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[quote name='Cosmic Destroyer of Tea' timestamp='1292019604' post='4842307']
Nice cards :)
And i have a question: How do you put this effect in the cards?
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What to do you mean this effect? in a card?

[quote name='swordfire206' timestamp='1291969641' post='4841264']
lol long time since I looked at ur set! Ahhh.. I see you made Hinata and Soifon lol! I'm kinda lazy to comment on if u have any OCG errors sooo.. 9.8/10 as usual for da new cards! Keep it up
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Thanks again Swordfire206 such a high rating I'll resume making cards again prob 2morrow or monday.

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[quote name='Cosmic Destroyer of Tea' timestamp='1292023375' post='4842515']
I mean the effect of the card, bright, reflex, you know?
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I'm still confuse make an example I'll help u.

[quote name='swordfire206' timestamp='1292029036' post='4842787']
Oh yeah I love checking ur new cards, its just AWESOME!!! Wish there was requests lol
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Thx swordfire I'll make 1 card 4 u sorry after my experience with my FF set I was bombarded with request and I don't want that feeling again, so who do u want?
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[quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1292055728' post='4843802']
I'm still confuse make an example I'll help u.
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Its probably the card background, how you made the Level Stars a different..

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Thx swordfire I'll make 1 card 4 u sorry after my experience with my FF set I was bombarded with request and I don't want that feeling again, so who do u want?
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Okay lol never thought who I want, well I'll try an anime so.. Nanoha Takamachi from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha! Plz dont take that pic there in the link!

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanoha_Takamachi
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[quote name='swordfire206' timestamp='1292063617' post='4843902']
Its probably the card background, how you made the Level Stars a different..



Okay lol never thought who I want, well I'll try an anime so.. Nanoha Takamachi from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha! Plz dont take that pic there in the link!

Here's a bio:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanoha_Takamachi
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all right I'll make Nanoha wierd i already hav a good pic 4 her in my anime gallery. If you any complainats on the card PM me me I'll fix it the card will b done prob monday or tuesday I'll b busy on sunday.

[quote name='monty1394' timestamp='1292081833' post='4844243']
i love the way the backgrounds and levels of the cards are different. it really has a good feel to it. pics are nice too :3 8.5/10
i just dont like the way some the effects are...
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It's fine alot of people don't like my card but thanks for the rating. :)
[quote name='tonymann' timestamp='1292084047' post='4844307']
I give Alicia Malchiot an 111/10 but i believe her name is spelled Malchiott not Melchiott
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Wow 111 thanks :D I guess someone played Valkyria Chronicles. It's Alicia Melchiott I checked u prob played a different language version of the game.

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[quote name='Cosmic Destroyer of Tea' timestamp='1292180591' post='4846908']
Yes I mean the stars and the background.
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I used gimp to do it heres a tutorial that helped me :http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/142180-skippy-canoes-gimp-gfx-tutorial-holos-dark-synchros-recolors-stickers-ycm-award-winning/page__p__2747014__hl__holo__fromsearch__1#entry2747014

For the stars I just made the card 1 star and and then resize the image I want to replace the star small enough to cover up the star and keep copying and pasting from there. This isn't very detailed but I think u get the idea.
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Sorry Swordfire nanoha will hav to wait until 2morrow I want to make this 1 star ocean character 1st.
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Maria :blink:

Ah... the memories. Sophia, Fayt and Maria step into the ruins, this cute little girl with the green hat in front of them... wow, I've never underestimated an enemy that much :mellow: But then, Maria took all heart she could find and started her combo... "MAGNETIC FIELD! ENERGY BURST!" Woooooosh... you get the idea :lol:

Great choice: Sexy, intelligent, cool and can wield a gun better than any guy... what else do you want? :P

And to make this post less spammy: Soifon has some nice idea... though I was first when it comes to Graveyard attacking *looks for the thread, can't find it, shoots himself* Is the attack target treated as in Attack or Defense Position? You'd have to add that in order to make sense. And you still cannot skip a monsters Battle Phase, you can skip your Battle Phase or the monster cannot attack... just saying. Overall, I'd say it's a little too much, and you need to think the effects until the end. If she can attack during your opponent's Battle Phase, when would that be? Start, End, somewhen in between? There are a lot of ideas in it, but you should really try to filter them a little. I know, I'm the one to talk, but for the most part, I find it more confusing than really useful what all the effects can do. Maybe break it down to one, two core concepts per card. Either way, some of the ideas are really nice, pick those you like the most and give the rest a kick out of the door ;)

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[quote name='Spoon' timestamp='1292283407' post='4850224']
Maria :blink:

Ah... the memories. Sophia, Fayt and Maria step into the ruins, this cute little girl with the green hat in front of them... wow, I've never underestimated an enemy that much :mellow: But then, Maria took all heart she could find and started her combo... "MAGNETIC FIELD! ENERGY BURST!" Woooooosh... you get the idea :lol:

Great choice: Sexy, intelligent, cool and can wield a gun better than any guy... what else do you want? :P

And to make this post less spammy: Soifon has some nice idea... though I was first when it comes to Graveyard attacking *looks for the thread, can't find it, shoots himself* Is the attack target treated as in Attack or Defense Position? You'd have to add that in order to make sense. And you still cannot skip a monsters Battle Phase, you can skip your Battle Phase or the monster cannot attack... just saying. Overall, I'd say it's a little too much, and you need to think the effects until the end. If she can attack during your opponent's Battle Phase, when would that be? Start, End, somewhen in between? There are a lot of ideas in it, but you should really try to filter them a little. I know, I'm the one to talk, but for the most part, I find it more confusing than really useful what all the effects can do. Maybe break it down to one, two core concepts per card. Either way, some of the ideas are really nice, pick those you like the most and give the rest a kick out of the door ;)
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O.O long reply thanks Spoon as always. :) Yea Star Ocean til the End Of The Time is one the best RPG's I played and wanted to make a card based on one of the characters, I don't think any1 made her yet which is good ^.^ bcause I want to b the 1st one to do it. I originally wanted to make Nel but not enough good pics 2 use some where to sexy 4 this site :P so I choose Maria I luv her moves and she has Blue Hair which is very hot. lol Anyway yea thanks 4 the advice this will certainly improve my card making skills oh you made a card that attacks a monster from the Graveyard I wanted to c it, I need alot of OCG help as u already know I'm very horrid @ :(

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I would tell you how they are, but they hurt my eyes.
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lol sorry 4 the color txt I wanted the cards to look pretty but thanks 4 the comment.

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[quote name='thegreatmightypoo' timestamp='1292309981' post='4851381']
The cards look emperorly. It's just that the lore is in bright colors and hurts my eyes. Making the cards pretty is great, but the lore is supposed to be as legible as possible.
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lol fine tell me which one that hurts your eyes I'll change it back to black.

[quote name='Maple' timestamp='1292311696' post='4851396']
Awesome Those Cards 5 stars GOOD JOB
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wow 5 stars thank you so much :D

Maria will b done 2morrow I just made the card all I hav to do now is use gimp to make it look pretty, I think I can make Nanoha as well.

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I wonder why you made her effects luck based :unsure: Always thought of her as the more cool, calculating kind of character, who would never rely on such mechanics... Seriously, she's the leader of Quark, she [i]should not[/i] allow herself to rely on it! It's not that I want to overcriticize the card, it's your interpretation after all, but I'd definitely cut that part. However, the Field Spell negation sounds reasonable, not allowing the opponent to fight on their own terrain is a wise strategy, and also depicts her alteration ability, which is quite nice. You could, however, work this idea out a little more, "alterate" a little more, maybe also manipulating other opponent's Spells or Traps... just an idea.

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I wonder why you made her effects luck based :unsure: Always thought of her as the more cool, calculating kind of character, who would never rely on such mechanics... Seriously, she's the leader of Quark, she [i]should not[/i] allow herself to rely on it! It's not that I want to overcriticize the card, it's your interpretation after all, but I'd definitely cut that part. However, the Field Spell negation sounds reasonable, not allowing the opponent to fight on their own terrain is a wise strategy, and also depicts her alteration ability, which is quite nice. You could, however, work this idea out a little more, "alterate" a little more, maybe also manipulating other opponent's Spells or Traps... just an idea.
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I just wanted to make every card unique as you said so I chose dice effects, I could hav expanded on her alteration abilities where she can manipulate object but it would most likely involve counters which I'm trying to avoid using but I can do something innovative with her alteration abilities without the counters I'm just worried people will start saying it's op'd like my RC cards :(

[quote name='jotacatalan' timestamp='1292430956' post='4854421']
you really do super effect to every card and i liked very much the erza scarlet card
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thanks glad you like the cards I hope I can make more innovative effects like I did with hers :)

Update: fixed Soifon's OCG and added a new effect to Maria not really innovative but something related to her alterations abilities.

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Yay Nanoha thanks, its great!!! But there's some errors lol, the pic's great, Level stars are nice and love the other 3 pics in the card effect 9/10

During each Draw Phase increase this card's [b]L[/b]evel by 1. Any face-up monsters on the field whose [b]L[/b]evel is 1 [s]or lower[/s] are automatically sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, [b]d[/b]uring your Main Phase 1 you can reduce this card's [b]L[/b]evel by 1 to [s]search through your Deck and select[/s] [b]add[/b] 1 Spell Card with the word "Nanoha" in it[s]'[/s]s effect [s]and add it[/s] from your Deck to your hand. When this monster destroys an [s]a[/s] opponent's monster by a card effect and sends it to the Graveyard, increase your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints equal to this card's Level x 100 minus the destroyed monster's Level x 100.

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During each Draw Phase increase this card's Level by 1. Any face-up monsters on the field whose Level is 1 are automatically sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1 you can reduce this card's Level by 1 to add 1 Spell Card with the word "Nanoha" in its effect from your Deck to your hand. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster by a card effect and sends it to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points equal to this card's Level x100 minus the destroyed monster's Level x100.

This part of the effect is kinda confusing:

- Any face-up monsters on the field whose Level is 1 or lower

How can it be lower than 1 Level?
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Yay Nanoha thanks, its great!!! But there's some errors lol, the pic's great, Level stars are nice and love the other 3 pics in the card effect 9/10

During each Draw Phase increase this card's [b]L[/b]evel by 1. Any face-up monsters on the field whose [b]L[/b]evel is 1 [s]or lower[/s] are automatically sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, [b]d[/b]uring your Main Phase 1 you can reduce this card's [b]L[/b]evel by 1 to [s]search through your Deck and select[/s] [b]add[/b] 1 Spell Card with the word "Nanoha" in it[s]'[/s]s effect [s]and add it[/s] from your Deck to your hand. When this monster destroys an [s]a[/s] opponent's monster by a card effect and sends it to the Graveyard, increase your [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints equal to this card's Level [s]x 100[/s] minus the destroyed monster's Level [s]x 100[/s].

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During each Draw Phase increase this card's Level by 1. Any face-up monsters on the field whose Level is 1 are automatically sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1 you can reduce this card's Level by 1 to add 1 Spell Card with the word "Nanoha" in its effect from your Deck to your hand. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster by a card effect and sends it to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points equal to this card's Level x100 minus the destroyed monster's Level x100.

This part of the effect is kinda confusing:

- Any face-up monsters on the field whose Level is 1 or lower

How can it be lower than 1 Level?
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:) thanks 4 the OCG fixes again I thank you, also thanks for the complements glad u liked the card :D I'll add more Spells to Nanoha later, I need to add to alot 4 the rest of the characters in this set it feels incomplete.

[quote name='Hanzo Hattori' timestamp='1292580496' post='4858926']
Wow, i really like your card, it looks fancy with the pics. And the Level star is very unique. the effect still need to fix the OCG but it's ok :lol:
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thanks 4 the complements, I c u added my set to your signature :) never saw anyone added my sets in to their signatures before thank you.

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