Mobile Battle Armory Unit

[Engetsu]

Another card I used in a contest. I think it's balanced, but I'm not sure.

Constructive criticism is most appreciated.

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Image Credit=Jazin Kay

[img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/7119/252705.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

You can only equip this card to a face-up level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster you control. The equipped monster cannot attack and it's effect is negated. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select and activate one of the following effects:
● Return 1 face-up monster your opponent controls to the owners hand.
● Select 1 face-down card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. Remove it from play until the End Phase of this turn.
● Destroy the monster equipped with this card and 1 card your opponent controls.

[~{Rochster}~]

Very creative effect, I would have never thought of it! 8/10

[Sleepy]

Card is good. I can't see anything overpowered about it either.

The best thing I can think of is [b]Spell Striker[/b] and this card at 3 in a Deck, with a couple of "[b]Hidden Armory[/b]" (maybe).
You Special Summon Spell Striker in Defense Position, equip it, return something to the hand, and this already paid for itself at that point. You then Normal Summon something and Attack or get a Tuner out and Synchro. If Synchro, Spell Striker would probably have removed from play 1 copy of the Equip as a Summoning cost so, when the Synchro dies, its the only way I can think "[b]Parallel Select[/b]" would be useful for returning such Equip to your hand. As for how to continue the cycle, it would be lulzy to have some [b]Mask of Darkness[/b] and [b]Warrior Returning Alive[/b] in there too xD.

just thought of some fun Deck for casual play xD

Anyways, good card =D

[Engetsu]

Thanks for the comments you two

@sleepy: That seems like a pretty interesting combo. I wish I could try it out (too bad my card isn't real XD). Anyways thanks again for commenting

[Engetsu]

Bump

[Anti-Apocryphal]

"You can only equip this card to a face-up [u]Lv.[/u] 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster you control. The equipped monster cannot attack and it's effect is negated. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select and activate one of the following effects[b]:[/b]
● Return 1 face-up monster your opponent controls to [b]their respectful hand.[/b]
● Select 1 face-down card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. Remove it from play until the End Phase of this turn.
● Destroy the monster equipped with this card and 1 card your opponent controls."

[b]Bold[/b]= I'm 80% or more sure it's right.
[u]Underlined[/u]= I'm 60% or less sure it's right.

Nice effect, very creative.
[8/10]

[Engetsu]

As far as I know, both the bold and underlined OCG fixes are incorrect. I looked at several cards already and they have the same OCG :/ though I will change the layout of the card's effect (for now at least).

Anyways thanks for the comment and rating.

[Mid-Knight]

nice one

87/100

[Sleepy]

It looks more organized this way, but at the same time, I think it makes the letters smaller in the card. Its not bad but I personally liked the other way better ^-^

And you are right, that OCG fix from above is incorrect. "rightful hand" doesn't exist in card grammar from yugioh and if it ever did, its probably an old version of a card (and by old I mean 8+ years old). Level also has never been written [b]Lv.[/b] .... its either [b]Level[/b] (referring to the stars in a monster) or [b]"LV"[/b] (quotes included in there because when its written like this its part of a name that forms an archtype).

The reason(s) I didn't mention OCG at first is because I felt lazy at that time, and the grammar seemed good anyways xD
Well.. its good as is also ;D

[Engetsu]

[quote name='sleepy' timestamp='1288067102' post='4738322']
It looks more organized this way, but at the same time, I think it makes the letters smaller in the card. Its not bad but I personally liked the other way better ^-^

And you are right, that OCG fix from above is incorrect. "rightful hand" doesn't exist in card grammar from yugioh and if it ever did, its probably an old version of a card (and by old I mean 8+ years old). Level also has never been written [b]Lv.[/b] .... its either [b]Level[/b] (referring to the stars in a monster) or [b]"LV"[/b] (quotes included in there because when its written like this its part of a name that forms an archtype).

The reason(s) I didn't mention OCG at first is because I felt lazy at that time, and the grammar seemed good anyways xD
Well.. its good as is also ;D
[/quote]

lol I can't honestly tell if this layout or my previous one is the right one. I think it depends on how the card effect is worded, or it could just be personal preference, but idk @_@

And I see. I figured the OCG fix was wrong, but tbh I wasn't really sure. I was just going by the OCG from other cards.

lol I see XD anyways thanks for clearing things up

[Sleepy]

Both ways of writing it are correct and acceptable. It comes down to taste ;D don't worry about it.

[Engetsu]

Oh I see. I'll keep that in mind then

[Engetsu]

Bump

Anymore comments?

[Mugendramon]

The last effect reminds me of Kamikazes...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/blink.gif[/img]

Something like....

This thing (passenger and all) Speeds towards some machine." Aw my gawd noeeeeeez!!!!" The vehicle crashes and explodes. Killed both monsters.

[Engetsu]

[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1288127495' post='4739770']
The last effect reminds me of Kamikazes...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/blink.gif[/img]

Something like....

This thing (passenger and all) Speeds towards some machine." Aw my gawd noeeeeeez!!!!" The vehicle crashes and explodes. Killed both monsters.
[/quote]

That's the whole point >_> lol

[Mugendramon]

Anyway, out of the pointless Kamikaze thing, this card could provide quite some use for E-Heroes, as far as I can see. On the card itself, it's real good! I'll give you a 9/10!

[Mugendramon]

Anyway, out of the pointless Kamikaze thing, this card could provide quite some use for E-Heroes, as far as I can see. On the card itself, it's real good! I'll give you a 9/10!

[moppmoppmopp]

I like it, but somehow it feels a bit up'd for me... 7/10

[Engetsu]

[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1288127803' post='4739788']
Anyway, out of the pointless Kamikaze thing, this card could provide quite some use for E-Heroes, as far as I can see. On the card itself, it's real good! I'll give you a 9/10!
[/quote]

Thanks for the rate

This is probably my most positive rated card I made

[Master White]

You can only equip this card to a [b]F[/b]ace-up level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster you control. The equipped monster cannot [b]ATK[/b] and its effect is negated. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select and activate one of the following effects:
● Return 1 [b]F[/b]ace-up monster your opponent controls to the owners hand.
● Select 1 [b]F[/b]ace-down card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. Remove it from play until the End Phase of this turn.
● Destroy the monster equipped with this card and 1 card your opponent controls.

Thats better, it all looks good now, just minor things. But I would use this card on my favorite two cards, so I give this card cheers for it being a good card. Keep it up, OCG is Great, Picture is Great, and who knows, maybe you will make more Awesome cards someday, I hope so, so keep up the good work.

[Engetsu]

The OCG fixes are incorrect :/ the F in face-up is always lower cased, and the ATK abbreviation is only used if you are referring to a monster's attack power.

But thanks for commenting anyways

[Master White]

You are wrong about that, sir, I know this by fact b/c I have been trained by a friend of mine all the OCG Fixes that I've done is correct b/c lets face-it, MIA, a OCG Shop lady always puts my lores with a capitlization, and so don't go saying someone is incorrect when you don't know for sure. And the ATK can still work there, b/c you are refferring to an ATK power there, and if you want proof that face-up should be capitilized, I can prove it, by showing you a card, and if I'm wrong, I'll +rep you.

[Mugendramon]

face-up and face-down [i]are not[/i] capitalized. You can prove us wrong by posting a real card here which capitalizes it.

[Master White]

Thats what I intedn to do.

[Mugendramon]

Just to clarify, it doesn't count if face-up/down is the first word after a period.