my new anime sreies yugioh duel masters

[Hi-Def Legacy]

character stroyline
cantro [ main hero ]
a duelist who only relies on absolute power and dueling spirit in his thoughts he would always win if using the dueling spirit that came true the whole time
key cards
monsters
spiritron gaurdian
spiritron warrior
spells
destiny call
spritron avenging
traps
darkfall
light disorder
synchros
spritron dragon
spritron perseus

ryutra [ main villian]
a dark duelist who always sets cantro in a trap
key cards
just the spell dark hole
and the trap magic cylinder
sad thing is theres no synchros in ryutra,s deck

the plot
the stroy follows cantro a 14 year old boy who is really angered at what happened to his familly
1st his parents got killed by a strange person then he finds that he is being set up by ryutra
so he duels his way [mostly turbo duels] through rouge duelist hoping he finds ryutra
and rids him once and for all
his duel runner [ saphire obilisk ] is made up of particles that came from mostly desert regions
his deck is named spiritron revenge
he hopes his dueling spirit makes the most of it [ notice a reference? ]

connection to bad guys
he has a really really bad connection especially with ryutra. he hates them with a passion

well thats it for now

[legendhiro]

you need to add something plot related here or it will get locked. you also need to get better at grammar or (more likely) find someone to edit this for you or you will be ridiculed, as it is already obvious that your grammar is sub par. good luck.

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[Weather Report - Stand]

Ummmm... this isn't interesting, honestly. A young kid is riding a motorcycle (even though he's 14 and TOO YOUNG) to get revenge for his dead family (since, y'know, he was stereotypically SPARED, as usual) by dueling through random people with his non-descript, random cards of whatever to find the man who caused him all this pain!! I like how you said you'd use some desert-theming, but that's about it. The rest is... meh.

Also try to capitalize words. People get gripey when you don't capitalize words.

[Hi-Def Legacy]

[quote name='Weather Report - Stand' timestamp='1291761263' post='4836640']
Ummmm... this isn't interesting, honestly. A young kid is riding a motorcycle (even though he's 14 and TOO YOUNG) to get revenge for his dead family (since, y'know, he was stereotypically SPARED, as usual) by dueling through random people with his non-descript, random cards of whatever to find the man who caused him all this pain!! I like how you said you'd use some desert-theming, but that's about it. The rest is... meh.

Also try to capitalize words. People get gripey when you don't capitalize words.
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honestly this is all i can think of plus riding a duel runner is a kids dream to become a turbo duelist
and the next series is all going to be based on the stroy about how i set myself in situations
the series will be bakugan riot warriors and honestly thats my only thought
please if you want give me other ideas on yugioh,bakugan,or beyblade series i can make myself
and dont be suprised if i call it riot warriors cause it be funny to see people argue in brawls

[DARKPLANT RISING]

[quote name='crystalbeastfan2010' timestamp='1291763432' post='4836693']
honestly this is all i can think of
[b]Then don't even make this thread![/b]
plus riding a duel runner is a kids dream to become a turbo duelist
[b]Wait-[/b][/quote]
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[legendhiro]

[quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1291952877' post='4840990']
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Ha!

but seriously, when i posted before, i was seriously thinking that this was going to one day become a story. if it's not, then you shouldn't have posted it. if you have an idea for a story, your first step is never to rush into posting it on the internet. your first step is to map out how you want the story to progress and what you want to happen, then write it/type it [i]without[/i] posting it online. then proofread it and make changes [i]many times[/i], making sure to fix spelling errors as much as possible along the way, and [i]then[/i] post it.