Bonus Pack Volume 1 [19/100]

[.Nu-13]

I'll try to update every day. Rate/fix/love/hate/whatever

[b]BP-EN001[/b]
Emperors' Apprentice | *2 | DARK
[Spellcaster]
*insert flavour text here*
ATK/800 DEF/800

[b]BP-EN002[/b]
Monarch Knight | *4 | EARTH
[Warrior/Effect]
When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Emperors' Apprentice" from your Graveyard. If you do, you can Normal Summon or Set 1 additional time this turn.
ATK/1500 DEF/1000

[b]BP-EN003[/b]
Monarch Rider | *4 | EARTH
[Warrior/Effect]
You can discard this card to add 1 "Monarch" monster from your Deck to your hand. You cannot Summon that monster this turn.
ATK/500 DEF/1800

[b]BP-EN004[/b]
Juggle-Snatch | *5 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
During a Duel, this card is treated as "Shapesnatch". Once per turn, you can shuffle 2 cards from your hand to your Deck to draw 2 cards. Then, you can select 1 card in your Graveyard and shuffle it in your Deck.
ATK/1200 DEF/1700

[b]BP-EN005[/b]
Block-Snatch | *5 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
During a Duel, this card is treated as "Shapesnatch". When your opponent declares a direct attack, you can Special Summon this card from your hand and negate the attack. Your opponent cannot select other "Shapesnatch" you control as an attack target.
ATK/1200 DEF/1700

[b]BP-EN006[/b]
Draft-Snatch | *5 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
During a Duel, this card is treated as "Shapesnatch". Once per turn, you can look at the top 3 cards of your Deck. If there are any cards that mention "Shapesnatch" in their card text or that are named "Shapesnatch" among them, you can add them to your hand. Shuffle the remaining cards back to your Deck.
ATK/1200 DEF/1700

[b]BP-EN007[/b]
Boss-Snatch | *8 | DARK
[Machine/Effect]
During a Duel, this card is treated as "Shapesnatch". This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing from play 3 "Shapesnatch" cards from your Graveyard. This card gains 700 ATK for each "Shapesnatch" in either players' Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Shapesnatch" from your Deck.
ATK/0 DEF/1700

[b]BP-EN008[/b]
Koa'ki Meiru Salvager | *4 | WATER
[Machine/Effect]
During each of your End Phases, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or reveal 1 WATER monster in your hand. Once per turn, you can add 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your Graveyard to your hand and draw 1 card.
ATK/1900 DEF/1500

[b]BP-EN009[/b]
Koa'ki Meiru Pressure | *4 | EARTH
[Rock/Effect]
During each of your End Phases, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or reveal 1 Rock-Type monster in your hand. During your Standby Phase, send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.
ATK/1900 DEF/1000

[b]BP-EN010[/b]
Symphony Warrior Mic | *4 | WIND
[Machine/Tuner]
Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Symphonic Warrior" monster on the field. If it is a non-Tuner monster, it is now treated as a Tuner monster and vice-versa. You can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to change 1 "Symphonic Warrior" non-Tuner monster you control to a Tuner monster and vice-versa.
ATK/1300 DEF/1000

[b]BP-EN011[/b]
Symphony Warrior Harmonica | *4 | WIND
[Machine/Tuner]
You can discard this card to send 2 "Symphony Warrior" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard.
ATK/1000 DEF/1000

[b]BP-EN012[/b]
Thunder Dragon Deux | *5 | LIGHT
[Thunder/Effect]
While this card is in your hand, you can reveal 1 "Thunder Dragon" monster in your hand and discard this card to draw 2 cards.
ATK/1600 DEF/1500

[b]BP-EN013[/b]
Thunder Dragon Trois | *5 | LIGHT
[Thunder/Effect]
While this card is in your hand, you can reveal 1 "Thunder Dragon" monster in your hand and discard this card to Special Summon 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Graveyard.
ATK/1600 DEF/1500

[b]BP-EN014[/b]
Agigated King Archfiend | *8 | DARK
[Fiend/Effect]
This card's controller pays 800 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases (this is not optional). During your Standby Phase, you can select 1 face-up "Archfiend" monster you control, except this card. It can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase.
ATK/2800 DEF/2000

[b]BP-EN015[/b]
Archfiend Accelerator | *4 | DARK
[Fiend/Effect]
Once per turn, you can select 1 other face-up "Archfiend" monster you control. Destroy it and draw 1 card. The selected monster's effect cannot be activated in response to this card's effect. If you control a face-up "Pandemonium", you can draw 2 cards instead.
ATK/1400 DEF/0

[b]BP-EN016[/b]
Lightning Summoner | *4 | LIGHT
[Spellcaster/Effect]
You can discard this card to Special Summon 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck. You can activate the effect of "Lightning Summoner" only once per turn.
ATK/1200 DEF/200

[b]BP-EN017[/b]
Malefic Black Rose Dragon | *7 | DARK
[Dragon/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by removing from play "Black Rose Dragon" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 "Malefic" monster in your Graveyard. Return it to your hand and return the removed from play card that is mentioned in the returned card's text to your Deck. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card.
ATK/2400 DEF/1800

[b]BP-EN018[/b]
Malefic Ancient Fairy Dragon | *7 | DARK
[Dragon/Effect]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by removing from play "Ancient Fairy Dragon" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. Once per turn, you can add 1 Field Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card.
ATK/2100 DEF/3000

[b]BP-EN019[/b]
Black Swarm | *3 | DARK
[Insect/Effect]
Once per turn, you can flip this card to a face-down Defense Position. When this card is Flip Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster from your Deck.
ATK/1000 DEF/1000

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Monarch Rider - Don't really like this. If you think about it, he's the most powerful searcher. He wont get them on the field right away, but you wont want that in the first place.

Block-Snatch - Basically an upgraded version of Battle Fader with the Shapesnatch gimic attached. I think you should make its effect more original, or at least weaker.

Draft-Snatch - What about Shapesnatch? D:

Salvager - Isn't it a bit too general for its reveal cost? I dunno what else to say about this.

Thunder Dragon Deux - Isn't the name sort of like the fusion (except obviously with replaced words). I'd change it up. And I'm thinking that it's overpowered, but I dunno.

Archfiend Accelerator - Not having to destroy the monster seems like a bit too much for me. Especially since it doesn't specify it has to be another Archfiend in its effect.

Lightning Summoner - Once per turn you can discard it...? I think being able to Summon ANY Thunder is going too far. I'd make it more specific.

Malefic Black Rose Dragon - Do not like the destroying effect. It doesn't follow Malefics anyways, and you could use it to just wipe the field instead of planning to keep it out.

Malefic Ancient Fairy Dragon - I would say to leave out the gain 1000 part and just let it grab a Field Spell.

Black Swarm - I like this card, though I would limit the Level/ATK/DEF of the Summoned monster so you can't just bring out tons of big monsters.

Overall, great job and I hope to see you post more cards in the near future.

[.Nu-13]

[i]Monarch Rider - Don't really like this. If you think about it, he's the most powerful searcher. He wont get them on the field right away, but you wont want that in the first place.[/i]

Ok, I'll add some drawback

[i]Block-Snatch - Basically an upgraded version of Battle Fader with the Shapesnatch gimic attached. I think you should make its effect more original, or at least weaker.[/i]

Ok, i'll make "end BP" to "negate the attack"

[i]Draft-Snatch - What about Shapesnatch? D:[/i]

*face-Snatch*

Forgot about it I'll add that part

[i]Salvager - Isn't it a bit too general for its reveal cost? I dunno what else to say about this.[/i]

Well, Sea Phanter also reveals WATER

[i]Thunder Dragon Deux - Isn't the name sort of like the fusion (except obviously with replaced words). I'd change it up. And I'm thinking that it's overpowered, but I dunno.[/i]

I wante to name it Thunder Dragon #2, but it sounds bad. And Pot of Avarice means Pot of Greed, so I have an argument

[i]Archfiend Accelerator - Not having to destroy the monster seems like a bit too much for me. Especially since it doesn't specify it has to be another Archfiend in its effect.[/i]

It has to be another Archfiend

[i]Lightning Summoner - Once per turn you can discard it...? I think being able to Summon ANY Thunder is going too far. I'd make it more specific.[/i]

I mean that if you discard it, and then recycle somehow, you can't activate it again this turn. Name me 1 non-Nomi good Thunder and I'll change it

[i]Malefic Black Rose Dragon - Do not like the destroying effect. It doesn't follow Malefics anyways, and you could use it to just wipe the field instead of planning to keep it out.[/i]

Ok, I changed it completly to mroe useful effect

[i]Malefic Ancient Fairy Dragon - I would say to leave out the gain 1000 part and just let it grab a Field Spell.[/i]

I thought that it's OP'ed too. I'll change it

[i]Black Swarm - I like this card, though I would limit the Level/ATK/DEF of the Summoned monster so you can't just bring out tons of big monsters.[/i]

Ok, added restriction

[i]Overall, great job and I hope to see you post more cards in the near future.[/i]

By near future, you mean today?

I'll add more stuff in few minutes. And thanks a lot Could you also comment on remaining cards?

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

[b]Emperors' Apprentice[/b]

Vainilla....Level...2...EARTH...WARRIOR...Apprenctince...Is OK...XD...Should be a DARK SPELLCASTER (You know why):..

[b]Monarch Knight[/b]

A +1 that let's you summon a Monarch that turn...Looks ridulous for some things....But IDK...I might try to figure out how this card be break...ATM I'll say GOOD

[b]Monarch Rider[/b]

Yay monarchs now got their own ROTA on Legs...and is Debris-ables...sorta...XD

[b]Juggle-Snatch[/b]

Shapesnatch Just Became awesome...Thought...1perturn stuff may be too much...IDK

[b]Block-Snatch[/b]

Like it was said Negating the whole battle might be a little to much

[b]Draft-Snatch[/b]

Actually Considering their Name Mimicing effect the correct wording should be: "If there is any "Shapesnacth" among those card..."

[b]Boss-Snatch[/b]

Lol, an Uber Shapesnatch...(Have to Imagine how the pic would looks like)
Also "Shapesnatches" = "Shapesnatch" cards


[b]Koa'ki Meiru Salvager[/b]

Totally Love it...10/10

[b]Koa'ki Meiru Pressure[/b]

I love the effect but 2k looks like too much...lower it 100 or 200 points

[b]Symphony Warrior Mic[/b]

I knew Someone will make this eventually....But Im not too sure on the wording...

[b]Symphony Warrior Harmonica[/b]

Basicly is what they needed no??

[b]Thunder Dragon Deux[/b]

Is interesting a 2 card combo that draws 2...but with those stats might make the deck incosistent...so that balances it..


[b]Thunder Dragon Trois[/b]

Thunder's Machina Fortress...except this work on other Stuff...may be insteresting...RAIOH would <3

[b]Agigated King Archfiend[/b]

Pretty effing good card...=D

[b]Archfiend Accelerator [/b]

Pandemonium's last part of the effect should not be there...

[b]Lightning Summoner[/b]

Instant Raioh FTW (Coz seriously which other thunder would you summon....)

[b]Malefic Black Rose Dragon[/b]

Pretty balanced...actually almost 2 balanced...But ok I could tottaly see this happening.

[b]Malefic Ancient Fairy Dragon[/b]

Oh look this one I like it more...also is more useful to the cause...NICE

[b]Black Swarm[/b]

Card has Nobleman of Crossout written all over it...XD

[.Nu-13]

@Emperors' Apprentice - kinda right... I'll change

@Monarch Knight - eh, it's not OP'ed, as it can summon only Apprentice

@Monarch Rider - Yeah, but I forgot to add restriction that you cannot summon that monarch this turn

@Juggle-Snatch - what do you mean?

@Block-Snatch - as was said, I'll change it

@Draft-Snatch - I wanted to make it able to grab S/T that support Shapesnatch that I'll add later

@Boss-Snatch - Ok, thanks. And pic would be obviously epic

@Koa'ki Meiru Salvager - KM kinda need something like it, no?

@Koa'ki Meiru Pressure - Ok, I'll make it 1900

@Symphony Warrior Mic - I'm not too.

@Symphony Warrior Harmonica - Yes

@Thunder Dragon Deux - I know

@Thunder Dragon Trois - He already <3

@Agigated King Archfiend - Especially when combo'd with Imprisoned Queen

@Archfiend Accelerator - what do you mean?

@Lightning Summoner - Pretty much

@Malefic Black Rose Dragon - But I'll change the effect either way, I have nice idea

@Malefic Ancient Fairy Dragon - what else to say?

@Black Swarm - FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

Thanks for rates. I'll update tommorow, maybe in 2 days

Ok, changed the effects as planned. If I can go on PC tommorow, I'll update with 21 new cards

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

In Juggler's case...being able to draw 2 cards per turn at almost no cost...(Thought it is a +0 and you get your deck fattened)

In Accelerator's case...Pandemonium on the field is basicly a free +2 each turn

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Archfiend Accelerator doesn't say "another". It just says "An Archefiend monster", which could include itself.

Really the strongest target without having to be Summoned first would be Sanga the Thunder or the Batterymen, but I still don't like it based on the fact that they could come out with some strong ones in the future.

[.Nu-13]

Ok, changed Accelerator.

After some thinking, I'm keeping Black Swarm the way it is now.

I'll update with ~20 new cards in 2-3 hours, after I come back from English lesson