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[b]Name:[/b] Dimitre Lokheath
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Related Pharaoh:[/b] -N/A-
[b]Personality:[/b]
Dimitre is a good friend and a good person, one thing that is hard to understand about him are his actions and thoughts, while dueling he is cold and cruel and unhuman, doesn't care for his opponent, but he never disregards an oponent, even beeing a good person sometimes he gets realy mad, and that can get him on his Dark side.

[b]Bio:[/b]
Lost his parents at the age of 9, from that time foward only had his friends since his whole family was unreacheable by everyone, lived with his friends Hellena, Darion and Charlote, they grew up together since that time, they aways had fun dueling each other for fun and sport but all of that changed one day when without knowing Dimitre touched a card that Darion's brother gave to him 3 days before dying with his left hand during a duel bringing the monster to the real world, he only though that was a Hologram and ordered th monster monster attack Charlote's Life points directly, the results... Charlote Died and left Hellena, Darion and Dimitre with nothing but a memento the card "The Reaper of the Prosperous - Lyndes" that was the card that she would give to Dimitre on his birthday some months later in that year, what was kinda ironic because she was a prosperous student and duelist, Dimitre would have killed himself if wasn't by Hellena's and Darion's intervention, after that he sware to never more use his left hand on a duel again, some months later Darion and Dimitre were walking home and they saw the building where Hellena were with her family on fire, they run to help, Dimitre was able to save some peoples but when he got back in to see where was Darion and Hellena he find them Hellena was unconscious and had to be caried, but while they were running back outside a lot of metal bars felt of the sky and were heading to hit Dimitre and Hellena but Darion pushed them of the way but consequently was impalated several times by the metal bars and dies in front of Dimitre's eyes, just lefting a single memento the card "The Reaper of the War - Vicento" the last gift that he gave to Dimitre before died, Darion were always seeking for a good duel... after that Dimitre thought that he couldn't let anyone get near him, because everone who does died because of him, some weeks later Hellena were hited by a bus and get into a deep coma, after hearding abut what hapened to Hellena, Dimitre ran to the hospital to find her laying in a bed at near death, the doctor that knew Dimitre and Hellena, called Dimitre and said "Dimitre, Hellena probably won't come back from the coma. I know that it is hard but she had this package with her, it is destined to you, I think that would be good if you had it." than he gave to Dimitre a Package with his name writen on it, he opened and there was a card and a letter for him the card were "The Reaper of the Shadows - Yumei" and the letter said: "Happy birthday Dimitre! I know as much as you do how hard these last months had been so the best thing for us is to us stick together and not let the other down! The test for the dual academy are next year, promise me that we are going together! and remember what all of us promised each other when you turned 13 some years ago!" Dimitre would never forget what they had promised each other "My soul, heart and mind is yours and will always be! No matter what happen we will always be friends!" after reading the letter and once more remembered about the promise of 3 years ago he went to Hellena's room, put a Necklace that he bought for her birthday that would be some days before his own on her neck, kissed her and said whle crying "We are going to the duel academy together, all of us, all four off us, I promise!", after this last incident he started dueling like crazy and practice his soul summoning for good now, now he is almosta master of the soul summoning and never pass an oportunity to train it and be close to his friends again and is going to attend The Duel Academy with his friends at his side.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
Dark long hair, one Black eye and the other is mostly of the time bandaged but when uncovered his left eye shines with a terefing scarlet light, left side of the boddy all tattooed, most of the time have the left uper side of his body bandaged, and his right arm is filled with wounds and scars, wears Boots, Black pants, a belt, a Sleaveless black shirt, a black overcoat with dark purple simbols all over, black gloves with dark purple simbols, Glasses (like these but with Black Lens: http://98.130.116.187/images/Cosplay%20Props/alucardglasses.jpg ).

[b]Deck Types:[/b]
The Reaper's forces:
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231617-the-reapers-forces/ (it isn't finished yet, but I will work on them right away).

[b]Ace Card:[/b]
[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/992/130130.jpg[/img]

[b]Dorm:[/b] Eraser Bronze (bad at tests good at duels)

Well I had an Ideia for him that uses his tattos and explain why he bandage himself, Dimitre is a descendant of an ancient clan, the clan of the reapers, Represented on his cards, and because of that he was borned cursed, with his left side of the body bandaged, because if he touch a monster card that resemble some that died or someone died for that card or the dead person was important for the card's owner, that person's soul will use the card as a host and will be summoned as the card's monster. (if this ideia don't work Dimitre will be Related to Narmes or Hor-Aha the one that is avaible).
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hm.. cards are basically extending one of the most used style of card's "Death" (which has been failed many times), but that doesn't really matter and IK that you're knew so the ocg is easily let off but the misspelling of the word 'type' in every effect that uses it?..
and some of them are OP (overpowered) 2000 ATK and 1600 DEF with an effect that destroys any lv 5 or higher monster that battles with it really isn't balanced, with an effect that kills lv 5 or higher that battle it it should be reasonably low enough so that lv 4 or lower could kill it.. needs some kind of restriction or cost..
(above is commenting the cards)

your name is the name of a FFVII char with the last name mispelled.. Vincent would probably be OK but no naming your character the same as an actual character just because they don't exist in the show/series/world..

and i don't really get what you said at the bottom.. so basically if the card resembles someone that died that your character knew you can summon their spirit with the spirit taking the form of the monster in the monster card picture??


[sorry if i might sound harsh.. its 721 am here and i usually don't get up till after midday while on holidays (currently) and i didnt go to sleep..]
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hm.. cards are basically extending one of the most used style of card's "Death" (which has been failed many times), but that doesn't really matter and IK that you're knew so the ocg is easily let off but the misspelling of the word 'type' in every effect that uses it?..
and some of them are OP (overpowered) 2000 ATK and 1600 DEF with an effect that destroys any lv 5 or higher monster that battles with it really isn't balanced, with an effect that kills lv 5 or higher that battle it it should be reasonably low enough so that lv 4 or lower could kill it.. needs some kind of restriction or cost..
(above is commenting the cards)

your name is the name of a FFVII char with the last name mispelled.. Vincent would probably be OK but no naming your character the same as an actual character just because they don't exist in the show/series/world..

and i don't really get what you said at the bottom.. so basically if the card resembles someone that died that your character knew you can summon their spirit with the spirit taking the form of the monster in the monster card picture??


[sorry if i might sound harsh.. its 721 am here and i usually don't get up till after midday while on holidays (currently) and i didnt go to sleep..]
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Wait, FFVII Vincent last name was Valantine? well that I didn't knew about... about the cards some of them are realy overpowered, but that can be fixed in no time so as the grammar, about the name again, I listed some names it is only a matter of choosing one or think of a new one, about the bottom part, part of it you get right, but the person don't realy need to resemble the monster appearance, I will give an example, there is a person that you know and care about and then the person suffers an acident and is nearly dying and gives you a card as a memento and then die, that person's soul would be infused with the card and then summon the spirit with the form of the monster on the card's picture, Vincent(or what the hell his name wil be) have the tattoos and the bandaged eye(that is actualy a weird eye that glows with a scarlet light when uncovered) that allows him to completly infuse the person's soul to the card for a set of time summoning the monster as that person, but with his mind a little bit diferent because of the card's monster way of live/think.
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Vincent Valentine (if you read my post youll see the word mispelled.. ^^') just choose a name that doesn't resemble a character off something..

so you mean a card from a dead person he cared about that was given close to the time of death..? and he can summon their spirit into the card but the card spirit (would probably b the best way to explain it) has affected their spirit and while in the monster cards body they gain some personality/mental traits of the card they were summoned from's spirit
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Vincent Valentine (if you read my post youll see the word mispelled.. ^^') just choose a name that doesn't resemble a character off something..

so you mean a card from a dead person he cared about that was given close to the time of death..? and he can summon their spirit into the card but the card spirit (would probably b the best way to explain it) has affected their spirit and while in the monster cards body they gain some personality/mental traits of the card they were summoned from's spirit
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Yeah, that's a good way to explain it, and his name can be a name of a character that I made for one of my games?
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Good, his name will be Dimitre Lokheath, you can search on google there is nothing about him, and now that I was fixing the cards, what do you mean with:
"cards are basically extending one of the most used style of card's "Death" (which has been failed many times)"
Theyr titles like "The Reaper of Emotions" don't make sense, or his names like "Adrian" aren't good?(actualy i'm just guessing, if you want to explain what you mean go ahead).
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Hun... well I had just finished fixing the cards, but I will Edit my Deck list(that stills not completed) later because i'm foing out for about 1 or 1:30 hour, well see ya guys later.
EDIT-1: Back and the Reapers have been fixed and updated, I had forgothen one of them when I posted th Topic, I don't know if I should but it is better to put here the link again, http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231617-the-reapers-forces/ .
EDIT-2: Oh and the Character profile is also updated, so have it a look.
EDIT-3: I don't know if it will help on the understanding of the character, but I'm drawing him, on a very specific way(only the Overcoat, only the gloves, only his Shirt, he bandaged, his left and right halfs of the face, his tattoos, his weird Soul/Card MOnster summoning and then the full picture), if someone want me to draw something, just send me a Personal mensage with the request, I will open a shop about it later.
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Cruz is still op.. there's no cost for summoning him or attacking with him.. and why would you summon reaper monsters weak enough to be killed if you had him on the field? knowing his effect most of the time if your opponent could beat them you wouldn't
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Cruz is still op.. there's no cost for summoning him or attacking with him.. and why would you summon reaper monsters weak enough to be killed if you had him on the field? knowing his effect most of the time if your opponent could beat them you wouldn't
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Cruz is a double edged blade, like, because his effect can be used by the opponent to beat the one with Cruz, imagine that you have Yumei, Vicento and Cruz on the field, and your opponent activate something to destroy 2 monster and he destroys Yumei and Vicento, and theyr owner losses 1800 life points because of Cruz, so if Cruz is Equiped with Flaming Skull for some reason(opponent's trap cards) and Dimitre is with more 4 Reapers on the field and then the opponent activate a Dark Hole and the Dimitre would loose 3600, probably dying by that, in short words Cruz can be a good card for his owner and for his opponent.

about this question: " and why would you summon reaper monsters weak enough to be killed if you had him on the field?"
I would summon something expecialy to get rid of Cruz on the field, like summon "The Reaper of the Fair Game", than protect "The Reaper of the Fair Game" on the opponent's turn and at the other turn Sacrifice them(a strong double edged blade monster and a weak suport monster) to summon something like Yumei.
I think that I put everything very clear, well that is up to the reader.
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@SSD - Well currently now we are still on the ship, Daemon (Matt Bahamutt), Louis (Time Psyduck) and Blood (Blood Angel) has finished their exams. As the ship is about to reach the Iscland soon, The NPCs and Kazuya decided a Tag Duel Exam to speed things up in the match. currently up right now would be Akarui (which is you SSD) & Miyazaki (Trimage). And we are waiting for you guys to reply to the IC thread. For more information, just through the IC thread.
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