2Tagnatures

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

C4d spam. Idk if colors look ok.
[img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/545/timeshiftbw.png[/img]


[img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1845/timeshiftb.png[/img]



It has transition problems. I'm still trying to figure out where to dodge/burn.
[img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3793/018j.png[/img]

[Seta]

The biggest problem on both is flow IMO, and textures in 2nd =/
The 1st one could be reaallly hot if you'd take some actual time with it and fix the flaws it has atm.

[ليل]

1st is quite nice, although It could be alot better.
Since you really didn't utilize the basics. Lighting, if achieved right would have worked well with that piece.

2nd is meh, you try to use the C4's and Fractals too achieve everything for you, it doesn't work that way.
You have to position them correctly, and incorporate other things to make it work.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

Thanks for the comments.

[quote]2nd is meh, you try to use the C4's and Fractals too achieve everything for you, it doesn't work that way.
You have to position them correctly, and incorporate other things to make it work. [/quote]
I'm not completely sure I know what you're trying to say.

[-DG-]

Colors are decent in the 1st. Flow seems everywhere. Blending, brah. I don't see much.

[chairman ali]

Its getting boring man ;\
try smthing different.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

I thought the timeshift was different. :/