Please Lock immediatley...Abandoned Thread -Someone Necro Bumped it.

[Master White]

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Well, to get things started, yea, i know a long speech explaining stuff, well no, its a small thing.

Axel Monsters: It is a sub type and yes, you need an effect on these to tell the difference between Normal and Effect monsters. Axel monsters can be Summoned during your opponents turn. Tributes and requirements still have to be filled before Summoned.


[i]NOTICE: All Normal Axel Monsters don't have lores b/c I have no idea to say for them, i just made them for a Normal monsters used to Summon these cards, like a set, so if you any have lores for them, I'd love to ask for them and credit who gave them, but Has to be a decent lore that follows the picture. [/i]

Well, now with the cards

[img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5153/axelrush.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]Negate the activation of a cards effect that would destroy 1 or more Axel monster(s) you control and destroy it. Then remove this card from play. [/i]

[img]http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3918/elementalwarrior.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]This cards attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn, you can return 1 card you control to increase 1 FIRE or WATER monster on the field by 500, except this card. [/i]

[img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7637/flyingpuma.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]This card cannot declare an attack unless you remove from play 2 monsters you control. [/i]

[img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/97/legendarylightningqueen.jpg[/img]

~~[b]Lore[/b]~~[b]Trump Card[/b]~~

[i]This card cannot be Normal summoned. This can only be Special Summoned from your Hand or Graveyard by removing from play this card for 10 of your turns. When this card is Succesfully Special Summoned, remove from play 5 cards on the field and in your opponents Deck. Once per 2 of your turns, you can Special summon 1 monster in your Graveyard with 2500 or less ATK.[/i]

[img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/298/lightningrose.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3239/mechanicalangel.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK tuner monster in your Graveyard. Increase this cards ATK/DEF by 500 for each monster in both player's Graveyard. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard.[/i]

[img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/7295/magmamage.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/5449/painteddragon.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1903/seekerdragon.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]FLIP: Destroy 1 card on the field. [/i]

[img]http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/4168/terrathedragonhunter.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 2 monsters you control. While this card remains Face-up on the field, destroy all Dragon-Type monsters on the field that have 2500 or less ATK. [/i]


Enjoy

If I get more than 20 comments, I'll make more for this set.


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[Master White]

bump

[Master White]

Anyone going to comment, please....

[auqablue967]

Lol, this is amazing! I like how you used FMA and Axel from KH. I also like how you can summon during the opponent's turn! I look forward to new cards.

[Master White]

Thanks, didn't know those were actual characters, my bad...I used deviantart to get all my pics, so I hope that helps derive some differences in this thread, and Axel was just a name given b/c it is a derivative of these to words, Accel and Axe, equaling Axel, but pronounced, (Ax-Zeel)Summoning. But thanks.

[Master White]

Come on, one more view; if not, then I guess I'll repost this as one card at a time.

[Kaisu]

New subtype?

Ew.

Also, the card images are ew.

Sorry. The effects are unoriginal as well.

And the name is just... No.

[Master White]

Unoriginal effects, I'd have you know that you missed 2 cards with original cards. Card pictures are the best I could find, and I don't just rate on the sub type, as though the sub type makes it so you can summon during your opponents turn, which is original, which I have you know. But other than that, you say eww on these, ok, thats just mean.

But thanks for commenting and Axel I came up with b/c Accel is for Synchroing and Axe = Battle, so in other words, these cards were meant to be Axel Summoning, or Battle Summoning.

[auqablue967]

Well, I guess I can review all of them.

Axel Rush: Seems like a decent Trap Card, what disappoints me is that a lot of Trap Cards use the "Destroy the Card" effect. You don't need to change it, it's pretty good. Remember to add an apostrophe between the d and the s in the first card[b]'[/b]s.

Elemental Warrior: Nice effect, goes with the name and the picture. I would say "This card[b]'[/b]s attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn, you [b]may[/b] return 1 card you control [b]to your hand[/b] to increase [b]the ATK of[/b] 1 FIRE or WATER monster on the field by 500, except [b]for[/b] this card."

Flying Puma: I suggest you bump down the monsters that will be removed from play in order for the monster to attack to 1.

Legendary Lightning Queen: Holy cow. That's one LONG effect. I'll do my best. "This card cannot be Normal [b]S[/b]ummoned. This can only be [b]Special[/b] Summoned[s] from your Hand or Graveyard[/s] by removing [b]this card from play from your Hand[/b] for [b]3[/b] of your turns. When this card is [b]s[/b]uccesfully Special Summoned, remove from play [b]3[/b] cards on the field and[b]/or[/b] in your opponent[b]'[/b]s Deck. [s]Once per 2 of your[/s] [b]Every two[/b] turns, you can Special [b]S[/b]ummon 1 monster [b]from[/b] your Graveyard with [b]2000[/b] or less ATK."

Lightning Rose: My Lore: [i]Beautiful as a rose, this monster moves as quick as a lightning strike, as she has thorns.[/i] Cheesy, huh?

Mechanical Angel: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned [s]Summoned[/s] or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK tuner monster [b]from [/b]your Graveyard. Increase this card[b]'[/b]s ATK/DEF by 500 for each monster in both player's Graveyard. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard."

Overpowered. There could be, what, ten monsters in each player's Graveyard. Take down the attack boost to around 100 or 200 ATK/DEF points.

Magma Mage: My Lore: [i]This magician controls the power of molten rock. Everywhere he walks, this magician leaves a trail of blackness and destruction.[/i]

Painted Dragon: My Lore: [i]This colorful dragon is often mistaken to be a double rainbow. However, people lose this mistake when they see that this "double rainbow" is twisting and moving through the heavens.[/i]

Seeker Dragon: Looks a-okay to me. Just a trifle weak, though, I think you did that deliberately.

Terra the Dragon Hunter: I think you should say that this card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing two Dragon-Type monsters you control. A few OCG errors there: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by [b]T[/b]ributing 2 monsters you control. While this card remains [b]f[/b]ace-up on the field, destroy all Dragon-Type monsters on the field that have 2500 or less ATK."

Nice set. I'll be on the lookout for new cards, try and add some effects for those Vanillas.

[Master White]

Sorry, this was one of my abandoned card threads, whoever Necro-bumped, i thank and not thank them, but oh well, some mod, please lock this, thanks.

Thanks all for help when I know these were op'd.

@ Above poster: Also, this were mainly practice cards. So, the OCG may be off, but be aware i'm going to have to lock this thread as it see it is need of a lock as this was abandoned thread.