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Actually...if you end it right where he killed her

And he kills himself.

That would be still a bit cliche

But freakin BADASS


And I'm a good writer, I know a good concept when I see one.

You need to be a good writer to develop it CORRECTLY however.

It could even work as a movie.


And I can draw pretty well XP

But not well enough to make manga
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Well, he kills the her BEFORE the book takes place, it starts where he is sitting over the corpse of a strange man that he had killed, who he finds to be his father....

I can't draw for crap ^.^

Writing has always been my talent, I love it. I used to write exciting adventure stufffff, but now I just write dreary stuff : P.....
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[quote name='Peace In Despair' timestamp='1308498069' post='5295165']
Yyyeeeaaahhhhhhhh.....


What is the dinosaur game :L?
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Jurassic: The Hunted for the Xbox 360. I knew I had to get that game after I played the demo for the 15th time, and I did.
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[quote name='=DL=' timestamp='1308503203' post='5295315']
Before the book takes place?D:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
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Yes, the book is about him FINDING the killer, the prologue gives nothing away
[quote name='Sabotage' timestamp='1308503328' post='5295319']
Jurassic: The Hunted for the Xbox 360. I knew I had to get that game after I played the demo for the 15th time, and I did.
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Ahh, I see ^.^ I like King Kong though : D
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[quote name='=DL=' timestamp='1308503681' post='5295333']
What's it about? o-o

Sounds pretty cool.
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Your a soldier for higher who was hired by the daughter of a scientist who was lost in the Bermuda Triangle. You and her, as well as your teammate, are going with her to investigate ghost transmissions in the Triangle which originate from that ship. After getting sucked into a Temporal Rift, you end up in a lush island area. After investigating a little bit, DINOSAURS.

From there, I have been trying to reach the scientist and my teammate. I don't know the plot from there.
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OOOOH

Now I get it

Wow, I'm slow today.

I was like "Wait...why is it not in the book when he kill his sister? D: I want him to go on the search fot the killer!"

But the killer is him.

So yeah

>>

I understand now.

That is fine and dandy then.


Since in the end he discovers he himself is the killer.

I don't usually write dark stuff, but I think I could.
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[quote name='Peace In Despair' timestamp='1308504045' post='5295347']
That's why King Kong is better: You get to be an Ape fighting the dinosaurs....
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Opinions, my friend. I like this one better because you aren't giant. You feel insignificant, surviving dinosaurs 100x more dangerous then you.


But in this, you get guns. So many guns! Gatling, Machine, Rifle, Shot, and Miniguns!


Because it's a temporal rift, many different guns from many different ages are in the same area. You be using a Browning Automatic Rifle from WWII one minute and then a Minigun from modern day the next!
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[quote name='Peace In Despair' timestamp='1308504312' post='5295367']
It's because of Edgar Allen Poe : P
I want to be a poet tooooo....


(Jurassic is cool ^.^)
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I'm a cool poet.~

Even got one published.


And Poe is fantastic in dark stories. The Cask of Amontillado and the Tell-tale Heart were great.
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So pid is our arthur?
Anyway
Seems like i missed alot.... yet nothing

Sorry, we are a code geass club, i swear, its just we have nothing to do untill a new code geass ment comes out and or a manga chapter comes out.... i guess we could all post our favorite code geass amv? Idunno
Ideas people ideas!
Quick before the internet police crack down on us!

btw

Dunsparce is awesome

Lv 63 and it learns Flail? Awesome
You know you got a winner there, screw the fact that it can learn a bunch of TMs Its got frikkin FLAIL! Ill take down cynthia with all Dunsparces! OOH YEAH! Garchomp? DUNSPACRE! Milotic? DUNSPARCE! [size="1"]Ill stop now >_>[/size]

In all seriousness i really do love dunsparce, they need a evolution that kicks ass, big.....serpent....thing... yeah
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LOL

Mah poem:

"As flowes blossom in spring
As a river the water makes
I can't think of a single thing
I can't imagine what it takes
Be it evening, night or noon
Carrying on a certain way
This flower shall blossom soon
In the springtime of May
Having the strength to fight
and the will to endure
This flower will reach a new light
And soon, very soon, mature
Watching the light of the full moon
While sitting by the bay
This flower shall blossom soon
In the springtime of May
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[quote]Just so you know, this thread is deeply, deeply oppressed by it's leader, Archwing. He kills the men who disobey him and rape the girls ego disobey him!

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SILENCE! Back to work!
Or ill have to get out mao's chainsaw

@ DL the poem looks good but i dont know much about poems so...
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[quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1309118815' post='5312469']
That's you?



Never would've guessed.



Anyway, those were pretty good. Made me laugh a few times.


Camera quality was crap, though.
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it definitely was crappy

But it's the quality of the actual content that matters

:3
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