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8th part of my series


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As the moon shone on Akiza's bed, Akiza feel fast asleep.

 

_Akiza's Dream_

 

Akiza found herself sitting on a bench in a park.

 

"Where am I," she thought, "Am I alone?"

 

She turned to her left and noticed Yusei sitting next to her.

 

"Oh, hello Yusei," she said.

 

Yusei smiled at her. He looked up at the sky.

 

"Akiza, it sure is a nice night tonight," he said.

 

Akiza looked around. The moon was shining and you could see so many stars. It was perfect.

 

Akiza thought that it was the perfect time to give Yusei something special.

 

She moved in closer to him and wrapped her arms around him. He started looking nervous. She closed her eyes, leaned forward, and puckered up. Yusei pulled her arms off of him.

 

"Akiza, what are you doing," he asked.

 

"Well, I thought that it's such a good night, why not make it memorable. It would be the first time I've kissed anyone."

 

"Well, it would be my first time too. But I don't think I can do it with you."

 

Akiza gasped.

 

"Why not," she asked.

 

"Simple, you're a monster."

 

"Monster," she thought. It echoed through her head.

 

"How am I a monster Yusei," she asked.

 

"Simple, first you show up out of nowhere. Then, you say that your in love with me. Next, you buy new "revealing" outfits. After all that, you finally get the courage to tell me you have physic powers?"

 

"Yusei, I didn't want to tell you, because I worried that you'd leave me." Her eyes started to tear up.

 

_Back in Real Life_

 

Yusei laid back down in his bed, looking through the blinds of his bedroom window.

 

"Of all the nights I can't sleep, I had to pick tonight," he thought.

 

Suddenly, he could hear groaning.

 

"That can't be good," he thought.

 

He tiptoed quickly, but quietly. to Martha's door.

 

"Nope. Not here," he thought.

 

He then checked the twins room.

 

"I hear something, but not groaning. That means it's got to be Akiza," he thought.

 

Inside the twins bedroom, Luna snored softly. Leo, not so much.

 

"Knnnow."

 

"Chicken," Leo snored.

 

"Knnnow."

 

"Chicken."

 

"Knnow."

 

"Green Bean?"

 

_Back in Akiza's Dream_

 

Yusei got up.

 

"Yeah, well you couldn't be more wrong," he said.

 

"But Yusei. I though you were different. You could see the way no one else has. My parents certainly didn't."

 

"Pfft, you're parents had the right idea," he responded.

 

Akiza was now in tears. "What do you mean?"

 

"They were right. You're a witch!"

 

"Witch," echoed in her head.

 

Yusei started to walk away.

 

"No, Yusei! Come back," she screamed

 

_Real Life_

 

Yusei approached the door, which was left opened a crack.

 

He could hear groans coming from Akiza.

 

"No! No," she murmured.

 

Yusei, quietly, opened the door and came in.

 

"Come back," she groaned. Akiza opened her eyes.

 

A/N: Hate to interrupt, but from now on the characters whisper when talking for the rest of the Chapter. It's more of a technical thing.

 

"Akiza," Yusei whispered.

 

Akiza could just barely make out Yusei's face.

 

"Ahh," she screamed. She leaned away from him as he approached her bed.

 

She then remembered the dream.

 

"Yusei, please. I'm sorry," she said.

 

"Sorry? For what?"

 

She wrapped her arms around him.

 

"Please don't leave me," she cried.

 

She buried her face into his chest.

 

Yusei wrapped his arms around her and let her cry on his night shirt. When the tears stopped, Akiza leaned back.

 

"Akiza, I'll never leave you. No matter what. I don't care if they threw you in the facility."

 

Akiza smiled at him.

 

"Now, can you tell me what happened?"

 

"Well, I was sitting on a park bench, next to you."

 

Yusei smiled.

 

"Then, I don't know. I guess my urges came in and I wanted to give you a kiss. My first kiss, but you said you couldn't do it with me."

 

Yusei frowned.

 

"Why not," he asked.

 

"You said I was a monster. You said my parents were right and that I really am a witch."

 

Akiza started to cry again and Yusei pulled her in close for another hug.

 

"Do you want to tell me why your parents called you that?"

 

Akiza leaned back and shook her head.

 

"Well, again, if you ever want to talk about it. I'm always available and I will always listen. No matter what happened Akiza, I will still love you."

 

Akiza smiled happily at him and squeezed him tightly.

 

"I'll always love you too," she said.

 

They smiled at one another.

 

"Well, it sure is a nice night," Yusei said.

 

"This time, it's going to be different," Akiza thought.

 

She wrapped her arms around Yusei. He started to look nervous.

 

"Akiza, what are you doing," he asked.

 

"Well, I thought since my dream didn't go as planned, maybe it would work in real life."

 

Yusei smiled.

 

He wrapped his arms around her.

 

Suddenly, Akiza's face got scared.

 

"Is something wrong," Yusei asked.

 

"Well, I've never kissed anyone before. I'm scared," she said, "What if I do it wrong? What if it doesn't just come naturally? What if you don't like it? What if..."

 

Yusei put his finger on her lips.

 

"It's okay. I've never kissed a girl before. So, let's just make it as fun as we can."

 

They lean in for a soft first kiss. It was wonderful and everything that they wanted it to be.

 

Akiza smelled Yusei's oily, sweaty, but yet somehow, wonderful scent.

 

Yusei smelled Akiza's perfume and makeup, but enjoyed it.

 

They finally let go and they smiled at each other.

 

"Yusei, that was wonderful. It was everything that I hoped it to be. Are you sure you really wanted me to be your first kiss?"

 

"Of course. Your beautiful, smart, caring, and sweet. What's not to love?"

 

Akiza blushed.

 

 

Akiza wrapped her arms one last time around him.

 

"Thank you Yusei. For everything."

 

"Your welcome Akiza."

 

He got up.

 

"Have a good night," he said.

 

"Thanks. You too."

 

Akiza fell back on her bed and fell fast asleep. This time, though, she had good dreams about the two of them, being together.

 

Yusei got to his room and laid on his bed.

 

"Aww man, I still can't sleep. All I can think about is Akiza."

 

As he thought about all the things that make her great, he, slowly, started to dream about the two of them.

 

They were both happy.

 

They slept soundly, for the rest of the night.

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Very nice, your a wonderful author. The details aren't elaborate they serve the purpose while flawlessly allowing for no disruption in the flow. The story is nice how ever I think you should watch the subbed versions (RUKA AND RUA! (sry for my hate of 4kids)) they highly emphasis Aki's behavior there is a massive difference where Aki is almost demonic before Yusei compared to the just watered down anger and rudeness in the dubbed (for example Yusei in the subbed keeps telling Aki that she enjoys destruction and inflicting pain its just overall darker). The break with the twins in the middle is nice to break in the mood. My only complaint beside from my compelling hate crusade against 4kids is the simplicity at the end I would rather have a deeper twist with multiple emotions in the end dialoged. But I have to say kudos it was very good. :lol:

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