Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's -Deicide Arc- [PG-16]

[TheYuseiMeister]

New Story Arc for Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's (all rights are of their respective owners) by TheYuseiMeister. Okay here I go!

NOTE: Okay, this arc takes place after the WRGP Finale.

Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's -Deicide Arc-

[url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6i8Udy7Ug-0"]Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's Opening 5[/url]

Chapter 1
The Endgame Op 1[Boy meets Girl]

A month has passed and New Domino City is back to normal after the events involving the new directors and the Team 5D's in the WRGP. It seems no one witnessing the event remembers anything except Team 5D's. All evidence of the directors Jose, Lester, and Primo were wiped out and the search for a new director was on.

Several days passed by as Lazar tried to run New Domino City by himself until he received a call from the Board of New Domino City stating that there was a new director already instated and needed a ride from the Airport to the Central Security building. Lazar, trying to keep his job, gladly went to pick up the director.

"Oh ho ho ho ho! Finally I get someone to do this tiring job for me! It's been such a pain to run the city... I wonder why anyone even signs up for such a tiring job," says Lazar to himself while getting into the limo he prepared. He took seat in the middle of the limo with a TV screen displaying the back of the limousine. Lazar opened up the mini fridge located in the bottom of his seat and took out a bottle of water, opened it and took a long gulp.

"Ahh," said the satisfied Lazar. "Okay driver, get a move on. We mustn't be late in picking up the new director."

The man in front stepped on the gas peddle and the limousine began to move. Lazar sat back and began to reminisce on the past directors, wondering if the new director would be as insane as the last four. He shook his head, "No! I mustn't think that! The director is the person in charge! He's the one who signs my paycheck!"

The limousine moved calmly on the road and suddenly stopped. Lazar confused asked, "What is it!? Why have we stopped?"

The limousine driver then replied, "We're here sir."

"Oh. He he."

Lazar opened the door of the limousine and stepped out into the sunlight. New Domino City's international airport was a giant building with long tubes connecting to other smaller buildings each labeled after a letter in the English alphabet. From Lazar's perspective, it looked like a giant beehive with indoor plumbing. Lazar walked with his hands behind his back to the automatic glass doors and entered inside to suddenly bump into someone.

"Oof!" Lazar yelled out in surprise. "What's the meaning of this?! Who bumped into me?! Don't you know who I am!?"

Lazar slowly stood up and looked at the person he bumped into. A woman.

"Oww. Are you okay?" Asked the woman, who looked like she was around 18 yrs of age, blond and well endowed.. "I'm so sorry. I'm such a clutz. I..."

"You should be!" Interrupted Lazar. "Do you know who I am?!"

"Well, from what I can tell... a very angry man," replied the woman.

"Arrgh!" Lazar growled, trying to keep his anger from escaping. "I am the Vice-Director! I was on my way to pick up the new Director when you bumped into me!"

The woman smiled and asked, "Is that so?"

"Yes! Now, please move aside as I must find the new director."

"You're looking at her."

Lazar stopped dead in his tracks and asked tentatively, "Wh...wh...what?"

"The name's Mia. Mia Zara. And starting today, I'm the Director of New Domino City. Nice to meet you Vice- Director."

The Endgame Op 1[Boy meets Girl] END

[ThatPhantomGuy]

[quote name='TheYuseiMeister' timestamp='1289714833' post='4783295']
New Story Arc for Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's (all rights are of their respective owners) by TheYuseiMeister. Okay here I go!

[i]Good! You say something about the copyrights! Not like those other writers on here...[/i]

NOTE: Okay, this arc takes place after the WRGP Finale.

Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's -Deicide Arc-

[url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6i8Udy7Ug-0"]Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's Opening 5[/url]

[i]Okay! Here weeeeeeeeeeeeee gooooooooo![/i]

Chapter 1
The Endgame Op 1[Boy meets Girl]

[i]Hmmm. This seems like it's going to be a pairing fic. What is Op stand for? Operation? Option? Openning? [/i]

A month has passed and New Domino City is back to normal after the events involving the new directors and the Team 5D's in the WRGP. It seems no one witnessing the event remembers anything except Team 5D's. All evidence of the directors Jose, Lester, and Primo were wiped out and the search for a new director was on.

[i]I don't remember witnessing anything at all.[/i]

Several days passed by as Lazar tried to run New Domino City by himself until he received a call from the Board of New Domino City stating that there was a new director already instated and needed a ride from the Airport to the Central Security building. Lazar, trying to keep his job, gladly went to pick up the director.

[i]I smells trouble...[/i]

"Oh ho ho ho ho! Finally I get someone to do this tiring job for me! It's been such a pain to run the city... I wonder why anyone even signs up for such a tiring job," says Lazar to himself while getting into the limo he prepared. He took seat in the middle of the limo with a TV screen displaying the back of the limousine. Lazar opened up the mini fridge located in the bottom of his seat and took out a bottle of water, opened it and took a long gulp.

[i]But I though Lazar always wanted to run NDC?[/i]

"Ahh," said the satisfied Lazar. "Okay driver, get a move on. We mustn't be late in picking up the new director."

[i]"Y'know that wasn't water." the driver said.[/i]

The man in front stepped on the gas peddle and the limousine began to move. Lazar sat back and began to reminisce on the past directors, wondering if the new director would be as insane as the last four. He shook his head, "No! I mustn't think that! The director is the person in charge! He's the one who signs my paycheck!"

[i]Aha ha ha! That crazy Lazar. Too bad I can't find any grammar or spelling issues...[/i]

The limousine moved calmly on the road and suddenly stopped. Lazar[color=red],[/color] confused[color=red],[/color] asked, "What is it!? Why have we stopped?"

The limousine driver then replied, "We're here sir."

"Oh. He he."

[i]Wow, the airport must be like a block away or something. But I love Lazar's 'He he.' and the end there.[/i]

Lazar opened the door of the limousine and stepped out into the sunlight. New Domino City's international airport was a giant building with long tubes connecting to other smaller buildings each labeled after a letter in the English alphabet. From Lazar's perspective, it looked like a giant beehive with indoor plumbing. Lazar walked with his hands behind his back to the automatic glass doors and entered inside to suddenly bump into someone.

[i]It's like a Super Mario airport! Or a beehive with indoor plumming? Lazar's pretty clumsy.[/i]

"Oof!" Lazar yelled out in surprise. "What's the meaning of this?! Who bumped into me?! Don't you know who I am!?"

[i]"CLOWN MAN!"[/i]

Lazar slowly stood up and looked at the person he bumped into. A woman.

[i]A-A-A-A-A woman?![/i]

"Oww. Are you okay?" [color=red]a[/color]sked the woman, who looked like she was around 18 yrs of age, blond and well endowed.. "I'm so sorry. I'm such a clutz. I..."

[i]No, I'm pretty sure Lazar's the clutz here.[/i]

"You should be!" [color=red]i[/color]nterrupted Lazar. "Do you know who I am?!"

"Well, from what I can tell... a very angry man," replied the woman.

[i]Heh heh. A very angry LITTLE man.[/i]

"Arrgh!" Lazar growled, trying to keep his anger from escaping. "I am the Vice-Director! I was on my way to pick up the new Director when you bumped into me!"

[i]'keep his anger from showing' would sound nicer. And is it okay for him to just blab out what he's doing there? Well, it IS Lazar...[/i]

The woman smiled and asked, "Is that so?"

"Yes! Now, please move aside as I must find the new director."

"You're looking at her."

[i]"IMPOSSIBLE! THIS IS JAPAN! WOMEN CAN'T HAVE OFFICES OF AUTHORITYYYYYYY!"[/i]

Lazar stopped dead in his tracks and asked tentatively, "Wh...wh...what?"

[i]Space out the 'wha' and 'what?'.[/i]

"The name's Mia. Mia Zara. And starting today, I'm the Director of New Domino City. Nice to meet you Vice- Director."

[i]Oh snap! Didn't see that one coming. She seems like she'll make for a great director though, as long as she signs Lazar's paychecks.[/i]

The Endgame Op 1[Boy meets Girl] END
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Okay, so this wasn't a pairing fic. Or was it MiaxLazar? *Shudders*

Your grammar and spelling is overall great, you just need a little more in your paragraphs. Since this is a prologue, I guess you could get away with it being short, but you'd need to have longer chapters. The story looks like it's going to be a pretty good one, moreover since a female is the main character. This fic get's a Phantom Stamp of Approval!