seattleite Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 So, Tempest, although they can't be submitted right now I can give my review on them. [/color][spoiler=YVD cards]|Storm - Aquosis|0|SET0|Aqua/Effect|Water|4||1600|1600|Whenthis card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a differentattribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monsterto the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, gain LifePoints equal to the level off this monster x100.| LP gain is small but it's handy as a member of the archetype. It could stand to be 200 per level. |Storm - Flarzaqus|0|SET0|Pyro/Effect|Fire|4||1800|0| Whenthis card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a differentattribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monsterto the deck then shuffle your deck. During your Standby Phase, damage to your opponant equal to this monster's level x100.| Cool stuff. |Storm - Bresalve|0|SET0|Winged Beast/Effect|Wind|4||1900|0|When this card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of adifferent attribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return thismonster to the deck then shuffle your deck. This card can attack your opponentdirectly. If it does, half the battle damage.| Alright. |Storm - Nighatim|0|SET0|Fiend/Effect|Dark|4||1800|0| Whenthis card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a differentattribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monsterto the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn if this card has destroyed amonster, this card can destroy a card on the field.| Last effect seems OP'd for its ATK. Maybe lower? |Storm - Shinseus|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|4||0|1800| Whenthis card is destroyed, you can Summon a level 4 “Storm” monster of a differentattribute from your Graveyard. If you active this effect. Return this monsterto the deck then shuffle your deck. Once per turn, this card can negate theactivation off a card which destroys a monster on the field.| Nice protection. |Realm of the Storm|0|SET0|Spell Card|Spell||Field|||Thiscard gains the follow effects when there is a “Storm” Monster(s) on the fielddepending on the attribute.FIRE: Deal 500 points of damage to your opponent during your standbye phase.WATER: Gain 500LP during your standbye phase. WIND: Select one “Storm” Monster you control. It can attackdirectly this turn. When it does so, battle damaged is halved. You cannot usethis effect on the same monster consecutively.LIGHT: This card cannot be destroyed by card effect. DARK: Once per turn, if a monster has been destroyed you canselect one card on the field and destroy it.If all off these effects can be used, you gain the additional effect:You can send this card from the field to the Graveyard inorder to Summon 1 ‘Master of the Storm’ from your deck or hand. For the firstturn it is on the field. Treat it like no attributes have been tributed. On thesecond turn it has been on the field, treat it like all five attributes havebeen tributed.| Good, but OCG is lacking. I would suggest changing "Master of the Storm's" wording so it changes depending on whether it was summoned with this card. But i don't see it here :P |Fury of the Storm|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|7||500|0|Thiscard cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned byremoving from the Graveyard three level four “Storm” monsters off differentnames. This card gains the Attribute of those three monsters. This card cannotbe destroyed by battle. When this card attacks, trap cards cannot be activateduntil the end off the damage phase. For each “Storm” monster in the graveyardthis card can attack your opponent directly. If a card is used on this cardwhich adjusts its attack in anyway. Negate it and destroy it. When this card isdestroyed, returned all removed from play “Storm” Monsters to the graveyard| Nice and balanced. Sorry for being such a Grammar Nazi today - but the sentence would be: "If this card's original ATK would be changed by a card effect, negate the activation of that card and destroy it." More Grammar nazism to come :P |Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm.|0|SET0|Dragon/Effect|Light|11||1000|0|Thiscard cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summonedwhen your LP hits zero and 1 'Fury of the Storm' has been in your Graveyard forfive turns. Summon this card from your hand, deck, Graveyard or removed fromplay pile. This Summon cannot be negated. When this card is Special Summoned inthis way, increase you life points by 100 points for every “Storm” card youhave in the Graveyard. You can only Summon this card in this way once per duel.The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE and DARK. Youtake no damage while this card in on the field. When this card attacks, gain LPequal to its ATK. This card can attack your opponent directly for each “Storm”monster in the graveyard. When this card is removed from the field SpecialSummon it during the end phase.| Innnnnteresting... would be "If your life points would be decreased to 0 and there is 1 "Fury of the Storm" which has been in your Graveyard for at least 5 turns,, Special Summon this card this card and gain 100 Life points for each "Storm" monster in your Graveyard." The way it was worded would mean you would lose the duel anyways xD |Storm's Counter!|0|SET0|Trap Card|Trap||Counter|||Sned one Storm Monster from your deck to the graveyard. Then negate one effect that destroy's a card(s) on the field, and destroy it.| Awesome Support! |Spirit of the Storm|0|SET0|SpellCard|Spell||Continuous|||You can active this effect once per your main phase.Select one Storm Monster on the Field who's level is divisible by four, then select one “Storm” Monster in theGraveyard with a level equal or less off it which is divisible be four. Forthis turn, the select monster on the field gains the effect off the selectedmonster in the graveyard.| Cool Cool. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 so the DA still progressing?, i guess development can be like 1-8 months longs lol Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Have you seen Master of the Storm? I'll drop Darkness's attack by 100, not much but that can make all the difference. Oh and I have been thinking off editing Fury of the Storm and Riv, as at the moment they aren't that powerful as many off my monsters return to the deck, so most likely there won't be that many cards in the graveyard... maybe I should change Riv's effect to 'you gain 100LP for each Storm monsters that has been in the graveyard.' Also I have changed my card Fury of the Storm's effect, please tell me what you think off it Old: |Fury of the Storm|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|7||500|0|Thiscard cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned byremoving from the Graveyard three level four “Storm” monsters off differentnames. This card gains the Attribute of those three monsters. This card cannotbe destroyed by battle. When this card attacks, trap cards cannot be activateduntil the end off the damage phase. For each “Storm” monster in the graveyardthis card can attack your opponent directly. If a card is used on this cardwhich adjusts its attack in anyway. Negate it and destroy it. When this card isdestroyed, returned all removed from play “Storm” Monsters to the graveyard| New: |Fury of the Storm|0|SET0|Warrior/Effect|Light|7||500|0|This card cannot be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play three level four “Storm” type monsters off different names from the deck. This card’s Attribute is treated as the attribute of those three monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card attacks, trap cards cannot be activated until the end off the damage phase. For each different attribute on your side on the field, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is attacked, raise its attack equal to the number off different attributes on the field x500 for that battle. Both off the previous effect ignore the EARTH attribute. If this card's total ATK would be changed by a card effect, negate the activation of that card and destroy it - excluding this card’s own effect. When this card is destroyed, return all removed from play “Storm” monsters to the deck. I am also edited Riv, here you can compare them Old: Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm.|0|SET0|Dragon/Effect|Light|11||100|0|This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summonedwhen your LP hits zero and 1 'Fury of the Storm' has been in your Graveyard forfive turns. Summon this card from your hand, deck, Graveyard or removed fromplay pile. This Summon cannot be negated. When this card is Special Summoned inthis way, increase you life points by 100 points for every “Storm” card youhave in the Graveyard. You can only Summon this card in this way once per duel.The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND, WATER, FIRE and DARK. Youtake no damage while this card in on the field. When this card attacks, gain LPequal to its ATK. This card can attack your opponent directly for each “Storm”monster in the graveyard. When this card is removed from the field SpecialSummon it during the end phase.| New: |Rivsibaes Procelela – Nature's Fury, Protecting Storm.|0|SET0|Dragon/Effect|Light|11||500|0| If your life points would be decreased to 0 and there is 1"Fury of the Storm" which has been in your Graveyard for at least 5turns, Special Summon this card this card and gain 100 Life points for each"Storm" monster of a different name that has been returned to thedeck in this duel. This summon cannot be negated. You can only summon this cardin this way once per duel. The Attribute of this card is also treated as WIND,WATER, FIRE and DARK. You take no damage while this card in on the field.During your battle phase, all of your opponent’s card effects are negated. Thiscard can attack your opponent directly for each different attribute on thefield. The EARTH attribute is not included in this effect. When this cardattacks, increase your Life Points by its attack. During your opponents battlephase, change this card into defencemode and increase its equal to the number off different attributes on the fieldx750. The EARTH attribute is not included in this effect. When this card isremoved from the field Special Summon it during the end phase of that turn. Link to comment
The Great Wolf Sif Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 You know what I've missed ALOT and now we have a Dragon obsessed Member.....alsome at least now Dragons will get some cards/support made. Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 a Dragon obsessed Member? Who's that? Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 a Dragon obsessed Member? Who's that? I guess that would be me? After all I AM obsessed with dragons and posted a dragon archetype and generic cards that few can support dragons lol but he could still be pointing out someone else... =_= Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 XD, yeah Anyway, any comments on my card changes? Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 XD, yeah Anyway, any comments on my card changes? As they are fine to me, do you want me to rephrase the wordings? technically I'll help anyone for correct OCGs as possible... I think I'm a neat freak for it =_= Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Yeah sure, go ahead. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Yeah sure, go ahead. Ok I'll do it when I get on a computer, it's too annoying to do it on a IPhone anyway. Link to comment
The Great Wolf Sif Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 I guess that would be me? After all I AM obsessed with dragons and posted a dragon archetype and generic cards that few can support dragons lol but he could still be pointing out someone else... =_=Correct, I am talking about you. But then agin that is good as I said before that someone else is type obsessed. Then a neglected type gets Support. Link to comment
.Leo Posted April 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 I agree with Tobi here, if we get more variety of type support than we will have a more deep card pool to work with. So, set time, post your set name ideas and don't post cards until I say so because it keeps the submissions more under control for me. Link to comment
seattleite Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 I agree with Tobi here, if we get more variety of type support than we will have a more deep card pool to work with. So, set time, post your set name ideas and don't post cards until I say so because it keeps the submissions more under control for me. Er, can we wait just a little more until I finish the DA? It won't take long hopefully =) Just lets me focus on 1 thing at a time.... But yes, set names. Didn't we say Evanm or Tobi had one that we would do this set? Link to comment
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Burning Destruction? Link to comment
seattleite Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Burning Destruction sounds ok. I think Tobi also thought of "Land of Tremors". And sorry for before, I'm going on vacation on wednesday and will have a laptop so i won't be doing much else but LCCG work :P. What if we started the set release then Leo? Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Correct, I am talking about you. But then agin that is good as I said before that someone else is type obsessed. Then a neglected type gets Support. a type obsessed is the person who create cards that support type? or being obsess on 1 type only? and it is good or bad? just asking though, dunno what response to make xD Link to comment
seattleite Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 a type obsessed is the person who create cards that support type? or being obsess on 1 type only? and it is good or bad? just asking though, dunno what response to make xD He said it was good =D BTW I *think* I got connections back working in the new DA (for all you windows 7 peeps) so if anyone wants to test it with me.. *wink wink nudge nugde* ;) for tomorrow though.... i am super tired -_- Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 He said it was good =D BTW I *think* I got connections back working in the new DA (for all you windows 7 peeps) so if anyone wants to test it with me.. *wink wink nudge nugde* ;) for tomorrow though.... i am super tired -_- oh count me in lol mine is working fine i guess so i need a newer version or so? oh wait it have automatic update xD well it's it's good, i guess i can't take that credit cause my sets said otherwise =_= I failed you Tobi!!! T_T Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 ... So Y&A, when are you going to 'rephrase the wordings' off my card changes? Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 ... So Y&A, when are you going to 'rephrase the wordings' off my card changes? Gah!! i forgot... as few hours ago was my "day off" =_=; Link to comment
Tempest of Reach Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Great... Well you do have till Thursday to do so as I will be on holiday from today to then. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Great... Well you do have till Thursday to do so as I will be on holiday from today to then. lol... i guess that better than nothing. i'm envious... =_=; Link to comment
The Great Wolf Sif Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 well it's it's good, i guess i can't take that credit cause my sets said otherwise =_= I failed you Tobi!!! T_THow? and BTW being Type obsessed [like me with Beast, Beast-Warriors, and Winged Beasts] as said earlier helps out the card pool ALOT...but at times is much needed. Link to comment
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 How? and BTW being Type obsessed [like me with Beast, Beast-Warriors, and Winged Beasts] as said earlier helps out the card pool ALOT...but at times is much needed. Yes it does seem to help the Cardpool for variety but I'm actually more of effect obsessed than type obsess after two years ago of creating dragarity xD Although the dragarity doesn't scream out that I'm an effect obsessed but it was till I made D.M.Angels afterward (which it was suppose to be more of naming them as D.D. monster except I couldn't find good pics for it so I resort to make dark fairy monsters for RC section) other than that , my set lists seem kinda random but mostly in writing effects that in the nature of names after those two xD Link to comment
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