Haze Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/34rzvo5.png[/IMG] What do you think? still a newbie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Flow. That yellow line should be parallel with the gun. Texture seems weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ليل Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 I are disappointed. This could have turned out quite nice, if you had a sense of direction, as well as proper placement. The post above me states, that "yellow line" isn't applied properly, although, it isn't just that. Everything seems amateurly place. Border doesn't work too well. Like ever. Gradient maps would have worked well here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Seems a bit oversharpened imo, my friend. But you have improved since the last time I saw you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr420QuickScopes Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 It's nice man, For a newbie tag, Looks pretty sweet, if the yellow lines were in direction with the gun it would look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Looks like you followed a tut I saw on devart. With c4ds of your own.. Anyways, everythings been stated here. A few amatuer mistakes. Some adjustments wouldve been great, but you'll learn and get better with time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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