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Naruto - Uchiha's Rebirth [Started/Accepting Here/OOC]


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Dont you see?... Amatsuru is not as original as other strong fire jutsu... So Victor won't have it... He will hold the other 2 jutsu from that branch...

Victor is the mad-awesome guy... His anbu weapon is awesome too... I can't describe it yet... His story will be epic too...

It's going too end with his wife coming back O.O ... (That isn't the ending... But she is coming back, she has too... as a bad guy [From his view-point])

... Epic story is epic...
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RP Name: Timothy "TimTim"
Age: 14
Bio: Timothy was always the "Rich-kid" in his class. His parents bought him everything he wanted, but they insisted that he went too the normal ninja-school like all the other children. Being rich was never an obsticle, he is always a strong ninja with good intent. His sand jutsu was seen as an unfair advantage and some people picked on him for it. The power was seen as a gift by the rest of his family and Timmy grew up learning virtue and kindness by his family.
Appearance: {Like gaara, red hair, the urn on the back, but rich-like clothing and custom weapons.}
Faction: Hidden Sand
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I would say this:
I don't see the "Faction" section anywhere on this app. The Bio is pretty could, I'll admit that. However, there is definitely room for more. I have to agree with SSD about the appearence, though. I find it to be rather undescriptive, and it definitely could have much more to it. I do understand that he's a new member, and if I'm wrong about that, or if he's had experience in this field, then I apologize.

Overall, the app is acceptable, but it could be much better.
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[Spoiler=DEMENTOU! CLICK THERE---->] He is my brother... I did the Bio for him, I'll edit his posts for him, he isn't that bright, but I care about him... I was not going too do a full Appearence for him though... I did 4 acceptable app's for this Rp already and I have yet too use my host-power in any form or fashion (It should at least be used 1-2 before starting the IC, kinda like stretching before you play a sport...)

Did that clear anything up for you, bud? [/spoiler]

(IF YOU READ THIS PART OF THE POST, THEN YOU HAVE FALLEN FOR THE TRAP THAT I HAVE SET AND YOU ARE TOTALLY WASTING YOUR TIME!!! MUHAHAHAHAHA!!)
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