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Sanguine Requiem


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got it,


the war of the two human and demon part one
by Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1

once long ago, a battle that shed the blood of a thousand villages took place. the leader of the overworld promised to keep his world safe from the demons from the under world. but when the war started between the over and the under world, demons searched for human souls to suck from the people in the over world. the guards were beheaded by the underworlders. so, the leader, Traleto, (i just made up the name) had to let his army fend for themselves. but when he slaterd the last one of the demons, word had come that dragons from the over and underworlds almost killed the armies with there battles. that meant he almost lost his friend, Glasoy. after that battle, the under world killed halve of the troops. which meant they must train soldiers for the next attack. later that year, the dragons of the underworld and the underworld army, attavked the walls of freelosa, leaving the rest of the army to fend the fort. but with one shot of the crossbow from the under world, sends him of his feet, onto the ground, with an arrow, in his cest.


part two later................ :)

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A nice story, though I hope you have a nice twist in mind with this, as demons, [b]dragons[/s] and the underworld are so excessively used topics. I would also recommend you put slightly more effort into looking at misspelling and punctuation, as it makes the text easier to read.

Nevertheless, it should prove entertaining to read the next chapter. :)

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