A Blind First Contest!

[Mugendramon]

When tdloe gives his scores.

[Mugendramon]

I just realized that from 9 people, only 5 actually got to post cards O.o

 

That shows how reliable YCM in general actually is.

Okay, people, here is your feedback! (From me, that is. tdloe's is still missing, so this is not final.)

 

I WARN YOU ALL. I AM AN OCG NAZI.

 

 

[spoiler=ks2ill34][spoiler=Monstah]

Balance (6/10) (Completely ignore Blaze Accelerator? Brokenz.)

Playablily (8/10) (The only thing you can actually recycle is Shell.)

Creativity (9/10) (Meh. Recycling is pretty creative for Volcanics.)

OCG (9.8/10)

Once per turn, you can add 1 Level 1 Pyro-Type monster in your Graveyard to your hand. If you activate the effect of "Blaze Accelerator" this turn, you can still declare an attack this turn.

(I'm not 100% Sure of it, so you got an almost flawless mar here.)

Pic (3/5) (It doesn't really look like any other Volcanic. Though it is still kinda fitting.)

[spoiler=Support]

Balance (8/10) (Underpowered. Again, the only Level 1 Volcanic is Shell.)

Playability (8/10) (Same as above. Volcanic Shell.)

Creativity (2/10) (How the hell is this Creative. It would have been a nice touch to add some extra Burn.)

OCG (10/10) (Perfect. No errors whatsoever.)

Pic (4/5) (A good Picture for a Magic/Trap Jammer.)

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

Balance (9/10) (It would be a 10, but 1 card for 1200 Damage looks like a bit much.)

Playability (9/10) (It is actually Playable not only against Volcanics, but instaed is a nice free damage and could absolutely kill Flamvells if played correctly.)

Creativity (9/10) Discarding Volcanics from the hand before they are utilized is a nice idea indeed. The direct-attacking thing was a nice touch, too.

OCG (9/10) (The 'Once per turn' at the beginning is not necessary, and 'discard them' should be 'your opponent must discard them.')

(This last correction might prove wrong.)

Pic (4/5) (Again, interesting, but not really Anti-Volcanic-looking.)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Naturia Melon][spoiler=Monstah]

Balance (8/10) (Interesting. Balanced, yet abusable.)

Playability (8/10) (This could become even more stall-oriented with Solar Flare Dragon. But heed my words. Volcanics existed at a time in which Synchro Monsters would have been seen as abominations. So No. Tuners.)

Creativity (10/10) (You excelled on this one. You managed to Combine Volcanics with Stall techniques as to deal damage while preventing damage to happen to you.)

OCG (9.5/10) ('Unless they pay 600 Life Points.')

Pic (5/5) Completely Volcanic.

[spoiler=Support]

Balance (6/10) (Far too easily abusable.)

Playability (7/10) (Obviously, this is likely to be destroyed as soon as it is played, so it is not very likely so work as you want it to. You do realize that Tri-Blaze Accelerator+This=BURN.)

OCG (8.9/10) (Whenever Each Time) Whenever only works with would. (Magma Counter on this card.) Your wording is correct only if there are other cards that place Magma Counters. Even if there were, the correct wording would be 'Magma Counter on the field.'

Originality (8/10) (You don't really differ from the 'Destroy and burn' concept, but the way you apply it is nice.)

Pic (2/5) (Looks too Real Life-y, even if it's not.)

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

Balance (8/10) (Walking Dark Hole says hi.)

Playability (8/10) Side-Deckable, but low ATK. Not indispensable.

Originality (7/10) Again, walking Dark Hole.

OCG (9.8/10) Would be flawless, except that destroy is not capitalized.

Pic (3.5/5) A bit blurry, amd lacks Background.

 

 

 

[spoiler=~Shadow of Alpha~ (AKA GladiatorBeastAleksander)][spoiler=Monstah]

Balance (8.5/10) It'd be a little hard for this card to actually deal Damage. The searcher effect makes it up for it, though. I would have liked it to have Stats which allowed it to be fired by Blaze Accelerator, because it looked so much like a Projectile.

Playability (8/10) Strict Volcanic use. I would have suggested 'every FIRE monster you control'.

Originality (9/10) This is the only Volcanic I've seen whose effect activates when dealing Battle Damage.

OCG (7.5/10) If this card deals battle damage to your opponents Life Points, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponents for each "Volcanic" monster on the field. When this card is desroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, add 1 "Tri-Blaze Accelerator" or "Blaze Accelerator" card from your Deck to your hand.

P(Last Correction taken from the Lore of

Volcanic Rocket)

Pic (4.5/5) PERFECTLY Volcanic-looking, a pity it looks a bit vertically squished.

[spoiler=Support]

 

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

 

[spoiler=Pre-Rating Feedback]The Dome is a bland card. Yet it's amazingly Volcanic stopper.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=.:Kai Hiwatari:.][spoiler=Monstah]

 

[spoiler=Support]

 

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

 

[spoiler=Pre-Rating Feedback]General is a merge of Hammer and Slicer. Both the other cards have poor OCG/Typos. And your Anti-Support is useless because of a slight mistake. See if you find it. I'll give one extra point to each for using template, though.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=♣Master♣][spoiler=Monstah]

 

[spoiler=Support]

 

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

 

[spoiler=Pre-Rating Feedback]The monster is useful when you've got no defenses beside itself. The support card is hell of an original thing. And the Anti Support is a Monster Version of Shadow's Ice Domain.

 

 

 

Sorry people, due to Time issues, the rest of the scores will be given later today. Enjoy them the ones who posted their cards first. And for averages, do them yourselves, you lazy asses!

[Mugendramon]

Due to my brother making me erase the whole lot of other comments I was writing, I am now depressed about it and will write them tomorrow. Blame him.

 

I've added slight feedback, though. After I've beaten my brother for a while, I'll re-write the stuff I was about to post.

 

Gawd, now I'm depressd about it again... Dx

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

 

[spoiler=~Shadow of Alpha~ (AKA GladiatorBeastAleksander)][spoiler=Monstah]

Balance (8.5/10) It'd be a little hard for this card to actually deal Damage. The searcher effect makes it up for it, though. I would have liked it to have Stats which allowed it to be fired by Blaze Accelerator, because it looked so much like a Projectile.

Playability (8/10) Strict Volcanic use. I would have suggested 'every FIRE monster you control'.

Originality (9/10) This is the only Volcanic I've seen whose effect activates when dealing Battle Damage.

OCG (7.5/10) If this card deals battle damage to your opponents Life Points, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponents for each "Volcanic" monster on the field. When this card is desroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, add 1 "Tri-Blaze Accelerator" or "Blaze Accelerator" card from your Deck to your hand.

P(Last Correction taken from the Lore of

Volcanic Rocket)

Pic (4.5/5) PERFECTLY Volcanic-looking, a pity it looks a bit vertically squished.

 

 

 

The Tri-Blaze is not an OCG mistake. So why did you show it as one?

[Mugendramon]

The Tri-Blaze is not an OCG mistake. So why did you show it as one?

 

Have you seen the Rulings of the Volcanic Rocket I linked you to? If not, I'll post it.

 

You can choose "Blaze Accelerator" or "Tri-Blaze Accelerator"

 

So in this case, you should have copied Rocket's effect.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

Oh...Well in that case, nevermind...(Backs slowly away)

[Mugendramon]

+Rep for not holding to ask for a miscorrection. You might want to say it's to pay back for the one you gave me, but my reason sounds better.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

hehe, sry bout that ;)

[Kuroda Kaito]

[spoiler=.:Kai Hiwatari:.][spoiler=Monstah]

 

[spoiler=Support]

 

[spoiler=Anti-Support]

 

[spoiler=Pre-Rating Feedback]General is a merge of Hammer and Slicer. Both the other cards have poor OCG/Typos. And your Anti-Support is useless because of a slight mistake. See if you find it. I'll give one extra point to each for using template, though.

 

 

 

I know that i'm not good at OCG you know :( . And thanks for the feedback. can i still re-attemp my cards??

[Mugendramon]

I know that i'm not good at OCG you know :( . And thanks for the feedback. can i still re-attemp my cards??

 

I should technically say no, but. I'll tell you something. I'll let you edit ONE of them. Choose it wisely.

[Kuroda Kaito]

ok, thanks, i appreciate that :lol: