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Duels against the Dark Signers part 5: Misty Tredwell vs. Robo-Minerva.

 

When the drak signers were reborn they were separated. Here is another of their tales.

 

Misty Tredwell, who was revived by Ccarayhua once before has become a dark signer again. She dosen't know where she is or why she was abducted, but since she was a dark signer she didn't care. Just then, flames came from out of the ground.

 

"Welcome" Said a mysterious voice.

 

"Who's there?" asked Dark Misty.

 

The flames began to gather and take shape. They then cleared to reveal a beautiful creature. An anthro girl who was half woman, half mink. Blonde hair and her tail matched her hair color, fur as white as snow in a trampy dress with the insignia of Sigma on the front.

 

"I am Robo-Minerva, queen of fire, second in command of the Robo-Tunes and Robo-Daffy's lover." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"And that means what to me?" Asked Dark Misty.

 

"Aren't we full of ourselves?" Said Robo-Minerva.

 

"What do you want from me?" demanded Dark Misty.

 

"I want to duel you of course. Winner takes the losers powers. There is one condition though." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"What is it?" asked Dark Misty.

 

"We duel with 16,000 life points." answered Robo-Minerva.

 

"I don't know what kind of game you like to play, but I accept." exclaimed Dark Misty.

 

Robo-Minerva took her Maverick crest from her chest and threw it into the air. It was big enough to be a Duel Disk. She strapped it on her arm. Dark Misty's duel disk appeared out of nowhere and latched onto her arm.

 

"Let's DUEL!" said Robo-Minerva and Dark Misty.

 

Robo-Minerva made the first move.

 

Robo-Minerva plays UFO Turtle in attack position and lays one card face down ending her turn.

 

UFO Turtle: Machine Type, Fire Attribute, Level 4, ATK 1400, DEF 1200 Effect: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 FIRE monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Deck in face-up Attack Position.

 

Dark Misty was next to draw. Then a wall of fire appeared from the ground, preventing Dark Misty from seeing her opponent and her monsters.

 

Dark Misty plays Gagagigo and attacks. Robo-Minerva activates Backfire before the attack goes through.

 

Gagagigo: Reptile-Type, Water Attribute, Level 4, ATK 1850, DEF 1000. This young evildoer used to have an evil heart, but by meeting a special person, he discovered justice.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 16,000

 

Backfire kicks in.

 

Backfire: Continuous Trap Card Effect: When a FIRE monster(s) on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 15,500

 

Robo-Minerva activates UFO Turtle ability and Special Summon's Solar Flare Dragon.

 

Solar Flare Dragon: Pyro-Type, Fire Attribute, Level 4, ATK 1500, DEF, 1000. Effect: When you control another Pyro-Type monster, this card cannot be attacked. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent during the End Phase of your turn.

 

Misty ends her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva draws. Robo-Minerva summons another Solar Flare Dragon, and plays Molten Destruction.

Robo-Minerva attacks with one Solar Flare Dragon, destroying Gagagigo.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,500

Dark Misty: 15,350.

 

Robo-Minerva attacks with her other Solar Flare Dragon.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 13,350

 

Robo-Minerva ends her turn. Both Solar Flare Dragon's abilities activate, dealing 500 damage each to Dark Misty.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 12,350

 

"This is why I wanted to duel with 16,000 life points. If we duelled with just 4000, it would probably be over by now." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"You slime." said Dark Misty.

 

"And to think, when I'm done with you, I will finally have the power I need to best my better half." said Robo-Minerva.

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn.

 

Dark Misty drew. Then another wall of fire came out of the ground. She played Cost Down and discarded Reptilianne Servant and Played Giga Gagagigo, but could not attack since Both Solar Flare Dragons could not be targets.

 

Cost Down: Normal Spell Card. Effect: Discard one card from your hand. Reduce the Level of all Monster Cards in your hand by 2 until the End Phase of this turn.

 

Reptillianne Servant: Reptile-Type, Dark Attribute, Level 1, ATK 100, DEF 100. Effect: Destroy this card if there are face-up monsters on the field other than this card. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card. Neither player can Normal Summon a monster while this card is face-up on the field.

 

Giga Gagagigo: Reptile-Type, Water Attribute, Level 5, ATK 2450, DEF 1500. In order to fight tremendous evil, he gained formidable power through body reconstruction, but lost his heart and his redemption.

 

"I call this the Fire Dragon Shield combo. since both my dragons are Pyro-Type monsters, their abilities protect each other. And even if you could destroy them, which you won't, you'd still suffer from the effects of my Backfire trap. You have no chance now."[/color] said Robo-Minerva. Then, the wall died down.

 

"Just you wait." said Dark Misty.

 

It was Robo-Minerva's turn.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card. Robo Minerva played Flame Manipulator. Then she special Summoned Goka the Pyre of Malice in attack position and destroyed her own Flame Manipulator. Then Backfire kicked in.

 

Flame Manipulator: Spellcaster-Type, Fire Attribute, Level 3, ATK 900, DEF 1000. This Spellcaster attacks enemies with fire-related spells, such as "Sea of Flames" and "Wall of Fire".

 

Goka, the Pyre of Malice: Zombie-Type, Fire Attribute, Level 6, ATK 2200, DEF, 1900. Effect: You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control a FIRE monster. When this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy 1 FIRE monster you control. During your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Fireball Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100) in Defense Position. You can Tribute 1 other FIRE monster to have this card gain 500 ATK, until the End Phase.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 11,850

 

Then Robo-Minerva removed UFO Turtle to Special Summon Inferno in Defense position. Then she played a card face down and ended her turn.

 

Inferno: Pyro-Type, Fire Attribute, Level 4, ATK 1100, DEF 1900. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys your opponent's monster and sends it to the Graveyard as a result of battle, inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Then her dragon's abilities kicked in.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 10,850

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn. She began to feel short of breath and feel burn marks.

 

"Feeling the Burn?" said Robo-Minerva. "Good, that's because we're duelling in a volcano that belonged to one of my comrades: Blaze Heatnix."

 

Then another wall of fire came out from the ground.

 

Misty drew a card.

 

Robo-Minerva activated a trap: Gamble. Robo-Minerva flipped a coin in the air and called heads. She called it right and drew cards until she had 5 in her hand.

 

Gamble: Normal Trap. Effect: You can only activate this card when your opponent's hand is 6 or more cards and your hand is 2 or less. Toss a coin and call heads or tails. If you call it right, draw until your hand has 5 cards. If you call it wrong, skip your next turn.

 

Misty was thinking that she could take put Robo-Minerva's Malice Pyre or Inferno, but she would suffer from her Backfire trap and couldn't risk getting hurt. She played Reptilianne Gardna in Defense Position and played Burden of the Mighty and 2 "7" cards. Then she ends her turn.

 

Reptilianne Gardna: Reptile-Type, Water Attribute, Level 4, ATK 0, DEF 2000. Effect: When this card you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 "Reptilianne" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

Burden of the Mighty: Continuous Spell Card. Effect: Each face-up monster your opponent controls loses 100 ATK x its own Level.

 

Solar Flare Dragon: 1100 ATK each, Goka: 1600 ATK, Inferno: 700 ATK.

 

7: Continuous Spell Card. Effect: When there are 3 face-up "7" cards on your side of the field, draw 3 cards from your Deck. Then destroy all "7" cards. When this card is sent directly from the field to your Graveyard, increase your Life Points by 700 points.

 

It was Robo-Minerva's turn. She draws a card. During her Standby Phase, she gets a Fireball Token. Then she sacrifices both of Misty's monsters to Special Summon on her side of the field Lava Golem.

 

Fireball Token: (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 100/DEF 100). Effect: Special Summon with the effect of Goka, the Pyre of Malice.

 

Lava Golem: Fiend-Type, Fire Attribute, Level 8, ATK 3000, DEF 2500. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 2 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you Special Summon this card. The controller of this card takes 1000 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases.

 

"You should be thankful that I lent you a powerful monster who can use the field to it's advantage." said Robo-Minerva.

 

She ended her turn. Her dragon's abilities kick in.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 9,850

 

It was Dark Misty's turn.

 

She draws and during her standby phase, she is damaged.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 8,850.

 

Dark Misty summons Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings and plays one more 7 Card. All three cards are destroyed, Dark Misty draws 3 cards and gains 700 life points for each 7 destroyed.

 

Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings: Dragon-Type, Dark Attribute, Level 6, ATK 1900, DEF 2600. Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by controlling 3 or more face-up Continuous Spell Cards. When this attacking card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, your opponent selects and sends 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard, and you draw 1 card. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard and was sent there from the field, you can send 1 face-up Continuous Spell Card you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark MIsty: 10,650

 

Misty plays Tribute to the Doomed to destroy one of Robo-Minerva's dragons and had to endure damage.

 

Tribute to the Doomed: Normal Spell Card. Effect: Discard 1 card. Destroy 1 monster on the field.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 10,150

 

Dark Misty then attacks the Pyre with Lava Golem, enduring more damage

 

Robo-Minerva: 13,950

Dark Misty: 9,650

 

Then she uses her dragon to destroy Inferno.

 

Robo-Minerva: 13,950

Dark Misty: 9,150

 

"You think fire can hurt me?" said Robo-Minerva.

 

Misty ends her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva draws. She then plays Ultimate Baseball Kid and uses it to attack her Dragon.

 

Ultimate Baseball Kid: Warror-Type, Fire Attribute. Level 3, ATK 500, DEF 1000. Effect: This card gains 1000 ATK for each other FIRE monster on the field. By sending a FIRE monster other than this card to the Graveyard, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

UBK ATK: 3700

 

Robo-Minerva 13,950

Dark Misty: 7,350

 

Robo-Minerva then tributes her fireball token to deal more damage.

 

Robo-MInerva: 13,950

Dark Misty: 6,850

 

Robo-Minerva plays two cards face down and ends her turn. Then her Dargons damage dealing power activates.

 

Robo-Minerva: 13,950

Dark Misty, 6,350

 

Dark Misty was up. She drew and card and suffered more. Another wall of fire appeared.

 

Robo-Minerva: 13,950.

Dark Misty: 5,350.

 

Dark Misty then played Advance Force, offering Lava Golem to summon Gogiga Gagagigo and used it to destroy Robo-Minerva's dragon.

 

Advance Force: Continuous Spell Card. Effect: You can Tribute 1 Level 5 or higher monster to Tribute Summon a Level 7 or higher monster.

 

Gogiga Gagagigo: Reptile-Type, Water Attribute, Level 8, ATK 2950, DEF, 2800. His soul long since collapsed, his body recklessly continues onward, driven by a lust for more power. He no longer resembles his former self....

 

After Solar Flare Dragon was destroyed, Backfire activated again.

 

Robo-Minerva: 12,100

Dark Misty: 4,850

 

"You really are a glutton for punishment aren't you?" asked Robo-Minerva.

 

"At least I'm not a robotic tramp!" said Dark Misty.

 

Dark Misty ended her turn. And the wall died down again.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card. Then she offered her kid to summon Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch and picked the card to the far right of Dark Misty's hand. Luckily for her it was a Trap Card, but she had to discard it anyway. But Robo-Minerva decided to spare Dark Misty this turn.

 

It was Dark Misty's turn. She drew a card. The wall of fire appeared again. Then she played Reptillianne Rage and used it on Gogiga. Then she played Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy Robo-Minerva's Backfire. She then attacked with Gogiga.

 

Mystical Space Typhoon: Quick-Play Spell Card. Effect: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

Reptilianne Rage: Equip Spell Card. Effect: The equipped monster is treated as Reptile-Type. It gains 800 ATK. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. It loses 800 ATK.

 

Gogiga ATK, 3750

 

Robo-Minerva: 10,650

Dark Misty: 4,850

 

Dark Misty then plays Ground Collapse and ends her turn. Then the fire wall disappears.

 

Robo-Minerva draws an card and decides not to attack this turn, but instead activates Tremendous Fire.

 

Robo-Minerva: 10,650

Dark Misty: 3,850

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn She drew a card. The firewall appeared again. During her turn, she sent her Ground Collapse to Special Summon her Dragon Queen and uses them both to attack.

 

Robo-Minerva: 5,000

Dark Misty: 3,850.

 

She ended her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card and placed it face-down. Dark Misty began to notice a pattern: Before Dark Misty drew a card a wall of fire always showed up. She never even thought why, but Dark Misty was so close to winning she could taste it. Robo-Minerva played a card face down and ended her turn.

 

Dark Misty drew a card and attacked with Gogiga, but not her Dragon Queen.

 

Robo-Minerva: 1,250

Dark Misty: 3,850

 

And just for fun, Dark Misty summoned Earthbound Immortal Ccarayhua to strike fear in Robo-Minerva's heart. Robo-Minerva offered Dark Misty souls for the energy of Ccarayhua. All of which were the souls of women from various anime who were slaughtered gruesomely, some more than others. She then noticed that half of Robo-Minerva's face was peeled off to reveal robotic circuitry.

 

Earthbound Immortal Ccarayhua: Reptile-Type, Dark Attribute, Level 10, ATK 2800, DEF 1800. Effect: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, except by its own effect, destroy all cards on the field.

 

"Look what you've done! My beautiful face! YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!" said Robo-Minerva.

 

Robo-Minerva drew exactly what she needed. She then explained to Misty that her Gagagigo's story is exactly like another: Queen La Andromeda Promethium. And now history was to repeat itself. Robo-Minerva played De-Spell to destroy Burden of the Mighty, then she activated her Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy her own Molten Destruction card leaving Ccarayhua vulnerable. Then Robo-Minerva played a new card called Mechanizer Dart and equipped it to Ccarayhua, turning it into a Machine-type. Then she played another new card: "Maverick Corruption" to take control of the newly mechanized Ccarayhua.

 

De-Spell: Normal Spell Card. Effect: Select 1 Spell Card on the field and destroy it. If the selected card is Set, pick up and see the card. If it is a Spell Card, it is destroyed. If it is a Trap Card, return it to its original position.

 

Mechanizer Dart: Equip Spell Card. Effect: The equipped Card is treated as a Machine-Type. It loses 500 ATK this turn but gains 500 ATK for every turn the epuipped monster is equipped with this card.

 

Maverick Corruption: Continuous Trap Card. Effect. Take control of your opponent's Machine-Type Monster(s). If this card is destroyed, control of the Machine-Type monster(s) is returned to their original owners.

 

"This can't be happening!" screamed Dark Misty.

 

"It is." said Robo-Minerva.

 

Then Robo-Minerva played Limiter Removal and used Ccarayhua to attack it's former master.

 

Limiter Removal: Quick Play Spell Card. Effect: Double the ATK of all face-up Machine-Type monsters you control, until the end of this turn. During the End Phase, destroy all monsters that were affected by this effect.

 

Robo-Minerva: 1,250

Dark Misty: 0

 

Dark Misty's body layed there but it did not turn to dust as it did before. Robo-Minerva grabbed her by the neck and drained her of all her Dark Signer Powers. Dark Misty reverted back to normal Misty and Robo-Minerva's eyes became that of a Dark Signers. Robo-Minerva also brought back Earthbound Immortal Ccarayhua in Card form and added it to her deck.

 

"Now that I have your powers, Misty, I have no further use for you." said Robo-Minerva as she enveloped Misty in a fireball.

 

"Why are you doing this?" asked Misty.

 

"Because unlike you, I won't get burnt to a crisp in Sword Man's base." Explained Robo-Minerva "Now if you don't mind, I have to fix my face before some friends of yours arrive."

 

Robo-Minerva then sent the fireball containing Misty to Swordopolis.

 

Four Dark Signers were defeated and only one was left.

 

To be continued...

 

There's the story. If there's anything wrong with it just tell me and I'll try to fix it. This took a lot of time and work. Appreciation is acceptible. And Robo-Minerva is a robot clone of Minerva Mink from Animaniacs in case you were wondering. Robo-Daffy is a robot clone of Daffy Duck with a much better body. Added Card Descriptions and such. Dark Misty got burn marks from the fires Robo-Minerva created from her monsters abilities and Backfire Trap. The shortness of air, fire does need oxygen to burn. Since Robo-Minerva is a robot, she didn't have a hard time breathing.

 

So who next, How they came to be, Grieger vs. Robo-Daffy or Carly vs. Robo-Lola?

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Duels against the Dark Signers part 5: Misty Tredwell vs. Robo-Minerva.

 

When the drak signers were reborn they were separated. Here is another of their tales.

 

HOLY CRAP DRAK SIGNERS. And you might wanna fix up the details here...

 

Misty Tredwell, who was revived by Ccarayhua once before has become a dark signer again. She dosen't know where she is or why she was abducted, but since she was a dark signer she didn't care. Just then, flames came from out of the ground.

 

Ccarawho? Where is this taking place?! WHY ARE FLAMES COMING FROM THE GROUND?!

 

"Welcome" Said a mysterious voice.

 

"Who's there?" Said Dark Misty.

 

"Uh, no one. You can go now."

 

The flames began to gather and take shape. They then cleared to reveal a beautiful creature.

 

Dark Magician Girl?!

 

"I am Robo-Minerva, queen of fire, second in command of the Robo-Tunes and Robo-Daffy's lover." said Robo-Minerva.

 

Discriptions please! Robo-Tunes? WTF? Is Robo-Daffy the Japanese Daffy Duck?

 

"And that means what to me?" Asked Dark Misty.

 

"Aren't we full of ourselves aren't we?" Said Robo-Minerva.

 

"What do you want from me?" asked Dark Misty.

 

"I want to duel you of course. Winner takes the losers powers. There is one condition though." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"What is it?" asked Dark Misty.

 

"We duel with 16,000 life points." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"I don't know what kind of game you like to play, but I accept. said Dark Misty.

 

"Asked"/"Said" Overload. Plus this looks like a Christmas tree with the colors...

 

Robo-Minerva took her Maverick crest from her chest and threw it into the air. It was big enough to be a Duel Dis. She strapped it on her arm. Dark Misty's duel disk appeared out of nowhere and latched onto her arm.

 

Drak Signers AND Duel Dis?! This fic is too awesome.

 

"Let's DUEL!" said Robo-Minerva and Dark Misty.

 

Robo-Minerva made the first move.

 

Robo-Minerva plays UFO Turtle in attack position and lays one card face down ending her turn.

 

Dark Misty was next to draw.

 

Dark Misty plays Gagagigo and attacks. Robo-Minerva activates Backfire before the attack goes through.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 16,000

 

Backfire kicks in.

 

WHAT'S BACKFIRE? WHY IS IT KICKING? WHY IS THERE STILL LIMITED DISCRIPTION?!

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 15,500

 

Robo-Minerva activates UFO Turtle ability and Special Summon's Solar Flare Dragon.

 

Misty ends her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva draws. Robo-Minerva summons another Solar Flare Dragon, and plays Molten Destruction.

Robo-Minerva attacks with one Solar Flare Dragon, destroying Gagagigo.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,500

Dark Misty: 15,350.

 

Robo-Minerva attacks with her other Solar Flare Dragon.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 13,350

 

Robo-Minerva ends her turn. Both Solar Flare Dragon's abilities activate, dealing 500 damage each to Dark Misty.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 12,350

 

"This is why I wanted to duel with 16,000 life points. If we duelled with just 4000, it would probably be over by now." said Robo-Minerva.

 

"You slime." said Dark Misty.

 

Never heard that one before.

 

"And to think, when I'm done with you, I will finally have the power I need to best my better half." said Robo-Minerva.

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn.

 

Dark Misty drew. She played Cost Down and discarded Reptilianne Servant and Played Giga Gagagigo, but could not attack since Both Solar Flare Dragons could not be targers.

 

"I call this the Fire Dragon Shield combo. since both my dragons are Pyro-Type monsters, their abilities protect each other. And even if you could destroy them, which you won't, you'd still suffer from the effects of my Backfire trap. You have no chance now." said Robo-Minerva. Tehn a huge wall of fire shot up from the ground. tehn, the wall died down.

 

"Just you wait." said Dark Misty.

 

It was Robo-Minerva's turn.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card. Robo Minerva played Flame Manipulator. Then she special Summoned Goka the Pyre of Malice in attack position and destroyed her own Flame Manipulator. Then Backfire kicked in.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 11,850

 

Then Robo-Minerva removed UFO Turtle to Special Summon Inferno in Defense position. Then she played a card face down and ended her turn.

 

Then her dragon's abilities kicked in.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 10,850

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn. She began to feel short of breath and feel burn marks.

 

What burn marks are those? Hope it's not an infection...

 

"Feeling the Burn?" said Robo-Minerva. "Good, that's because we're duelling in a volcano that belonged to one of my comrades: Blaze Heatnix."

 

Apparently, since Misty feels burn marks.

 

Then a wnother wall of fire came out from the ground.

 

There's WNOTHER Grammar issue here!

 

Misty drew a card.

 

Robo-Minerva activated a trap: Gamble. Robo-Minerva flipped a coin in the air and called heads. She called it right and drew cards until she had 6 in her hand.

 

Misty was thinking that she could take put Robo-Minerva's Malice Pyre or Inferno, but she would suffer from her Backfire trap and couldn't risk getting hurt. She played Reptillian Gardna in defense mode and played Burden of the Mighty and 2 "7" cards. Then she ends her turn.

 

It was Robo-Minerva's turn. She draws a card. During her Standby Phase, she gets a Fireball Token. Then she sacrifices both of Misty's monsters to Special Summon on her side of the field Lava Golem.

 

"You should be thankful that I lent you a powerful monster who can use the field to it's advantage." said Robo-Minerva.

 

She ended her turn. Her dragon's abilities kick in.

 

Why is everything kicking in?! AND DISCRIPTION!

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 9,850

 

This is gonna be a looooooooooooooong duel...

 

It was Dark Misty's turn.

 

She draws and during her standby phase, she is damaged.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 8,850.

 

Dark Misty summons Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings and plays one more 7 Card. All three cards are destroyed, Dark Misty draws 3 cards and gains 700 life points for each 7 destroyed.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark MIsty: 10,650

 

Misty plays Tribute to the Doomed to destroy one of Robo-Minerva's dragons and had to endure damage.

 

Robo-Minerva: 15,550

Dark Misty: 10,150

 

Dark Misty then attacks the Pyre with Lava Golem, enduring more damage

 

Robo-Minerva: 14,150

Dark Misty: 9,650

 

Then she uses her dragon to destroy Inferno.

 

Robo-Minerva: 14,150

Dark Misty: 9,150

 

"You think fire can hurt me?" said Robo-Minerva.

 

Have you touched fire? It's kinda hot, but you'd know that because of the burn marks.

 

Misty ends her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva draws. She then plays Ultimate Baseball Kid and uses it to attack her Dragon.

 

Robo-Minerva 14,150

Dark Misty: 7,850

 

Robo-Minerva then tributes her fireball token to deal more damage.

 

Robo-MInerva: 14,150

Dark Misty: 7,350

Robo-Minerva plays two cards face down and ends her turn.

 

Dark Misty was up. She drew and card and suffered more.

 

Robo-Minerva: 14,150.

Dark Misty: 6,350.

 

Dark Misty then played Advanced Summoning, offering Lava Golem to summon Gogiga Gagagigo and used it to destroy Robo-Minerva's dragon.

 

Robo-Minerva: 12,900

Dark Misty: 5,850

 

"You really are a glutton for punishment aren't you?" asked Robo-Minerva.

 

"At least I'm not a robotic tramp!" said Dark Misty.

 

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWH SNAP!" said Robo-Daffy Duck.

 

Dark Misty ended her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card. Then she offered her kid to summon Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch and picked the card to the far right of Dark Misty's hand. Luckily for her it was a Trap Card, but she had to discard it anyway. But Robo-Minerva decided to spare Dark Misty this turn.

 

It was Dark Misty's turn. She drew a card. Then she played Reptillianne Rage and used it on Gogiga. Then she played Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy Robo-Minerva's Backfire. She then attacked with Gogiga.

 

Robo-Minerva: 11,650

Dark Misty: 5,850

 

Dark Misty then plays Ground Collapse and ends her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva draws an card and decideds not to attack this turn, but instead activates Tremendous Fire.

 

Robo-Minerva: 11,150

Dark Misty: 4,850

 

It was Dark Misty's Turn She drew a card and sent her Ground Collapse to Special Summon her Dragon Queen and uses them both to attack.

 

Robo-Minerva: 5,600

Dark Misty: 4,850.

 

She ended her turn.

 

Robo-Minerva drew a card and placed it face-down. Dark Misty began to notice a pattern: Before Robo-Minerva drew a card a wall of fire always showed up. She never even thought why, but Dark Misty was so close to winning she could taste it. Robo-Minerva played a card face down and ended her turn.

 

Dark Misty drew a card and attacked with her monsters.

 

Robo-Minerva: 50

Dark Misty: 4,850

 

And just for fun, Dark Misty summoned Earthbound Immortal Ccarayhua to strike fear in Robo-Minerva's heart. Robo-Minerva offered Dark Misty souls for the energy of Ccarayhua. All of which were the souls of women from various anime who were slaughtered gruesomely., some more than others. She then noticed that half of Robo-Minerva's face was peeled off to reveal robotic circuitry.

 

Misty summoned the Earthbound JUST to strike fear into a robot's heart? And don't kill Osaka! She didn't do nothin'!

 

"Look what you've done! My beautiful face! YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS!" said Robo-Minerva.

 

"Yeah!" Robo-Daffy Duck said.

 

Robo-Minerva drew exactly what she needed. She then explained to Misty that her Gagagigo's story is exactly like another: Queen La Andromeda Promethium. And now history was to repeat itself. Robo-Minerva played De-Spell to destroy Burden of the Mighty, then she activated her Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy her own Molten Destruction card leaving Ccarayhua vulnerable. Then Robo-Minerva played a new card called Mechanizer Dart and equipped it to Ccarayhua, turning it into a Machine-type. Then she played another new card: "Maverick Corruption" to take control of the newly mechanized Ccarayhua.

 

"This can't be happening!" said Dark Misty.

 

"It is." said Robo-Minerva.

 

I love how melodramatic these last to lines are. How about using 'exclaimed' or 'screamed'? Something besides said!!!

 

Then Robo-Minerva played Limiter Removal and used Ccarayhua to attack it's former master.

 

Robo-Minerva: 50

Dark Misty: 0

 

Dark Misty's body layed there but it did not turn to dust as it did before. Robo-Minerva grabbed her by the neck and drained her of all her Dark Signer Powers. Dark Misty reverted back to normal Misty and Robo-Minerva's eyes became that of a Dark Signers.

 

"Now that I have your powers, Misty, I have no further use for you." said Robo-Minerva as she enveloped Misty in a fireball and sent her hurdling to her demise in Swordopolis.

 

"WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN?!" Misty said.

 

Four Dark Signers were defeated and only one was left.

 

When did THAT happen? OH. This is a part five to whatever this series is... It'd be less confusing to have it all on one thread.

 

To be continued... Until Robo-Porky Pig popped through the screen and said, "T-T-T-T-That's all folks!"

 

There's the story. If there's anything wrong with it just tell me and I'll try to fix it. This took a lot of time and work. Appreciation is acceptible. And Robo-Minerva is a robot clone of Minerva Mink from Animaniacs in case you were wondering.

 

Thanks for this info AFTER I read the WHOLE fic.

 

 

Whew. So your spelling is pretty good, and grammar's okay. BUT! You're lacking a LOT of discription. I barely knew who's who and what's their full story! What cards are being played throughout the duel? Explain what the monster looks like when summoned! Explain what they effects are and why they happen! And use other words besides "said" and "asked", it gets VERY dull after awhile.

 

If you can fix all this, then you'll do fine. ^^

 

And use one of these, just take out the '*'.

[*spoiler=(Title)]

 

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Whew. So your spelling is pretty good, and grammar's okay. BUT! You're lacking a LOT of discription. I barely knew who's who and what's their full story! What cards are being played throughout the duel? Explain what the monster looks like when summoned! Explain what they effects are and why they happen! And use other words besides "said" and "asked", it gets VERY dull after awhile.

 

If you can fix all this, then you'll do fine. ^^

 

And use one of these, just take out the '*'.

[*spoiler=(Title)]

 

 

Thanks for the info and all will be explained in Part 1.

 

And this is part 5. First the people who were the Dark Signers get abducted, then their dark powers are back, then it'is Devack vs. Robo-Taz, then Greiger vs. Robo-Daffy, then Kalin vs. Robo-Marvin, then this and finally Carly vs. Robo-Lola. And people should look up what the cards are and what they can do. But for you I'll tweak the story.

And to answer your question about the Burn Marks, Dark Misty got those from the flame abilities and attacks of Robo-Minerva's Monsters. And Robo-Daffy will be explained when he duels Grieger.

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Thanks for the info and all will be explained in Part 1.

 

And this is part 5. First the people who were the Dark Signers get abducted, then their dark powers are back, then it'is Devack vs. Robo-Taz, then Greiger vs. Robo-Daffy, then Kalin vs. Robo-Marvin, then this and finally Carly vs. Robo-Lola. And people should look up what the cards are and what they can do. But for you I'll tweak the story.

And to answer your question about the Burn Marks, Dark Misty got those from the flame abilities and attacks of Robo-Minerva's Monsters. And Robo-Daffy will be explained when he duels Grieger.

 

Sorry to break the news to you, but people are LAZY. Readers are NOT going to waste their time looking up cards to understand a fic. I'm a YGO fanatic, but I don't remember every single effect of every card and I'm not going to look up a card every time it's unexplained, so it helps to include the effects and whatnot. And you don't need to tweak the story just for me (even though that's very nice), you need to fix it 'cause it has errors.

 

Thank you for explaining the mysterious burn marks, but shouldn't the explaination be in the fic?

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A wise man once said

 

"You should begin at the beginning"

 

Seriously, where did the idea that you could just throw out the fifth part of a story, with no introduction? That's like trying to understand Harry Potter by only reading book 7...

I guess you're right. Sorry.

 

Sorry to break the news to you, but people are LAZY. Readers are NOT going to waste their time looking up cards to understand a fic. I'm a YGO fanatic, but I don't remember every single effect of every card and I'm not going to look up a card every time it's unexplained, so it helps to include the effects and whatnot. And you don't need to tweak the story just for me (even though that's very nice), you need to fix it 'cause it has errors.

 

Thank you for explaining the mysterious burn marks, but shouldn't the explaination be in the fic?

 

Well Would you want me to say that Misty got Burn marks every time she got attacked by one of Robo-Minerva's Fire monsters or by the abilties of her SFD and her Backfire trap? So how is it now, better?

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