Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Hope you enjoyed the begining post ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 yeah i did. you like my intro to joey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Uh I think you got things confused Joey. Sammael was WITH those hunters . . . also I made it so that my post would be kinda like a prologue Meaning everyone jumps OFF of it, not adds on. I was more or less expecting your first post to be Joey recieving word about the slaughter. Also, duly note, you kinda make your charactrer seem a little too pompus, or overconfident, in his own abilities- makes him less interesting to say the least, incredibly annoying to even read to say the most. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 lol i did it more to introduce joey and the good side but if you think that i can just change it. also i did say this took place far away from sammuel and them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Yeah you did, but the impression it left on me, with the screaming people and what not, was that it was in the same place- even if it honestly wasn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 yeah well i did go a bit over the top lol and i didnt want joey to come off as that so im editing it some Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Well I would change it so he was more "approachable" to the reader. I mean what if he hasn't mastered everything and is only a recent addition to the Week of Creation Warriors? You know making him the kind of guy you would actually like to be around. Sammael, on the other hand, I can do easily ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 well thats the point he hasnt mastered everything around what he was doing was really not him. i was gonna make it so that another one of the creation warriors were controling him at the time so that his powers would be that usable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Yeah how to put that . . . doesn't sound very good for the begining of the rpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 no it doesnt but i go a btter idea that im gonna use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 So you going to use the "Joey was controled" version or something else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 im turning him more into what he was originaly a emotionaly ball of power. btw is it cool that sammuel once used him and then destroyed his poor mind like i implied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 I hope I didn't break any of the rules with my post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Nah Swift it was all Past Tense, meaning things that'd already happened, so I really didn't see much wrong with it Also Joey yeah it would be alright to have had Sammael use Joey before, like he had used the vampire as a snitch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Phew! Thank God! And did you like my choice of a song? Or have you not heard of DragonForce? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 I've heard of Dragonforce D*mn Guiitar Hero/Rockband has permanently seared that song into my mind. But we really aren't doing "theme songs" you know . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 That's the only time I'll do it, at least for now. When the time comes I'll do it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 I understandOh, also, since I don't think everyone would be able to cooperate effectively yet . . . I'll be adding in a "central" character which everyone can respond to and will help move the story along easier than normal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 a central charter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Well I call them "puppet characters", which to wit, are simple characters that are meant to keep tabs on each person and help move the story along. These characters can die if need be and what not, but their main function is to help me get "a hand" on the entire rpg. Basic thing I believe every rpg should have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 ok like joeys family in super power school right? btw you mind if i make one or two as well? also you ok with sammuel having used joey. i was gonna go with more of he saw joey as a tool of destroction that became useless because he couldnt master his powers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Well I would agree with that, but in that case Joey OWULD be dead now . . . And yes you could have one or two. ALSO! On a note, you could change Joey so he isn't a snivelling crybaby like he was in the original Seriously, no one wants the weepy woe-is-me hero anymore. Having him have doubts, yes, but give'em a bit of confidence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 no the crying is just because of everything thats happened. hes gonna toughen up to what he was in the original but i'll explain the crying soon trust me for all you phycos out there it will probley make you luagh your butts off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 just don't do a lot of woe-is-me stuff ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey Miles Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 oh no its more of i got kickedin the nuts and people keep doing it cause they think itsf funny crying honestly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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