Umbra Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 [spoiler=Setting] A hollow somewhat out of the ordinary has appeared in Karakura Town. It is significantly more powerful than any Arrancar encountered during the war seventeen months earlier; Based on reports from squads that were sent out to contain it, its strength appears to rival that of even the strongest Shinigami. Of course, these reports are only fragmented words spoken in the very last moments of the squads' lives. The last reports confirmed the Hollow's name to be "Black Reaper". Soul Society has yet to stabilize after the conflict against Aizen Sousuke and the Arrancar; the third, fifth and ninth divisions are still without leaders. Most of the working Shinigami are fighting uprisings in the Rukongai, which are more frequent than ever. Even the captains are fighting on the frontlines, where surprisingly renegade Shinigami have appeared to fight them. There are also, even more surprisingly, traces of Hollow reiatsu among them... However, an unexpected savior has arrived in Seireitei. An unfamiliar Vizard calling himself Hakyou has appeared, with a unique ability; the power to elevate someone else's power to the same as his; which, in Hakyou's case means a Bankai and a Hollow mask. Captain-Commander Yamamoto was at first hesitant to accept Hakyou's aid to deal with their real-world problems, but reluctantly did so after the unexpected death of Kyouraku Syunsui on the frontlines. Now, new Vizards surface in Seireitei. After two months of concentrated training, they set out to deal with the Black Reaper in Karakura Town, where things are getting worse by the second... [/spoiler] [spoiler=Rules & Expectations] I expect you to follow the rules established in the section. If you don't meet my expectations, you will be asked to find another RP. In addition, images cannot be used in the application, and each entry must be at least 1 paragraph. The appearance must include the unreleased Zanpakuto. The biography must include at least 2 paragraphs, and include life before becoming a Shinigami, what division the character is in, and what position it held within the division at the time of "elevation". Characters must be reasonable and fit within the time constraints of the story. The characters are roughly at half the power level of a captain post elevation. However, given the short time, you have not mastered Kidou up to this level yet. The hollow mask provides no powers except the standard (see [url="http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Vizard#Powers_.26_Abilities"] here[/url] for info) but instead augment standard powers and Kidou. I also expect you to write your character's name in [color="Blue"]Green[/color]. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Application Form (Applications [b]CLOSED[/b])] Submit the entire form, filled out properly. Half-filled forms will not be considered. It is, however, possible to reserve a spot. For now, I will hold [color="Red"]six[/color] open spots. That means, if six forms are accepted, all reservations are immediately removed. [code] [b]Name:[/b] [b]Gender:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] [b]Personality:[/b] [b]Biography:[/b] [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase[/b] [b]Shikai Appearance[/b] [b]Shikai Abilities[/b] [b]Bankai Name[/b] [b]Bankai Appearance[/b] [b]Bankai Abilities[/b] [b]Hollow Mask Appearance[/b] [/code] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Players] Revenant Black: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/228919-bleach-fragments/page__view__findpost__p__4786356"]Hadou Ganji[/url]. Shadow Zero: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/228919-bleach-fragments/page__view__findpost__p__4791679"]Viral Tsunokai[/url] BlindMonkey: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/228919-bleach-fragments/page__view__findpost__p__4812556"]Deizua Hirokaze[/url] Signosis: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/228919-bleach-fragments/page__view__findpost__p__4810944"]Kuroyuri Zokugai[/url] [/spoiler] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/229769-bleach-fragments/"]IC Thread[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 As the first to spot a decent BLEACH role-play in forever, and know it's host, I'll apply. [b]Name:[/b] [color="#2E8B57"]Hadou Ganji[/color] [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] Hadou stands at six feet, two inches. His hair is approximately shoulder length, with royal blue tinge. His muscles are well toned, and his body battle scarred. A single, three inch slash mark lay over his left breast, extending to his ribcage at fifteen degree angle. His eyes are metallic silver, and of average size. He has a slightly more broad nose, but this is oblivious as you notice the single diamond earring he sports in his left ear. He wears the typical Shinigami robes, but without an under garment for his upper torso. In other words, an open upper robe. He keeps his Zanpaktou sealed on his left as well, in it's blue sheath. [b]Personality:[/b] Hadou will speak his mind amongst peers without hesitation. He is very open, but is very poised, despite his appearance. He has a calm nature that is quite conflicting with his "style". He's quite respectful of his superiors, but also will not hesitate to disagree with a commanding officer if he feels the ideal is wrong morally. Moreover, he often seems mellow, without a care; but when approached he is quick to smile brightly. His attitude quickly changes when approached by others. While he carries this mellow mood, in the line of duty, he is nothing short of serious. [b]Biography:[/b] Born and raised in Rukongai, Hadou was a very spoiled child. His mother and father let him have his way. But when his father was bravely killed in the line of duty, his attitude quickly changed. At the age of nine, he was "the man of the house". He went and obtained a job at the local market, sweeping, and cleaning of all sorts, bringing home the bare minimum to support himself and his mother. Just when things looked down, his mother received a letter from the father's family, denoting a large donation to the child and his mother. This sudden explosion of riches led Hadou to realize his father had been keeping he and his mother in poverty while he secretly lived large. His mother ripped apart the letter and tossed aside the their only decent pieces of jewelry: two diamond earrings. His mother would die two years later of a bacterial heart disease. On her body he lay one diamond earring as he kept another, which he wears proudly to this very day. It was then he dedicated the left half of his body sacred. He therefore vowed to change himself to be a better man than his father, as he enlisted in the Thirteen Court Guards. Under the Eleventh Division, he was accepted. Captain Zaraki Kenpachi found decency in Hadou, placing him amongst the fourth seat. This was acceptable, because he wanted nothing more than to work his way up and push the seeming struggle aside. But nearly immediately after he had entered the Court Guards, the "elevation" had pushed his squadron to the front lines. And when the third seat Lieutenant was knocked unconscious, he was next in line. [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase[/b] Sobieru to Wakeru! Yuuki! (Rise and Divide! Revenant!) [b]Shikai Appearance[/b] The Zanpaktou resembles a guillotine. It contains four arms, in a circle like formation, each with exactly thirteen six inch diamond cut teeth surrounding it. Each arm has a blunt, square top. Each arm is about three feet long. The hilt is silver with blue lining. [b]Shikai Abilities[/b] Unlike most Shikai, Hadou's is quite mechanical. When prompted by Hadou, the arms of Revenant begin to rotate at high speeds, turning the Shikai into a vacuum of shredding death. When the arms are not spinning, he can willfully turn them inwards and outwards, like a wrench. If he is able to pin his target with the four arms, he can slowly retract the arms to expand the teeth, penetrating his target to death. [b]Bankai Name[/b] Yuuki Aiseki [b]Bankai Appearance[/b] From four arms to six, and blunt tops to spike tops on each arm. The teeth on the arms are shed, and where the arms meet, there is a single half inch spike. Each arm is six feet long. [b]Bankai Abilities[/b] For each foot of each arm that Revenant holds, the spike may grow one inch every thirty seconds. The spike itself is laced with a powerful poison, which shuts down muscles, beginning with the the target's fingers. The poison then eats away at the victim's skin, with a burning sensation, until it eventually eats the victim completely. The poison is treatable, but within 10 minutes, the target is either completely paralyzed, or dead. [b]Hollow Mask Appearance[/b] Hadou's mask bares four slashes exactly similar to the gash across his left breast. They are blue slashes, matching his hair. It is a rounded mask of course, but has ear coverings for both his left and right ears, ending in flat spikes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 As you already know, accepted. Five slots before reservations are cancelled; get your applications in, everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Well, Umbra, I certainly hope you don't mind. I plan to advertise this, because I'm in the mood for a decent BLEACH rp. And I'll be damned if I let a good one die because no one bothers to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Reserved. I'll have my up, hopefully, in an hour or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 I'm glad you're putting it out there. Black (the Fading variant), reservation noted. Be sure to get it sent in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Ask and ye shall receive. [color=green][b]Name: Kazusa Kurohana[/b][/color] [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Appearance:[/b] Standing at 5’2”, Kazu looks to be about 19 years old, with her long, light purple hair, and her clear purple eyes. She has a very fair complexion, as well as a very small build to her, with rather large bosoms for her size. She is often seen wearing a pink kimono when she is not in regular dress, simply because she finds it comfortable. [b]Personality:[/b] Kazu is a friendly girl, but she is also a very big tease. She loves playing pranks, innocent or otherwise. More often than not, otherwise. She means nothing by it, she just does it for laughs. When worse comes to worst, she will step up, and be a rather maternal figure to those around her, making sure they are well. [b]Biography:[/b] Born to 2 loving parents in Karakura Town, she was named after her grandmother. She grew up, went to school, and did everything a normal human being would. When she hit her teens and began to develop, she entered a rebellious phase, and, knowing she was hot stuff, she was dating a 19 year old boy when she was 16. One night, the two had gone out drinking, and were headed home, when the boyfriend drove into a tree. Kazu died, and he lived on. She stayed there for a few days, before a Shinigami came, and passed her on. Growing up in the Rukongai, Kazu took care of all of her friends as if they were baby dolls, a bit to their annoyance. They loved her for it, but she suffocated them. Time went on, and the girl grew up, and started to go to the academy. Soon enough, her body began to develop once again, and when she returned home on weekends, her male friends had changed. Instead of grumbling about her care, they began to want her to do it MORE. She continued for a while, and then figured out why they did it. This is where she became a tease, seeing how fun it was to mess with the boys. She was one of the trained, and is now heading out to the town she was originally from, to purge the meance known as Black Reaper. [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase[/b] Miwaku, Gokaikiba! (Lure, Lust Fang) [b]Shikai Appearance[/b] A sickle attached to a long chain. The sickle has red going from where the blade begins to the tip, straight through the middle. [b]Shikai Abilities[/b] Upon release, the user charges a lot of Reiatsu into Gokaikiba. The sickle is used to wrap around enemies and restrain them, or to pull back on while the blade is away, oftentimes wrapped around an enemy. Once restrained, the whole weapon will vibrate violently, by charging itself with Reiatsu, causing the chains to restrict tighter. During this time, the blade will dig in deeper if it is in the enemy. It can also be used as a whip, and be swung around in the air, for long distance attacks. The charged Reiatsu will cause the hits to be much stronger. [b]Bankai Name[/b] Genkakku Gokaikiba (Hallucination Lust Fang) [b]Bankai Appearance[/b] The user appears in a purple kimono, with sakura blossoms all over it. The left shoulder of the kimono is down, revealing a bare shoulder. Their lips now have bright red lipstick on them, and their face is white with make-up. Excessive black eyeliner is also present. Her hair is also done up in a traditional manner for a geisha. The sickle and chain return the same, but the blade has grown. The sickle is about 50% larger. [b]Bankai Abilities[/b] All Shikai abilities are retained, although the ball can no longer be thrown. Also, whenever the blade cuts the flesh of an enemy, and lodges into them, it will secrete a toxin. As the toxin enters the victim, it will cause them to hallucinate for 5 seconds, initially. The more times it is lodged into the enemy, and the more areas the blade touches, the longer their hallucination. The hallucination is of Kuza seducing them, but it never gets farther than teasing seduction. Used over time, Kazu herself will fall to the madness. [b]Hollow Mask Appearance[/b] Kazu's mask takes on the look of the average Shinigami or Human female, but the colors scheme is that of a Kabuki actor's makeup. The mask has a wicked smile on it, surrounded by red. There are no teeth, only red lips, with curls coming off the corners of said lips. The eyeholes have a deep purple outlining them, with points coming off of the top right of the purple, headed towards the back of the mask. Random flecks of assorted color are on the mask, seemingly without reason. Finally, when it turns Kazu’s sclera black, it turns her eyes into a rose pink color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 I'd like to reserve a spot. Mostly only posted to let you know I'll be working on an app. Not sure when I'll have the app up but I doubt I'll want to keep you waiting too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Fading, how would she go about holding the released Zanpakuto? There doesn't seem to be a handle. Also, I'm not a fan of the English release command, so if you could translate it, that would be great. Andx, reservation noted. Take the time you need, just make sure you get it done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Well, the sickle has a handle. It just has a chain coming out of the bottom of the handle. And, yes, will do.Japanese added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Ah. Even so, her weapon seems hard to handle, if you know what I mean. She'd most likely cut herself with the sickle if she tried focusing with the ball, and focusing on the sickle just turns the ball into an obstacle. I like the idea, but if I were you, I'd settle for either the sickle or the ball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Alrighty then, the ball is removed, and it is now just the sickle and chain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Adjust the Bankai accordingly, and you're good to go! Four slots before reservations expire, get your applications in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Alright, it has been done. Sorry for the hassle ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Reserve for an application. I have to leave for now, but will get on it when I return. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 I'd like to place a Reservation Umbra, I'll try my best to get it to you very soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Two more reservations noted. Be sure to get your applications in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 My application might not be up until tomorrow. I have a lot of thought that I have to put into it. Hopefully I get it in in time. Just thought I'd let you guys know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 So here's my app Umbra. Be sure to tell me if you want changes to it, but I know you'll speak up if you do. I apologize for my lack of creativity on the bankai as compare to the shikai but my ideas ran out a bit. But enough about that, onto the actual app. [b]Name:[/b] [color="#00FF00"]Shinobu Tsukino[/color] [b]Gender:[/b] Male [spoiler=[b]Appearance:[/b] [i](spoiler isn't a pic, don't worry)[/i]] Shinobu stands at six feet tall exactly. He's thin and somewhat muscular but outwardly the muscles aren't all that apparent. His skin is a healthily colored white meaning it's clearly white but not pale. Shinobu's shoulders are decently broad and his waist is a bit smaller than average giving a very slight triangle like shape to his upper body. His face appears a little longer and slightly more narrow than average and his chin seems more angular than some. His eyes are a dark purple in color and really stand out despite the fact that he always wears dark colors. Shinobu's hair is a very dark blue, rather close to black, and is sleeked back on his head and comes down into a narrow point at the base of his neck; this really adds to the shine. In front, right above his forehead, there is a small band of hair that isn't sleeked back and is a little curled. This moves about freely as he does in battle or just simple motion. Shinobu usually wears the typical Shinigami outfit though in more casual settings he may wear a long sleeved, dark purple t-shirt with various shades of slacks. Regardless of what he wears Shinobu keeps his sealed zanpakuto at his right side at all times. The sword itself is rather ordinary. The threading on the hilt is the typical design with most colored a light purple while the diamond patterns are white. In Shinigami attire he can keep it in place with the white waist sash. In casual attire he holds onto the sheath with his right hand to be able to draw with his left. [/spoiler] [b]Personality:[/b] Shinobu generally tends to be a no-nonsense kind of person. At least, he takes his assignments and work rather seriously and often doesn't appreciate others not taking it seriously. This doesn't mean he doesn't enjoy company or having a good time. He loves spending time with the few people he cares to get close. As long as his friends can get serious when they need to he doesn't mind. He loves observing things and people. A strict sense of justice drives his actions. He has a clear idea of what he deems to be wrong and won't stand for that which his justice condemns. Despite all the attempts to appear serious he's a very kind person who enjoys company and conversation. [spoiler=[b]Biography:[/b]] From early on in his life, it was expected of Shinobu to become a successful Shinigami. Neither of his parents were Shinigami, in fact no one in his family had ever been one. Yet the expectation was set since before he was born and Shinobu was never one to fight against it. His father would often get him going on studying just some of the basic history and other such facts about the Gotei 13 when he was too young to start training physically. Shinobu went along with it, expecting to become a Shinigami at one point in his life due to the emphasis it was given in his life. Shinobu found out why that expectation had been there shortly after he was accepted into the Academy. His parents had never told him but they had gotten into a crippling debt while he was very very young. When the debt collector came to his parents expecting the balance and found they couldn't pay, he left calmly. The next week his parents received a letter stating that if they couldn't pay their oldest son was to become a Shinigami instead. They didn't understand it at the time but knew it had to happen or else they were unsure what would happen to them. Shinobu only found this out because he was confronted by the debt collector early after his entrance into the Shinigami Academy. The collector reminded him that should he decide he didn't want to become a Shinigami his parents' lives would be the cost. Shinobu took the info and and continued but began to research the collector's dealings. With some help from a rather bright friend in the Academy Shinobu found out that the collector was a fraudulent loaner of money who intentionally set people up to get into debts they couldn't pay and then tried to have their children killed in the Shinigami Academy. Shinobu never did discover a motive past the man was simply insane or evil. Knowing what he did inspired a very strong emotional reaction to the collector's actions. Shinobu from then on developed his strong sense of justice. As it turned out he never had to do anything to the man as one of the instructors of the Academy found him out through an investigation in response to several tests being tampered with. And so the man who had caused his life to take the path of a Shinigami was no longer present. But being close to graduation Shinobu couldn't think of anything else he possibly could do. And he'd been raised to become a Shinigami so he was going to continue on that path. Upon entrance into the Gotei 13 Shinobu was placed into the thirteenth squad. After some years had passed he was promoted to a seated position and slowly climbed the ranks over another few years. He only ever got the sixth seat in the squad when the Black Reaper menace appeared and a Vizard named Hakyou appeared to the Gotei 13. Despite being a sixth seat he was selected for the elevation and in the process gained his bankai and hollow mask powers. Having received the powers Shinobu is a little conflicted. He now has the potential to better maintain order and peace in the world but in the process the presence of his inner hollow came about. Not one to depress himself over such things, he instead focused on putting an end to the Black Reaper. [/spoiler] [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase:[/b] Yami no honoo ni idakarete kiero. Jouha Messhouen. (Really, and I mean really, rough translation: Embrace the scattering tenebrous flames. Doom Plague.) [b]Shikai Appearance:[/b] Shinobu's sword is consumed in a bright purple glow when the command is given. From there the sword splits into two weapons, one a normal length katana, the other a shorter sword. The katana resembles his sealed zanpakuto except that the blade's colors are that of a fire and the colors even seem to flicker as a fire would. The short sword is dark purple in color and seems to be made almost entirely of reiatsu with only an basic outline of physical form visible inside the shifting energy. Shinobu wields the long sword in his left hand. He holds the short sword in his right and holds it upside-down, that is with the blade pointing behind him were he to have his arms at his sides. [b]Shikai Abilities:[/b] The power of Shinobu's zanpakuto is very much element based, can handle multiple opponents, and takes a little time and planning to be used most effectively. The power starts with the normal length sword. When it strikes anything solid sparks fly off the blade in all directions. These sparks then grow into simple fireballs that float about an inch off the ground. As they are Shinobu can't move them and they would barely hurt someone should they touch it. If left unattended for more than a few minutes the fireballs vanish. The next stage of the power involves Shinobu putting out his reiatsu, which is light purple in color. As he continues to fight and make more sparks his reiatsu spreads and coats the fireballs in a light. At this stage Shinobu can kick them at high speeds at his opponents to deal decent damage. The final stage involves the short sword. It's element is darkness and when used it sends out large waves of darkness. This is very consuming on reiatsu so Shinobu tries to use it only when necessary. The darkness the covers the fireballs. It proceeds to expand them to about a foot in diameter and the flames turn black. From there Shinobu can freely control them and can most effectively use them by drawing them into his blades for powerful slash attacks. [b]Bankai Name:[/b] Majin Rengokusatsu (Again, really rough translation: Infernal Suffering) [b]Bankai Appearance:[/b] Shinobu declares bankai and his reiatsu errupts from his zanpakuto. Instead of it's usual light color it now turns dark and engulfs him momentarily. After it recedes Shinobu is seen with light metal armor on his chest, shoulders, and legs as well as a helmet. The armor is dark purple to black in color and doesn't hamper his movement's too much. It can help reduce damage from hits but isn't thick enough to completely block attacks. Shinobu now wields a large lance almost a half foot longer than he is tall. The weapon is not long and narrow but large and heavy. The blade is about two feet in length itself and seems to be more for slashing than for stabbing. [b]Bankai Abilities:[/b] In this form Shinobu's usually light-based reatsu is now dark-based. The form requires much less thought and planning than his shikai and seems more for simply overpowering opponents. The most common usage is to unleash large surges of darkness off the armor for defense, draw the excess into the spear, and then rotate it at great length to create seemingly random burst of attacks. The armor itself is not all that thick and can be broken. As pieces break and fall off, more power begins to surge from Shinobu but he also begins to lose control of it and will more quickly run out of power. Shinobu's name means endurance and he certainly needs it for continual use of his bankai. This form is meant to quickly dispatch an opponent and Shinobu can't say he's terribly fond of it. However it does it's job when it needs to. [b]Hollow Mask Appearance:[/b] Shinobu's mask resembles a bird somewhat. At the sides around his ears there are several jagged portions that seem to be feathers. The eyes are slits yet still provide plenty of room to see through. It seems to have a bit of a beak to it as well. There are dark purple slashes it seems running around the edges of the mask and a single black stripe that runs diagonally between the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 Umbra here is my app, His Bankai's appearance remains mostly the same as the second form of his Shakai if you insist I will add the basic Shakai appearance to the Bankai's appearance as well. I hope its an acceptable app, if not I can redo what ever it is you wish to be changed or added. [b]Name:[/b] [color="#006400"]Masaru Hayate[/color] [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Appearance:[/b] Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Long Braids Eye Color: Hazel Ht: 5’11 or 180.3cm Wt: 185 or 83.91kg Description: A handsome dark -skinned man with a fairly muscular physique, his hair is worn in long dark braids much like Tōsen but with a dark blue tint, his eyes are Hazel. His facial hair consists of a thin dark goatee. He wears a sleeveless haori over what appears to be the same uniform of the Onmitsukidō but with no sleeves, with long white gloves reaching the forearms, a white sash and white jika-tabi (boots). [b]Personality:[/b] Hayate is a quiet man who rarely interacts with others unless it is necessary, he tends to sit and observe people and situations only acting when it is of the utmost importance. When he talks it is usually short with one word being uttered, but on certain occasions and with people he enjoys to be around he can start rambling on and on. Hayate enjoys watching movies, and he dislikes loud things. His favorite food is eggplant and he dislikes unsweetened tea. [b]Biography:[/b] Hayate was born into a fairly rich family though as a child Hayate always felt as if he didn’t belong in the family. He was more of a loner in school always by himself and never truly had any friends. Despite his demeanor Hayate had the best grades of his class. He tried once to become class president but due to having no friends it never happened. Later in Hayate’s late teens he was heading out for the first day of college when a drunk driver smashed into the side of his car crushing the door within inches of piercing Hayate’s chest. Later that night after being admitted into the local hospital Hayate had died from internal bleeding. Hayate had roamed around as a spirit for quite some time after his death, he mostly followed his much younger sister who seemed to be in tune with the spirit world. After several months of this Hayate began to get angry, showing violent behavior and scaring his younger sister so much she was placed in intensive care at the local hospital, with their parents thinking their was something major wrong with her. After a few days Hayate was on a rampage in the human world causing havoc throughout the highway where he was killed. It was here which changed Hayate’s life, and ultimately his purpose as a spirit. A Shinigami on surveillance of the near by town had gotten word about a spirit on the verge of a hollowfication. This specific Shinigami met Hayate face to face and after a bit of a struggle was able to perform a Soul Burial on him before Hayate had undergone a full transformation. After years spent in the Rukongai of the Soul Society Hayate had gained emission into the Shinigami Academy which was usually an unheard of event. Soon after he graduated from the Shinigami Academy he was placed in the 1st Division under General Yamamoto who realized his true nature and goals, becoming a 3rd Seat. Under the order of General Yamamoto he was sent to Hueco Mundo to monitor the Vasto Lorde. After the incidents with Aizen and Amagai he returned under Personal Recommendation from the General to be able to lead the 1st Squads lower ranking members like he was the Lieutenant. The only difference that being Hayate never gained the title and could had to listen to the true Lieutenant of the 1st squad who remained Hayate’s superior. Hayate remained as the 3rd seat for several years, but one day upon orders from the Captain Commander Hayate was sent out to lead a group of his fellow 1st squad members out for a infiltration mission into Huceo Mundo, Several of his squad members tagged along to complete the mission as swiftly as possible with limited problems. It was in this mission that all squad members accompanying Hayate had met their defeat. Hayate was left alone to defend himself against the horrors that awaited him, but the next thing he new he was unconscious. Day's later a rescue squad was sent in to Huceo Mundo to find out what happened to the lack of communication between the 1st squads 3rd seat and the Soul Society. When Hayate was found he was on a rampage destroying everything in his path. The first thing the rescue team had noticed was that Hayate was the only survivor. Their was only one reason the rescue squad new it to be Hayate, despite being covered in so much blood was that being the severely torn up 1st squad robe that was tearing apart with every move Hayate made. After a very long and grueling battle the rescue squad had finally subdued Hayate seeing him as the most likely person to have killed his own fellow squad members, and possibly have some type of hollowfication, or close to that of becoming one. He was immediately brought back to Soul Society where he awaited the 12th squad's orders on if he was okay to be released or if their tests showed that he should be imprisoned or yet even killed. In the end Hayate was found to have not gone through a Hollowfication of any kind and that besides the brief out burst of anger at the scene Hayate was fine to continue his duty. It was some time after this that a new Vizard had showed up at Soul Society and Was recruiting Squad members to under go what he called an elevated state. Hayate was willing to give it a shot when he was offered the chance by the strange Vizard. [b]Shikai Name & Release Phrase[/b] Genshuku; Anata no tamashī o hōki suru Genshuku, (Rough translation - Relinquish your Soul Genshuku) [b]Shikai Appearance[/b] The golden cross around Hayate’s neck will transform into a blade made out of Kido that looks similar to a basic Katana. The hilt is a solid blue color with a guard similar color with jewels at each end of the guard. There is no physical blade of the sword, but a blade made of solid Kido that takes a form a blue blade. [b]Shikai Abilities[/b] False Form - The ability of this sword is to be able to take massive pressure from an attack, but cannot do any physical harm to anything it hits. The first ability serves as a catalyst for the swords true purpose that being the prison of Genshuku's true form. When the sword is released a dark mist forms with a coffin covered in chains. True Form - The chains of the coffin shatter as the coffin opens revealing nothing but an ordinary looking katana. Nothing about the sword is special, but the blade takes a similar look as the false form as it is just a blue Kido blade. The ability of this sword is to manipulate energy in a simple fashion. Using a Similar attack like Ichigo's Getsuga, Hayate can send a wave of preassure that of what was contained from his false form, from the tip of his zanpaktou that can repulse attacks. The Down side to this is that if an opponent can figure out the ability of his Zanpaktou's true form from fighting his False form then they could easily deminish the amount of preassure contained inside the False form. Alternitly Hayate can strike things and gain preassure as well but it takes almost twice as long to gain the nessary preassure for a few decent strikes in this form. [b]Bankai Name[/b] Hayai Genshuku [b]Bankai Appearance[/b] Hayate’s overall appearance does not change drastically, what little it does change is usually unnoticeable. His eyes seem to darken from its usual light Hazel to a more prominent forest green. His hair seems to have shortened a bit to allow less of a distraction for him. His uniform is slightly changed as well, instead of the usual white gloves and jika-tabi (boots) they are now a solid Black. [b]Bankai Abilities[/b] The Bankai will create an armor that surrounds Hayate, as well as a single Kido type spells. The Kido cannot do any physical harm to the opponent. For his Armor Hayate uses the preassure infused within his Zanpaktou to condense his Spiritual power creating an invisible armor. In this state Hayate moves slower but can take a series of deadly attacks before his armor would even be cracked. Hayate's first Kido spell created by his Zanpaktou is the "360 Degree Barrier", A barrier he learned and added in his own twist. Hayate creates a sphere like barrier around him and his enemy, made with gravitational properties, the barrier most normal attacks back at anybody who should try to attack it. The only way for it to be broken is from the inside. (This barrier isn't necessarily to protect Hayate but to separate his Opponent from his companions for a more one on one fight.) [b]Hollow Mask Appearance[/b] The hollow mask Hayate summons fully covers his head in a bone like armor. In the back of the mask 8-10 long spikes similar to hair hang down from the bottom of it with the tips pointing slightly away from him. His sclera’s are fully yellow and the mouth of the mask is very similar to teeth like spikes pointing both up and down. Above his Left eye is a blue stripe in a V shape with the lefter most part of the stripe thicker then the right. Also their is a added blue stripe that goes from being quite thick up around his left temple to a very sharp point down around his left chin. Above his right eye is a thin darker white stripe that forms the V shaped Blue stripe above his left eye into a more W shape but more at an angle then its counter parts side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 Andx, accepted. Hayate, [b]not accepted[/b]. First off, I am not a fan of self-named characters. Name needs to change. Second, your character is a bit too overpowered for what I have in mind for this story. Destroying everything in his path? Third, that is not how the players gain their masks; you obviously didn't read the whole thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 First off what are you talking about self named character? Are you saying that because my username is the same as the character name thats a reason for non acceptance? Second I don't really see how he is overpowered his entire Zanpaktou abilities are defensive, which leaves him with hand - hand or just plain sword fighting, since you said they don't know much Kido at this point. If you could be a bit more specific about what it is exactly that is a bit overpowered then I can make changes. 3rd I did read it all I just misinterpreted what you meant by then whole Elevate thing. I thought you meant thats how only your character gained the vizard abilities. So if I change the bio to coincide with the elevate thing which I misunderstood, changed a bit of the overpoweredness of the character then I can be accepted? [b]EDIT[/b]: I updated his Bio to the right things involving his mask, as soon as you let me know what it is thats a bit overpowered about him I will update that as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 1) Yes, that is the reason. It's a lack of creativity. 2) I was talking about things in your biography rather than in your Shikai. As far as I can recall, Ichigo was the first Shinigami to ever go into Hueco Mundo; having your character do the same puts them at at least captain status. The fact that he managed to "destroy everything in his path" and "slaughter the entire squad" without any offensive powers kinda speaks for itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 I'd like to reserve a spot if there are any left, I'll get my app done ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zero Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 I thought I saved my app, but I am now finding that it is missing, so I have to start all over. D: I will try to get it done by today though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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