Yugioh: Duelist Path

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Hello readers, welcome to my first fan fiction. Since it's my first, I will need as much criticism and advice as possible.

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[spoiler=Chapter 1: Junk City]

A large building that was measured about seven story was standing high in Domino City. It's windows was coloured bright blue, while the walls were coloured yellow. On the reddish brown roof, there was an logo of the name DSSF coloured orange. It was slightly isolated from the other buildings, while it was surrounded by road. It was by far an unusual building. When the shadows that were on the building slopped down half way to the bottom, the lights of the building flictered on, flaring it out of existence.

Inside the skyscraper, at the 6th floor, there was two desks. One was larger, behind it was an elevator, while three chairs were under it. The next was smaller, but had an computer on it, connected to an large screen behind it. The elevator opened, out came three men also they walked towards the desks. They all were wearing an black suit, with an black tie and black trousers as their uniform. Each had an badge that was a star on the left of their suit that had four stars joined together. The first man stood proud behind the chair before sitting down. His hair was brown like his eyes, he placed the suitcase he was holding on the floor gentaly.

"So, your our newest Commanders of our three major divisions ?"questioned an Elderly Voice, that came from behind the screen.

"Yes,"answered the First Man, being braver than his others.

"OK, im comming in."the Voice replied, as an secret door opened from the right side of the screen. Out came, an Elder, he was wearing the same uniform as the men. But insted of the four stars, he had five and there was an hat over his head."Welcome to the DSSF headquarters, we are the Domino Sector Security Force,"once he had finished he then coughed then continued,"We were created 15 years ago and yes that was 5 years after the WRGP, because the original Sector Security was stopped and was defeated."

The Elder the paused as a slight tear dropped from his eyes, the men then stared at each other confused until he then continued explaining."Sadly, the founder died 5 years ago, he was replaced his son, now any que-"

"So we are bossed around by some child !?"the Third man interrupted slightly angry.

"Yes, but he is highly intelligent for his age."The Elder grinned slightly happy when he plugged his computer into something turning the screen on. On it was an giant p, Hinta then continued to talk."Now you shall adress your names to our Leader, firstly, I am Hinta,"

"OK, I am Alth,"the First Man bowed to the Leader.

"The names, John,"the Second Man nodded.

"My name is Rupert,"the Third Man said also bowing.

"I am sorry, I cannot give you my real name, for now you shall call me P,"the Computer explained, it's voice sounded like an alien."Also, you three shall be told what divisions you are in, Alth you are in Alpha, John Beta and Rupert Gamma."

"I hope your happy with that,"Hinta said standing up.

"Yes !"The Three Men replied in a unison.

"Time, for our current main mission,"The Computer started to explain,"Coincidently, when the DSSF was formed, an part of the Satelite was discovered. You might know this place as Junk City. Before we continue, Junk City isn't a city, it was named that after the astonishing amount of Junk."

"I have a question,"John raised his hand while Hinta nodded,"So, why should we care about this place ?"

"When people from Domino research there, they found an vast amount of Diamonds,"P replied,"Once we had collected all we could, we had no choice to capture people from other parts of the satilite started to live here and enslave them. This had caused them to start a revolution a few months after we discovered Junk City, we are still fighing them now."

"Hmm, this seems interesting,"Rupert said stroking his beard.

"Now, to start this for you, one of you will meet the people in each division that you will be commanding and an Rupert, you will chose a person to investigate Junk City, while John will send a person to be behind the Gamma person holding an cammera."

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Junk City was as described an area piled mainly with Junk, there were parts of it that were muddy and hard. In the lowlands of Junk City were huts small enough to fit two small rooms. During noon, an young Teenager walked towards an wooden hut. He was wearing an green shirt, black trousers, black shoes and an blue hat, he had with im an ordinary duel disk. He knocked on the damaged door as hard as he could.

"Hey, Yuuat open up it's me Elliot !"the Teen yelled as the door opened.

"Hello Elliot,"Yuuat said calmly. Yuuat was wearing an blue shirt, black jeans and black shoes. On his shirt, dangled an blue crystal medallion, on his right arm was his duel disk that was coloured white, but was shaped as a dragon. His hair was spickey and was an combination between brown and black,

"You had forgotten to sign up to join the Junk Revolutionists,"Elliot reminded Yuuat as he stepped back then turned to walk ahead.

Yuuat followed Elliot happily,"Thanks,"he thanked as he stared in the distance. An two story house was seen, that was the headquarters of the Junk Revolutionists.

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Inside the headquaters was a small room, in front of Elliot and Yuuat was an counter and stairs next to it. An red haired women stood at the counter, while an book was there.

"What would you like,"She said annoyed.

"Could I join the Junk Revolutionists ?"Yuuat asked.

"Hold up, to join you have to take an Dueling Test,"She replied angrily."Plus, today's signup is booked, plus tomorrow. So you've got to take the test the day after."

"How funny, I signed up half an hour ago and I managed to take the test tomorrow morning,"Elliot giggled.

"Rules are rules,"She exclaimed,"Now go, but if you want to have a practice Turbo Duel with the Leader Zevern, that's tomorrow,"

Before Yuuat was about to complain, the sound of gunshot roared through the room, then it echoed again. Shrieks of fear repeated after it stopped from people pleding for mercy outside.

"That's it im going,"The Stressed Secretary walked away up the stairs then locked the door.

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Outside there was a man wielding an gun threatening people. He looked to be an Officer, since he was wearing the uniform of the DSSF and there was a badge showing one star on the right ranking him as an Officer. Standing under his feet, was an corpse of someone who lived in Junk City that was shot.

"Well well well, get me some jewels or I'll shoot you, seriously, why aren't you working,"He grunted, he turned and pointed the gun at a random person,"Get to work you piece of s**t,"

"Yes sir,"The Victim obeyed as he found a shovel and ran up the mountain of Junk.

"Anyone want to join him,"The Officer commanded as more people followed. As the Officer skimmed around, the medallion that Yuuat was wearing caught his attention,he then pointed his gun at Yuuat."You hand that medallion, that must be worth a lot of money,"

"Only in a duel,"Yuuat replied betting,"You win, you get it. However, if you lose, you leave."

[i]That is suicide since the Officer could just shoot him[/i], Elliot thought as he felt worried.

[i]My only choice is to duel him since I don't have any bullets left in my gun[/i], The Officer thought,"You got a deal, by the way, my names Frank,"

[i]That Officer must be thick to not shoot Yuuat[/i], Elliot thought as he became more confident, until he saw Frank holding some chains.

"Now, this chain will electricute you every time you lose life points, the more you lose the more powerful the shock,"Frank grinned as he threw one at Yuuat then attached his to his neck. [i]Soon when his life points reach 0, I could easily take it[/i]

"Im OK with that,"Yuuat said as he attached it.

"I'll go first,"Frank exclaimed activating his Duel Disk, he then drew 5 cards (Frank: 4000 Life Points).

"Fine with me,"Yuuat nodded (Yuuat: 4000 Life Points).

"I activate the Field Spell [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mausoleum_of_the_Emperor"]Mausoleum of the Emperor[/url],"Frank laughed as the background changed into an ancient empire."Your doomed with this card because we can Normal Summon a monster without a Tribute by paying 1000 Life Points times the amount of Tributes they need, so I choose [b]Magnite Titan[/b] in Atk Mode (Frank: 4000→2000 Life Points), I end with 1 card Face Down."Frank ended as an red aura formed around him preventing the shock. Suddenly from behind him an titan made of magma rised from the ground (3000/0).

"No way, on your first turn you Summoned a monster with 3000 Atk,"Yuuat replied, he felt slightly worried.

"Got a problem satelite, can't handle that power."Frank then taunted him,"But then again, you could end the pain by surrendering and handing me your medallion."

"I would never give up, I can beat it,"Yuuat said drawing his 6th card, he then smiled,"To bad your plan to majorly assualt me will fail."

"How come ?"Frank asked confused.

"Because I will first activate the spell card [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Dark_Door"]The Dark Door[/url],"Yuuat smirked as an Door appeared behind him,"Now only one of our monsters can attack,"

"Big mistake, because my [b]Magnite Titan[/b] can attack twice per turn,"Frank explained as he began to laugh.

"Still I'll win,"Yuuat then smiled setting two cards Face Down,"Now I Summon [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b] in Def Mode (1200/1600), it's effect allows us to discard one card from our hand to the Graveyard then draw 2 cards,"Yuuat explained immediatly placing a card from his hand into his Graveyard, while Frank took a while to decide. Both duelists drew 2 cards as said, only Yuuat was smiling,"I end my turn,"

"You've acted so confident and you've pulled out a seriously terrible move,"Frank commented drawing a card, he then stared at the dark soldier,"I could win this duel without activating a card from my hand,"

[i]It's obvious that Frank's Face Down is a Trap, since Magnite Titan gives him an advantage around Traps[/i], Yuuat though as he stared at Frank's Face Down.

"Now [b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b],"Frank ordered as the Titan threw a giant ball of lava at the soldier.

"I activate my Face Down [b]Dracon Surrender[/b], you see if you declare an attack I can negate the attack then gain control of your monster,"Yuuat explained as an army of shadows charged at Magnite Titan.

"I chain with my Face Down, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Seven_Tools_of_the_Bandit"]Seven Tools of Bandit[/url], I pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of your trap and destroy it but because of [b]Magnite Titan's[/b] effect I don't even need to pay a Life Point,"Frank explained as the tool destroyed the shadows and allowed [b]Magnite Titan[/b] to continue it's attack on [b]Hath[/b] and sucessfully crushed the soldier turing it into thousands of tiny pixels.

"You defeated my monster in battle,"Yuuat signed as [b]Magnite Titan[/b] gained a second lava ball.

"[b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack Yuuat directly,"Frank once again ordered.

"I activate my next Face Down [b]Dracon Frontal Assualt[/b],"Yuuat then depressed a button revealing an group of dragons,"You see I can now Sp-"

"I activate [b]Magnite Titan's[/b] effect I can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect of your Trap and Destroy it (Frank: 2000→1500 Life Points)(Yuuat: 4000→1000 Life Points)."Frank explained as he had finaly suceeded in inflicting serious damage.

"ARGGHH !!!"Yuuat shouted as an even bigger volt of electricity shocked him while Frank got an average amount.

Once the electricity faded Frank then pointed at Yuuat,"Its your turn."

"I can Normal Summon Draine-Dracon Paladin in Atk Mode without a Tribute if I have two monsters in my Graveyard (2100/500),"Yuuat explained as an knight on an Dragon emerged from the sky.

"Why did you Summon a weaker monster in Atk Mode ?"Frank questioned,"And you only have one monster in your Graveyard."

"[b]Hath's[/b] effect before allowed me to send [b]Voldrake-Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] before to my Graveyard and next I activate the spell card [b]Dracon and the Beast[/b], because I control 1 Dracon monster in Atk mode I can Special Summon [b]Beast of Dracon[/b] to the Field from my hand in Def Mode (1500/1200), now I end,"

"[b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack [b]Dracon and the Beast[/b] then [b]Draine-Dracon Paladin[/b],"Frank ordered Magnite Titan threw magma balls at both targets, causing them both to explode into tiny pixels. Suddenly, an tornado appeared hitting Frank causing them both to be shocked by electricity (Yuuat: 1000→100 Life Points)(Frank: 1500→900 Life Points)."But how was I hit ?"

"Beast of Dracon has an effect of when it's destroyed when I control another Dracon monster, I can inflict 600 points of damage,"Yuuat explained as he then started to lose slight control of his vision."You might think that you could of attacked [b]Draine[/b] first, but [b]Beast of Dracon's[/b] effect would of made it the attack target, so that doesn't matter."

"You made all that effort to protect yourself again, just give up, once it's my turn you will lose,"Frank insisted pointing at Yuuat,"You have only 1 card in your hand, but next turn you'll get 2, so how is 2 cards going to take down my mighty Titan or protect yourself again ?"

Once Frank finished, Yuuat then smirked when he drew,"It is that simple, all this time I was distracting you, I had the card to win this duel in my hand."

"So then why didn't you play it ?"

"It has an certain requirement, I need to remove [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b], [b]Voldrake-Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] and [b]Draine-Dracon Paladin[/b] in my Graveyard to Special Summon the legendary [b]Vandran-Dracon Overlord[/b] (2400/0) !"Yuuat shouted as an Dragoon appeared out of the card, it then leaped into the sky.

"I actually thought I was going to lose,"Frank insulted unimpressed as Yuuat looked at him like he was mad."What !? Are you blind !? There is an 600 Atk difference between our monsters, face it your monster can't defeat my mighty monster, then next turn I'll attack and make you suffer,"

"My monster has an extremely powerful effect, you see, I can select an equip card from my Deck and equip it to it,"Yuuat explained as he skimmed through his deck and selected an card, he then showed it to Frank,"Dimond Dracon Blade !!!"

"What does that card do ?"Everyone except Yuuat questioned to him in a Unison.

"It's a good and bad card, you see the equipped monster gains half the attack of the monster it battles with, however at the end of my turn I have to destroy the equipped monster and inflict damage to my Life Points equal to it's ATK,"Yuuat explained,"But ignore the side effect, now [b]Vandran-Dracon Overlord[/b] (2400→3900/0) attack [b]Magnite Titan[/b] with chaos blade."

"NO, I've lost to a Satelite !!!"Frank screamed when [b]Vandran[/b] charged down the sky as an dark barrier formed around it. It collided with [b]Magnite Titan[/b], causing the [b]Titan[/b] to split then colapse on Frank (Frank: 900→0 Life Points).

"Im glad that's over,"Yuuat said walking away, his left leg felt wounded by the electricity, he then turned around to see an great amount of electricity shock causing Frank staggering, just when the holograms faded.

"Wow, that was an amazing duel, truth to be told I thought you were going to lose before your last turn,"Elliot admitted.

"That duel made me feel drozy,"Yuuat said as he then lost conciousness.

From behind Frank came an black duel runner, it stopped and another Officer picked him up and fled away up the piles of Junk.

END OF CHAPTER

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Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Yuuat begins an Turbo Duel against the Junk Revolutionists Leader, Zevern. Only to find out his past about his birth and the legend about Junk City. Elliot begins the test, he struggles against a duel against the daughter of the Stressed Secretary, who controls this duel using only one weak monster Monster ??? Meanwhile, P and the Division Commanders, all discuss a strategy to finally end the Junk Revolution.

Chapter 2: The Battle of the Burns Part One
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[spoiler=Arc 1-The Junk Revolution]
The battle between the Junk Revolutionists and the DSSF commences 15 years ago since Junk City was discovered. Yuuat, an 15 year old boy has been chosen to protect Junk City from an creature of pure darkness Calic, that's goal is to destroy the world by gaining it's hidden power deep beneath Junk City. To dig deep underneath Junk City, the DSSF had planned to enslave people from the Satilite and criminals in the Facility.

Chapter 1 is found in Page 1, Post 1.
Chapter 2 is found in Page 1, Post 2.
Chapter 3 is found in Page 1, Post 8.
Chapter 4 is found in Page 1, Post 8.
Chapter 5 is found in Page 1, Post 10.
Chapter 6 is found in Page 1, Post 13.
Chapter 7 is found in Page 1, Post 16.
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[Mysterious Member]

OK, time for Chapter 2.

[spoiler=Chapter 2: The Battle of the Burns Part One]

Frank quickly awoken up, he felt puzzled at the place he was in. All he remembered was being dragged by his friend Jonny who was in the Beta Division and that he fell unconscious half way there. Frank turned his head searching around. It was slightly opened and he could see in the corner of his eyes some stairs going down. The rest of the room, apart from the bed he was, is covered in darkness. He turned to his right and he saw red glaring eyes.

"So you are awake, Frank, of the Gamma Division,"The Voice said calmly, it was an quite deep voice.

"Yes,"Frank replied. He felt nervous, like his heart was beating three times faster than usual."Who are you ?"

"I, am P."The Voice replied. After P finished, Frank gasped coldly,"I guess your surprised that I have met you before the three Division Commanders,"

Frank nodded silently, when P raised his hands out of the shadow that made him hidden.

"You might think you have failed the task, but I knew that something like this would happen, so I had sent your companion to follow you hand record the duel,"P explained as his second hand turned on the TV behind him, the light flashed through the shadows eliminating them. P was revealed, his hair was black, is skin was pale, his eyes were red. He had a scar on his fore head. He wore an white shirt and black jeans, plus black shoes. His age was about 15."Anyway, grab my hand,"

Frank was confused, he didn't understand that,"OK,"once he reached P's hand his heart beated faster than any human heart could.

"Because of the sort of success, you are promoted to Sergeant,"P smiled, Frank then collapsed on the floor.

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Yuuat and Elliot came walking into the Hideout of the Junk Revolutionists. Inside, was the same Secretary and next to her was an girl.

"Elliot, you are here for your test."The Secretary welcome then,"My name is Eliza, your test is to lower my daughters Life Points to 1500 or less to pass and become an Junk Revolutionist.

"Im Sarah the tenth best Duelist in the Junk Revolutionist,"the Girl greeted walking away while Elliot followed.

"What are you here for ?"Eliza questioned snarling slightly.

"Yesterday, you said that the Turbo Dueling practice against the Leader and Found of the Junk Revolutionist is today."Yuuat replied.

"Yes, just wait a minute,"Eliza said walking up the stairs next to her,"Zevern, some kid wants to Turbo Duel you,"

"Ok,"Zevern replied walking down the stairs,"Ok follow me and you will get your Duel Runner,"

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In the meeting room was both Alth, John and Rupert. From the stairs behind the secret door came P and Hinta.

"This is P, our leader,"Hinta stated to the men as they nodded.

"Now heres the plan,"P said as he placed a piece of paper on the table and a pencil. He then wrote the title day 1,"Now a few people from the Beta Division and Hinta will join the Junk Revolutionists, undercover, any questions of so far."

Alth raised his hands, he paused then said his question,"Won't it take a while for Hinta and the others to join,"

"Yes, I would expect it to take 3 days,"P answered continuing and he wrote the next title day 1 day-day 6,"Now our spies should see other duels and will find the Junk Revolutionists weaknesses,"P then drew the final title day 7-the attack.

First P drew an circle, from the top middle of the circle he drew a line until it reached the centre of the circle. in the centre he drew squares and an cube. He next drew mountains inside the circle. One one of the mountains, P drew the letter A indicating the Alpha Divsion will attack there. on the straight road he drew a G indicating the Gamma Division will attack there. And around the circle he drew a lot of B's. Finaly, on the Cube he drew a H.

"Now Alpha will attack on the Junk Mountains, this will make them attempt to escape to the road. However, Gamma will secure Junk City by blocking the path on Duel Runners."P smiled as he then continued,"They could have an escape path, so Hinta will follow them through it. I will put an tracker on Hinta so Beta can easily follow them on the road, the end."

"Wow, that was amazing,"John complimented.

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Zevern guided Yuuat to a shed next to the road in Junk City, he then opened it. Inside, was an bunch of Duel Runners made of Junk, except the engines and wheels.

"This is your Duel Runner,"Zevern pointed at one of them, when Yuuat walked to it then examined it.

"Seems good, thanks,"Yuuat said as he jumped onto it, when he looked back he saw Zevern return in ordinary Junk Revolutionist Duel Runner, but it was coloured black insted of plain white.

"Now, we will Duel on the road that circles Junk City,"Zevern explained as they started the engines and blasted off, then he placed a Field Spell,"Activating [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Speed_World_2"][b]Speed World 2[/b][/url]."

"Auto piloting activating,"The Machine from both Duel Runner activated in the sound of a women's voice.

(Yuuat: 4000 Life Points)(Zevern: 4000 Life Points)

"I will start by Summoning [b]Junk Cannon Arm[/b] in Def Mode (500/500), now I end with 2 cards Face Down,"Zevern finished as an small monster made of Junk appeared, it had an cannon attached to it.

"Now I draw,"Yuuat smiled as the Speed Counters boosted (Yuuat: SPC 1)(Zevern: SPC 1),"I Summon [b]Magnetic Soldier[/b] in Atk Mode (1500/1000), I set 2 cards Face Down,"Yuuat smirked as an Soldier formed by ten big magnets forming,"[b]Magnetic Soldier[/b] attack [b]Junk Cannon Arm[/b],"

"I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Scrap-Iron_Scarecrow"]Scrap Iron Scarecrow[/url], you obviously know what that does,"Zevern explained as Scarecrow appeared blocking [b]Magnetic Soldiers[/b] attack.

"I end my turn,"Yuuat said."So you have an deck simular to Yusei Fudo ?"

"Well, I've met him before he left the Satilite to Domino ages ago,"Zevern replied drawing (Yuuat: SPC 2)(Zevern: SPC 2),"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] in Atk Mode (1800/1000), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Magnetic Soldier[/url],"

"Before the attack commences I activate [b]Magnetic Pull[/b], so I can Decrease my [b]Magnetic Soldier's[/b] Atk by 500 to gain 500 Life points (1000/1000)(Yuuat: 4000→4500 Life Points)(Zevern: 4000→3200), you see all damage involving my [b]Magnetic Soldier[/b] is inflicted to your Life Points,"

"Interesting, I was impressed yesterday by your skills to survive for turns,"Zevern complimented,"But to trick me into inflicting more damage to myself, that was skilled."

"Thanks, but you created the Junk Revolutionists, you are the best out of the current Junk Revolutionists,"Yuuat replied complimenting also.

"You will have to do far better than that to win this duel,"Zevern challenged staring at Yuuat's sudden smirk."I guess by your reaction you still aren't finished on my turn,"

"I activate my second card [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Call_of_the_Haunted"]Call of the Haunted[/url] to bring back [b]Magnetic Soldier[/b] (1500/1000), that's all, are you going to end your turn."

"Yes,"Zevern said in a slight hiss.

"I draw,"Yuuat drew as he smirked once again (Yuuat: SPC 2)(Zevern: SPC 2),"I Summon [b]Magnetic Guard[/b] in Def Mode (0/2300), you see this monster is an level 3 Tuner and [b]Magnetic Soldier[/b] is an level 3 Non Tuner,"

"So your going to Synchro Summon a level 6 monster ?"Zevern guessed.

"Yes, say hello to [b]Magnetic Warrior[/b] (2300/1500),"Yuuat answered as both of the magnets of his monsters split and formed into a bigger monster."[b]Magnetic Warrior[/b] has an skilled effect, whenever it is Synchro Summoned I can destroy 1 card on your side of the field, it's obvious that I'm going to choose your Face Down on the left that is [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Scrap-Iron_Scarecrow"]Scrap Iron Scarecrow[/url]."

"Doesn't matter to me anymore,"Zevern said still comfident.

"OK then, [b]Magnetic Warrior[/b] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url],"Yuuat commanded pointing at the warrior.

"I chain with [b]Junk Shield[/b],"Zevern depressed a button revealing an shield that attached to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url],"Now my monster can't be destroyed by battle and it's level is decreased by 2 (Zevern: 3200→2700 Life Points)(Junk Blader: Level 4→2),"

"Well, at least im winning,"Yuuat said positive."I end,"

"Time for me to change it,"Zevern said drawing (Yuuat: SPC 3)(Zevern: SPC 3),"Time for some massive damage, first I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Synchron"]Junk Synchron[/url] in Def Mode (1300/500), now I tribute my [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Synchron"]Junk Synchron[/url] and [b]Junk Cannon Arm[/b] to Synchro Summon the legendary [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] (2300/1300) !"

"I don't see the point, your not going to inflict that much,"Yuuat commented.

"Haven't you seen Yusei Fudo duel, oh wait, you weren't born then,"Zevern yelled slightly,"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] gains Atk equal to all level 2 or lower monsters on the Field (2300→4100/1300), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] take down that [b]Magnetic Warrior[/b], next [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] will attack you directly"

Yuuat's eyes widened when the powerful monster crushed his [b]Magnetic Warrior[/b] (Yuuat: 4500→2700 Life Points), the impact shifted his Duel Runner in circles (Yuuat: SPC 2). Next the Blade wielding monster slashed through Yuuat's Duel Runner (Yuuat: 2700-900 Life Points), that made Yuuat's Duel Runner rapidly spin then it slowed down (Yuuat: SPC 1).

"You inflicted so much damage in one turn,"Yuuat said amazed,"Plus you have an 4100 Atk point monster that can't go down because it's power souce can't be destroyed by battle, no wonder you haven't lost in ages."

"If you think im amazing, you should of watched Yusei, he did incredible in the WRGP, well since Team 5DS are the champions,"Zevern pointed out.

"STOP GOING ON ABOUT YUSEI !!!"Yuuat shouted.

"OK, now that your losing I'll tell you about your birth,"Zevern said,"You didn't have any parents, you were created in light when Junk City was discovered underground, you might have wondered why we were lowlanding."

"Go on,"Yuuat said patient.

"You were created to protect Junk City, you are born to be in the Junk Revolutionists, you will have an tough test to join, but I recon you'll pass,"Zevern explained as his voice changed coldly,"When you were born, an shroud of darkness was created, it is the thing that corrupted most of the DSSF, it is known as Calic,"

"Is Calic powerful ?"Yuuat continued to question.

"Yes and no, when created he used all of his energy to corrupt as much DSSF as he could, only a few of them live today,"Zevern answered,"Calic has stored his powers to corrupt and destroy the world, but to do that he needs the powers sealed beneath Junk City, that is why you are destined to protect it."

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Elliot and Sarah eventually reached an area in Junk City to have an duel.

"I'll let you go first,"Sarah said calmly activating her duel disk. (Elliot: 4000 Life Points)(Sarah: 4000 Life Points)

"I activate the Spell card [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Scapegoat"]Scapegoat[/url] Special Summoning 4 Tokens (0/0), I end my turn,"Elliot quickly finished.

"That's all, I'll show you an move,"Sarah insulted drawing,"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] in Atk Mode (1300/1500), next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Poison_of_the_Old_Man"]Poison of the Old Man[/url], this card gives me a choice of gaining 1200, or inflicting 800, I guess I choose to gain,"Sarah decided as the potion florished around her (Sarah: 4000→5200), then a fireball striked Elliot (Elliot: 4000→3500 Life Points),"

"What happened you were suppose to just gain Life Points ?"Elliot questioned.

"My [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] has an deadly effect of inflicting 500 points damage every time I gain Life Points,"Sarah explained,"You thought it was going to be easy my guess is,"

"Yes,"Elliot admitted.

"Prepare to take more damage, I equip my monster with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fairy_Meteor_Crush"]Fairy Meteor Crush[/url], inflicting piercing damage, now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] attack an Token (Elliot: 3500→2200),"Sarah commanded laughing,"This is easy, theres no way you will even dent my Life Points with me gaining then inflicting,"

"Maybes, but I'll try my best and I'll take that monster down,"Elliot vowed.

"Whatever, I end my turn,"Sarah ignored.

"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] in Atk Mode (1400/1300), now I activate my monsters effect tributing my remaining Tokens to inflict 500 points of damage for each one destroyed (Sarah: 5200→3700 Life Points), [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] take down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] (Sarah: 3700→3600 Life Points),"Elliot grinned, thrilled that he managed to take down one of his problems.

"Don't celebrate now, my Life Points is still high,"Sarah said.

"Fine, I'll set 3 cards Face Down and end my turn,"Elliot calmly said as three holograms appeared in front of him.

Sarah then drew and an smile appeared on her face, [i]Finaly, I've drawn the card to end this duel.[/i]

END OF CHAPTER

[spoiler=Custom Cards]

Junk Cannon Arm (Earth)
Lv 2
[Warrior/Effect]
By tributing 1 "Junk" monster, you can inflict damage to your Opponent equal to the Tributed monsters Atk.
(Atk 500/Def 500)

Junk Shield
[Equip Trap]
This card can only be equipped to an "Junk" monster, that monster cannot be destroyed by battle. Decrease the equipped monsters lv by 2.

Magnetic Soldier (Earth)
Lv 3
[Machine/Effect]
Your Opponent takes all battle damage you would have taken involving this card.
(Atk 1500/Def 1000)

Magnetic Guard (Earth)
Lv 3
[Machine/Tuner]
If this card was destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 lv 4 or lower "Magnetic" monster to the Field in Face Up Def Position.
(Atk 0/Def 2300)

Magnetic Warrior (Earth)
lv 6
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 card on your Opponent's side of the Field.

Magnetic Pull
[Normal Trap]
Decrease 1 "Magnetic" monsters Atk by 500 to gain 500 Life Points.

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[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Yuuat struggles to cope with losing an pile of Life Points after the loss of his Magnetic Warrior, will he be able to destroy two of Zevern's powerful monsters and win this duel ? Elliot soon gains slight control over the duel, only to lose control. Can Elliot pass ?

Chapter 3: The Battle of the Burns Part Two
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[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Well it took me long to read chapter 1 and I've got to say, it is impressive. There doesn't seems to be that much mistakes and I think the duel was intense and good. Im going to keep reading this.

[Mysterious Member]

Realy ? Thanks Destruction Hero, I never expected for my Fan Fic to be good. Im working on chapter 3, it will be done sometime next week.

[Dr. Cakey]

[spoiler='Growing Praise and Adulation: Episode 9: Des Note (Part 1)']
An large
[b]No.[/b]

skyscraper that was measured about 50 feet was standing high in Domino City.
[b]Didn’t anyone tell you not to use passive voice. Actually, criticisms of passive are a bit overblown, since there are times it just works better, but this is very clearly not that time. Here’s it active:
“A[s]n[/s] large skyscraper that measured about [s]50[/s] fifty feet stood high in Domino City.”
This still isn’t very good, not helped in the least by the fact that fifty feet doesn’t make a skyscraper. I’m not all up on my architectural lingo, but I’m pretty sure that something like five or six stories. Anyway, here’s your fully fixed sentence:
“A large skyscraper, towering nearly fifty [s]feet[/s] stories tall, stood in Domino City.”
Actually, I think it needs a bit more polishing, but that’s me.[/b]

It's windows
[b]It’s Windows? I hope you didn’t get Vista, at least.[/b]

was coloured bright blue,
[b]It[s]’[/s] windows was? Was? Do you even know what verbs are?[/b]

while the walls were coloured yellow.
[b]Phew. We managed to string together some meaningful words. But am I hearing you right? This large [s]department store[/s] skyscraper is painted yellow? I don’t know how many skyscrapers you’ve seen in your time, but they’re general kind of…metal-colored.[/b]

On the reddish brown roof,
[b]And then it has a reddish brown and/or maroon roof? Is this de Blob (Never actually played that, by the way)?[/b]

there was an sign
[b]No.[/b]

of the name DSSF
[b]I don’t even know what ‘of the name’ is supposed to mean. I get that this is supposed to be a sign with ‘DSSF’ on it. But seriously, lrn2engrish[/b]

coloured orange.
[b]Of course. Another color.[/b]

It was slightly isolated from the other buildings, while it was surrounded by road. It was by far an unusual building.
[b]Yeah, I’d say it is pretty unusual building. Blue windows, yellow sides, and a red roof.[/b]

When the shadows that were on the building slopped down half way to the bottom, the lights of the building flared it out of existence.
[b]It took me a good five seconds to piece this out. Apparently there are lights on the building about halfway to the bottom that make all the shadows disappearing. This is either supposed to be deeply symbolic or random information.[/b]

Inside the skyscraper, at the second highest floor, there was two desks.
[b]Right-o, I’m just going to stop pointing out errors in number.[/b]

One was larger, behind it was an elevator, while three chairs were under it.
The next was smaller, but had an computer on it,
[b]I’ll avoid a/n discrepancies, too.[/b]

connected to an large screen behind it. Soon, the elevator opened,
[b]We’re not anchored in time, seeing as this is all description so far, so the elevator would not open soon nor late. It would just open.[/b]

out came three men, they walked towards the desks.
[b]This is what we call a list. Lists are fine, but there’s a certain word they usually use before the last item. You may be familiar with it – it is of the name ‘and’.
[/b]
One was wearing an black suit, with an black tie and black trousers,
[b]It always feels a little strange to mix basic and more advanced criticism. For example, if I’m dealing with someone who doesn’t know when to use ‘a’ and when to use ‘an’, it would be odd to being picking over the fact that you could have more simply said, “wearing a black suit, tie, and trousers” (note the comma before the final ‘and’ in the list). This is because, especially in cases like this, what the writer needs more than advice is often an Absolute Power Force!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! to the head. As we’ve seen there are definite exceptions to this, but there also…aren’t. So then this becomes somewhat for the edification of the readers, particularly those who ply the trade of the written word. Right, that’s enough of that. On to business.[/b]

he was carrying an suitcase, his hair was brown as his eyes were also.
[b]Sometimes everything just works out, and you can drop your criticism like you’re Crab Helmet. This phrase, in its correct form, is, “his hair was brown, as were his eyes”. However, by mixing around the words around as has been done here, the sentence takes on the meaning, “his hair was brown because his eyes were also”, since that’s how you can use ‘as’. For example, “he thought the filler arc was very good, as a birth defect had left him without good taste”.
[/b]
The second man was an large very muscular man, wearing the same uniform as the first but his eyes were blue and he had black hair with a black beard. The last man, was slightly shorter than the first and was wearing the same as his companions except he had green eyes, black hair and was wearing glasses. Then they sat on their seats, it had appeared that on the left side of their suit, was four stars.
[b]Aside from minor details like seats are sat in not on, these stars have been inserted randomly. Most people can kind of instinctively tell when something is out of place. For example, “Yugi top-decked some strange anime card which would be useless in any other situation. His hair was very spiky.” The rest of us know better than to do something so monumentally silly.[/b]

"So, your our newest Commanders of our three major divisions ?"questioned an Elderly Voice, that came from behind the screen.
[b]Uh…Elderly Voice has been capitalized. This indicates it be a proper noun, therefore an Elderly Voice must be some sort of title, or possibly a kind of creature.
[/b]
"Yes,"answered the First Man, being braver than his others.
[b]A First Man is a bit like a Best Man, only instead of being a wedding functionary, the First Man is a brave warrior prepared to fight the mysterious being known only as the Elderly Voice.
[/b]
"OK, im comming in."the Voice replied, as an secret door opened from the right side of the screen.
[b]This is the first story I have genuinely thought to myself, “Would it really be so bad if I didn’t finish this?” But I’m made of sterner stuff than that! We can see here that the author does in truth believe they are writing a screenplay. The irony is that screenplays don’t do this ‘screen’ nonsense, either.[/b]

Out came, an Elder, he was wearing the same uniform as the men. But insted of the four stars, he had five and there was an hat over his head.
[b]And here you can see this was not done in such sophisticated and rare software as MS Word. Actually, I think we already know that, but I’ve been working on this for so many days I really don’t care anymore.[/b]

"Welcome to the DSSF headquarters, we are the Domino Sector Security Force,"once he had finished he then coughed then continued,
[b]The author seems to be under the impression that there isn’t supposed to be a space between, say, the end of a quote and the start of description. This next line is bad, not only because it’s unnecessarily wordy, but because the Level 99 Elderly Voice appears to have stopped talking (he didn’t actually ‘finish’), decided he might as well cough, and then decided to continue speaking.[/b]

"We were created 15 years ago and yes that was 5 years after the WRGP, because the original Sector Security was stopped and was defeated."
[b]It sounds like he was expecting the Level 68 First Man to suddenly blurt out, “omigosh, that was liek 5 yrz after the wrgp rite??????” Why would that be important? For that matter, what is this about [s]the Public Security Maintenance Bureau[/s] Sector Security being “stopped and defeated”? After Season 1, they just became random ordinary police folks, no longer being repressive and tyrannical because the main character(s) weren’t fleeing the EVIL LAW anymore. I’m sure this will all be clearly explained.
[/b]
The Elder the paused as a slight tear dropped from his eyes,
[b]I didn’t think this was a terribly emotional moment. Was [s]the Public Security Maintenance Bureau[/s] Sector Security the Level 99 Elderly Voice’s wife or something?
[/b]
the men then stared at each other confused until he then continued explaining."Sadly, the founder died 5 years ago, he was replaced his son, now any que-"

"So we are bossed around by some child !?"the Third man interrupted slightly angry.
[b]Uh…yeah. This is anime. Who else do you expect would be in charge? Some middle-aged guy?[/b]

"Yes, but he is highly intelligent for his age."
[b]Uh…yeah. This is anime. Who else do you expect would be intelligent? People who went to college?
[/b]
The Elder grinned slightly happy when he plugged his computer into something turning the screen on.
[b]Apparently, the organization whose name I’ve already forgotten unplugs all their computers when they’re not in use. What is this ‘slightly happy’ business? If I were to guess it’s because he said the guy in charge was highly intelligent for his age because it is amusing because that would be unexpected because he is young.
[/b]
On it was an giant p."Now you shall adress your names to our Leader, firstly, I am Hinta,"
[b]What, did they just pick up these guys off the street to present to the Level 128 Leader? Does he not know who these guys are?
[/b]
"OK, I am Alth,"the First Man bowed to the Leader.

"Names, John,"the Second Man nodded.

"My name is Rupert,"the Third Man said also bowing.
[b]So two guys bow at the mere mention of the Level 128 Leader, and the other one says [s]“The name’s John.”[/s] “"Names, John,"?
[/b]
"I am sorry, I cannot give you my real name, for now you shall call me P,"
[b]good4u u watched deth note
[/b]
the Computer explained, it's voice sounded like an alien."
[b]Yep, definitely Death Note. You know that L changes his voice so no one can recognize the sound of his voice or listen for his voice patterns, not to be the alienz
[/b]
Also, you three shall be told what divisions you are in, Alth you are in Alpha, John Beta and Rupert Gamma."
[b]So you don’t know how to write legible English, but you know that there are Greek letters other than Alpha, Beta, and Omega? What evil sorcery is this!?
[/b]
"I hope your happy with that,"Hinta said standing up.

"Yes !"The Three Men replied in a unison.
[b]I wanna be in Delta Division. No, make it Kappa! No, wait, Zeta! Epsilon! Phi!
[/b]
"Time, for our current main mission,"The Computer started to explain,"Coincidently, when the DSSF was formed, an part of the Satilite was discovered.
[b]Um…where did it go? Why can’t you spell Satellite? These questions and more will not be answered!
[/b]
You might know this place as Junk City. Before we continue, Junk City isn't a city, it was named that after the astonishing amount of Junk."
[b]Oh, I get it! That’s so hi-larious! And wait, is there going to be a guy who uses...[i]Junk[/i] monsters??????
But who cares whether or not it’s actually a city? Did someone do a census and decide, “nope, Junk City is actually just a large town.”?
[/b]
"I have a question,"John raised his hand while Hinta nodded,"So, why should we care about this place ?"
[b]You don’t need to raise your hand. I mean, does that seem silly to anyone else. The Level 128 Leader (who I suppose I should call P) isn’t watching you. He definitely isn’t going to call on you.[/b]

"When people from Domino research there, they found an vast amount of Diamonds,"
[b]Um…what? This is the problem with working with an existing locale – did these diamonds just grow there?
[/b]
P replied,"Once we had collected all we could, we had no choice to capture people from other parts of the satilite started to live here and enslave them.
[b]Step 1: Find diamonds.
Step 2: Mine diamonds.
Step 3: Enslave the locals.
[/b]
This had caused them to start a revolution a few months after we discovered Junk City, we are still fighing them now."
[b]Was no one expecting that? Does P, the world’s greatest detective, actually think this plan made sense? Does the Level 68 First Man not find this a completely bizarre course of action?[/b]

"Hmm, this seems interesting,"Rupert said stroking his beard.

"Now, to start this for you, you must send one member of your Division to investigate, next we will devise an strategy to finish it,"P said,"We will have this finished far faster than anyone else can."
[b]Great, but you haven’t established what it is that you’re finishing. Normally I’d advice sending in vast numbers of elite troops, but this is Yu-Gi-Oh!, so I think you should send in a squad of evil people with tortured pasts who use super-powerful god cards that would be terrible in the actual game in.

Since the story gives me two horizontal rules, and I've been working on this for more than a week and it's so incredibly long, I'm stopping here. Part Two will be up by and by.
[/b]
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[Mysterious Member]

Thanks for the critism Dr Cakey, I'll try to explain and reply to some of the things you said. I actualy found parts of it quite funny.

My mistake about the Skyscrapper size, as you can see I've changed it to an seven story building.The shadow effect at the beginning was supose to show it was morning, while the lights turning on in the Building shows that people have entered the building.

Alth, being the first man, describes him as the leading man out of the three. I am honistly suprise that you didn't comment in Alth and Rupert's names since they don't seem 21st century names. John raised his hands because he maybes realized that P might be watching through any hidden bugs or wire taps.

I explained the distance of time between WRGP and the start if DP, to show what time they are in.

Junk City is an small settlement that holds around seventy people, as I explained Junk City has city in it because of the amount of Junk. Because of the fact that they are enslaved, the conditions are tough, they are living in small huts that barely have enough space. Therefore, Junk City cannot be a town, city or village. You have obviously looked at chapter 2 to know that theres a person with Junk Monsters, Zevern uses that deck to show hes the Leader of the Junk Revolutionists.

As you know, Hinta has said that Junk City has dimonds in it. That is sort of an lie to trick people into joining to get dimond. Since you have read chapter 2, you might have figured that out but not. The real reason is that Calic can gain it's hidden power and destroy the world. You might be confused why he would, but later on in DP it will have the answer.

Back to the review, Hinta cried slightly because since hes the Co Leader, he was great friends with P's Father. So he felt depressed about his death.

Yes, I have watched Death Note and like most people who watched it, I enjoyed it. However, P preferes to be called P, because of his deck, not because of the fact that P is the first letter in his name. There is not much people with ordinary names that start with p. L is not the only person that changed the sound of his voice so that nobody can recognize him, there are plenty of other people.

That is all for now and I can tell that im going to have to expain again during Part 2 of your review.

[Dr. Cakey]

[quote name='Mysterious Member' timestamp='1292445341' post='4854978']
Thanks for the critism Dr Cakey, I'll try to explain and reply to some of the things you said. I actualy found parts of it quite funny.

My mistake about the Skyscrapper size, as you can see I've changed it to an seven story building.The shadow effect at the beginning was supose to show it was morning, while the lights turning on in the Building shows that people have entered the building.
[b]My memory's not great, but I don't think you ever said the lights turned on, just that they existed.[/b]

Alth, being the first man, describes him as the leading man out of the three. I am honistly suprise that you didn't comment in Alth and Rupert's names since they don't seem 21st century names. John raised his hands because he maybes realized that P might be watching through any hidden bugs or wire taps.
[b]Alth was an odd name, but this is anime. Anything goes. Sort of. Basically, I just didn't care all that much.

I have no problem with Alth being the first man. Being the First Man, however, is kind of odd. It's very strange when you start capitalizing At Random.[/b]

I explained the distance of time between WRGP and the start if DP, to show what time they are in.
[b]Obviously that's why, but if it doesn't serve a purpose within the story, it sticks out as...stupid. For example, if I were making another goddamn Duel Academy fic, I would not have the Chancellor say to the students in his obligatory opening address: "This branch of the school was started ten years ago, which is five years after Jaden Yuki graduated from the main Duel Academy. Got that? This is fifteen years after GX. Okay?"[/b]

Junk City is an small settlement that holds around seventy people, as I explained Junk City has city in it because of the amount of Junk. Because of the fact that they are enslaved, the conditions are tough, they are living in small huts that barely have enough space. Therefore, Junk City cannot be a town, city or village. You have obviously looked at chapter 2 to know that theres a person with Junk Monsters, Zevern uses that deck to show hes the Leader of the Junk Revolutionists.
[b]No, I always try to do my reviews blind. I just had the suspicion that in [i]Junk[/i] City, someone in the [i]Junk[/i] Revolutionists might possibly use [i]Junk[/i] monsters. You might say there was a pattern being established.[/b]

As you know, Hinta has said that Junk City has dimonds in it. That is sort of an lie to trick people into joining to get dimond. Since you have read chapter 2, you might have figured that out but not. The real reason is that Calic can gain it's hidden power and destroy the world. You might be confused why he would, but later on in DP it will have the answer.
[b]I had a suspicion there was something other than diamonds because getting rich has nothing to do with magical artifacts or world domination. I was objecting to the fact that everybody decided the logical thing to do was to enslave the local population and force them to mine stuff.[/b]

Back to the review, Hinta cried slightly because since hes the Co Leader, he was great friends with P's Father. So he felt depressed about his death.
[b]I got there was a reason, but it's kind of overblown.[/b]

Yes, I have watched Death Note and like most people who watched it, I enjoyed it. However, P preferes to be called P, because of his deck, not because of the fact that P is the first letter in his name. There is not much people with ordinary names that start with p. L is not the only person that changed the sound of his voice so that nobody can recognize him, there are plenty of other people.
[b]What the letter stands for has nothing to do with the fact that everything about him so far has been exactly like how L was introduced. Except L didn't enslave anyone. Maybe instead he should wear an overblown costume with a long cape and a helmet that covers his whole face, and name himself after a number. I bet nobody's done that. Hm? Code what now?[/b]

That is all for now and I can tell that im going to have to expain again during Part 2 of your review.
[b]I can tell you are, too, because Part 2 is here right now...[/b]
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[spoiler='Growing Praise and Adulation: Episode 10: Des Note (Part 2)'][b]Did I mention this chapter is really long? I’m less than half way through.[/b]

Junk City was as described an area piled mainly with Junk,
[b]Level 3 Junk from now on. Junk is basically the Slime/Goomba/Giant Rat/Zoomer/Chu Chu of Junk City.[/b]

there were parts of it that were muddy and hard. In the lowlands of Junk City were huts small enough to fit two small rooms. During noon, an young Teenager walked towards an wooden hut. He was wearing an green shirt, black trousers, black shoes and an blue hat, he had with im an ordinary duel disk. He knocked on the damaged door as hard as he could.
[b]I feel like I should be saying something, but I can’t think of anything, probably because there actually isn’t anything wrong with this besides spelling and grammar, which I promised to quit whining about.[/b]

"Hey, Yuuat open up it's me Elliot !"the Teen yelled as the door opened.
[b]A Yuuat would probably be some kind of palette swap of a hard enemy that for some reason is actually very easy. No, I don’t know how I come up with this stuff.[/b]

"Hello Elliot,"Yuuat said calmly. Yuuat was wearing an blue shirt, black jeans and black shoes. On his shirt, dangled an blue crystal medallion,
[b]*cough*plotpoint*cough*[/b]

on his right arm was his duel disk that was coloured white, but was shaped as a dragon.
[b]What would a dragon-shaped Duel Disk be like? They’re usually just like the old Academy Duel Disks but with some trim or whatever. The fanciest disk we had was Sir Randsborg/Jil’s Golden Shield Disk.[/b]

His hair was spickey and was an combination between brown and black,
[b]What you’re trying to say is that he’s a Yu-Gi-Oh! main character, and therefore has hair of several different colors.[/b]

"You had forgotten to sign up to join the Junk Revolutionists,"Elliot reminded Yuuat as he stepped back then turned to walk ahead.
[b]Does that seem silly to anyone else? D’oh, I forgot to fight for the freedom of my people! My bad![/b]

Yuuat followed Elliot happily,"Thanks,"he thanked as he stared in the distance. An two story house was seen, that was the headquarters of the Junk Revolutionists.
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[b]Yes, it keeps going.[/b]

Inside the headquaters was a small room, in front of Elliot and Yuuat was an counter and stairs next to it. An red haired women stood at the counter, while an book was there.
[b]Women…book…quaters…oh just forget it![/b]

"What would you like,"She said annoyed.

"Could I join the Junk Revolutionists ?"Yuuat asked.

"Hold up, to join you have to take an Dueling Test,"
[b]obv[/b]

She replied angrily."Plus, today's signup is booked, plus tomorrow. So you've got to take the test the day after."

"How funny, I signed up half an hour ago and I managed to take the test tomorrow morning,"Elliot giggled.
[b]Ahahahahahahaha!

…

I don’t get it.[/b]

"Rules are rules,"She exclaimed,"Now go, but if you want to have a practice Turbo Duel with the Leader Zevern, that's tomorrow,"
[b]Doesn’t that seem like the title for a Pokemon trainer? You know, Leader Zevern?[/b]

Before Yuuat was about to complain, the sound of gunshot shrieked through the room, then it echoed again.
[b]Gunshots…don’t shriek.[/b]

"That's it im going,"The Stressed Secretary walked away up the stairs then locked the door.
[b]“Aw shucks, murder is commencing. See ya!”[/b]

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[b]Yup, even more…[/b]

Outside there was a man wielding an gun threatening people. He looked to be an Officer, since he was wearing the uniform of the DSSF and there was one star on the right ranking him as an Officer. Standing under his feet, was an corpse of someone who lived in Junk City that was shot.
[b]I didn’t take you to be the sort of person who even knew that people could die in anime.
[/b]
"Well well well, get me some jewels or I'll shoot you, seriously, why aren't you working,"He grunted, he turned and pointed the gun at a random person,"Get to work you piece of s**t,"
[b]I take it back. You obviously had a little checklist of “Things That Make Your Story Mature”. Guns? Check. Dead person? Check. Swearing? Check.[/b]

"Yes sir,"The Victim obeyed as he found a shovel and ran up the mountain of Junk.
[b]What, are the diamonds just in the junk? Or is he forcing the Level 5 Victim to fight a horde of Level 3 Junk for his amusement.[/b]

"Anyone want to join him,"The Officer commanded as more people followed. As the Officer skimmed around, the medallion that Yuuat qas wearing caught his attention,he then pointed his gun at Yuuat."You hand that medallion, that must be worth a lot of money,"
[b]“I’m a villain, but I’m also a minor character, so that must mean I only care about getting money and stuff!”[/b]

"Only in a duel,"Yuuat replied betting,"You win, you get it. However, if you lose, you leave."
[b]That’s suicide. The officer could just shoot him![/b]

[i]That is suicide since the Officer could just shoot him[/i], Elliot gasped.
[b]Yes, I looked a sentence ahead.[/b]

[i]My only choice is to duel him since I don't have any bullets left[/i],
[b]Oh, how convenient.

Doesn’t that mean the people could jump him, now?[/b]

The Officer thought,"You got a deal, by the way, my names Frank,"
[b]“I wish I could shoot you, but I can’t, so instead we’ll gamble over who gets the only thing of value you own. Hi, I’m Frank.”[/b]

[i]That Officer must be thick to not shoot Yuuat[/i], Elliot thought as he became more confident, until he saw Frank holding some chains.

"Now, this chain will electricute you every time you lose Life Points, the more the more powerful,"Frank grinned as he threw one at Yuuat then attached his to his neck.
[b]You’d have to be crazy to accept those conditions.[/b]

"Im OK with that,"Yuuat said as he attached it.
[b]Yes, I looked. But seriously, they’re just street dueling, it’s not like this is an underground arena for electric shock fetishists or whatever those creepy underground duels in GX were. The gross fat guy whose name I forget in 5D’s did it to have an unfair advantage. Zane/Ryo did it because he was evil before they decided they didn’t want him to be evil anymore. Why does he have the duel under these conditions?[/b]

"I'll go first,"Frank exclaimed activating his Duel Disk, he then drew 5 cards (Frank: 4000 Life Points).

"Fine with me,"Yuuat nodded (Yuuat: 4000 Life Points).

"I activate the Field Spell [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mausoleum_of_the_Emperor"]Mausoleum of the Emperor[/url],"Frank laughed as the background changed into an Ancient Empire."Your doomed with this card because we can Normal Summon a monster without a Tribute by paying 1000 Life Points times the amount of Tributes they need, so I choose [b]Magnite Titan[/b] in Atk Mode (3000/0)(Frank: 4000→2000 Life Points), I end with 1 card Face Down."Frank ended as an volt of electricity shocked him massively.
[b]1. You wouldn’t get zapped for paying Life Points (I think).
2. Mausoleum is horrible in anime duels, for obvious reasons.[/b]

"No way, on your first turn you Summoned a monster with 3000 Atk,"Yuuat replied, he felt slightly worried.

"Got a problem satilite, can't handle that power."Frank then taunted him as he felt slightly dizzy.

"Nope, I can beat it,"Yuuat said drawing his 6th card, he then smiled,"To bad your plan for a direct attack will fail,"
[b]Plan for a direct attack? You mean, “summon a strong monster, hope my opponent just summons one monster, and then summon another monster” counts as a plan?[/b]

"How come ?"Frank asked confused.

"Because I will first activate the spell card [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Dark_Door"]The Dark Door[/url],"Yuuat smirked as an Door appeared behind him,"Now only one of our monsters can attack,"

"Big mistake, because my [b]Magnite Titan[/b] can attack twice per turn,"Frank explained as he began to laugh.
[b]Oh. That’s…a good card. Guess that’s what Yuuat gets for running The Dark Door. While I’m here, I’ll say I do like the links to the cards. I don’t need them, because my card memory is unhealthy, but they’re nice.[/b]

"Still I'll win,"Yuuat then smiled setting two cards Face Down,"Now I Summon [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b] in Def Mode (1600/1200), it's effect allows us to discard one card from our hand to the Graveyard then draw 2 cards, that's it for me,"
[b]Def[i]ense[/i] [s]Mode[/s] Position, please. It’s also abundantly broken. I know there are broken anime cards, but why have such blatantly broken draw power? And am I reading this wrong, or did he not bother to use the effect?[/b]

"You've acted so confident and you've pulled out a seriously terrible move,"Frank commented drawing a card,"I could win this duel without activating a card from my hand,"
[b]Assuming both of those face-downs are useless. Which they obviously aren’t.[/b]

[i]It's obvious that Frank's Face Down is a Trap, since Magnite Titan gives him an advantage around Traps[/i], Yuuat though as he stared at Frank's Face Down.
[b]It’s obvious Frank’s [s]Face Down[/s] face-down is a Trap because no one set Spells that weren’t Quick-play after Season 2.[/b]

"Now [b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b],"Frank ordered as the Titan threw a giant ball of lava at the soldier.
[b]Ironically, you’re decent at doing duels. You actually bothered to describe the attack…though not the monsters, now that I think about it.[/b]

"I activate my Face Down [b]Dracon Surrender[/b], you see if you declare an attack I can negate the attack then gain control of your monster,"Yuuat explained as an army of shadows charged at Magnite Titan.
[b]Based on the name, I’m assuming it only works with “Dracon” monsters…at least I hope so.[/b]

"I chain with my Face Down, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Seven_Tools_of_the_Bandit"]Seven Tools of Bandit[/url], I pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of your trap and destroy it but because of [b]Magnite Titan's[/b] effect I don't even need to pay a Life Point,"Frank explained as the tool destroyed the shadows and allowed [b]Magnite Titan[/b] to continue it's attack on [b]Hath[/b].
[b]Wait, so not only can Magnite Titan attack twice, but it negates Life Point payments for you?[/b]

"You defeated my monster in battle,"Yuuat signed as [b]Magnite Titan[/b] gained a second lava ball."
[b]I just had a thought…Frank didn’t use Hath-Dracon’s effect either.[/b]

"[b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack Yuuat directly,"Frank once again ordered.

"I activate my next Face Down [url="[img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/9190/302358.jpg[/img]"]Dracon Frontal Assualt[/url],"Yuuat then depressed a button revealing an group of dragons,"You see I can now Sp-"

"I activate [b]Magnite Titan's[/b] effect I can pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect of your Trap and Destroy it (Frank: 2000→1500 Life Points)(Yuuat: 4000→1000 Life Points)."Frank explained as he had finaly suceeded in inflicting serious damage.
[b]Okay, it can attack twice, means you don’t have to pay Life Points for Traps, and negate Traps. Wtf?[/b]

"ARGGHH !!!"Yuuat shouted as an even bigger volt of electricity shocked him while Frank got an average amount.

Once the electricity faded Frank then pointed at Yuuat,"Its your turn."

"I can Normal Summon Draine-Dracon Paladin in Atk Mode without a Tribute if I have two monsters in my Graveyard (2100/500),"Yuuat explained as an knight on an Dragon emerged from the sky.
[b]You don’t. You only have Hath-Dracon in your Graveyard.[/b]

"Why did you Summon a weaker monster in Atk Mode ?"Frank questioned,"And you only have one in your Graveyard."
[b]What he said.
[/b]
"[b]Hath's[/b] effect before allowed me to send [b]Voldrake-Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] to my Graveyard and next I activate the spell card [b]Dracon and the Beast[/b], because I control 1 Dracon monster in Atk mode I can Special Summon [b]Beast of Dracon[/b] to the Field from my hand in Def Mode (1500/1200), now I end,"
[b]Okay, I guess. Dracon and the Beast is awful…it should at least summon from the deck.[/b]

"[b]Magnite Titan[/b] attack [b]Dracon and the Beast[/b] then [b]Draine-Dracon Paladin[/b],"Frank ordered as both him and Yuuat were hit by electricity (Yuuat: 1000→100 Life Points)(Frank: 1500→900 Life Points)."But how was I hit ?"
[b]For some reason, I keep having an urge to give Magnite Titan Piercing. I just deleted a sentence explaining how Yuuat took 1800 damage and lost.[/b]

"Beast of Dracon has an effect of when it's destroyed when I control another Dracon monster, I can inflict 600 points of damage,"Yuuat explained as he then started to lose slight control of his vision.

"You made all that effort to protect yourself again, just give up, once it's my turn you will lose,"Frank insisted pointing at Yuuat,"You have only 1 card in your hand, but next turn you'll get 2, so how is 2 cards going to take down my mighty Titan or protect yourself again ?"
[b]inb4darkhole[/b]

Once Frank finished, Yuuat then smirked when he drew,"It is that simple, all this time I was distracting you, I had the card to win this duel in my hand."

"So then why didn't you play it ?"

"It has an certain requirement, I need to remove [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b], [b]Voldrake-Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] and [b]Draine-Dracon Paladin[/b] in my Graveyard to Special Summon the legendary [b]Vandran-Dracon Overlord[/b] (2400/0) !"Yuuat shouted as an Dragoon appeared out of the card, it then leaped into the sky.
[b]That’s some severe conditions for a 2400 ATK monster.[/b]

"I actually thought I was going to lose,"Frank insulted unimpressed as Yuuat looked at him like he was mad."What !? Are you blind !? There is an 600 Atk difference between our monsters, face it your monster can't defeat my mighty monster, then next turn I'll attack and make you suffer,"
[b]I suspect it might possibly have some sort of effects and whatnot.[/b]

"My monster has an extremely powerful effect, you see, I can select an equip card from my Deck and equip it to it,"Yuuat explained as he skimmed through his deck and selected an card, he then showed it to Frank,"Dimond Dracon Blade !!!"
[b]Megamorph would work, too.[/b]

"What does that card do ?"Everyone except Yuuat questioned to him in a Unison.
[b]Is that supposed to be funny?
[/b]
"It's a good and bad card, you see the equipped monster gains half the attack of the monster it battles with, however at the end of my turn I have to destroy the equipped monster and inflict damage to my Life Points equal to it's attack,"Yuuat explained,"But ignore the side effect, now [b]Vandran-Dracon Overlord[/b] (2400→3900/0) attack [b]Magnite Titan[/b] with chaos blade."
[b]That’s not a good and bad card, it’s a horrible card. Metalmorph is infinitely superior. [i]Metalmorph[/i]! And ATK is spelled, um…ATK.[/b]

"NO, I've lost to a Satilite !!!"Frank screamed when [b]Vandran[/b] charged down the sky as an dark barrier formed around it. It collided with [b]Magnite Titan[/b], causing the [b]Titan[/b] to colapse on Frank (Frank: 900→0 Life Points).
[b]It’s funny because it’s like the first episode of GX. Only even less funny. And that wasn’t funny at all.[/b]

"Im glad that's over,"Yuuat said walking away, his left leg felt wounded by the electricity, he then turned around to see an great amount of electricity shock Frank staggering.
[b]It occurs to me that the electric shocks served no point in this duel. In the aforementioned Zane/Ryo vs. Syrus/Not cool enough to care about his Japanese name, the shock collars were used because Zane was all evil, and also because Syrus was weak, so they had an impact on the fight. Here, they’re just there to say, “c look hes evil n teh main caracter is the main caracter n u can tell bcas he decided 2 dool even tho tehre wuz elctricity”. [/b]

"Wow, that was an amazing duel, truth to be told I thought you were going to lose before your last turn,"Elliot admitted.
[b]He should have. I liked Magnite Titan. Frank’s deck had synergy: a high-power monster that allowed him to ignore Life Point payments, and use Life-draining cards to defend it. Yuuat’s deck was Dragunities without the Tier 1(.5) and a Dark Door just because.[/b]

"That duel made me feel drozy,"Yuuat said as he then lost conciousness.

From behind Frank came an black duel runner, it stopped and another Officer picked him up and fled away up the piles of Junk.

END OF CHAPTER
[b]Thank God it’s all over. But what kind of an ending was that? Yuuat lost consciousness and then an Officer carried Frank away. Tune in next time!

Was this the worst one yet? Yeah, it probably was. The oddest thing is that Mysterious Member actually makes perfectly legible posts and downgrades his writing skill especially for…writing.[/b][/spoiler]

[Mysterious Member]

Ok time for me to explain, in my opinion there isn't much to explain but I've still got a lot of editing to do.

Yuuat is the main character. When his name was meantioned it made that obvious since every main character in Yugioh had yu somewhere in their full name.

When Frank shot some random person with his gun, the shriek was from the people not the gun, but I'll change that soon to make it that way. The amount of fear in this fan fic is high, the secertary acted comfident to not be humiliated.

Yuuat accepted being shocked when losing life points because if he declined that would make him a coward. Because of this, Zevern might not want a coward in the Junk Revolutionists.

Magnite Titan is sure an overpowered monster, but it has an obvious weakness. It has 0 Def, plus it's effect of negating costs 500 life points. That is why Yuuat defended himself with Dracon Beast to inflict 600 points of damage to lower Frank's life points. Yuuat was thinking ahead while Frank was thinking he was unstobable.

Yuuat was down to 100 life points because Draine was in Atk Position, while Dracon Beast was in Def Position. It's obvious that Yuuat's strategy is putting Hath, Voldrake and Draine in his Graveyard to Summon his signature monster.

Yuuat doesn't have Megamorph in his deck and possible won't. Theres just two differences between the two cards, Megamorph might most of the time be superior, but they can be just as good in some occasions.

As I had said, the dimonds were a lie. Plus, the DSSF don't know where the hidden power is or how to get to it. There only goal is to eliminate or capture the Junk Revolutionists to get to it.

That is all for now, I'll be working on editing Chapter 1.

EDIT: heres chapter 3 and 4. You should know, that chapter 4 was the hardest for me to make, so I will have left a lot of mistakes. So could you tell any mistakes when you post.

[spoiler=Chapter 3: The Battle of the Burns Part Two]
[spoiler=Field Overview]
Yuuat vs Zevern

Yuuat: 900 Life Points (SPC 1)
-No cards on the Field

Zevern: 2700 Life Points (SPC 3)
-[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] in Atk Mode (1800/1000) equiped with [b]Junk Shield[/b] (Lv: 4→2)
-[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] in Atk Mode (2300→4100/1300)
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"Looks like in one turn I knocked your life points from 4500 to 900 with little effort,"Zevern commented."Most duelists give up when I have these three cards on the Field, because they understand that it's impossible to win."

"Im still going to try and take down your [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url],"Yuuat said as he placed his fingers on the top of his deck, he felt prepared to draw. Yuuat closed his eyes an wispeared to himself,"come on, I can do this, all I need is to focus,"

"No duelist has ever taken down my [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] standing by it equipped with [b]Junk Shield[/b],"Zevern boasted.


"I DRAW !"Yuuat shouted as he slid the top card out of his deck, he brang it level with his face then opened his eyes,"YES !" (Yuuat: SPC 2)

[i]He must be bluffing, he can't win[/i]. Zevern though as sweat dropped from his forehead.

"I Summon [b]Magnetic Cores[/b] in Def Mode (500/500),"Yuuat said as he slammed the card into the monster card zone. An flash of light emerged infront of Yuuat, when it eventually faded. Out came, three floating iron balls with a magnet attached to them."I should say that [b]Magnetic Cores[/b] is an level 4 monster, so you should beware of it's powerful effect."

"So what is it then ?"Zevern wondered, he felt puzzled and nervous.

"Effect number 1, [b]Magnetic Core[/b] can equip one level 4 or lower Magnetic monster to it from the Graveyard by discarding two cards from my hand,"Yuuat smirked as slid the selected cards into the Graveyard, he then searched his Graveyard and placed [b]Magnetic Guard [/b] in the spell and trap card zone. Zevern's eyes widened when an dark portal emerged underneath [b]Magnetic Core[/b], the monster known as [b]Magnetic Guard[/b] immediatly came out and [b]Magnetic Core[/b] attached to it."[b]Magnetic Core[/b] gains the Atk and Def of the monster equipped to it (500/500→2800),"

"Well, not bad, but [b]Junk Warrior[/b] can still take it down,"Zevern said unimpressed.

"Magnetic Core has another effect at the cost of 500 life points I can destroy 1 monster on the Field and I choose [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] (Yuuat: 900→400),"Yuuat explained as [b]Magnetic Core[/b] shot lasers that obliverated [b]Junk Blader[/b] with [b]Junk Shield[/b],"I should say, the reason I picked [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] is because you gain life points equal to the Atk of the destroyed monster (Zevern: 2700→3600), plus without [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Blader"]Junk Blader[/url] and of chorse [b]Junk Shield[/b], [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Junk_Warrior"]Junk Warrior[/url] loses the Atk it gained (4100→2300/1300),"

"And so you turned the tables,"Zevern signed.

"Wait what tables ?"Yuuat questioned.

"Nevermind, do you end your turn ?"Zevern asked.

"Yes,"Yuuat nodded.

"(Zevern: SPC 4) Now I Summon an second [b]Junk Cannon Arm[/b] in Def Mode (500/500)(2300→2800/1300), I activate [b]Junk Cannon Arm's [/b] effect, I can tribute 1 Junk monster to inflict damage to your life points equal to it's Atk and I choose [b]Junk Cannon Arm [/b], so you lose (Yuuat: 400→0 Life Points),"Zevern finished as Yuuat's duel runner spinned then colapsed onto the ground. Zevern immediatly stopped, he then jumpped off and walked towards Yuuat."That was quite a good duel,"Zeverm said reached his hand for Yuuat's then pulled him up.

"Well thanks, I did the best I can,"Yuuat replied happy when he got up.[i]It seems wierd that in the Turbo Duel Zevern had lots of cards in his hand but most he didn't even activate, maybe he was going easy on me[/i]

"Anyway, I have to go,"Zevern said as he walked away.

Yuuat waved, until he didn't see the old man in the distance.

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[spoiler=Field Overview]
Elliot vs Sarah

Elliot: 2200 Life Points
-[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] in Atk Mode (1400/1300)
-3 cards Face Down

Sarah: 3600 Life Points
-No cards on the Field
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"Anyway, as I said, my move,"Sarah said drawing quickly, she examined her hand."Alright, first I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Brain_Control"]Brain Control[/url], I pay 800 Life Points to gain control of your Monster (Sarah: 3600→2800 Life Points)."

"I never expected you to have a card like that,"Elliot replied as Cannon Soldier obeyed Sarah, walking to her side.

"Next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Double_Spell"]Double Spell[/url], I discard 1 spell card from my hand to gain a spell from your Graveyard and I choose [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Scapegoat"]Scapegoat[/url],"Sarah said as the card appeared in her hand glowing.

"Not if I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_Jammer"]Magic Jammer[/url], discarding 1 card to negate your spell,"Elliot pressed a button revealing the centre card out of his Face Downs, an seal appeared in the ground sucking [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Scapegoat"]Scapegoat[/url] down it.

"Fine, Cannon Soldier, direct attack."Sarah commanded fustrated from before.

"I activate my two Facedowns [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Enchanted_Javelin"]Enchanted Javelin[/url] and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Negate_Attack"]Negate Attack[/url], you know what [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Negate_Attack"]Negate Attack[/url] does, but [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Enchanted_Javelin"]Enchanted Javelin[/url] increases my Life Points equal to the Atk of the attacking monster,"Elliot explained as an aura formed around him (Elliot: 2200→3600 Life Points).

"You made me waste my time, I end my turn,"Sarah signed annoyed.

"Ok my draw,"Elliot drew."Im immediatly going to the Battle Phase, Cannon Soldier attack Sarah directly (Sarah: 2800→1400 Life Points)."

"Impossible, im losing,"Sarah said lowering her head.

"I end my turn,"Elliot said crossing his arms.

"DRAW !!!"Sarah shouted as drew a card,"I activate Pot of Greed drawing 2 cards as every duelist knows,"Sarah said drawing to cards, she then grinned."I activate the continous Spell [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_of_Safe_Return"]Card of Safe Return[/url], next I activate Premature Berial paying 800 to Special Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] in Atk Mode (1300/1500)(Sarah: 1400→800 Life Points), [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_of_Safe_Return"]Card of Safe Return[/url] has an effect when a monster is Special Summoned I can draw a card ,"Sarah said drawing a card, she then continued,"I equip [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_of_Safe_Return"]Fire Princess[/url] with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Salamandra"]Salamandra[/url] (1300→2000/1500), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] attack Cannon Soldier (Elliot: 3600→3000 Life Points)."

"So that was the card you were searching after ?"Elliot guessed.

"Yes,"Sarah said calmly,"Now it's your turn."

Elliot merly drew,"I set a card then end my turn,"

"Ok I dra-"Sarah said.

"I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dust_Tornado"]Dust Tornado[/url], destroying [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Salamandra"]Salamandra[/url] (2000→1300/1500),"Elliot interrupted pressing a button revealing an tornado.

"I set a card, next [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] will attack you directly (Elliot: 3000→1700 Life Points),"Sarah commanded as Elliot was knocked back."I end my turn,"

"Ok then,"Elliot said as he drew.

"I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emergency_Provisions"]Emergency Provison[/url] destroying [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_of_Safe_Return"]Card of Safe Return[/url] to gain 1000 Life Points (Sarah: 800→1800 Life Points)(Elliot: 1700→1200 Life Points)."Sarah countered.

"I activate [b]Triple Draw[/b], you see if my Opponent has more Life Points than me I can draw 3 cards,"Elliot explained drawing 3 cards,"Hmm not bad, next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Star_Blast"]Star Blast[/url], by paying 500 Life Points I can lower the level of a monster in my hand by 1 (Elliot: 1200→700 Life Points) so that I can summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier_MK-2"]Cannon Soldier MK-2[/url] in Atk Mode (1900/1200), next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Stray_Lambs"]Stray Lamb[/url] Special Summoning 2 Lamb Tokens (0/0) and I can tribute them to inflict 1500 points of damage to your Life Points due to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier_MK-2"]Cannon Soldier MK-2's[/url] effect (Sarah: 1800→300 Life Points), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/"]Cannon Soldier MK-2[/url] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Princess"]Fire Princess[/url] (Sarah: 300→0 Life Points)."

After the holograms faded, Sarah neeled onto the ground and lowered her head.

"That was the toughest duel I've been in,"Elliot complimented.

"Really ?"Sarah raised her head."Im only an duelist that uses 1 monster."

"Im honist,"Elliot replied smiling.

"Well, you've passed and your now the tenth best in the Junk Revolutionists, while I've dropped down to Eleventh."Sarah explained,"To raise a rank you will have to beat the duelist that is higher, like since your the tenth best, you will have to beat the nineth best to raise a rank, but nevermind that."

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During midnight, an dark helicopter with the logo DSSF on it left New Domino City and was headiing for the Satelite undetected. The Pilot searched around the Satelite for an area to land. Eventually the helicopter landed in a hidden headquaters.

Inside the quaters Hinta, a Man and a Woman jumped out the plane before the Pilot. The hidden headquaters was like an dungeon, but without chains. It was like a tomb, but without torches. The four held flashlights to make there way through it.

"So what's the plan ?"The Woman questioned to Hinta.

"We will leave during morning towards Junk City,"Hinta answered,"It should take us about an hour on foot. Ours goal, is to infiltrate Junk City, pretending to be people from the northern area of the Satelite, wishing to join the Junk Revolutionists."

"I'll be wishing you luck,"the Pilot greeted.

"Also, if they let us join, we will have to take a test,"Hinta reminded them,"But, it will be easy."

"Agreed,"the Man replied.

As they continued to walk onwards up several stairs, they came across an solid door. The surrounding parts of the door was bright. Hinta opened the door, an loud creek echoed through the quaters. The walls on the other room was brown, while on the floor was an rug patterning white and black squares. In the centre was an tables, with four chairs around it. Behind was a cupboard, full of supplies that would last them a week. Next to the walls were beds.

END OF CHAPTER

[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Three mystery duelists enter Junk City, they ask to join the Junk Revolutionists to fight for the rights of the Satelite. Until, someone notices them and challenges them to a duel. Meenwhile, Yuuat is dueling the second best duelist in the Junk Revolutionists and struggles to dent their life points. Will Yuuat pass so he can fight for the rights for Junk City or will he fail disasterly and be left defeated.

Chapter Four: Grave Struggle
[/spoiler]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Chapter 4: Grave Struggle]

Yuuat opened the door in his hut and left out. He felt excited to finally prove that he can join the Junk Revolutionists. All he needed to do is report to the quarters and find out who and where he will duel. He continued to walk towards the quarters, but was distracted by two teenagers activating their duel disks. An small crowd of about twenty five people.

"You will prepare to be defeated,"the Teen that was wearing an black shirt, black trousers, black shoes. The unusual thing about him was that he had yellow eyes and yellowish brown hair.

"I've won against you many time,"the Teenager that was older, guessed about the age of 18. He wore an mix between an black and blue blazer. His duel disk was an undescribable shape that was coloured like his blazer. He wore blue jeans and black shoes.

Yuuat looked around the crowd and he saw Elliot amonst them.

"Hey Elliot, do you know who these people are ?"Yuuat asked Elliot.

"When I passed yesturday, they gave me information about the top ten duelist in the Junk Revolutionists,"Elliot nodded as he continued,"The guy who has yellow eyes is named Ben Makizu, hes the eighth best and a skilled duelist using Watts cards."

"What about the other guy ?"Yuuat asked again.

"Hes Luke Makizu, the third best duelist,"Elliot replied as Yuuat opened his mouth to ask another question."Yes they are Brothers."

"But then how come they are geneticly different ?"Yuuat wondered.

"I don't know, it isn't by buisness,"Elliot replied lowering his head,"But it's obvious that their rivals and Luke is going to win."

"LETS DUEL !!!"they both shouted activating their duel disks. (Luke: 4000 Life Points)(Ben: 4000 Life Points)

"I guess I'll start off,"Luke said drawing,"I Summon [b]Space Core[/b] in Def Mode (0/0), I set 1 card Face Down and end,"

"Why would the third best duelist Summon a weak monster ?"Yuuat asked Elliot once again.

"I've never seen him duel, but this card cannot be underestimated."Ellliot answered.

"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Wattgiraffe"]Wattgiraffe[/url] in Atk Mode (1200/100),"Ben smirked placing a card that looks like an robotic girraffe that holds thunder.

"I chain with my Face Down,"Luke said as he pressed a button revealing a card."[b]Space Missle[/b], you see, I can tribute a monster to destroy all monsters on your side of the Field with an Atk of less than 1500 for 3 turns."

"NO WAY !"Ben shouted amazed that he wasted a Normal Summon,"Now im defenceless,"

"When [b]Space Core[/b] is destroyed by a card effect I can Special Summon [b]Space Cannon[/b] (0/0), [b]Space Wing[/b] (300/0) and [b]Space Guard[/b] (0/1000),"Luke explained placing the three selected cards as they formed to create an space ship."You should know that [b]Space Cannon[/b] gains the Atk equal to [b]Space Wing[/b] and the Def equal to [b]Space Guard [/b] (0→300/0→1000)."

"That combination is still weak,"Ben insulted."But then again, you have made be waste my Summon making me defenceless,"

"Wait, didn't they say that they have dueled before ?"Yuuat wispeard to Elliot.

"Yes, but Luke has more than one, so he didn't use this deck against Ben and Ben didn't notice it in other duels."Elliot wispeared back.

"You should know that as long as [b]Space Cannon[/b] is on the Field, [b]Space Wing[/b] cannot be attacked and theirs an suprise effect in both [b]Space Guard[/b] and [b]Space Cannon[/b] that I'll reveal later. So do you end ?"Luke asked Ben.

Ben meryly nodded as Luke drew,"Now that it's my Standby Phase [b]Space Cannon[/b] gains 1000 Atk (300→1300/1000) also I can upgrade [b]Space Wing[/b] and [b]Space Guard[/b] to [b]Space Wing 2[/b] (700/0) and [b]Space Guard 2[/b] (0/2000) what Increases Space Cannon's Atk (1300→1700/1000→2000)."

Ben's eyes widened when he saw an even more powerful monster.

"Now, [b]Space Cannon [/b]attack Ben directly (Ben: 4000→2300 Life Points), next [b]Space Wing 2[/b] (Ben: 4000→1600 Life Points). Well I end my turn,"Luke calmly said as they knocked Ben on the muddly floor.

"Im not giving up,"Ben said drawing, he then smirked."OK, I send an [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_Dragon"]Thunder Dragon[/url] from my hand to the Graveyard to add 2 to my hand, next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Polymerization"]Polymerization[/url] fusing my two [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_Dragon"]Thunder Dragon[/url] to Fusion Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Twin-Headed_Thunder_Dragon"]Twin Headed Thunder Dragon[/url] (2800/2100) !"

"I've used my Space Deck only about twenty times and only two people have beaten me with it,"Luke smirked."You only being the eighth best should give up."

"Next I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_King_Rai-Oh"]Thunder King Rai-Oh-[/url] in Atk Mode (1900/800),"Ben the smiled as he pointed at [b]Space Cannon[/b],"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Twin-Headed_Thunder_Dragon"]Twin Headed Thunder Dragon[/url], eliminate [b]Space Cannon[/b] (Luke: 4000→2900 Life Points)."

"When [b]Space Guard 2[/b] is Special Summoned it gains 3 Space Counters, I can remove a Space Counter to prevent a Space Monster from being destroyed by battle or card effects."Luke said calmly.

"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_King_Rai-Oh"]Thunder King Rai-Oh-[/url] attack [b]Space Cannon[/b],"Ben ordered as the thunder hit [b]Space Cannon[/b], but as everyone expected it survived (Luke: 2900→2700 Life Points)."

"You've done OK in this duel, but it will be nearly over,"Luke taunted Ben.

"I end my turn,"Ben replied grumpy.

"My move,"Luke said drawing,"Now as you know Space Cannon gains 1000 Atk (1700→2700/2000), next I upgrade [b]Space Wing[/b] to [b]Ultimate Space Wing[/b] (1100/0) and th-"

"I activate my Thunder King's effect, I can tribute it to negate the Summon of your monster and destroy it."Ben said calmly as the bolt of thunder was shot at [b]Ultimate Space Wing[/b], but once again it survive."

"You forgot [b]Space Guard 2's[/b] effect, I can remove a Space counter to prevent a Space Monster from being destroyed,"Luke smiled as an cheer erupted from the crowd."Now anyway continuing on my turn I'll upgrade [b]Space Guard 2[/b] to [b]Ultimate Space Guard[/b] (0/3000) and that contributes to Space Cannons status (2700→3100/2000→3000), next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Double_Attack"]Double Attack[/url], I'll discard the level 3 [b]Space Droid[/b] from my hand to allow the level 1 [b]Space Cannon[/b] to attack twice per turn."

"God, [b]Space Cannon[/b] is a level 1 monter,"Ben gasped.

"Yes now [b]Space Cannon[/b] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Twin-Headed_Thunder_Dragon"]Twin Headed Thunder Dragon[/url] then Ben,"Luke commanded as [b]Space Cannon[/b] depleted Ben's Life Points (Ben: 1600→1300→0 Life Points)."

"I thought I had you ages ago,"Ben replied walking away.

[i]Soon I'll catch up to you Zevern, soon[/i], Luke thought also walking away.

"Anyway, I guess im going Elliot to take my test,"Yuuat said walking away.

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Eliza sat on her chair reading in the Junk Revolutionists Headquaters, patiently waiting for something. Suddenly, Yuuat came running ino the quarters.

"Your late, once again."Eliza said annoyed.

"But I wa-"Yuuat attempted to explain.

"Enough of excuses,"Eliza interrupted,"You will be dueling the second best duelist in the Junk Revolutionists."

"The second best ?"Yuuat repeated as his mouth opened.

"Yes, the second best, his name is Callen,"Eliza replied,"Normaly we wouldn't let you, but Zevern sees potential in you."

"But Callen would be stronger than Luke,"Yuuat whinned.

"Yes, obviously, since Luke is the third best while Callen is the second."Eliza explained as she suddenly changed the second of her voice from annoyed to angry."So Luke was the one [i]you[/i] watched dueling, just go and duel Callen, hes waiting on the peak of the smallest area of Junk that is about 100 metres west from here."

"OK."Yuuat nodded running away. Just after he left three mysterious people wearing brown coats walked into the quaters after opening the door.

"I am here to join the Junk Revolutionists,"one of the Mysterious People who was recognized to be leading the three.

"Ok names,"Eliza replied bored.

"Hinta Daruth,"the leading person explained.

"Blizzard Daruth,"the Man behind Hinta answered.

"Alice Daruth,"the Women behind Blizzard nodded.

"So, you all are family ?"Eliza asked.

The three nodded. [i]They don't realize that the last name is an fake, so they have no evidence of our connections with DSSF and so we have an easily thought out excuse why we are traveling together[/i], Hinta though as they stopped nodding.

"Wait a minute,"Eliza just figured out,"You don't live in Junk City, where do you live ?"

"Northern Satelite,"Hinta replied sharply.

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Ten minutes later, Yuuat finaly climbed the junk pile up onto an flat top. Up there was an man.

"Hello, I am Callen."the Man said as shuffling his deck fast."Yuuat, you test is to lower my Life Points to 1500 or less, but Im feeling generous today, lets make it easier since you won't normaly duel me, lets make it 2000 or less."

"Ok then,"Yuuat said placing his shuffled deck into his duel disk, then pressing a button activating it. (Yuuat: 4000 Life Points)

"With my dueling skills, my monsters will swarm you."Callen replied activating his duel disk. (Callen: 4000 Life Points)

"You can go first,"Yuuat said drawing 5 cards.

"Well, thank you,"Callen thanked drawing 5 cards, he paused for a while before he continued,"I'll start it simple, I set a Monster then activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Everliving_Underworld_Cannon"]Everliving Underworld Cannon[/url]."Callen smirked as an skull creature emerged in the spell and trap card zone.

"What does that do ?"Yuuat asked.

"When a Zombie monster is Special Summoned I can inflict 800 points of damage to your Life Points,"Callen explained crossing his arms,"How unlucky for you, since Zombies are mainly about Special Summoning you will lose before anything interesting happens."

"I draw,"Yuuat said drawing an 6th card,"I Summon [b]Voldrake-Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] in Atk Mode (1700/200), next I activate [b]Dracon and the Beast[/b] Special Summoning [b]Beast of Dracon[/b] in Atk Mode (1500/1200)."

"Well, well, well, I guess you are also good at swarming, but they are quite weak,"Callen commented.

"[b]Beast of Dracon[/b] attack Callen's monster,"Yuuat commanded as his beast launched a tornado, the card appeared to be a pyramid, but it was no mach for the monster. Before Yuuat was going to tell his [b]Voldrake[/b] for a direct attack, an giant black zombie dragon with red eyes appeared."What happened ?"

"The monster you defeated was [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Pyramid_Turtle"]Pyramid Turtle[/url] (1200/1400) and when it's destroyed I can Special Summon 1 Zombie monster with 2000 or less Def from my deck and I choosen [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Zombie_Dragon"]Red Eyes Zombie Dragon[/url] (2400/2000) and with a Special Summon you take 800 points of damage,"Callen explained as the cannon launched a spirt skull at Yuuat causing him to step back in fear (Yuuat: 4000→3200 Life Points).

"I set 1 card Face Down and end my turn,"Yuuat said.

"I draw,"Callen said as his hand size became 4,"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Zombie_Master"]Zombie Master[/url], next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Zombie_World"]Zombie World[/url] making all monsters on the Field and in my hand a Zombie monster, next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Graceful_Charity"]Gracefull Charity[/url] drawing 3 then discarding 2,"Callen said doing as he said."Now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Zombie_Master"]Zombie Master[/url], take down [b]Beast of Dracon[/b] and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Zombie_Dragon"]Red Eyes Zombie Dragon[/url] attack [b]Voldrake- Dracon Knight of Justice[/b] (Yuuat: 3200→3100→2400 Life Points)(Callen: 4000→3400 Life Points)."

"You should know that [b]Beast of Dracon[/b] has an effect to inflict 600 points of damage when it's destroyed if I control a Dracon monster,"Yuuat explained."Is that all ?"

"I activate Zombie Master's effect, by sending 1 monster card from my hand, I can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Zombie Monster so I choose [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Regenerating_Mummy"]Regenerating Mummy[/url] (1800/1200)(Yuuat: 2400→1600 Life Points), plus when [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Zombie_Dragon"]Red Eyes Zombie Dragon[/url] destroyed [b]Voldrake[/b], he is Special Summoned to my side of the Field (1700/200)(Yuuat: 1600→800 Life Points), now Voldrake will attack Yuuat directly and end this."

"Nope, I activate my Face Down [b]Dracon Frontal Assualt[/b] Special Summoning [b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b] from my hand in Def Mode (1200/1600),"Yuuat explained as both monsters connected causing an explosion.

"Fine then, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Regenerating_Mummy"]Regenerating Mummy[/url] will end this,"Callen commanded as the mummy charged towards Yuuat. Yuuat shielded by crossing his arms and placing them over his head to defend himself (Yuuat: 800→0 Life Points).

Yuuat fell to his knees in defeat, hes lost two duels in a row."I failed,"

"Yes you have,"Callen frowned as he decided to walk away,"Our Leader Zevern won't be happy about this."

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It was midnight. Ben walked through several hidden paths of Junk, he felt depressed about his loss. He decided to run away. Until he heard in the distance."It has been day 1 and we will be tested tommorrow."Ben felt shocked about the sounds, he tried to follow the sound and he might find an reason for it. Suddenly, he fell alerting the people hidden behind a hut, they turned to him."So someone has been watching us, what's your name ?"

"B-Ben,"Ben replied in fear at the three before screeming,"AHHHH !!!"

"No one will hear you,"Hinta said,"Since you were luckily close, the aura surrounding us all prevents us from being seen or heard as long as it surrounds use, I have the powers to open and close the aura."

"Then, I'll have to beat you in a duel."Ben immediatly activated his duel disk. (Ben: 4000 Life Points)

"I won't waste my time with someone weak like you, Blizzard will handle you,"Hinta insulted as he clicked his fingers automaticly activating Blizzard's duel disk (Blizzard: 4000 Life Points)."The winner will give the loser a punishment."

"Yes,"Blizzard nodded as his eyes turned red,"And I've survived enough Chaos Duels to be able to give you a suitable punishment,"

"I'll not follow the punishment then,"Ben replied still smiling.

"The punishment controls you to do it, no matter what,"Blizzard explained as Ben frowned, they both drew 5 cards and started the duel.

END OF CHAPTER

[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

After the dissappearence of Ben, Luke attempts to search for his brother. Luke quickly finds them and challenges Hinta to a "Chaos Duel", but Hinta easily finds Luke's weakness for the first time and makes Luke struggle against Hinta. Could Luke actualy win ? If he doesn't what will his punishment be ? Meanwhile, Yuuat remembers about his friend from his past.

Chapter Five: the Chaos Duel
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Space Core (Earth)
Lvl 1
[Machine/Effect]
If this card is destroyed by a card effect Special Summon "Space Cannon","Space Wing" and "Space Guard" to the Field.
(0/0)

Space Cannon (Earth)
Lvl 1
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Core". Increase this Atk equal to the Atk of any monster with "Space Wing" in their name and Increase this cards Def equal to the Def of any monster with "Space Guard" in their name. During your Standby Phase, Increase the Atk of this card by 1000. As long as this card is on the Field, the only monsters you can control is "Space Wing", "Space Wing 2", "Ultimate Space Wing", "Space Guard", "Space Guard 2" and "Ultimate Space Guard".
(0/0)

Space Wing (Earth)
Lvl 1
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Core". This card must remain in Atk Mode. As long as "Space Cannon" is on the Field, this card cannot be an attack target. During your Standby Phase, you can trbute this card to Special Summon "Space Wing 2" to your side of the Field in Atk Mode.
(300/0)

Space Wing 2 (Earth)
Lvl 3
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Wing". This card must remain in Atk Mode. As long as "Space Cannon" is on the Field, this card cannot be an attack target. During your Standby Phase, you can trbute this card to Special Summon "Ultimate Space Wing" to your side of the Field in Atk Mode.
(700/0)

Ultimate Space Wing (Earth)
Lvl 5
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Wing 2". This card must remain in Atk Mode. As long as "Space Cannon" is on the Field, this card cannot be an attack target.
(1100/0)

Space Guard (Earth)
Lvl 1
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Core". This card must remain in Def Mode. If this card is destroyed, destroy all cards on your side of the Field. During your Standby Phase, you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Space Guard 2".
(0/1000)

Space Guard 2 (Earth)
Lvl 3
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Guard". This card must remain in Def Mode. When this card is Special Summoned it gains 3 Space Counters. By removed a Space counter you can prevent a Space Monster from being destroyed by battle or card effects. If this card is destroyed, destroy all cards on your side of the Field. During your Standby Phase, you can tribute this card to Special Summon "Ultimate Space Guard".
(0/2000)

Ultimate Space Guard (Earth)
Lvl 5
[Machine/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by the effect of "Space Guard 2". This card must remain in Def Mode. When this card is Special Summoned it gains 3 Space Counters. By removed a Space counter you can prevent a Space Monster from being destroyed by battle or card effects. If this card is destroyed, destroy all cards on your side of the Field.

Space Droid (Earth)
Lvl 3
[Machine/Effect]
If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon this card to the Field in Atk Mode.
(1100/1000)
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[Mysterious Member]

Why hasn't anyone commented since I made chapter 3 and 4 ?

[Mysterious Member]

Well, I guess I'll post chapter 5.

[spoiler=Chapter 5: the Chaos Duel]

It was a brand new day, the sun shined high in the sky. Lightening all of Neo Domino City.

Inside the DSSF headquaters, things have changed slightly. Most changes were made in the 6th floor. Insted of being an room with two desks, there was one large desk shaped like an regular octogen. The screen still was on its regular area, but without an computer nearby it. There was still an hidden door, but P had revealed himself to seven trusted people. DSSF has changed, P has changed.

P had sat on the chair nearest to the computer screen. Alth, sat on P's left, while John and Rupert sat on P's right. Because of Frank's apparently sucess, he was trusted to join them. He sat opposite P. The other chairs had no one sitting on them."

"Now, it's time for a meeting,"P calmly introduced,"We shall all have meetings, you all are my most trusted. We shall all eliminate the Junk Revolutionists together, your ranks do not matter here, we are all equal. Now, does anyone have questions ?"

Rupert raised his hand, as P nodded for Rupert to ask,"Who are the missing people ?"

"Hinta, Blizzard and Alice,"P sharply answered, it was so quick it was immediatly after Rupert finished. After five minutes of waiting silently, P continued,"Day 1 has passed for our three sent to spy on the Junk Revolutionists, they have suceeded in challenging someone to an Chaos Duel."

"What's that ?"Frank asked.

"When you all gained my trust, I gave you some supernatural power to create darkness that forms around you and any person you challenge to a duel,"P answered,"It is called a Chaos Duel, the loser receives an punishment from the winner,"

"Interesting,"Frank replied stroking his chin.

"On topic, they have planned to use this person as an bait to lure someone much more powerful, that's all we know."P finished.

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In the Junk Revolutionists quaters, Yuuat walked up the stairs into Zevern's office. Once he entered, he looked at the room amazed by how more advanced the room looked. For one, it was larger than Yuuat's hut. It had a red rug, an desk with an laptop on it while two chairs sat behind and infront of it. Zevern was found on one of the seats, while he pointed at the remaining chair indicating Yuuat should sit here.

"Well, I am disspointed Yuuat,"Zevern signed,"You failed, I guess I made it far too hard for you."

Yuuat remained slient. He didn't want to argue, because that would make things worse.

"Do you remember your friend that dissappeared last year ?"Zevern asked as Yuuat shook his head,"He was 14 when he took the test, he also failed."After Zevern said that, silent erupted through the room, Zevern continued."I should tell you, he didn't dissappear, he was taken away because he was captured by DSSF."

"What was his name ?"Yuuat wondered.

"Oliver,"Zevern answered as Yuuat's mind opened, he sort of had an picture in his head, but it was mainly blank."Do you remember ?"Zevern asked as Yuuat heard it in his mind repeating and repeating until he had an image of a flashback.

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[i]Two years ago, Yuuat, Elliot and some Mysterious Boy stood on the yard. They heard an raid from Officers holding guns behind victims, walking them in an random grassy area, forcing them to dig. The three ran away, hidden under an alleyway. The sound of gunshots erupted across Junk City, going closer and closer to them. it was total chaos.

"It's comming closer,"the Mysterious Boy wispeared.

"Agreed Oliver,"Elliot nodded.

"It's got an idea !"Yuuat shouted as the others placed their hands over Yuuat's mouth. Yuuat then wispeared,"Let's pass the time by selecting an random card in our decks and putting them in the centre between use. Highest Atk wins."

"That is boring,"Elliot insulted,"But death is worse, so OK."

"Well, if you two want to I will,"Oliver surcombed to them.

"OK,"Yuuat said as he slide a card out of his deck and placed it in the middle,"[b]Hath-Dracon Soldier[/b] (1200/1600)."

"Lets see,"Elliot closed his eyes and selected the top card from his deck,"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] (1400/1300), yes I am winning,"

"I've selected [b]Deck Lord Kuria[/b] (1400/0), well looks like an draw between me and Elliot,"Oliver frowned as the gunshots slienced as they all walked out to see no Officers.[/i]

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"I finaly remember Oliver,"Yuuat happily cheered.

"We don't know where hes imprisoned,"Zevern reminded Yuuat,"You can travel to Rusty Town, there you will meet someone called Zyne Rusty, he saved the town from being captured by DSSF, they are good people that hate DSSF,"

"So, they know where Oliver is ?"Yuuat asked.

"Possibly,"Zevern said,"They have gained secrets from DSSF and there is rumored to be a prison nearby there."

"Seems good enough, im going,"Yuuat walked away.

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Outside, the three people stood waiting for their Opponents. Eventually, came two of them.

"We are here to challenge you,"the First one said as they both were identified to wear a brown cloak and white mask,"I am Irve of the Mask Brothers."

"I am Gener of the Mask Brothers,"the other one said,"We are here to challenge Blizzard and Alice Daruth to an Tag Team Duel !"

"What about me,"Hinta questioned.

"You can pick anyone to duel,"Irve answered.

"Hmmm, so much,"Hinta said as he pointed at someone who entered,"That guy,"

"That is Luke Makizu,"Gener explained as Luke walked up to him,"the Third Best, you are destined to fail, but I cannot come amonst you."

"Im ready,"Luke said walking away, he signaled for Hinta to follow him.

"Heres the rules, when you challenge the Mask Brothers, we prefere to have our life points split insted of joined,"they explained in a unison as they activated their duel disks. (Irve: 4000 Life Points)(Gener: 4000 Life Points)

"How unfair in my opinion but it will have to do,"Blizzard signed activating his duel disk. (Blizzard: 4000 Life Points)

"Yeah OK,"Alice said activating her duel disk. (Alice: 4000 Life Points)

"The order of turns will be Blizzard, Gener, Alice and finaly me,"Irve explained proudly.

"Ok then, I'll make it simple,"Blizzard said drawing, he then smirked,"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Lizard"]Blizzard Lizard[/url] in Def Mode (600/1800), next I think I'll set 2 cards Face Down and end,"

"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mad_Sword_Beast"]Mad Sword Beast[/url] in Atk Mode (1400/1200), I will set 2 cards Face Down and end my turn,"Gener said as an angry Dinosaur weilding an massive horn leaped into the Field.

"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url] in Atk Mode (1500/1600), that's all for me."Alice said as an female warrior appeared in the light.

"I think I'll Summon my favourite monster, come forth [b]Ivy Knight[/b] in Atk Mode (1500/1400),"Irve smirked an soldier wielding an ivy sword and ivy armor emerged onto the Field,"He has an dangerous effect, Once Per Turn I can select I monster on the Field and give it an Ivy Counter ,"Irve said pointing at [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url], ivy lunged out of the ground and tangled her."Next I activate the Field Spell [b]Ivy Fields[/b], this card puts Ivy counters on all monsters on my Opponent's side of the Field,"

"That means that Amazoness Swords Women has two Ivy Counters while Blizzard Lizzard has one,"Gener explained as Blizzard shook his head.

"I chain with [b]Blizzard Shot[/b], I can send 1 "Blizzard" monster from my hand to the Graveyard to negate the activation of an Spell and destroy it,"Blizzard smirked and Irve frowned.

"Nope, I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Trap_Jammer"]Trap Jammer[/url], I don't have to explain, your Traps negated and destroyed,"Gener also chained.

"Thanks bro, you saved my [b]Ivy Field[/b],"Irve complimented.

"Well, it's an good card and it means the world to you, well you are the fifth best and im now the sixth best, I needed to not be dead weight,"Gener replied.

"Your never dead weight, if it wasn't for you, I would never be here,"Irve once again complimented.

"The duel,"Blizzard reminded them,"Irve, it's still your turn,"

"Oh yes, I set a card and end,"Irve finished.

Just when Blizzard drew, the ivy slashed through him (Blizzard: 4000→3700 Life Points),"What happened."

"[b]Ivy Knights[/b] effect, I can inflict 300 points of damage to you for every Ivy Counter on your monsters during your Draw Phase."Irve smiled.

"OK, is there anything else I should know about Ivy Counters ?"Blizzard asked.

"As long as [b]Ivy Field[/b] is on the Field all monsters with Ivy Counters effects are negated,"Irve smirked.

"Just great,"Blizzard said sarcastic as he searched through his hand,"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Dragon"]Blizzard Dragon[/url] in Atk Mode (1800/1000), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Dragon"]Blizzard Dragon[/url], attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mad_Sword_Beast"]Mad Sword Beast[/url],"

"I activate my Face Down, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_Cylinder"]Magic Cylinder[/url] (Blizzard: 3700→1900 Life Points), got anything else to do ?"Gener said as [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Dragon"]Blizzard Dragon[/url] shot an ice ball through one hole and it came back and hit Blizzard.

"Nope,"Blizzard frowned.

"Ok, I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sabersaurus"]Sabersaurus[/url] in Atk Mode (1900/500) now Sabersaurus attack Blizzard Dragon (Blizzard: 1900→1800)."Gener then finished as Blizzard's dragon turned into multicoloured pixels,"I end my turn,"

Alice drew as the ivy slashed her just as she expected (Alice: 4000→3400 Life Points),"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paldin[/url] in Atk Mode (1700/300) and she gains 100 Atk for every Amazoness on the Field (1700→1900/300), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paladin[/url] attack [b]Ivy Knight[/b] (Irve: 4000→3600 Life Points), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url] direct attack,"Alice commanded as Irve revealed his Face Down.

"[b]Ivy Hole[/b],"Irve said as [b]Ivy Knight[/b] leaped out the hole and both monsters exploded,"And without [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url], your [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paladin[/url] loses it's boost (1900→1800/300),"

"I end my turn,"Alice frowned.

"I Summon [b]Ivy Soldier[/b] in Atk Mode (1400/1500), now as you know Ivy Field puts an Ivy Counter on all of your monsters making [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paladin[/url] have one (1800→1700→1200/300→0) and Blizzard Lizard have two (600→0/1800→800),"Irve explained as the ivy weakened the monsters.

"Why are our monsters weakening ?"Alice asked.

"As long as Ivy Soldier is on the Field all monsters with Ivy Counters lose 500 Atk for each Ivy Counter on them,"Irve explained once again,"Ivy Soldier can also once per turn place an Ivy Counter on a monster and I choose [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paladin[/url] (1200→700/0), now [b]Ivy Soldier[/b] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Paladin"]Amazoness Paladin[/url] (Alice: 3400→2700 Life Points),"

"This is too hard,"Alice said as she fell onto her knees.

"I end my turn, this is easier than I thouht ha."Irve laughed.

"I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Polymerization"]Polymerization[/url] fusing two [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Dragon"]Blizzard Dragons[/url] in my hand to Fusion Summon [b]Twin Headed Blizzard Dragon[/b] in Atk Mode (2400/600), next I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Warrior"]Blizzard Warrior[/url] in Atk Mode (1400/400),"Blizzard smirked as he now had three monsters on his Field."Next I activate [b]Twin Headed Blizzard Dragon's[/b] effect I can select 2 monsters on the field and Decrease their attack by 1000 so I choose Sabersaurus (1900→900/500) and Mad Sword Beast (1400→400/1200), now Twin Headed Blizzard Dragon attack Sabersaurus (Gener: 4000→2500 Life Points) next [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blizzard_Warrior"]Blizzard Warrior[/url] will attack Mad Sword Beast (Gener: 2500→1500 Life Points), that's all for me,"

"Fine, I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cost_Down"]Cost Down[/url] I can discard 1 card in my hand to Decrease the level of all monsters in my hand by 2, next I'll be able to Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Frostosaurus"]Frostosaurus[/url] in Atk Mode (2600/1700), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Frostosaurus"]Frostosaurus[/url] attack Blizzard Warrior (Blizzard: 1800→600 Life Points), I end my turn,"

"I draw,"Alice said as she drew,"I activate [b]Dark Curse[/b], by paying 2000 Life Points I can destroy all cards on my Opponent's side of the Field and inflict 100 points of damage for each card destroyed (Alice: 2700→700 Life Points)(Irve: 3600→3400 Life Points)(Gener: 1500→1400 Life Points),"Alice explained as an dark globe appeared on the Field destroying everything in it's path,"Next I Summon a second [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url] to the Field in Atk mode (1500/1600), now [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Amazoness_Swords_Woman"]Amazoness Swords Women[/url] attack Gener directly."

The female warrior charged at Gener, the sword hit his head. Blood slashed out of his mouth as he fell to the ground (Gener: 1400→0 Life Points).

"Acording to the rules, when a duelist in a Tag Team Duels life points hit zero then the team loses,"Blizzard said.

"What did you do to my brother,"Irve said as he observed him and discovered him dead. As soon as he finshed, everything except him, Blizzard and Alice froze. Darkness eventually surrounded them.

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"I'll handle him,"Alice said activating her duel disk once again. Her eyes turned from blue to red to blue rapidly. (Alice: 4000 Life Points)

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HIM !"Irve shouted as he also activated his duel disk (Irve: 4000 Life Points),"I'll avenge him."

"You will lose and plunge into your Grave,"Blizzard taunted him.

"Remember Blizzard, I get to choose his punishment not you,"Alice reminded him.

"Punishment,"Irve gulped.

"Yes, now lets start the duel,"Alice said drawing 5 cards.

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Both Luke and Hinta stopped in an crowded location. It was an great area, considering the vast crowd that surrounded them. There wasn't much compared to the crowds in other areas, but there was a lot compared to the small population in Junk City. Elliot was one of the people in the crowd, he felt excited to see how it will end.

"LETS DUEL !"both duelists shouted drawing the 5 cards. Luke saw a dark portal above his head when it sucked him in. Inside, was complete darkness. He looked around only to find Hinta.

"What is going on ?"Luke asked.

"We will start an Chaos Duel,"Hinta explained as his eyes changed to red then to blue rapidly,"The winner gives the loser a punishment of their choice, don't worry about the people watching you, they can see the duel and what we play. The only thing they don't know is what we are saying, infact, our bodies will be having an chat but an friendly chat."

"OK, I don't understand what your talking about but lets continue, you will go first,"Luke replied.

"I'll start things off simple and easy to follow,"Hinta said as he selected two cards from his hand placed them on the duel disk,"I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] in Atk Mode (1600/600) and I'll set a card Facedown and end,"

[i]This strategy seems like I've heard of it before, like from my past[/i], Luke thought drawing a card,"I Summon [b]Space Core[/b] in Defence Mode (0/0) and I'll set three cards Face Down, I end my turn."

"How about a second [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] (1600/600) to make things fun,"Hinta smiled as another reaper appeared from the shadows,"Next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Stop_Defense"]Stop Defence[/url] switching [b]Space Core[/b] to Attack Mode, Emissary of the Afterlife attack [b]Space Core[/b],"

"I activate my Face Down [b]Space Barrier[/b], by tributing [b]Space Core[/b] I can negate the attack,"Luke chained as an barrier formed around him.

"I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Trap_Stun"]Trap Stun[/url], don't think you can chain that since all other trap cards effects are negated,"Hinta explained as the reaper continued it's attack.

Luke shook his head as he activated his next Face Down,"Since my Trap will be useless so I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emergency_Provisions"]Emergancy Provisions[/url] destroying my two Face Downs,"Luke explained as his [b]Space Barrier[/b] and his revealed [b]Space Missle[/b] was turned into biscuits that he ate (Luke: 4000→6000→4400 Life Points).

"Don't forget about my second [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] will attack you directly,"Hinta ordered as the reaper hit Luke (Luke: 4400→2800 Life Points), blood dropped from Luke's right arm onto the floor.

"What is this ? How can I feel pain ?"Luke asked covering his scar, he felt a slight pain from touching it.

"An Chaos Duel is like an Shadow Duel in getting hurt, but the amount of pain varies from the power of the card, how powerful the duelist is and even then the duelist can create an small amount of pain,"Hinta explain.

"I honistly feel suprised, not only have you prevented me from Summoning my signature monster you have also inflicted alot of damage to me, but then again have been in worse conditions."Luke said.

"Really ?"Hinta replied he felt amazed about that fact."I end my turn,"

"I draw,"Luke shouted as he drew, he looked at the card he drew and frowned,"Oh well I Summon [b]Space Droid[/b] in Def Mode (1100/1100), I end,"

Hinta drew and stared at his hand for a few minutes until he decided a strategy,"I will set a card and Summon a third [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] in Atk Mode (1600/600), next I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Sarcophagus"]Gold Sarcophagus[/url] removing a card in my Deck from play and soon it will be added to my hand, how my first [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] will attack [b]Space Droid[/b],"

"When Space Droid is destroyed by battle, I can Special Summon it back to the Field in Atk Position (1100/1100)."Luke said placing the card back on his Field.

"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] number 2 and 3 will attack it (Luke: 2800→2300→1800 Life Points), now I end my turn,"

"I will tribute [b]Space Droid[/b] to Summon [b]Mega Space Droid[/b] (2600/1000), now [b]Mega Space Droid[/b] will attack an Emissary of the Afterlife (Hinta: 4000→3000 Life Points),"

"Now, when Emissary of the Afterlife is destroy we can both add 1 level 3 or lower normal monster from our deck to our hands,"Hinta explained.

"I don't have any,"Luke replied quickly.

"Im possibly the only person in the Satelite that does,"Hinta lied selecting a card, he showed it at Luke.

"The [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Left_Arm_of_the_Forbidden_One"]Left Arm of the Forbidden One[/url],"Luke stared at the card, he felt afraid of it.

"An exodia deck is common, now do you end ?"Hinta asked Luke as he nodded.

"It's the first standby phase since [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Sarcophagus"]Gold Sarcophagus[/url] was activated I should say, so next I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Reckless_Greed"]Reckless Greed[/url] I get to draw 2 cards and skip my next two draw phases,"Hinta said, once he drew the cards, he smiled greatly.

[i]It must have been his second piece of Exodia[/i], Luke thought, [i]it's over for me, I have to win, but he will gain all five now[/i]

"Now, I switch my [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissary of the Afterlife[/url] to Def Mode, I can tell your not feeling ready to destroy my monsters, but I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_Trader"]Card Trader[/url], but I'll have to wait until my Standby Phase for that so I end,"

Luke just realized the pressure when he drew, [i]I could switch [b]Mega Space Droid [/b]to Def Mode, but he could on his next turn Summon Exodia the Forbidden One and the three can wipe my Life Points to zero, but if I will attack, he could easily retrieve Exodia[/i]

"So, what's it going to be ?"Hinta asked.

"I end,"Luke lowered his head as he felt and assualt from Hinta.

"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Sarcophagus"]Gold Sarcophagus[/url] will allow me to add the card from my hand, but it's obvious that it's [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exodia_the_Forbidden_One"]Exodia the Forbidden One[/url], next I will order both of my Emissary of the Afterlife to attack [b]Mega Space Droid[/b] (Hinta: 3000→2000→1000 Life Points),"Hinta explained as he selected the two cards in his deck and showed it to Luke,"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Right_Leg_of_the_Forbidden_One"]Left Leg of the Forbidden One[/url] and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Right_Arm_of_the_Forbidden_One"]Right Arm of the Forbidden One[/url]."

Lukes eyes widened, he knew it was over. Even an amature duelist would of know that he gained three pieces from the three [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Emissary_of_the_Afterlife"]Emissaries[/url], one from [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Reckless_Greed"]Reckless Greed[/url] by Hinta's reaction and the final from [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Sarcophagus"]Gold Sarcophagus[/url].

"For my Normal Summon, I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exodia_the_Forbidden_One"]Exodia the Forbidden One[/url] in Atk Position (1000/1000),"Hinta then showed his hand that contained the four other pieces and a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sangan"]Sangan[/url].

"I feel so suprised,"Luke said sarcasticly.

"EXODIA OBLIVARATE !!!"Hinta shouted as the pieces in his hand joined to the body forming exodia trapped in chains. From the head it developed an beam and fired it at Luke, destroying [b]Mega Space Droid[/b] in it's path like it was worthless. The beam it Luke and Luke screamed in agony (Luke: 1800→0). Eventually the beam dissappeared along with the holograms, Hinta walked towards Luke and grabbed him up on his feet.

"Why are you helping me ?"Luke asked.

"Your punishment, purhaps you are of use to me,"Hinta explained wispearing the punishment.

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The shadows faded, Luke and Hinta "souls" were back in Junk City. After the duel, the crowd suddenly lost the memory from Hinta's deck, all they knew was that it was better than Luke's.

END OF CHAPTER

[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Yuuat starts his journey on finding Oliver, but ends up ambushed by a gang of three people. Coincidentaly, Elliot was secretly following with Zevern and they were able to challenge them to an Teamed Turbo Duel using the rules from the WRGP that happened 20 years ago. Will they manage to win and make it to Rusty Town and locate the prison ?

Chapter Six: Turbo Team Takeover Part One
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I am finished, but I'll show the Custom Cards later.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Great Chapter. My only concern is that Blizzard's Life Points should be 600 when Frostosaurus attacked Blizzard Warrior, but everyone makes even the easiest of mistakes. You have set out an good journey for Yuuat and some quite good duels. Can't wait for Chapter 6.

[Mysterious Member]

Thanks, I'll try and sort out the Life Points OK. Sorry for being off for a few days, I'm working on chapter 6. I'm about done, except I've got to proofread it and add Wikia links to some of the cards.

To spoil some of the chapter, theres 5 new characters (excluding 1 meantioned). Three of the new characters are in a gang. One of them is leading the three, but is the Second in Command, the final new character is an Inn Keeper (Yes, the town is so old it has an Inn).

There are also two new places. Stolepoh, what to you readers would think would make no sense of a name. However, this is an anagram to show the real name, as an clue it is a two letter word that Stol is in the first, while Epoh is in the second. I would say it is quite easy since I've given a lot of clues about it. The second place is Grassmere Mountain, what is the area that the gang hides around and is coincidental is the Mountain blocks of Junk City and Stolepoh from the rest of Satelite (since it basicly surrounds them).

The first part of the Turbo Duel involves the Inn Keeper vs a Gang Member. I've basicly explained most of the chapter except the how the duel goes and what is most significant. You know who Cakey asked how Sector Security was stopped, well it will explain that and the gang is involved in it.

Well, chapter 6 should be ready in about a few days at minimum.

[Mysterious Member]

Chapter 6 is up and running.

[spoiler=Chapter 6: Turbo Team Takeover Part One]
It was a new day. Yuuat walked out of his hut, he stared at the people. The innocent people, that were seen slaves to the Officers that forced them to dig down into the ground of Junk City. Yuuat knew he had to have his revenge on the DSSF, for doing this all his life. Yuuat walked into the road out of Junk City into the surrounding road, he held the map that Zevern gave to him last night. Only to have it blown by the wind high up the sky. Yuuat didn't even try to go after it. If he did, that would waste time. Insted he turned right and walked around the road surrounding Junk City, until he got to the Northern part of it, he knew that he would have to go north if he was going to get to Rusty Town. Since Junk City was Southern Satelite and Rusty Town was near to the centre.

After two hours of walking, bored out of his head. Yuuat, finally found an settlement. It was named Stolepoh, Yuuat knew it was an odd name, but he had to have some rest. Stoleloh was an by far richer settlement than Junk City. However, it was not populated and rich enough to be worthy of being an Village. Stolepoh was located on a hill, infact, it was evenly landed compared to the other areas around it. Possible, Junk City was just somehow deep underground and Stolepoh was just over sea level. Yuuat didn't know.

Stolepoh, had mainly one story houses. But, in the distance, was seen an three story Manor and an Inn. Yuuat decided to walk towards the Inn. He stared around, the closer he got towards the Inn, he more homeless people were found in the streets begging for food. That alerted Yuuat, that he forgot to bring food.

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Inside, was an Man behind an wooden desk. He wore an orange shirt, orange hat, grey trousers and black shoes. His had a short white hair and a long white beard. He wore small glasses that barely fits his head. His attention turned quickly to Yuuat.

"Welcome to Stolepoh Inn,"the Inn Keeper welcomed bored.

"Do you know where Rusty Town is located ?"Yuuat asked, he was unaware of the Inn Keeper's reaction.

"How unlucky,"He smiled,"You have to go up Grassmere Mountain first, since it's so wide it blocks the extreme South of Satelite to the rest of Satelite."

"So, what's the problem with the Grassmere Mountains ?"Yuuat once again asked.

"Really, you don't know,"the Inn Keeper chuckled.

"What's so funny ?"Yuuat asked confused by his laughter.

"Grassmere Mountains is an half an hour walk North West from Stolepoh, there's an definite chance of you encountering Team Brutality,"He explained as his laughed died out.

"Im from Junk City, who is Team Brutality ?"Yuuat asked.

"They are an team of Turbo Duelists, have about five members, but they only duel with three of chorse and have two in reserve."the Inn Kepper explained continuing,"They have attacked Stolepoh for since the first WRGP ended, this Inn is the only thing we have left, if that's gone we have nothing else to lose."

"Seems like criminals,"Yuuat guessed.

"Well, fifteen years ago, they managed to be sent to the Facility."He continued,"They escaped without effort and and wiped all the Sector Security around there brutaly killing them."

"So they were the cause for Sector Security to be stopped and DSSF to form ?"Yuuat asked.

"Yes,"the Inn Keeper nodded."And for some reason, the DSSF isn't wasting their time capturing Team Brutality, insted, they are wasting time discovering deeper parts of Junk City."

"Could you explain more about Grassmere Mountain ?"Yuuat pleaded.

"The only way past it is to climb to the top, because the sides are far too steep. Once you get to the peak of the Mountain, walk down the other side towards the other parts of Satelite and then there will be Rusty Town if you follow the signs."

"Also, my name is Yuuat, what's your ?"Yuuat asked politely.

"Johnathan,"the Inn Keeper replied changing the subject."You might wonder why we have an Inn insted of an Hotel. That is because it is so old that Team Brutality finds it worthless, now I will ride towards Grassmere once my shift is over and I will check up and help you if your in danger."

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Yuuat continued his journey on foot. He reached an road that looked like an snake road surrounded by tones of bushes. Yuuat signed but walked along the pathway, he felt bored that he hasn't even made it to the Mountain and he feet were stinging. Out of nowhere, the sound of Duel Runners echoed around him and just then four Duel Runner leaped out of the bushes and surrounded Yuuat making it impossible for him to escape.

"We are Team Brutality,"one of them introduced him and his companions. Yuuat knew that he was possibly the leader out of them, but yet again, since theres only four out of the five known then he could be second in command."We have made our way out of the dust many times, soon we will enter the WRGP, soon we will be noticed enough to get out of the s*** Satelite into the magnificant Domino City."

"I am here to get to Rusty Town, not to duel you."Yuuat replied standing his ground.

"Obviously, since you are here alone, only an fool will challenge all four of us at the same time."the Leading man stated as he noticed infront of him three Duel Runners,"Why do we never get to crush a duellist."

Yuuat turned around to find Zevern, Elliot and Johnathan arriving in their Duel Runners.

"If your going to take town Yuuat, your going to have to beat all of us,"Elliot defended Yuuat walking infront of him."We are even mached, but our friendship is still superior compared to all of you.

"Hes got a point,"one of the Compainions admitted.

"Shut up Dominic !"the Leading man shouted coughing slightly.

"Wait a minute, isn't the old man Zevern,"Dominic easily recognized as the Leading Man observed him nodding.

"Yes, how about an Teamed Turbo Duel, it's like the rules of the WRGP, but ignore the rules about being immediately being knocked out if your Duel Runner crashes,"the Leading man explained as he glared at Zevern,"Your not allowed to participate and neither shall I."

"Why ?"Zevern asked cocky,"Too afraid that I could easily beat you and your three fluncky's by myself,"

"No, to make things fair now lets start it,"the Leading man said as he grabbed Zevern off his Duel Runner and placed him in his while Yuuat jumped on Zevern's.

"LETS START THIS !!!"everyone shouted as the Duel Runners activated autopilot.

And so the Teamed Turbo Duel began, the light energy activate surrounding them enlightening the slight darkness. In the matter of minutes, the group manged to pass the serpent road and get up the Grassmere Mountain. It was fairly steep, but somehow the Duel Runners manged to gravitate up the Mountains.

"Now, each Team will select an Duellist to start things off,"the Leading man explained nodding at Dominic indicating it's his turn (Dominic: 4000 Life Points).

"How about you Johnathan,"Yuuat decided as Johnathan blitz from behind Yuuat, Elliot, the Leading man and the two unknown Duellists up in-line with Dominic (Johnathan: 4000 Life Points).

"Activate [b]Teamed Speed World[/b],"Dominic stated as the named Speed World slid out his deck and was placed in the Field Card Zone. The Speed World activated the Duel Runners making them move in a quicker motion and it make the surrounding darkness light up, showing them a path to go."[b]Teamed Speed World[/b] has the same effect as Speed World 1, but with an additional effect."Dominic explained as an card slid out of his deck. Dominic picked it up and placed it underneath [b]Teamed Speed World[/b]."You see I can equip an Teamed Speed Spell to it and I chosen [b]Team Speed Spell-Berserk Brutality[/b] , you see I can remove 1 Speed Counter put an Brutality counter on a monster and as long as this card is on the Field, monsters with Brutality Counters Atk points Increase the by 500 for until it is sent to the Graveyard."

"That seems deadly,"Zevern commented.

"LETS DUEL !!!"they both shouted drawing 5 cards.

"I'll go first,"Dominic smirked staring at his hand."To make things simple, I'll Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mother_Grizzly"]Mother Grizzly[/url] in Atk Position (1400/1000), next I think I'll set 4 cards Face Down and end."

"Impressive,"Yuuat complimented.

"That's not helping,"Johnathan complained drawing his 6th card (Johnathan SPC: 1)(Dominic SPC: 1). He scanned through his hand and slammed a card on his duel disk."I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mecha-Dog_Marron"]Mecha-Dog Marron[/url] in Def Position (1000/1000), I'll finish with 2 cards Face Down."

"YOU CAN DO IT JOHNATHAN !!!"Yuuat cheered raising his hands, causing his Duel Runner to tilt slightly on the left. Yuuat then realized so he turned right slightly to gain control over his Duel Runner."

"It's easy what your doing,"Dominic commented."One of you Face Downs is going to destroy your monster or all monster, the second Face Down is like something to protect yourself just incase it fails."

"Hmm, maybes,"Johnathan said confidently.

(Dominic SPC: 2)(Johnathan SPC: 2)"I Summon [b]Brutality Ox[/b] in Attack Position (1500/750),"Dominic placed the card neatly onto his Duel Disk, an Oxe wearing dark clothing and wielding an axe appeared from behind Dominic leaping in front of him.

"Too bad your [b]Brutality Ox[/b] is going to die, I activate my Face Down [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Torrential_Tribute"]Torrential Tribute[/url] destroying all monster on the Field,"Johnathan grinned as an blind of light engulfed the entire Field. In several minutes the light vanished revealing only Brutality Ox to have survived (1500→1600/750)(Dominic: 4000→3000 Life Points)(Dominic: SPC 1),"But how did your monster survive ?"

"[b]Brutality Ox[/b] cannot be destroyed by trap cards and when a trap card is activated his Atk Increases by 100,"Dominic explained."Now I will remove an Speed Spell to put an Brutality Counter on Brutality Ox (1600→2100/750)(Dominic: SPC 0) , now Brutality Ox attack Johnathan directly."

"I chain with [b]Dog Marron's Protection[/b], I can send two cards from my hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon Mecha-Dog Marron from my Graveyard to the the Field in Defence Position (1000/1000),"Johnathan pressed a button as his robotic dog returned to the Field crouching down as Brutality Ox became stronger (2100→2200/750).

"I also will activate the first of my Face Down cards, [b]Brutality Force[/b],"Dominic revealed as [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mecha-Dog_Marron"]Mecha-Dog Marron[/url] was pushed by an strong amount of wind Attack Position (1000/1000) while [b]Brutality Ox[/b] once again became more powerful (2200→2300/750), until the attack connected and both monsters exploded (Johnathan: 4000→2700→1700 Life Points)(Dominic: 3000→2000 Life Points)(Johnathan: SPC 0)."Brutality Force switches an Defence Position monster to Attack Position if you wonder what's going on,"

"Do you end your turn,"Johnathan asked.

"Not yet, I activate my second Face Down [b]Brutality Heal[/b], this card Increases my life points by how much my Opponent was inflicted,"Dominic explained as an green aura surrounded him, healing him (Dominic: 2000→4300 Life Points)(2300→2400/750)."Now I end,"

Johnathan drew as he stared at the Field (Johnathan: SPC 1)(Dominic: SPC 1), he felt glad that [b]Brutality Ox[/b] weakened by the amount it gained from the trap cards (2400→2000), but the threat still stood."I set a Monster and set a card."

"Is that all ?"Dominic asked as Johnathan nodded.

"Great, I draw."Dominic said drawing the card he smirked (Dominic: SPC 2)(Johnathan: SPC 2),"Sadly, Brutality Monsters have an max amount of Brutality Counter put on them, Brutality Ox has an max of 1 so you won't be majorly inflicted,"I Summon [b]Brutality Hound[/b] in Atk Position (600/300),"Dominic said as an black hound leaped from the ground with an fierce growl."[b]Brutality Hound[/b] has an maximum of 2 Brutality Counters allowed so how about I remove two Speed Counters (600→1600/300)(Dominic: SPC 0)."Now I also activate my third Face Down [b]Brutality Search[/b] flipping up your monster into Face Up Defence Position,"

"OK,"Johnathan said as it was revealed to be [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Skull_Dog_Marron"]Skull Dog Marron[/url] (1350/2000), but Brutality Ox grew more powerful (2000→2100/750) and sliced through the skull dog
breaking it into tones of pieces

"Now Brutality Hound attack Johnathan directly !"Dominic ordered as the hound leaped onto Johnathan clawing him (Johnathan: 1700→100 Life Points)(Johnathan: SPC 1)."How Brutality Hound's effect forces you to send 1 card from the Top of you Deck to the Graveyard for every 500 points of damage you took, so that's 3."Dominic smirked as Johnathan sent the cards as ordered to the Graveyard and he then placed them back into his Deck and shuffled it."HEY !!!"

"The three cards I sent to my Graveyard were luckily [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dog_Marron"]Outstanding Dog Marron[/url] and when they are sent the the Graveyard they go to my Deck and are shuffled, next exhibit is my Face Down [b]Dog Marron Draw[/b], I get to draw 1 card for ever Dog Marron cards sent from my Deck to my hand,"Johnathan explained drawing three cards, he didn't care about [b]Brutality Ox's[/b] power boost since it has already attacked (2100→2200→2000/750)

"Whatever, you've still got one turn left to live, make it last,"Dominic taunted Johnathan smiling.

"I hate to say it, but Dominic is right,"Elliot agreed."Plus, I know the Dog Marron archtype as much as Dominic, there isn't anything he can do to comeback that, none of the monsters can take down Brutality Ox in terms of power and there isn't any Spells and Traps known, except the recently known made ones, but Industrial Illusions can't have made that much,"

"How could you say that !"Yuuat yelled, disagreeing with their opinion."Johnathan will have gained 4 cards in his hand, some will have to be useful,"

[i]It was a mistake bringing Johnathan with us, I should of learned that his Deck was an Dog Marron Deck and I should of declined[/i], Elliot thought lowering his head.

"IT'S MY DRAW !!!"Johnathan shouted as he yanked the card out of his Deck and stared at it.

TO BE CONTINUED

[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Eventually, Dominic manages to beat Johnathan. However, it's now Elliot up and ready to even it out. Even though Elliot has that advantage, Dominic still taunts him about the one mistake that Johnathan did that would of made an huge difference. Will Elliot win, or will Yuuat have to come and duel all of Team Brutality by himself.

Chapter 7: Turbo Team Takeover Part Two
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Brutality Ox (Dark)
Level 4
[Beast Warrior/Effect]
This card is unaffected by Trap Cards. When an Trap Card is activated, Increase this cards Atk by 100. If "Teamed Speed Spell-Berserk Brutality" is Face Up on the Field, this cards maximum amount of Brutality Counters gained is 1.
(ATK 1500/DEF 750)

Brutality Hound (Dark)
Level 3
[Beast/Effect]
If this card inflicts battle damage, your Opponent sends 1 card from their Deck to the Graveyard for every 500 points of damage this card inflicts. If "Teamed Speed Spell-Berserk Brutality" is Face Up on the Field, this cards maximum amount of Brutality Counters gained is 2.

Teamed Speed World
[Field Spell]
If a player activates a non-"Speed Spell" or "Teamed Speed Spell" Spell Card, they take 2000 damage. During each player's Standby Phase, place 1 Speed Counter on this card for the turn player (max. 12 for each player). When a player takes damage, remove Speed Counters of the attacked Player from this card for each multiple of 1000 damage taken. When this card is activated, equip 1 "Teamed Speed Spell" to this card.

Teamed Speed Spell-Berserk Brutality
[Equip Spell]
This card can only be equipped to a Field Spell. By removing any Counters on the Field Spell, you can put 1 Brutality Counter on a "Brutality" monster. Increase the ATK of all monsters with Brutality Counters by 500 for as long as they are Face Up on the Field.

Brutality Force
[Normal Trap]
You can switch 1 non "Brutality" monster to ATK Position.

Brutality Heal
[Counter Trap]
Increase your Life Points equal to the amount of damage an "Brutality" monster has inflicted this turn.

Brutality Search
[Normal Trap]
Activate if you control 2 "Brutality" monsters. Flip up all Face Down monsters (Flip effects are negated).
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[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

That looks good, I can't wait to find out the conclusion.

[Mysterious Member]

Thanks once again. Apologies for being late for the next chapter, I was thinking ahead for what will happen in the next Arc. However, Arc 1 will be estimated to end at Chapter 30. My cousin and me have decided that he's going to an main character in Arc 2. Chapter 7 will be out shortly.

[Mysterious Member]

After all this waiting Chapter 7 is up and running.

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Johnathan smirked at the drawn card,"I think I can win this duel,"

"Not in a million years,"Dominic insulted."There's a massive gap in our life points, plus, if you make a single mistake then you will lose."

"No ! Johnathan can do this,"Yuuat continued to support Johnathan.

"Not a chance,"the Leading Man argued.

"Explain then,"Yuuat replied acting cocky as usual.

"Team Brutality is the greatest Team of Extreme South Satelite of our generation."the Leading Man replied as Yuuat frowned,"How could our third best guy lose to someone that has been using cards that are pathetic."

"I should say, thanks for the hint,"Elliot then smiled.

"HUH !"Dominic shouted suprised.

"You said third best, meaning the other two we are going to duel aren't as good as Dominic,"Elliot explained.

"HEY !!!"one of them shouted angrily.

"Don't react Lumic,"the other Team Brutality Member replied."Hes trying to trick us,"

"Yeah your right Ralf,"the man identified as Lumic agreed nodding happily.

"So then, how about you explain your theory ?"the Leading Man asked patiently awaiting Elliot's answer.

"Easy, there is reported that theres 5 members, am I right ?"Elliot explained as the Leading Man nodded,"Your merly the Second in Command, doing the dirty work, meenwhile, the hidden member, or shall I say the Leader hides in the shadow awaiting your reply."

"Well, you are correct,"the Leading Man admitted as he signed."And I guess I spoiled it."

"Yes since the Leader is obviously the strongest and you being the second best, therefore, Dominic being the third best as you said makes the other two weaker than Dominic."Elliot replied as the Leading Man nodded

"Yes, back to the duel, I have an good enough hand to gain the Field advantage,"Johnathan explained as his Speed Counters Increased (Johnathan: SPC 2)(Dominic: SPC 1)."First I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Speed_Spell_-_Overboost"]Speed Spell - Overboost[/url], if you don't know what it does, then I'll explain. It Increases my Speed Counters by 4 (Johnathan: SPC 6), next I Summon Mad Dog of Darkness in Attack Mode (1900/1400),"

"It might have been the best you could of done but your monster is weak,"Dominic explained.

"Maybes but I activate [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Speed_Spell_-_Power_Baton"]Speed Spell - Power Baton[/url], but removing 6 Speed Counters (Johnathan: SPC 0) I can send a monster from my Deck to my Graveyard so I choose, Chain Dog (1600/1100) to Increase the Atk of my Mad Dog of Darkness equal to Chain Dog's Atk (1900→3500/1400)."Johnathan smirked as his two headed dog's heads enlarged with it's body."Mad Dog of Darkness attack [b]Brutality Ox[/b],"

"Wouldn't it be easier to attack Brutality Hound since it's weaker and it would inflict more damage,"Yuuat suggested.

"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Speed_Spell_-_Power_Baton"]Power Baton's[/url] effect wears off during Johnathan's End Phase,"Elliot explained."Therefore, he decided to take out the monster that would be able to take it down."

"True enough,"Yuuat then agreed.

"Too bad [b]Brutality Ox[/b] will survive,"Dominic smirked revealing his Face Down."[b]Shield of Brutality[/b], by tributing 1 Brutality monster all monsters I control cannot be destroyed by battle, so goodbye [b]Brutality Hound[/b],"Dominic explained as his hound exploded while the two headed dog lunged at [b]Brutality Ox[/b] sucessfully (2000→2100/750)(Dominic: 4300→2900 Life Points).

"I end my turn with a Face Down,"Johnathan signed as he knew it was over for him, at least Brutality Ox's effect wore off (2100→2000/750).

"I draw,"Dominic said drawing (Dominic: SPC 1)(Johnathan: SPC 1)."Brutality Ox attack Mad Dog of Darkness (Johnathan: 100→0 Life Points)."

Johnathan's Duel Runner weakened and fell onto the ground, Yuuat frowned as they had to leave him. They were half way up the Mountain, while Elliot decided to step in to Face Dominic.

"LETS DUEL !!!"they both shouted (Elliot: 4000 Life Points)(Dominic: 2900 Life Points).

"To end my turn I'll set a card Face Down,"Dominic said as an hologram appeared."Your friend made an big mistake before, lets see if the mistake would of made a difference."

[i]He seems keen that I'll lower his life points to like 400 or less and regret that Johnathan didn't attack Brutality Hound[/i], Elliot thought drawing his hand of 6 cards (Elliot: SPC 2)(Dominic: SPC 2).

"Now I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] in Defence Position (1400/1300), next I'll set three cards Face Down and end my turn."Elliot said confident.

"Facedowns are useless remember against me,"Dominic reminded Elliot (Dominic: SPC 3)(Elliot: SPC 3)."But whatever, next I Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble Monmong[/url]a in Attack Position (1000/100),"

Elliots eyes widened as an glider appeared from the trees."With that guy on your Field, it will take me ages to get to your Life Points."

"Yes, now [b]Brutality Ox[/b] attack [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url],"Dominic ordered as [b]Brutality Ox's[/b] axe slashed through [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] splitting it in two."[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble Monmonga[/url] direct attack."

"I chain with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimate_Offering"]Call of the Haunted[/url] Special Summoning back my [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldie[/url]r."Elliot easily countered as the remains of Cannon Soldier joined together (1400/1300).

"[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble[/url], continue your attack,"Dominic ordered as Cannon Soldier easily overpowered the glider by shooting it (Dominic: 2900→2500→3500 Life Points)."As you know, when [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble Monmonga[/url] is destroyed I gain 1000 Life Points and I can Special Summon my two other [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble Momonga's[/url] from my Deck in Face Down Defence Position."Dominic explained as two holograms appeared."I end my turn."

"Now, I trbute [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier"]Cannon Soldier[/url] for [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier_MK-2"]Cannon Soldier MK-2[/url] (1900/1200),"Elliot explained."Next I activate my Face Down, Ultimate Offering, I pay 500 Life Points to Normal Summon [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Wheel"]Cannon Wheel[/url] (500/500)(Elliot: 4000→3500 Life Points)(2000→2100/750)."

"Two weak monsters can't do anything,"Dominic commented unimpressed.

"I tribute my [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Soldier_MK-2"]Cannnon Soldier MK-2[/url] (Level 5) and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cannon_Wheel"]Cannon Wheel[/url] (Level 2), to Synchro Summon the Level 7 [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] in Attack Position (2800/2000),"Elliot smiled as an new mechanic monster appeared on the Field."Cannon Wheel has an effect when it's Synchro Summoned, I get to inflict 500 points of damage to your life points (Dominic: 3500→3000 Life Points), [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] also has an effect that I can tribute three trap cards to inflict 300 points of damage for every card on your side of the Field."Elliot explained as his [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimate_Offering"]Ultimate Offering[/url], his Face Down and Johnathan's Face Down were transfered into [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] as it shot tones of cannon balls at Dominic (Dominic: 3000→1800 Life Points)(Dominic: SPC 2), my Face Down was [b]Cannon Bomb[/b] and when that card is destroyed both players lose 1000 life points (Elliot: 3500→2500 Life Points)(Dominic: 1800→800 Life Points)(Dominic: SPC 1)(Elliot: SPC 2), now [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] attack [b]Brutality Ox [/b](Dominic: 800→200 Life Points)."

Even though Dominic lost an massive amount of life points and his current strongest monster shown was destroyed he still was smiling."See I knew it, Johnathan's mistake has lead you to have almost won."

"I'm controlling the duel, there's no way I'm going to lose to you."Elliot smirked."Plus with [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] on my Field, your team won't stand a chance."

"Really ?"Dominic asked."I've survived your Assault and I've got two monsters under my knee while you only have one."

"I end my turn, prove me wrong then,"Elliot challenged Dominic.

"First, I activate my Face Down, [b]Brutality Revival[/b], by paying half of my life points I can Special Summon my [b]Brutality Ox[/b] in Defence Position (1500/750)(Dominic: 200→100 Life Points)."Dominic explained."Next I tribute [b]Brutality Ox[/b] and my two [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Nimble_Momonga"]Nimble Monmonga's[/url] to Summon [b]Brutality Lion[/b] in Attack Mode (3000/3000)."Dominic smiled as an shadow that then turned into a giant Lion appeared (Dominic: SPC 2)(Elliot: SPC 2).

"That monster is strong enough to take down my Cannon Dragon !"Elliot gasped.

"Not just that, Brutality Lion gains 4 Brutal Counters, I can remove an Brutal Counter to Special Summon a Brutality monster, so I remove 2 to Summon both [b]Brutality Ox[/b] (1500/750) and [b]Brutality Hound[/b] (600/300) in Attack Mode."Dominic explained as his Brutality monsters reappeared."I will remove two Speed Counter to put two Brutality Counters on [b]Brutality Hound[/b] (600→1600/300)(Dominic: SPC 0),"

"If the attacks collide then I'm done for."Elliot frowned.

"Feel anger for your friend that lost to me, if he did the choice to inflicted more damage then I wouldn't be able to do that and you would of had a good chance of beating my partners."Dominic empathised as he then grinned."[b]Brutality Lion[/b] attack [b]Cannon Dragon[/b] (Elliot: 2500→2300 Life Points), next [b]Brutality Ox[/b] and[b] Brutality Hound[/b] will attack you directly (Elliot: 2300→800→0 Life Points)(Elliot: SPC 1)."

Elliots Duel Runner paused at the top of the Grassmere Mountains, while everyone else rocketed down the steep path.

"Well, two wins in a row."Dominic smiled still confident, even though Yuuat can finish it.

"Well done,"Lunic congratulated.

"Yeah, you were mint,"Ralf conplimented.

"Well, he ain't going to beat me,"Yuuat boasted.

"How come ?"the three asked in a unison.

"You can't even if your life depended on it, Brutality Lion is just too brutal,"the Leading Man commented.

"I'm not talking about Brutality Lion, I'm actually talking about Brutality Ox and Brutality Hound, with only that much life points, I could just attack it and easily win since you Don't have any Face Downs left,"Yuuat explained.

"OK then, it's your turn,"Dominic said not bothered about Yuuat's opinion (Yuuat: SPC 2)(Dominic: SPC 1)(Yuuat: 4000 Life Points)(Dominic: 100 Life Points).

TO BE CONTINUED

[spoiler=Custom Cards]
Comming soon.
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[spoiler=Next Chapter Information]
Next time on Yugioh Duelist Path !

Yuuat finnaly shines when he duels Dominic. Thanks to his friends help, he managed to overcome Dominic. However, he is set at an even more tougher challenge of duelling against Ralf then Lumic. Will Yuuat win against them and continue his journey, or will he lose and find out what will happen to him? He struggles mainly to not lose all the cards in his deck.

Chapter 8: Turbo Team Takeover Part Three
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