Thar Posted December 12, 2011 Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1323720451' post='5702742'] <- is falling asleep reading the raps. [/quote] <- writes a crappy rap on your forehead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 12, 2011 Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 [quote name='Brothar' timestamp='1323723502' post='5702784'] <- takes a crap on your forehead. [/quote] [color=#00ff00]Fixed.[/color] [color=#00FF00]WHAT THE F*CK JAKE?[/color] [color=#00FF00]DIDJA SAY YA HATE?[/color] [color=#00FF00]YA DON'T LIKE MY LYRICS?[/color] [color=#00FF00]AND YET YOU LIKE [i]HIS[/i] FAN FICS?[/color] [color=#00FF00]THIS HERE IS MOTHERF*CKING BLASPHEMY[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU SIR, ARE A GOD DAMN CATASTROPHE.[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU'RE MAKING ME THINK OF KILLING KITTIES[/color] [color=#00FF00]MAKING FUR COATS FOR MY BIDDIES[/color] [color=#00FF00]THIS SH*T IS F*CKING CRAZY[/color] [color=#00FF00]COMING FROM THE GOD DAMN LAZY[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU CLAIM I'M BORING [/color] [color=#00FF00]THAT I LEAVE YOU SNORING[/color] [color=#00FF00]WELL TO THAT, HOW'S THIS?[/color] [color=#00FF00]I'LL GIVE YOUR LORA A KISS[/color] [color=#00FF00]AND DO MORE THAN THAT[/color] [color=#00FF00]HERE'S A LITTLE FACT[/color] [color=#00FF00]CHLOROFORM IS MY FRIEND[/color] [color=#00FF00]MY TICKET TO HER END[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU BETTER ACT FAST[/color] [color=#00FF00]BEFORE I MAKE A NAST'[/color] [color=#00FF00]ALL OVER HER FACE[/color] [color=#00FF00]MAKE A F*CKING DISGRACE[/color] [color=#00FF00]COME ON JAKE THE SAGE[/color] [color=#00FF00]SHOW ME SOME RAGE.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted December 12, 2011 Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 Impressive, but you do know that rhyming every single thing like this A A B B C C Gets really monotonous to read. Not to say it isn't good, just boring to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1323724580' post='5702813'] Impressive, but you do know that rhyming every single thing like this A A B B C C Gets really monotonous to read. Not to say it isn't good, just boring to read. [/quote] I for one enjoyed it But going wild with rhyme form isn't a bad thing :'P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 12, 2011 Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1323700573' post='5702298'] [color=#00FF00]PFFFT[/color] [color=#00FF00]NICKY CAN'T RAP FOR SH*T[/color] [color=#00FF00]HE COULDN'T F*CK A CLIT[/color] [color=#00FF00]HE AIN'T GOT NOTHIN ON ME[/color] [color=#00FF00]CAN'T EVEN GET ON GLEE[/color] [color=#00FF00]HE CAN'T STEP IT UP[/color] [color=#00FF00]CAN'T WATCH A PUP[/color] [color=#00FF00]WITHOUT CUDDLING IT TIGHT[/color] [color=#00FF00]FEELING HAPPY ALRIGHT[/color] [color=#00FF00]NO DL, HE JACKSH*T[/color] [color=#00FF00]HE'S GAYER THAN PIT[/color] [color=#00FF00]HEY NICKY PROVE ME WRONG[/color] [color=#00FF00]SHOW OFF YOUR DING-A-DONG[/color] [color=#00FF00]CAN YOU RAP LIKE ME[/color] [color=#00FF00]STRUT LIKE ME[/color] [color=#00FF00]NO YOU CAN'T[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU'RE F*CKING NICKY.[/color] [/quote] [color=#ff0000]Oh you think your hot s*** huh? Well get a load of this![/color] [color=#ff0000]*Beatbots bust a move on a random stage*[/color] [color=#ff0000]You think your all that[/color] [color=#ff0000]But in fact[/color] [color=#ff0000]your lettin things hold ya back.[/color] [color=#ff0000]And the last time you stepped anything up[/color] [color=#ff0000]was right before you f*cked everything up.[/color] [color=#ff0000]I'm Nicholas[/color] [color=#ff0000]Inventor[/color] [color=#ff0000]Mothaflippin killer.[/color] [color=#ff0000]So if your feeling lucky[/color] [color=#ff0000]about taking on Nicky[/color] [color=#ff0000]I'll take your bet[/color] [color=#ff0000]your gonna regret[/color] [color=#ff0000]cuz I'm the best I've ever been.[/color] [color=#ff0000]I've crafted creations[/color] [color=#ff0000]they'll last for generations[/color] [color=#ff0000]All you've got is yo panties in a knot[/color] [color=#ff0000]and a used car at the back of the lot.[/color] [color=#ff0000]Yeah, what now.[/color] I guess I'll run TWO Epic Rap battles to start with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Never did get that rage...at least I'm safe from any feminine wrath (you'd think I'd attract more of that). *sees Creator* [color=#00ff00]Hee hee[/color] [color=#00FF00]u funneh nicky[/color] [color=#00FF00]WELL LOOKIE HERE[/color] [color=#00FF00]HERE WE GOT A QUEER[/color] [color=#00FF00]HIS NAME IS NICKY[/color] [color=#00FF00]LOOKS LIKE WE'RE GETTING FRISKY[/color] [color=#00FF00]THINKS HE CAN RAP LIKE HE'S DR. SEUSS[/color] [color=#00FF00]FACT IS, YOU'RE WAY TOO LOOSE[/color] [color=#00FF00]AIN'T GOT NO REFINEMENT[/color] [color=#00FF00]NEED SOME MAD CONFINEMENT[/color] [color=#00FF00]WHY YOU GOTTA CRAMP MY STYLE[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOUR SKILL'S A FOOT, AND MINE'S A MILE[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU SIT TIGHT AND LEARN TO RAP[/color] [color=#00FF00]I'LL BE RIGHT BACK, I'MMA GO FAP[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1323739288' post='5703170'] Never did get that rage...at least I'm safe from any feminine wrath (you'd think I'd attract more of that). *sees Creator* [color=#00ff00]Hee hee[/color] [color=#00FF00]u funneh nicky[/color] [color=#00FF00]WELL LOOKIE HERE[/color] [color=#00FF00]HERE WE GOT A QUEER[/color] [color=#00FF00]HIS NAME IS NICKY[/color] [color=#00FF00]LOOKS LIKE WE'RE GETTING FRISKY[/color] [color=#00FF00]THINKS HE CAN RAP LIKE HE'S DR. SEUSS[/color] [color=#00FF00]FACT IS, YOU'RE WAY TOO LOOSE[/color] [color=#00FF00]AIN'T GOT NO REFINEMENT[/color] [color=#00FF00]NEED SOME MAD CONFINEMENT[/color] [color=#00FF00]WHY YOU GOTTA CRAMP MY STYLE[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOUR SKILL'S A FOOT, AND MINE'S A MILE[/color] [color=#00FF00]YOU SIT TIGHT AND LEARN TO RAP[/color] [color=#00FF00]I'LL BE RIGHT BACK, I'MMA GO FAP[/color] [/quote] [IMG]http://i40.tinypic.com/2882lts.jpg[/IMG] Also, why did you rhyme Nicky with Frisky ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [color=#00ff00]Blackieeee, don't you know that rinsing in the shower is a bette-[/color] Was going for -ky and -ky. We should probably talk something Japanesey though, raps can be mad distracting. guise, wut ur take on Horakhty? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Oh that reminds me . . . Fusion I doubt you'd ever manage of kiss from my daughter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 I just posted something "Japanesey" ._. Horakhty is bad, and dying to it makes me feel less of a man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1323740025' post='5703201'] Oh that reminds me . . . Fusion I doubt you'd ever manage of kiss from my daughter. [/quote] Bro, I wouldn't go for Lora man, for real. [color=#00ff00]I'M COMING FOR YOU IN YOUR SLEEP HEE HEE HEE HEE[/color] [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1323740124' post='5703206'] I just posted something "Japanesey" ._. Horakhty is bad, and dying to it makes me feel less of a man [/quote] Don't want to get too carried away is all since Opal's back. At first I was like, whoa dude, this looks fugging pro. But then I realized you pretty much need to tribute 9 monsters for it. In which case, why not just use Exodia? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [color=#ff0000]Looks like the puppet thinks he's a real boy...[/color] This sucka has no idea who he's dealing with. [color=#ff0000]So you think you got it made[/color] You think your the next slim shade [color=#ff0000]In fact the only thing loose here is your mouth[/color] You and your words are so uncouth [color="#ff0000"]You've been rockin this jukebox all night long[/color] But now you've run out of quarters and out of time [color=#ff0000]Take your used up compact and hit the showers[/color] Sit there and fap until your toothpick's flat. [color=#ff0000]You talk about a game[/color] You failed to mention [color=#ff0000]That the only game you've ever played[/color] Is Super Mario World [color=#ff0000]You call that a disguise[/color] I call it what's left of Moe's hair. [color=#ff0000]Now look here you pompous green oaf[/color] Your making yourself look like a fool [color=#ff0000]Now it's all clear and plain to see[/color] All you ever hear is the same old tune [color=#ff0000]Doot Doot Do[/color] Dododododo [color=#ff0000]Doot Doot Dodo Doot Do[/color] Now look here man we all love a classic [color=#ff0000]But it got old when you dressed like a Weegee fanatic[/color] Yo Nintendo called, they want their costume back. [color=#ff0000]Come on man face it we've got you beat.[/color] Creator and Inventor just schooled you, [color=#ff0000]Now you know why when I dueled you, I came out on top.[/color] Your rhymes are as bad as your crimes, [color=#ff0000]Now your all locked up, both body and mind.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1323740496' post='5703215'] Bro, I wouldn't go for Lora man, for real. [color=#00ff00]I'M COMING FOR YOU IN YOUR SLEEP HEE HEE HEE HEE[/color] [/quote] Okay maybe I should've said Wiseman << Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [img]http://bignanime.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/ami-reaction-face.png[/img] Please tell me you weren't trying to rhyme mouth with uncouth please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [color=#00ff00]Yeah no.[/color] [color=#00FF00]None of that really rhymed.[/color] [color=#00FF00]I'm done here.[/color] Black, DL said Gadgets were the key to Slifer.dek. Is he right or is there something better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Fusion X. Denver' timestamp='1323741025' post='5703226'] Black, DL said Gadgets were the key to Slifer.dek. Is he right or is there something better... [/quote] Gadgets or frognarchs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 @Black no, I wasn't. In fact I wasn't trying to rhyme at all. Cuz thats poetry, and I'm no poet. It's a Rap, and rap always sounds better with a beat. Which we don't have in YCM, but it was in my head. Thats why it came out that way. @Fusion Oh plz, Rap doesn't always rhyme, just cuz you think Rap = Poetry doesn't mean it does. It can be prose to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1323740948' post='5703223'] [img]http://bignanime.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/ami-reaction-face.png[/img] Please tell me you weren't trying to rhyme mouth with uncouth please [/quote] my reaction exactly except my eyes were blinking more rapidly in all of the confusion, sadly I have and i will take advantage of this, gladly Before Wiseman can think of a totally bullshit rhythm and rhyme How about I physically whoop you to save some time? Rappin' against Black ain't no biggy I just quote his humiliating post in mah siggy Rarity, don't worry you'll get your spotlight Right after I wipe the floor with Inventor ALL NIGHT It truly is a shame that i have to say farewell so soon As the natives might say, I shall wipe your ass again by next moon That last one was pushing it xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 @Black-Guess Gadgets then. Don't know anything bout frogs. owait, ive only seen gadgets like once. @Creator-A forum isn't the best place to do that, though I can respect the art form elsewhere. @Remo-...better than I expected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 @Fusion What Rapping? I can't rap to save my life, I just think it'll be funny to see people rapping against each other. I need a laugh after starting a SECOND novel...(writing it btw) ALSO, to those who have read the bit of BTLK I put on the fourm, I'm doing a prequel of sorts and should post a Prologue here some time soon. Because that's the novel I'm writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Sure, run with it. I still need to write that character sketch... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 ;_; I just started DL's fan-fic KS What the hell was I missing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 DL has a fan fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 [quote name='Itachi V. Remo' timestamp='1323745072' post='5703374'] ;_; I just started DL's fan-fic KS What the hell was I missing? [/quote] Yeah, what the hell is wrong with you? It is good sh*t. Better than DEF. [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1323745679' post='5703403'] DL has a fan fic? [/quote] Yes. It's godly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 I have a fic, too, if I'd get writing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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