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Brother vs Brother (YoXavier vs The CandyMan) FINISHED!!!!!!


YoXavier

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Rules: Must make a Lv 4 or lower card based on the Peach form Mario.

first to get 5 votes

Winner gets +1 rep

 

[spoiler=card A]

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Lore:While, this card is on the field, all DARK Monster Cards lose 1000 ATK and DEF and all FIRE Monster Cards gain 1000 ATK and DEF.

 

 

 

[spoiler=card B]

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Xavier, just a tip... Don't take it as an insult, but a better worded lore would be:

While, this card is on the field, all DARK-attribute monsters lose 1000 ATK and DEF, and all FIRE-attribute monsters gain 1000 ATK and DEF.

 

Would be more reasonable if the effect was that DARK lose 500 ATK and DEF, and FIRE gain 500 ATK and Def.

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Oh geez, Serenity has a brother? I thought that kind of evil didn't exist...:P lol jk.

 

Anyway, I'm going with Card B. It just seems more professional, even though it is a Vanilla. Card A really isn't OP'd as it is, card effects could still blast it to bits. The stats are high for it, but that's easily fixed. It's the OCG that I have problems with. As everyone has said, it isn't very well written. That's fine though, you are new and it's a beginning.

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