Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 hey all hey all welcome to the greatest storm i know i know you have waited much to long and i and i i will be your shining star im here here to conquer near and far like sword i run into the heat of day like a knight i fight intill the fight is won in a reign i save each and every each and every each and every one till this war is won and i live to rule by the sword slashing through the every inch of the power the power in you as i sit as i stand by the i comand my kingdom im the knight of the wind!. hey all hey all welcome to the end is near i know i know i will bring you pain and fear on the ground to the sky faced with you and i. in a flash im gone holding your crown high in a reign ill save each and every each and every each and every one till this war is won and i live to rule by the sword slashing through the every inch of the power the power in you as i sit as i stand by the table i command my kingdom im the knight of the wind! knight of the wind im the knight of the wind my castle is a masive force a stronghold of power my armor stays unbrakeable in battle every hour. [long bridge] like a sword i run into the the heat of day like a knight i fight intill the fight is won in a reign i save each and every each and every each and every one till this is won. and i live to rule by sword slashing through the every inch the power the power in you as i sit i stand by the table i command my kingdom im the knight of the wind! the knight of the wind i give credit to the following crush 40 and marty bags thanks for the great songs especially crush 40 this was awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 First off; the Enter / Return key is your friend. Use it. Secondly; Grammar, grammar, grammar. Spelling, spelling, spelling. T'is a good idea, but the execution is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 what does that meanprobolly i need to know how to spell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 He means that you should start a new line for every verse. Like: hey all hey all welcome to the greatest storm i know i know you have waited much to long and i and i i will be your shining star im here here to conquer near and far Also it looks better if you capitalize the start of every sentence and everything that needs to be capitalized, like "I". And yes you should double-check your grammar and spelling, right now I can't rate it because it looks like a big bunch of text, very hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 ill remember that next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 ROCK ON MAN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 uh at least someone liked my lyrics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 can you feel life movin through your mind ooooo looks like it came back for more yeah yeah yeah can you time slipin down your spine ooo you try and try to ignore yeah! but you can hardly swallow your fears and pain when you cant help one follow it puts you right back where you came [chorus] live and learn hagnin on the edge of the tommorow live and learn from the works of yesterday live and learn if you beg or if you borrow live and learn you may never find your way oh yeah can you feel life tangle you up inside yeah now you face down on the floor oh! but you cant save your sorrow you paid in trade when you cant help one follow it puts you right back where you came [chorus] live and learn hangin on the edge of tommorrow live and learn if you beg or if you borrow live and learn you may never find your way woha whoa whoa oh yeah! [long bridge] yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah theres a place sreaching far so far and wide theres a place where you dreamed you never find hold on to what if hold on to what if! [chorus x2] live and learn yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah [repeat] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Pretty accurate from what I know about the song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 I have to agree on the grammar ", but love the concept. The enter key IS your friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 well thanks and followed what my other music forum said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nEwee3ZW1bw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 As cheesy as Sonic music so often is, I find a lot of Sonic music strangely addictive. Your lyrics are wrong, you missed out a tonne of small words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Tip: click inside this box to load the editorTip: click inside this box to load the editor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 [quote name='Älfred-Kün' timestamp='1290853137' post='4813059'] As cheesy as Sonic music so often is, I find a lot of Sonic music strangely addictive. [/quote] Too true. I still listen to it, and the last time I went near something related to Sonic was when I got Sonic and The Black Knight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 i corrected the lyrics alfred kunand thanks for the video kuri Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 you know every world will have its end im here im here to prove it all to you i am i am who you really think i am all wraped up in my evil plan can taste the day[ taste the day] savor night [savor night] spells beyond you as i watch you crawl do you dare to fight evils might ill be the last one standing in a flash of light my eyes are filled with curiosity you think that you have power over me in this life theres no room for you and me so turn away or face this day with me! with me! you know every world have its tests dont blame for what i have become you know every world will come to end and ill ill create your final rest can taste the day savor night stream your dreams as you dare to fight! dare to fight! my eyes are filled with curiosity you think that you have power over me in this life theres no room for you and me so turn away or face this day with me face the day with me face face face the day with me me me me me me me [long bridge] can taste the day savor night stream your dreams as you dare to fight dare to fight! my eyes are filled with curiosity you think that you have power over me in this life thres no room for you and me so turn away or face this day with me face the day with me! face the day with me me me me me me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 [left]You think I've got it all You think I've got it made well How come my only friends are the ones I pay? No one understands What I would do to change my life for just one day Don't say if I were you (say if I were you) Or tell me what you'd do Or things would be if You were in my shoes Cuz you're not me You know what I need And it's not another serenade I get so tired of all the things you say So give me what I want If you only would I'd gladly throw this all away Don't say if I were you (say if I were you) Or tell me what you'd do Or things would be if You were in my shoes (cuz you're not me) Please take me as I am (take me as I am) This isn't what I planned But I don't expect that You can understand Cuz you're not me I know you think you're bein' nice But spare me all your lame advice Time to play my hand and role the dice Everybody's got their price For far to long I've been denied I'm makin' my move so just step aside No one can say I never tried To do everything to get back my pride Hey, you were never me Why can't you see That you're not me (me, me, me, me, me, me, me) Don't say if I were you (say if I were you) Or tell me what you'd do (tell me what you'd do) Or how things would be if You were in my shoes (cuz you're not me) Please help me if you can (help me if you can) This isn't what I planned (this isn't what I planned) But I don't expect that You can understand Cuz you're not me[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Cheese Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Very neat that u posted this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 *You're. Why post lyrics? What's the point? You didn't exactly write them yourself anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 well i do to impress fans Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [left]Thunder, rain, and lightning Danger, water rising Clamour, sirens wailing It's such a bad sign Shadows of dark creatures Steel clouds floating in the air People run for shelter What's gonna happen to us!? All the steps we take, all the moves we make, all the pain at stake I see the chaos for everyone who are we what can we do You and i are same in the way that we have our own styles that we won't change Yours is filled with evil and mine's not there is no way i can lose Can't hold on much longer - but i will never let go I know it's a one way track - tell me now how long this'll last I'm not gonna think this way - nor will i count on others Close my eyes and feel it burn - now i see what i've gotta do Open your heart, it's gonna be allright Ancient city blazing Shadows keep attacking Little children crying Confusion, hopeless anger I don't know what it can be but you drive me crazy All your cunning tricks make me sick, you won't have it your own way Can't hold on much longer - but i will never let go I know it's a one way track - tell me now how long this'll last I'm not gonna think this way - nor will i count on others Close my eyes and feel it burn - now i see what i've gotta do Open your heart...and you'll see... If it won't stop, there will be no future for us Its heart is tied down by all the hate, gotta set him free I know it's a one way track - tell me now how long this'll last Close my eyes and feel it burn - now i see what i've gotta do Gotta open your heart, dude! Can't hold on much longer - but i will never let go I know it's a one way track - tell me now how long this'll last I'm not gonna think this way - nor will i count on others Close my eyes and feel it burn - now i see what i've gotta do Open your heart, it's gonna be allright[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hi-Def Legacy Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 my next lyrics ill probolly do numa numa english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='Älfred-Kün' timestamp='1290853137' post='4813059'] As cheesy as Sonic music so often is, I find a lot of Sonic music strangely addictive. Your lyrics are wrong, you missed out a tonne of small words. [/quote] I knew this was a Sonic song! =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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