to soil Life's name.
Jake was shaken by how thugs infiltrated his hotel so easily, resulting in him becoming a lot less trusting than before, though Life managed to clear out the scandals tabloids made about the hotel and endorsed it with more money for future occasions.
Black felt a lot more confident about himself with all the praise he received as well as being more physically fit, so he boldly asked Caeda out in front of all her friends, which she initially rejected out of embarrassment, but later found him and accepted. They have 2 more kids after Amelia in this timeline.
El is the exact same, though he and the other 2 in DEF sought out Ninjew a lot more to defeat him. They all become equal to him when they're adults.
Donovyn eventually goes to Creator and confesses they're half-brothers. As adults, Donovyn uses Creator's technology to masquerade as a vigilante while Creator revolutionizes modern technology through his inventions. His plans of world domination are still on the mind, though he's not in as much of a rush with all the success he's met with.
Life immediately bailed Xazeon out of jail and focused on rebuilding their relationship. He also eventually went to see Crab to make up with her for the past. The two aren't as close to him as he'd like, though they have accepted his love begrudgingly. No longer weighed down by his past, Life makes a stir in the world with lots of social reform and eventually did end the Afghani War. Unfortunately, he's assassinated before he can receive awards in his honor, leaving the city in mourning for quite a while. You can find a giant statue of Life in Yugo today in Pop Park, one of the most popular tourist attractions in the city.[/spoiler]

By the way DL, did you see the other one I did in post-apocalypse DEF?
[/quote]Did I mention I love you, and you're a genius?


This sounds amazing, honestly.

I quite like the idea of Fuse having ended up with Rui, and Life as a good guy


Oh and..uh...post it again? o3o

And Fuse, remember that top 50 manga list you posted a while back?

Where'd you find it?

EDIT: NVm, found da list :'DD

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I uh
I said Rosa, not Rui >.>
Though that'd be a weird one...
[spoiler=Collection of posts for context]
[quote name='Hideki Hinata' timestamp='1334703858' post='5917312']
@DL
Ignoring your picture...

Alternate Reality Creator is the reality in which the Trio failed. Deus broke the bomb, but Life still rules.

Fusion and DL die, leaving EL to lead the Banned alone. The FTK breaks away and merges with the remnants of the world's militarizes to fight Life.
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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1334707100' post='5917405']
Hrm
It's fun to mess around with.
I dunno if I'd feel like writing it, maybe if I'm bored one day.
But an apocalypse story would be fun.
[spoiler=Here, I'll spin off that idea and expand upon it some, at least it's fun to think about]
In that story, I'd probably initiate the fail by Life having an ace up his sleeve. He'd basically pull a Creator and activate a chip inside Crab's head that he implanted secretly while they were still married.
She'd effectively catch everyone off guard and kill Ninjew before he can reach Life.
And then Life and Crab beat DEF, Kari and Kana to death. They flee before Creator can wake up and stop them.
Everyone in space begins to attempt colonization, but it doesn't go well. Some people return to Earth to submit to Life's rule or they stay in space.
The world doesn't have as many people anymore and people still believe the bomb is active. Eventually, all that's left on Earth is the Inactive and the Banned, fighting with each other.

I actually think I'd have their war span another 20-30 years or so.
Creator leads the Banned, though he had to obtain leadership through dirty politics against Nexev, Dark and some other people, therefore causing dissension within the higher ranks. With Creator winning, Nexev leaves the Banned and acts as a vigilante. Creator's long lost his original ulterior motive of world domination, feeling disillusioned from having his hope constantly thwarted. Even if he somehow turned things around, he'd be in the exact same situation, just on opposite sides.
Black lost his faith when Caeda and his newborn baby were killed from their hospital being blown up. He's fully embraced despair and fights to find even a fragment of purpose amongst the senselessness of the world and its cruelty. His hardened heart developed a ruthlessness and cunning that made him into a mighty warrior mentioned in whispers of his enemies.
Jake fought wherever he could, but ultimately decided he would need multi-dimensional help. He and Lora went to enlist warriors from other dimensions to assist him, but before they can return, they receive a message from Life himself, saying he had known of the multiverse the whole time due to his grandfather having discovered a dimensional tear during the original bomb excavation. He says if Jake and Lora come back to their universe, he [i]will[/i] blow up Earth. So they're effectively banished from the DEF universe, helpless. Everyone else believes Jake and Lora took the sensible path in wandering the world as sages do.
Remo ends up marrying Clair, as he took it upon himself to be there for her when her best friend Cherry was killed protecting her and from then onward. He basically becomes DEF's Hughes, though he made a vow to never die until Life does so he can bring a child into a safe world like Clair wishes. He's the leader of Akatsuki and the faction is basically the Banned's wild card.
Sven (Ninjew's son) is Creator's biggest eyesore since he's constantly challenging his leadership. He's known as a walking mass of anger, furiously hacking away his foes on the battlefield. He fights to prove his worth and for a world where he can effectively make change through his own hands.
Hiru (JZ and Aqua's son) decides to become a medic rather than a fighter after seeing his father die on the battlefield from an untreated wound. He'd be a pacifist if he didn't have the sense that the world needs the Banned to fight Life.
Lyn and Rachel are very militaristic and their own individuals, since Creator couldn't be there for them since he had the Banned and other issues to prioritize. They don't quite like their father, but they're hard workers who are an important crux for the Banned. They expand upon their fathers' designs and eventually bring about PROTO mechas that every soldier can use.

Everything culminates in a battle where Life employs [i]every[/i] single Inactive to attack Banned's main HQ. They put up a valiant fight, but are defeated. Creator takes his daughters and they go underground. Creator finds a hollowed out cavern with lava and realizes they dug out to the bomb. He and his daughters inspect it and find out it's long-dead.
They resurface and Creator develops a device that electromagnetically shorts out everything. The remaining Banned attacks Inactive and they manage to reach Life when they activate the device. Crab's chip is nullified and she immediately grabs Life and she jumps with him out the window.[/spoiler]

...so I'm probably not gonna write it now.
But that was fun to think of.
How would you guys script apocalypse?
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[quote name='Creator and Fusion (bold) talking' timestamp='1334703858' post='5917312']
Umm, aside from the totally boring ending where Crab jumps out a window with Life, I liked that a lot.
[b]Thought it was poetic[/b]
[b]But now that I think about it[/b]
[b]It'd probably be more poetic in sending him to the bomb's lava pit where he can rest with it for eternity.[/b]
[b]Or something[/b]
Except you threw out the part where:

El Leads the Banned as a way to seek revenge for his lost friends.

Creator leads the FTK away to form a separate organization (Still called the FTK, but either combined with the world's militaries or going underground like you said).
[b]They'd go underground in that case. I guess he'd still be gunning for his own reign and be busy with preparing for it under the guise of dismantling the Inactive bit by bit with the FTK. The allure behind them is infiltrating Inactive areas and slowly whittling their numbers down rather than taking them head on.[/b]
because I honestly don't think El would die like that. I think he would will himself to live and get treatment, just so that he can get revenge (plus we all know El is a romantic and would use the image of his undying love to pull through).
[b]*shrug*[/b]
[b]He could, though I don't think he'd end up leading the Banned. If anything, he'd go on solo missions to do things his own way.[/b]
[b]Though he'd still be able to work well in a team.[/b]
[b]The Banned leader would either be Roxas or Dark in that case.[/b]
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...yeah I meant Rui idk why I said Rosa...

...

.........

IDK WHY I KEEP SAYING RUI WHEN I MEAN ROSA >.>


And that is badass

But I agree with creator, ending is lacking

Maybe that's just because its just you telling us, we're not livin da epicness :3

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[quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1334868773' post='5919173']
Or it's kind of a simple way to die.
I dunno.

Say, how come you wanted the top 50 list anyways?

Side note: I just realized I am actively watching 13 different anime series every week for this season.
What the hell
[/quote]
I wanted to show 20th CB, since we were discussing possible future Big 3

In the end we came to the conclusion that it would be

One Piece
Fairy Tail
Ao no Exorcist (since there were no other contenders, and it must be 3rd for a reason)

We considered Toriko and Beelzebub, but we figure

Toriko probably won't become Big 3 because it's MANime, and a LOTS of girls read SJ

And Beelzebub won't, unless it gets a major boom of plot and drama

Which I foresee anyway

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