Future Paradise v. SleepingKirby [OVER]

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Future Paradise v. SleepingKirby

 

 

[spoiler=Opponent]

Rules

~ You have to be a new opponent

~ Post card & OCG

 

[spoiler=Card Requirements]

~ LV. 5+

~ DARK monster

~ Tokens in effect

 

 

[spoiler=Voters & Voting]

~ Must have a good reson for voting. Explain your vote.

If you win.....

 

5 : 0 50 Points to Winner

4 : 1 40 Points to Winner

3 : 2 30 Points to Winner

 

[spoiler=Other]

I will post my card when my opponent posts theirs. We reserve the right to ask for details and reject votes. Our cards are posted below.

 

[spoiler=Future Paradise]

When this monster is Summoned, you must pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Calvary Token (Warrior/Lv. 3/ATK 1200/DEF 1200). Calvary tokens cannot attack. While you control a Calvary Token, your opponent cannot declare attacks on this monster. During your Standby Phase, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Calvary Token to your side of the field. At any time, you may Tribute 1 Calvary Token to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Lv. 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=SleepingKirby]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. While this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 1 monster you control to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Soul Token"s (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 0). The ATK and DEF of these Tokens are equal to half the ATK and DEF of 1 of your removed from play monsters. As long as you control a "Soul Token", this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

[Newfie Kuriboh Shark]

i will be your opponent! will post card soon!

 

wait? do i have to be a new member?

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Alright.

But post 1st, or else~

[Newfie Kuriboh Shark]

read the requirements. to busy. i must quit. can someone else join?

[Anti-Apocryphal]

You don't have to be a new member.

[Sweetie Belle]

What exactly does "New opponent" mean? Does it mean I can't have gone against you before?

 

Assuming the above is true, I'll go against you:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. While this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 1 monster you control to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Soul Token"s (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 0). The ATK and DEF of these Tokens are equal to half the ATK and DEF of 1 of your removed from play monsters. As long as you control a "Soul Token", this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

When this monster is Summoned, you must pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Calvary Token (Warrior/Lv. 3/ATK 1200/DEF 1200). Calvary tokens cannot attack. While you control a Calvary Token, your opponent cannot declare attacks on this monster. During your Standby Phase, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Calvary Token to your side of the field. At any time, you may Tribute 1 Calvary Token to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Lv. 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard.

 

You're accepted. Begin voting!!!

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Hello? Vote!

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

I like what Kirby's card tries to do in terms of summoning conditions and Token support. Effect seems a bit plain to me, and lacking real power for a lv8.

 

Paradise's card is costly, but very useful and I think 1000 Life Points is a fair trade off for a Level 4 or lower revival. A lot of OCG problems (e.g: what Attribute are the Tokens, 'cannot select this card as an attack target', it's spelt Cavalry).

 

I think both of this cards are hit and miss, but I'll vote for... er... Paradise. As I think his card is a bit more inventive and I don't think Kirby's card fits in with the archtype.

 

Ps put the cards in post 1.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Thanks for your vote!

(And I'll do that if I can get both codes)

[Hila Ⅰ]

I like both cards, Kirby's is very hard to summon however it's tokens could potentially be equal to an average level 4 monster. And correct me if im wrong they can Attack?

While Paradise's tokens cannot however the effect is more detailed however I personally would not pay 1000 Lifepoints for such a mediocre token however there is no clause of not being able to tribute it which is the same as Kirby's But then the complicated process to summon those tokens is more of a hinderence than a help so overall im going with...

 

Future Paradise

 

Oh by the you have mispelled Cavalry and Chief but that dosent really matter

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Who cares. =P Thanks for your vote! ^_^

[Sweetie Belle]

@Future Paradise: To get the urls for the cards, right-click and select "Copy Image Location"

[LVPD-SWAT]

Can i vote

[Hila Ⅰ]

Anyone can vote in these circumstances u just need to state a valid reason

[LVPD-SWAT]

i vote for futuer paradise cause they have a defence

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

That isn't really a valid reason.

[LVPD-SWAT]

aw man . ok paradise cause it has a good offence and the best defence in this vote

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

votes cannot be based on the ATK and DEF of the Mobster Monster

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Please put in a detailed vote.

@Mr Spaz- Please vote as well.

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

I was getting to that <_<

Let's see, SleepingKirby's card: Pros: good use of Tokens Cons: Very hard to summon, there's already a card that summons Tokens called "Soul Tokens" with different stats

Future Paradise: Generally a good card, except for spelling issues.

Forgot, vote goes to Future Paradise

[Mugendramon]

*Votes Kirby*

 

...*explains*

Both cards are a Meh to me, but Kirby's is better in OCG Terms. I'll now give a fix to yours, Future:

 

When this monster is Summoned, you must pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Calvary Token (Warrior/Lv. 3/ATK 1200/DEF 1200). Calvary tokens cannot attack. While you control a Calvary Token, your opponent cannot declare attacks on this monster select this card as an attack target. During your Standby Phase, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Calvary Token to your side of the field. At any time During either players' turn, you may can Tribute 1 Calvary Token to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Lv. Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard. [/explanation]

I might add that this might not be a valid reason. If it is not, tell me and I'll improve it.

[Sleepy]

Future Paradise:

 

When this monster card is Summoned, you must pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 "Calvary Token" (Warrior-Type /Lv. Level 3/ ATK 1200/ DEF 1200). "Calvary Tokens" cannot attack. While you control a "Calvary Token", your opponent cannot declare attacks on this monster select this card as an attack target[/b]. During your Standby Phase, you may can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Calvary Token" to your side of the field. At any time, You may can Tribute 1 "Calvary Token" to Special Summon to your side of the field 1 Lv. Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard (this effect can be activated during either player's turn).

It has a lot of OCG errors.

-"May" instead of "can"

-Unnecessary "to your side of the field" statements are redundant and even when you actually need to use them, one must first state where the card comes from and then where its going.

-"Bla-bla Token(s)" is always written with these --> " " and capitalized.

-"Lv." is actually written "Level".

 

Well, enough of that. I'm not going to base my vote only in OCG. In my opinion I think this card is overpowered.

Its effect basically says: "When this card is Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard".

Its very VERY splashable as it only specifies Level 4 or lower monsters regardless of Type, Attribute, Arch-Type, or any sort of distinction that would make it more balanced... and it can keep making them if it gets to stay. An extra monster revival is way more valuable than just 1000 Life Points.

In addition, it cannot be attacked as long as you have at least 1 of these Tokens (not that there would be many reasons to not use the revival effect instead of keeping the Token anyways).

It has a good amount of ways to be Summoned. Coming from the regular Normal/Tribute Summons, to effects like Monster Reborn, Call of the Haunted, and even Fire Ant Azcator's destruction.

 

SleepingKirby:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. While this card is removed from play, you can remove from play 1 monster you control to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Soul Tokens"s (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK ?/DEF ?). The ATK and DEF of these Tokens are Their ATK and DEF are equal to half the ATK and DEF of 1 of your removed from play monsters. As long as you control a "Soul Token", this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

-"Bla-bla Tokens" usually have the plural "s" inside the quote marks and not outside (check Scapegoat's last version).

-For the way you are addressing the Tokens' ATK and DEF, I think you were aiming for the undefined stats rather than ATK 0/ DEF 0. If you put the "0" value, then your Tokens DO have a definite ATK and DEF and therefore, their ATK and DEF is "increasing" and not "becoming". Also, when addressing "original" ATK/DEF, the value of your Tokens would be different depending on that.

 

This is rather hard to use. Tilting towards underpowered. You cannot Summon it in any other way but having it removed from play somehow (only Macro Cosmos, Dimensional Fissure, Allure of Darkness, and Chaos Sorcerer come to mind for that function), and that even includes having it revived after Summoning it properly first.

The Tokens are either for defensive purposes or for Tribute/Synchro due to their possible stats (that's good, no abuse but they are decent). I could also see some weird tactic where the Tokens become each half of the stats of the monster you removed to Summon this monster.

Just noticing now, I could also see some draw engine using not only Allure, but Trade in (and possibly "Recurring Nightmare" to some extent). Those are usually a little inconsistent if you don't have more than 4 targets. There must be something I'm not seeing.

 

Anyways, I think it has potential but its one of those that might not work that well at the end... needs actual testing to find out >.<"

I like it

 

 

My vote goes to SleepingKirby

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

Cardmaker glitches up when you try to put a token with ? ATK.

[Sleepy]

Cardmaker glitches up when you try to put a token with ? ATK.

 

I did not get what you just said O_o

I haven't made any cards since the new image of the forum, but for what I recall you should be able to write about anything you wanted to (including jokes like "Imma Firin mah Lazor!!!" and such), you should be able to put a "?" in the effect.

 

Well... I'll go see for myself

*goes to Cardmaker for testing*

 

EDIT:

only 1 "?" symbol at a time goes well, if you put a bunch of them together it appears as "3%F" repeating depending on how many "?" there are.