Spirit of DMG Posted December 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 ...people are so hard to please......people are so hard to please... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 And so DMG, DL and El go on a magical journey. I dunno what Deus is planning, but I'm guessing he's the Grimmjow of this new Espada. I don't get the Soviet uniform though >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 Eh, it's an inside FTK joke. I honestly do think this comes close to being a parody sometimes, which I would STRONGLY recommend against. BTW, okay chapters~ (I say this, not wanting to give a long detailed explanation of good and bad about each chapter) @Nex - LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 right, I'll try to guard against the parodies as much as I can. Though, there may be a few parody moments for the lulz (or perhaps just to annoy El) here and there. Chapter 6 going up ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 DMG, spoilers got screwed up: Quincy Arc is in Bios and chapter 6 isn't in its own spoiler. For the chapter, aha, Yachiru. Why was there a tree with an eye patch though? And lolMarySue. Cool Shikai for DL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 Yeah, I think I managed to fix that...Well, I G2G now anyway, I'll try fixing any other errors when I get back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 and the Christmas celebrations continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Fuuta Nari. You would =.= Cool how I'm the head captain, though the one thing I didn't like was that it was hard to tell who was speaking during the conversations in this chapter, like with Daisuke and Mizuki. Luigi is a lulzy name, but I'm looking forward to further takes on him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Yeah, I notice that in a lot of books, during conversations with short lines, or that are extended, only the first and last quotations have names, so I did that. Also, I finally figured out what you meant by "a tree with an eye patch" That would be because they are searching for the Masks of the Original Espada, and they were using that tree to show off the ones they have. Thus far, they have Grimmjow's, Szayel's, and the eye patch belonged to Nnoitora. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Aha, that makes more sense. Well alright then, good to know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Come and see what lies in store for Daisuke and Elphy-Chan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 [quote name='Donovyn Mikara Gerra' timestamp='1291938508' post='4840524'] ...people are so hard to please... ...people are so hard to please... [/quote] WHERE THE FAUK AM I???????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 you're coming Kisuke, keep your shirt on. I'm still debating on whether to use the original Kisuke or come up with someone else...though I doubt I'll go with the original Kisuke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Nah don't go with the original. Or do, but don't make Remo him (from now on I'm calling you that until you get a name change). Chapter: Dude, El would never apologize to you. He'd probably get in your face and chew your ear off .-. But then again, I haven't really seen Elphemia as El, so it's not like she's out of character or anything. Chapter was alright, I'm getting a little more into the story now and I want to see how their first battle will turn out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Well, Fusion, you're about to find out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Chapter 9, I liked the fight, but was confused. Did El use an energy attack or something? Because I didn't see anything about her forming energy or using it before. And it didn't sound like a physical attack. Otherwise, good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 She's got Chad's powers, dude. I didn't think I needed to explain that yes, it was an energy attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 I need to spam Daisuke into reading this...Well, anyway, who's ready for a better look at Lichroy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Lolnarutoexercise. The only thing I think you should keep in mind is whenever you switch to a different setting focusing on different characters, state who's there. Don't just throw in Dios said, Evanescent said, or whatever without introducing them first. And with Itachi, you should either describe a shadowy figure behind them or one coming in when doing that rather than JUST saying the name. But good chapter, I'm betting El will join the Espada >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Hmm...I'll keep that in mind for future chapters, then. Well, we'll definitely see more of Itachi later. In the mean time, I just wanna know, who do you think Itachi is on YCM? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Was that question honestly asked? Really? Cause I will eliminate you if you did XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 New Chapter, New Arc, New Bio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 Creator saying believe it? Creator using Naruto powers? Creator jabbing El with Thousand Years of Death? Trolling Itachi by making the character Ninjew? You win. Now give my bio a pic >:U Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted December 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 Your Bio doesn't have...oh, hey, I never did give you a pic...I should do that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt. Colonel Remo Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 you insult me by picing some one other me for Itachi I expect swift payment Nao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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