Jump to content

Two Dinos and an Equip card :P


Recommended Posts

[center][b]1st Card[/b]
Well it name doesn't really seem to meet YGO standards, I think it would look way better if you did it like this: "Red-Tip the Raptor". The pic is interesting, but effective.

OCG fix: [i]During your Battle Phase, increase this card's ATK by 500. In addition when this card battles a Dinosaur-Type monster, increase this cards ATK by 500. During each of your End Phases, decrease this card's ATK by 1000.[/i]

Mhh, after fixing its effect I must say it's an pretty interesting effect, gaining and losing the enire time, combined with DNA Surgery it can be lethal. While being ballanced. Good work.
After the fixes a 8/10

[b]2nd Card[/b]
Well I find it's name a bit undue. "Teeth of the Raptor" would cover the load way better.

OCG fix: [i]Equip only to a Dinosaur-Type monster. Increase its ATK by 200. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle, increase your Life points by half the original ATK of the destroyed monster.[/i]
Yeah, only a few errors, but no posted Lore means total redo.

Though it can be effective, I don't see it being used. Change the boost to 500 and it could be a winner.

After the fixes a 7.2/10

[b]3rd Card[/b]
Like its name, like its pic. I just don't really like the edits. But ok, you tried something different.

OCG fix: [i]When this card is send from the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Dinosaur-Type monster with and DEF of 1800 or less from your [b]*...[/b]in face-up Attack Position.[/i]

*= From where? The Deck, Graveyard, hand, RFP?

Well though being great support, I must say it's Horribly broken. Combined with cards like "Lightning Conducter Tyranno" and "Dark Driceratops" or other low DEF high ATK Dinos. But if it only Summon from hand then I gues it can be Ballanced. If not change the "DEF" part to "ATK".

Besides the OPness and the errors, a 8.8/10 would do.


Overall, some nice Dinos with basic, but effective effects.
[/center]
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

×
×
  • Create New...