Skirts Posted November 18, 2010 Report Share Posted November 18, 2010 I was on the plane coming back from Jamaica and started this drawing, and then I finished it today. It's a girl crying. Don't ask what the setting is about, because I don't know. I just felt like drawing a girl crying. xD [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/dwykg7.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 18, 2010 Report Share Posted November 18, 2010 Why's her face and mouth so small? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~NOiSE~ Posted November 18, 2010 Report Share Posted November 18, 2010 You are more talented than I XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1290112401' post='4793744'] Why's her face and mouth so small? [/quote] I tried to make it look like she was looking down. I don't know. xD[quote name='Jester Head' timestamp='1290113417' post='4793774'] You are more talented than I XD [/quote] Hehe. Thanks ? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 19, 2010 Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 I love your Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 [quote name='Sondance' timestamp='1290130464' post='4794549'] I love your Art [/quote] Thank you Sondance. Would you like to see more of it ? Haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted November 19, 2010 Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 You need to work on your perspective more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 19, 2010 Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 I want more!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 [quote name='Sondance' timestamp='1290188000' post='4795507'] I want more!!!!!!!!! [/quote] Give me some time. I should have a new one soon-ish I think. When my girlfriend wants a new drawing. Which is usually like .. A lot. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 19, 2010 Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 lol...Fine i will wait.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 [quote name='Sondance' timestamp='1290202241' post='4795915'] lol...Fine i will wait.... [/quote] xD Hehe. Okay. Just keep an eye out for me to post it. ; D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 19, 2010 Report Share Posted November 19, 2010 I will be waiting with my Coffee... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOTAJUMALA Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Practice your perspective and shapes. You're shading style isn't too good either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadius Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 You need to work on your lighting as well, you have a shadow on your table but nothing else :/. Oh and your Porportions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='Shadius' timestamp='1290218072' post='4796557'] You need to work on your lighting as well, you have a shadow on your table but nothing else :/. Oh and your Porportions. [/quote] She's supposed to be far away from the table .. That's why it and the window are smaller ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadius Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 The window is too small even if it's suppose to be far in the bg, way too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='Shadius' timestamp='1290218624' post='4796580'] The window is too small even if it's suppose to be far in the bg, way too small. [/quote] It's a small window .. Do you have my brain to know what this drawing was supposed to have and what it may mean to me ? Were you there sitting next to me on a 6 hour plane ride from Jamaica back to Winnipeg where I live, asking me questions about what I was drawing ? Nope. I don't think so .. Unless you were wearing Harry Potter's invisible cloak .. You weren't there. Look .. I appreciate your insight, I really do .. But you can't tell me how small a window can be. Windows are not all the same size .. So please .. Don't tell me how a small a window can be, and how my drawing is supposed to look. I asked for opinions, not telling me a window is not the right size. Thank you .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaconBurger Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 quite good, keep on doing those drawings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='chickenfollower' timestamp='1290223024' post='4796708'] quite good, keep on doing those drawings [/quote] Thank you chickenfollower. xD I am assuming you have seen my other ones then ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='Skirts' timestamp='1290218541' post='4796577'] She's supposed to be far away from the table .. That's why it and the window are smaller ... [/quote] You're not understanding what we mean by perspective. The way you have drawn the floor and the table do not actually seem to be identical to the way they're positioned. http://kingfishers.ednet.ns.ca/art/grade10/images/perspective-street_corner.jpg This image right here has a specific perspective just like any other sketch, photo, painting etc. The way you should layout your perspective is by plotting a vanishing point where you want everything to leave or finish (or to put it in a better terminology, vanish). http://www.vectorvault.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/perspective-vectorvault.jpg These are some basic perspective views you can use. The very top one represents the first link I have put in this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name=''ken tbh' timestamp='1290231774' post='4797045'] You're not understanding what we mean by perspective. The way you have drawn the floor and the table do not actually seem to be identical to the way they're positioned. [url="http://kingfishers.ednet.ns.ca/art/grade10/images/perspective-street_corner.jpg"]http://kingfishers.e...reet_corner.jpg[/url] This image right here has a specific perspective just like any other sketch, photo, painting etc. The way you should layout your perspective is by plotting a vanishing point where you want everything to leave or finish (or to put it in a better terminology, vanish). [url="http://www.vectorvault.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/perspective-vectorvault.jpg"]http://www.vectorvau...vectorvault.jpg[/url] These are some basic perspective views you can use. The very top one represents the first link I have put in this post. [/quote] Yes, but why would thinks need to vanish if the drawing is of the girl in the room. If you're standing in a room, (ie: a kitchen) do the walls and windows start disappearing if you're too far away ? You're failing to explain this concept .. -OR- It's not supposed to be applied to this piece of work because there is nothing to "vanish". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack of All Spades Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Very nice. The shades are a little off, but great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='Some Guy in a Whambulance' timestamp='1290268418' post='4797632'] Very nice. The shades are a little off, but great job. [/quote] Thank you Some Guy in ... Ah what the Hell .. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlakeMaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='Sondance' timestamp='1290188000' post='4795507'] I want more!!!!!!!!! [/quote] i agree... this is quite good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skirts Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 [quote name='BlakeMaster' timestamp='1290282111' post='4798244'] i agree... this is quite good! [/quote] Thanks man ! Appreciate the positive feedback ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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