ITI3L33 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 This is a fan-fic where the character population increases almost every chapter. Since this is just a prologue it is pretty short. In this prologue I will use their English names but in other chapters I will use Chapter Names. Prologue Characters: English Name|Chapter Name____________________________1. Vader|Vrasko2. Grace|Granst3. Benny|Beshken4. Darren|Darlasko5. Butch|Bairaken6. Tristan|Trinami Prologue Back eight years ago there were these four five year olds who were best friends: Vader, Grace, Benny and Darren. They all were neighbors. One day they were all playing together and the two bullies came out: Butch and Tristan. they were trading Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. They came over to the kids and pushed them down.Both Bullies-Too bad you wimps don't have any Yu-Gi-Oh! cards!Vader-It is just that we are... pour! Yeah that is it we are poor!Butch-Prove it!Benny ran up and tried to steal a card from Tristan and he luckily got "Blue-Eyes White Dragon".Tristan-You get back here!Ignoring him, Benny escaped. Tristan's life was ruined so he ran away. Butch went after him. They were never seen again. Three years later, Vader, Grace, Benny and Darren all had at least five hundred Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. They even went into Championships with different decks. They won some awards and one time Vader was claimed the world champion. Five years later, a big storm came around their neighborhood and they were separated. Vader's family moved to Malaysia and Benny's family had died. Benny got very sick but a mysterious stranger helped and adopted him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 It's a bit short try to drag it out a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 It's a prologue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 That doesn't mean it's not short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted January 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 How much longer do you want it?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 Look at some other fan-fics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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