Icy Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Accepted Anbu, and your card seems to focus on an Archetype? Try and not do that when posting here. Even my "Pauntep [name]" idea is merely a play on Pawns + Egyptian Number. Based on the original Senet game where there are 10 pawns/pieces. But it will hardly focus on an archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 [quote name='JoshIcy' timestamp='1288061875' post='4738146'] Accepted Anbu, and your card seems to focus on an Archetype? Try and not do that when posting here. Even my "Pauntep [name]" idea is merely a play on Pawns + Egyptian Number. Based on the original Senet game where there are 10 pawns/pieces. But it will hardly focus on an archetype. [/quote] Sorry about that. It hardly focuses on the Archetype though, 90% of the card is focused on the whole Senet theme, and most likely a mere 10% on the Archetype itself. I won't do it again. I guess I can use this for posting cards, seeing I barely make Singles in Realistic Cards anymore, only Sets. Here's another Senet Card. [color=blue][b]Frozen in Place - Continuous Spell Card[/b][/color] Any other card's in the same Column as this card have their effects negated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Oh lord Anbu, I'm not scolding you >_<"... lol. Apologies. *bows* It just appeared like it had a focus on the Archetype like so many cards like that do. Opinion on my Pauntep Cards or something Lovely CC made? After all, that's the point of the club while maintaining a stable atmosphere. And feel free to post your own (as all cards to be posted have to match the current theme). At your card... Lolz. It's ok? Seems a little restricting for a CS but good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 No time for the reviews I actually review right now, going in a bit. So just quick opinion on Icy's cards, seeing they are already quoted on this page. [quote name='JoshIcy' timestamp='1288061065' post='4738101'] |Pauntep Oua| |Rock/Effect/Level 1/EARTH| |0/1500| |When this card is attacked by a monster in the same Column as this card, you can change that attack to a Direct Attack. If you do, destroy that monster after damage calculation.| [b]Pretty Simple way of stall. Seems kinda risky though. I mean, would it really be worth destroying some 2000 beater, even though you took the 2000 damage? And besides, seeing it doesn't force your opponent to attack this monster in anyway, your opponent will most likely just avoid the card. So to use this effectively I'd have it state that monsters in the same Column as this card must attack this card when choosing an attack target, to make it slightly better.[/b] |Pauntep Sintay| |Rock/Effect/Level 2/EARTH| |0/1500| |When this card is Summoned, you can select 2 monsters you control and move them to the others Monster Zone.| [b]It's a pretty simple Column switcher, nothing else, but most likely beneficial in the right Deck.[/b] |Pauntep Somte| |Rock/Effect/Level 4/EARTH| |1900/1400| |When this card attacks a monster in the same Column as this card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of one of your Opponents monsters who are adjacent to this card.| [b]This is much better then the first card. 1900 beater that has potential to run over a monster, and can dish out some additional burn damage as well.[/b] 3 cards that work with the literal Senet theme. [/quote] Sadly, I must go now. Byes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 |Pawh Shifting| |Quick-Play| |Activate this card when your opponent activates the effect of a card during the turn you move a monster you control to an adjacent column. Return 1 card you control to your hand and negate and destroy that card.| Sound kinda funky... also Josh I like your senet monster (: but in your last card should it be "adjacent to the attack target" or "in an adjacent column"? Since its on your opponents field it won't be adjacent to your monster? D: also you think I should make my new quick play a trap again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 I'd reword it xD to like "Strategic Punishment" dunno... And it's fine, when I get to archiving it. It'll be fixed there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Right, I've got a written card I've been thinking about. I'm sure it'd be useful bu t I'm not sure I've balanced it in the best way. Monster Conveyor Normal Spell Pay 1000 Life Points. You can only activate this card during your Standby Phase. You can move all Monster Cards on the field to an adjacent unused Monster Card Zone. You can not declare an attack during the turn this card is activated. Name is based on conveyor belts like those in factories and supermarkets. Not the most imaginative, but all I could come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Accepted SKizophrenIK117. You're card actually supports rather well. Since most Senet monsters effects deal with same column so this could be a strategic move. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 I've noticed things going a bit quiet so I thought I'd bring something of a Beatstick into the theme. Rook Dragon Fire Dragon Lv.4 ATK: 1400/DEF:400 Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. If this card attacks the monster in its same column, this card gains 200 ATK x the Level of the attack target until the End Phase. It was either 1600 and 100 boost per Level or this. Might make some more based on chess pieces as it seems relevant for the Senet theme. EDIT: [quote]Might make some more based on chess pieces as it seems relevant for the Senet theme.[/quote] Not meant as an archetype btw, more as just an idea for cards to come from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Sounds good. The effect is well balanced out although it feels a little OP...Not sure...Anyways~ Feel free to make as much cards as you want ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Please let me in? D: [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/3480/206253.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 [quote name='Clair' timestamp='1288394686' post='4747952'] Please let me in? D: [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/3480/206253.jpg[/img] [/quote] -Gives mini review even though I can't accept it- The card seems pretty good. It's a simple +1 effect that is easily flexible depending on where you Normal Summon it. Being able to add 2 more to the hand just makes it that much faster to use the card again and again. However, I have no idea what Deck would use it or if it's worth the Normal Summon, seeing as soon as it hits the field, it's gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Hmm...might as well try to join, tho my card'll probably be too bad .-. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/989/134494.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Clair accepted :3 DL ): Card must be a card matching the theme~ Senet. Dealing with columns. Senet Switch and Storm Caller 2 cards you can look at to help :3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Funny how I JUST noticed what that meant O.o [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/989/134494.jpg[/img] Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unnocupied Monster Card Zone. If this effect is activated, switch the original ATK and DEF of this card. Once per turn, if no Spell, Trap, or Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field is on the same column as this card, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to draw 1 card from your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 [quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1288397595' post='4748056'] Clair accepted :3 DL ): Card must be a card matching the theme~ Senet. Dealing with columns. Senet Switch and [b]Storm Caller[/b] 2 cards you can look at to help :3. [/quote] By any chance, do you mean [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_Shooter"]Storm Shooter?[/url] Because [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Storm_Caller"]Storm Caller[/url] has nothing to do with Columns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Wow [/retarded] Yea ment Storm Shooter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 No need to call yourself unnecessary things just because of a simple mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Since I can consider myself good friends with you guys, I will join as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Alrighty ^^ Just post your card when you're ready to join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted October 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Apologies for not looking, for some reason topic watch is not working. Anyway everyone that was accepted should have been added. As for me... |Tajedant Mystic| |Spellcaster/Effect/Level 4/EARTH| |1500/1600| |Whenever a monster would change columns, increase the ATK of 1 monster adjacent to it by 1000 until the End of the Turn. Once per turn you can move 1 monster you control into another Unoccupied Monster Card Zone.| |Senet Spell Seal| |Trap Card| |Discard 1 Card, until the End Phase of the next turn, Spell Cards you control cannot be destroyed by card effects by cards in the same Column as them.| |Senet Spell Crush| |Spell Card| |Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field, if the card destroyed is a Trap Card, remove from play any adjacent cards to the destroyed card.| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 [quote name='JoshIcy' timestamp='1288406448' post='4748576'] Apologies for not looking, for some reason topic watch is not working. Anyway everyone that was accepted should have been added. As for me... |Tajedant Mystic| |Spellcaster/Effect/Level 4/EARTH| |1500/1600| |Whenever a monster would change columns, increase the ATK of 1 monster adjacent to it by 1000. Once per turn you can move 1 monster you control into another Unoccupied Monster Card Zone.|[/quote] That's some easy ATK gain right there. Quite overpowering I might add, seeing it has that 1000 until it is removed from the field and it can stack, mainly because you didn't state how long the effect would last. The second effect is just stationary and helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted October 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Fixed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 I'd think it'd be until the End Phase instead of until the End of the Turn? Altho admittedly I haven't updated my OCG since late 2009. Nor have I updated myself on cards. The only cards I've seen, basically, that deal with columns are Alien Infiltrator and Senet Switch. =P I really gota start buyin new cards. Also, Senet Spell Seal seems a bit UPd, cause it forces you to discard a card to protect a spell card from any effect in the same column. It can be useful, sure, for Spell cards you MSUT protect that turn, but I'd either take off the discarding, or make it protected for more than just an End Phase, maybe until your second Standby phase after this card was activated? oh, and I'm pretty sure the coma after Discard 1 card should be a period, not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 |Paramount Wall| |EARTH/Level 4/Rock/Effect| |ATK: 0 / DEF: 2000| |While this card is face-up on the field, monsters your opponent controls can only attack monsters in the same column. A monster in the same column as this card cannot attack and it's effects are negated.| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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