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WARNING PG-13 for mild swearing

 

 

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Prologue: Ashes of the Phoenix

 

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As one evil dies...

 

One good is born...

 

Like a phoenix's ashes...

 

This is a story of violence...

 

And peace...

 

This is a story of hate...

 

And love...

 

This is a story about what it means to help your world...

 

And what it means to tear it apart...

 

This is a story about a hated hero...

 

Who's fate is decided only in the mind of god...

 

Pity, such a cursed hero

 

Praise, such a cursed hero

 

But to truly know his troubles I will have to start at the beginning.

 

 

The world was a beautiful place, because their was light, but then there was darkness. It consumed the heart of it's followers to fully, so proudly that it became it's own embodiment. Evil. The boundaries of evil were blurred to the point that no one man could identify what was about to happen. With one fatal swoop mankind nearly became extinct by a virus, Virus - Z, which killed any form of life that it came in contact with. But that was 10 years ago and the world was back to normal, much smaller, but normal. Virus - Z was a sentient being, it was much more sentient than any human and was one omni-potent being. It was weakened by the strain of it's constant spread and died forever without any hope of returning. However it lives on in a few heroes called Flood. They are normal humans but with a voice living in their head. They were essentially normal except for the fact that they were fostering a weakened voice of the virus.

 

They were hated by all. And to stop the hatred the newly formed United Human Republic the knowledge was erased of the species called flood and it was outlawed to speak their name. But humanity is a simply beast and would not forgive them for being heroes. They did not realize that the Flood kept the virus weak. They were the ones that should be hoisted at the alter, but instead they are hung up by a tree.

 

With humanity in it's weakened state war was not an option. Fighting was not an option.

 

People need to fight, it is part of their competitive spirit. It is almost as if hardwired into their brain is the need to eat, drink, reproduce, and dominate. The solution to this problem was easy. Duel Monsters had been a centuries old game founded by the to corporate powerhouses of I2 and Kaiba Corp. Now forged together the gaming giant was nearly a nation, religion, and way of life. It had become so popular that not a single person did not compete. Most aspects of life had some tie in with the game.

 

However you would think that eventually all of these people would get bored of this and turn back to conventional sports and hobbies but no, this was THE sport and you could even join an academy for it. These four academies were a collective nation that trained athletes and designers for the world's collective interest that was Duel Monsters.

 

The academies were the Atlantic, Pacific, Indian, and Arctic academies. Shane was a member of the Atlantic Academy. He had just joined at the age of 8 he was a grade schooler who hoped so desperately to become a real student their. An orphan with no parents he had gotten in on a recruiting drive of orphanages hoping to find a few diamonds in the rough. He would have to pass the two year education and then take the graduation test.

 

He sat high in the auditorium where a teacher was teaching them basic rules. What a magic card was and those cool looking monsters! They were awesome. The teacher noticed the class getting riled up and decided to start the show. It showed holograms of giant monsters that would blast fake attacks up into the audience and run around the auditorium. Shane nearly pissed his pants as a giant black dragon flapped it's wings knocking the papers on everyones desks everywhere. It blasted it's attacks up towards the ceiling so the kids wouldn't get to freaked out.

 

Class was over and recess had begun. Their was an open field with teeter totters and swing sets. It was a combination snack time/recess so the handlers and caregivers of the small children would pack their house groups lunches.

 

Shane didn't have a lunch, those stupid nannies would never pack him one. He begged and pleaded but all they did was whip him and tell him to suck it up. He swung on the swing he always swung on and nibbled at the crackers he had stolen from the kitchen. He could never play with the other kids because the nannies always threw rocks at him and told the other kids to hate him. He wouldn't cry. He wouldn't cry. That would mean he was weak. That's why people didn't like him, because he wasn't strong. He would show them what he was made of. And then they'd love him.

 

He saw a pretty girl sitting under a tree crying. Did they hate her to? He'd have to go say hi. That would make her feel better. He would be nice. Not like the rest of those jerks. Who would make a little girl cry. Her bubblegum pink hair was caked with dirk and her sapphire eyes were stained with tears. They were a sharp contrast to Shane's black hair and green eyes. He couldn't help but stare. They were beautiful even if they were dirty.

 

Shane crouched down in front of her and looked her in the eyes. He raised her chin up and wiped her hair out of her eyes.

 

"What's wrong, is their anything I can do to help." Shane's eyes held deep compassion and empathy. He was fairly handsome for his age. Most girls would have considered him a heart throb if it weren't for the staff constantly interfering.

 

The pink haired girl sniffled and crossed her arms around her chest and let a short sob.

 

"Don't worry you can tell me." Shane's smile was wide in an attempt to comfort the young girl.

 

"Those boys were [sob] kicking dirt [sob] in my face." She broke down into a fit of crying and couldn't stop.

 

"Don't worry I won't let them get away with it." Shane's eyes steeled with a tempering that could only be identified with a tested warrior, while he was not one himself the torture that this one boy had went through could not be met by many war hero's. After being abused, both mentally and physically, he knew the pain. He would NOT let it happen to anyone else.

 

"Did they take anything?"

 

"Only my [sob] necklace [sob] please bring it back, It was my mothers [sob]. It's all I have to remember her by."

 

Okay now he was pissed. How could they take something so precious to someone. He would break their arms and feed it to them. He rose up and turned around. Staring down three boys. They were two years older than him. Almost ready to take the test. To bad they couldn't take the test if they had no arms. He ran up behind one of them and kicked his legs in so they buckled. He sat on his back while punching him in the back of the head. He was unconscious but he continued to pound until he was hauled up by the collar of his jacket.

 

"Hey , what makes you think that you can go poundin' on bigger and stronger kids eh. We'll have to kick some sense into you."

 

They kicked him in the crotch and dropped him on the ground. They punched him breaking his nose and his ribs. The blood soaked his jacket and his fist was clenched not in an attempt to fight back, but in an attempt to hide the necklace of the little girl he had met. If it killed him he would get it back to her.

 

Sam sat in horror as the boy that had said would help her was being beaten to a pulp, while the rest of the kids sat by watching in horror she scrambled to get the attention of a teacher that was just walking out of the main building. He rushed over after he saw the little girl. She pointed to the fight and without saying a word he rushed over and broke up the fight. The boys were ushered away by two security officers and Shane was lifted up into the arms of the teacher. He rushed him off to the medical ward where he was wrapped up like a mummy in bandages. He was likely going to die.

 

But fate had a grip on him stronger than death.

 

---(Shane's Mind Scape)--------------------------------------------------------

 

Shane woke up in a world that was dark, was he dead. No if he was dead he would be burning. This place was cold. He shivered and zipped up his coat. He attempted to stand up but his knees buckled. This world was awful, he had sat up on the bleak concrete that spread across the size of a football field. It was only dimly lighted by some source that couldn't be identified. There was a ominous voice that suddenly jolted a cold shiver down his spine.

 

"He, he, he, look what we have here. A poor little monkey boy that can't get back to his body." The voice's location couldn't be identified it was strangely omnipotent. "I see you have finally decided to join me. We have not been properly introduced call me Vacuous." The voice became louder and more friendly. "Well I believe you should want some answers."

 

"Who, who are you." Shane barely managed to stutter out.

 

"Well I am the incarnate of darkness, that you humans call virus - Z. I am the reason you are hated. I am the reason you are Flood."

 

Shane looked up confused he didn't know what the flood where and he wanted to know why he was here.

 

Sensing his confusion Vacuous smiled. "The flood are the few mortals left that foster some of my essence. They are the few that keep me stretched thin so I cannot assimilate and plunge the world back into plague." Vacuous smirked and evilly glared at Shane. "Unfortunately for you people do not see the truth and hate the carriers of my essence and most would kill you with the chance. I sense your also wandering why you didn't know. Well simply put, a figurative book burning went on purging the information that kept you from being put to death.

 

"No! GO AWAY! Get out of my head! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!"

 

"Very well get out of this hell and go to another!"

 

---(Real World)------------------------------------------------------------------

 

"Professor, Professor, He's breathing! Godspeed, he's BREATHING!"

 

The kind professor that had brought him down hear was looking at him through his coke bottle glasses. The boy's breathing had returned and his eyes were fluttering open. He managed to sit up against the protests of the doctors.

 

"Thanks doc but I'm fine now let me go."

 

"Young man with all due respect thirty seconds ago you were dead now lay down.

 

The professor looked at the young boy, he had spunk, he knew of the fact he was flood and applauded him for it. It had been hard getting only non-racist doctors but it had been worth it. They had saved him, but he couldn't shake the urge that something much greater was working here.

 

---(Two Years Later: Testing Time)---------------------------------------------

 

Shane was haunted from the dream he had those years ago. Shane hadn't changed a lot but he had grown a lot taller. Though that was not saying anything. He was much shorter than most other students. He was sitting at the desk taking his final exam. The 'Crucible' as it was nicknamed was a purely written test that was so excruciatingly difficult. Failure would result in immediate expulsion back to the mainland.

 

"One minute till finish!"

 

Shane scribbled the last few answers on to the test.

 

Oh my god that was so hard! The duel puzzles were especially hard.

 

Shane looked across the auditorium at the love of his life. Samantha, here beautiful pink hair bounced as she walked to turn her test in. Her frilly pink skirt left little to the imagination and so did her sweater.

 

God she's beautiful, why is it always me that gets shafted, he shifted his attention to that preppy jerk wad that was sitting surrounded by girls that were gossiping. He shot him daggers and waited for his plan to take action. He had loosened the screws on his desk so that when he got up it would collapse sending him sprawling to the floor. He longed for Sam's attention and thought maybe, just maybe, if he could humiliate William she would remember him.

 

"Student's whose names have been called please report to the pier. Your time at Atlantic Academy has ended." The same professor from three years ago had made the announcement. He looked up at Shane and sighed.

 

Shane, my best student, he barely passed, a straight 75%. The lowest grades out of all of the students.

 

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Shane had barely grown at all. Now conventional schooling was over and the true duel academy experience was a about to begin. His deck bulged in his shirt pocket. He sat in the inboard cafe as they transfered to the main island. He ordered a Mountain Dew and scanned the crowd. He found exactly who he was looking for, Sam was alone checking her make-up and he new it was his time to shine, he looked at his cheap watch and jacket and thought for a second.

 

How am I supposed to impress her with these cheap clothes. Well it's not exactly like he had a choice.

 

None of the stores would sell him a thing. So he decided to go through with the plan anyway. He sat down next to Sam.

 

"Hey Sam, remember me, I was wondering if maybe you would like to hang out once we reach the island."

 

"Buzz of geek, I've heard that pickup line so many times before it isn't even funny."

 

"No I'm serious, It's me Shane, I got you your..."

 

"I told you to buzz off and do it quick. William is coming."

 

"But, please just let me..."

 

"Buzz of you stupid, hormonal, retard! Can't you see I'm about to make good with William, the coolest kid at the academy.

 

"But..."

 

"GO!"

 

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A purple haired onlooker had pity for the boy. If only he would notice her then she would be in heaven.

 

Oh Shane, she rejects you so much, yet you always come back.

 

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Shane angrily stomped away towards the place where William had been sitting.

 

"You, you jerk, she always loved you and hated me. I'm going to knock you into the next century."

 

"Oh, please there is no way I'm stooping down to your level." William was taller than Shane and he was dressed in a preppy sweater vest and slacks.

 

"You leave Willy alone!" Shouted one random fangirl.

 

"We'll beat you to a pulp!" Shouted another.

 

"How dare you threaten our Willy!"

 

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Who are you to say what makes a hero

 

What makes one pure

 

When you are the perfect picture

 

Of hypocrisy

 

And sin

 

I am the one who saves you all

 

And yet you turn me away

 

But their are diamonds in the rough

 

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Shane had never been beaten so thoroughly. Well he had, but at least then he could fight back. The beating was swift, unmerciful, and unwarranted. All because of William, William Rochester III, otherwise known as the most annoying person on earth. He had stolen his [not so much] women. He would make him pay whatever the price.

 

Trying to walk away with a little more dignity than he probably deserved he wiped away the dirt on his red jacket and walked away from the scene of the humiliation. Turning around there was a tall, skinny, blue haired kid with tiny glasses perched on his nose.

 

"Tough luck, didn't expect you to get much anywhere with Will over there though. He's got a bigger fan base than the Duel-King."

 

"It's none of your business! Who are you anyway I don't remember you from elementary." Shane did he best to look suspicious instead of curious. Though he though his face was betraying him. Surely he would have saw the kid somewhere.

 

"I wasn't in your elementary. I was back at the mainland, and I just passed the duel test there. My parents couldn't afford to give me the full treatment." His beady eyes towards the swarm of fangirls.

 

"You might want to watch it they're like sharks, they're vicious, and you can't even fight back."

 

"Who says I can't I'm tougher than a bunch raving girls!"

 

"Because a guy can't hit a girl, that's why, cliche as it is."

 

"What happened to equality, and they're as good as we are?"

 

"Do you honestly expect them to be fair. I appreciate the a fine women but fangirls are an entirely different species."

 

Shane shook his head. This guy was strange, and his neck was hurting from looking us.

 

"Please let's talk about something else."

 

"If you wish," Shane shifted his gaze to Sam and smiled. "Is this piece of eye candy the root of your problems?"

 

Shane balled his fists and yelled. "Nunya, and keep your eyes off my girl!"

 

"I believe she isn't your girl. In fact I believe that is why this whole argument is sprouting, but enough of my prying the names Bill."

 

It was amazing that one man could annoy Shane so much, sure he knew that but he didn't need it pointed out. He took a final chug of his mountain dew and tried to toss it in to the trash can across the room, of course he failed because he was a klutz.

 

Bill interrupted Shane's train of 'lack' of thought. "So who do you think is going to duel, in the homecoming match."

 

"What the hell is that, and the names Shane?"

 

Why am I always out of the loop?

 

"Dude, are you lugging anything around in that head of yours or are you completely brainless."

 

"I am about to kill someone if I am insulted again so if you would kindly explain I may spare you."

 

"Okay, though I'm not really threatened by a midget that's two heads shorter than I am."

 

"One!"

 

"Are you threatening me?" Bill chuckled loudly nearly losing he breath.

 

"Two!"

 

"Seriously you can stop it's kind of embarrassing?" Bill pointed to the crowd that was starting to gather.

 

"THREE!"

 

Shane had a very short temper. He was like a stick of dynamite ready to go off at any moment. He was not keen to being made fun of our outdone which was clearly the instance in this case. Shane had been assaulted, rejected, insulted, and annoyed and he was about to kick ass.

 

"YOU ASKED FOR IT!"

 

Shane vaulted at Bill trying to take a swing at him but Bill jumped back just in time to avoid getting his balls imploded.

 

"Okay, god, calm down I'll tell you if you promise not to 'frickin' go crazy. Your the reason why everyone thinks Americans are violent."

 

"Well excuse me Ghandi McRighteous now explain before I go Bruce Lee again."

 

"The homecoming match is the match between the highest ranked and lowest ranked student from first year. The winner gets inducted into some school club, It's name escapes me at the moment."

 

The conversation was interrupted by a giant.

 

Literally.

 

There was a man strolling in that could very be seven foot tall. His shoulders were wider than Shane was tall. His whole body was muscled and his red uniform didn't even have sleeves. And his pants pitch black with rips at the bottom.

 

Secondly a female walked into the room. She was the perfect picture of some English 'gentleman's' magazine. She adorned a yellow jacket and short white skirt.

 

Thirdly another male walked into the room wearing a blue coat. He was the most normal out of the two of them. He was average height, weight, and his hair was fixed in a normal fashion. Though he had short black beard and was breaking the dress code with denim jeans.

 

It was the blue coated man who spoke and it was met with a near explosion of laughter, which had only been restrained at the last second.

 

"Howdy, I'm Professor Tom Hunter and I'm the head of Obelisk Blue. If ya'll was thinking you were gonna be in the homecoming duel well then sorry, It can be only two of ya. The bow of the boat has been cleared for a dueling field so will these two duelists please report."

 

"William Rochester III from Ra Yellow Dorm!" Shouted the poster child dressed in yellow.

 

"And Shane, uhm, Shane from Orisis Red Dojo!" Said the giant slightly flustered at Shane's lack of a last name.

 

The last statement was met with almost as much laughter as the cowboy's announcement. Almost all of the students comically had a sweat drop moment to that. Though to Shane it wasn't so funny.

 

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Orphans don't deserve last names.

 

You should have never been born.

 

We hate you.

 

We hate your kind.

 

These were the thoughts that were rushing through Shane's head, childhood memories didn't fade. No matter how much you wanted them to.

 

I'll show them all who shouldn't be born! He was going to make Will feel so much pain that he would have Sam, and his revenge.

 

"So Willy how does it feel to be the dead-last." Shane chuckled at his comment but the joke was on him.

 

"Being a gentleman I shouldn't respond to that, but seeing as it was you who started this I think it might be worth mentioning that I'm the top ranking student of the first years."

 

Laughter rung throughout the crowd and was then shifted into chanting for Will.

 

"W" The first girl did a cartwheel.

 

"I" The second girl did a back flip.

 

"L" The third girl did a front flip.

 

"L" The fourth girl launched small confetti bombs.

 

"Y" The fifth girl blew a kiss to Will which was returned by him

 

"How the hell did you get a fanclub!"

 

"Oh, that, that's not my fanclub that's the cheerleading section my fanclub is over there." He pointed to a group of girls that was about five times larger.

 

Their argument was interrupted by the red giant.

 

"Okay, I want a clean duel! No hitting below the duel disk! And most importantly have fun!"

 

WLP:8000

SLP:8000

 

Both teens shuffled their decks and walked to the center of the arena to cut each other's deck. One had a smirk and one had a scowl, can you guess who had which...

 

"How about a little side bet, the loser has to buy the lunch for a month."

"I am a gentleman and I will not stoop to your levels."

 

The loser has to kiss the winners shoes."

William hunched his eyebrows now interested. "Gah, you got me, deal."

 

"Duel!" was the chorus of the two teens.

 

Two large holographic dice rolled across the field, Will won.

 

"Grand! I won the roll I chose to go first."

 

He drew his six cards and grinned.

 

"Do you think that anyone wants you to win, they all love me. You are a dead last orphan that is out of his element."

 

The statement was accompanied by the chant "Will! Will! WILL! WILL!"

 

"I'll set one card in face down defense mode and end my turn." The crowd even cheered for such a mediocre move.

 

Shane drew a card and continued to glare at Will. "You know what you ass, I'm going to beat you to the ground and I will have everyone know my name. Shane!"

 

I'll summon my card Army Sniper (2000/0)! But this card is special it's played in my spell zone and cannot be chosen as an attack target!"

 

A man in a ghillie suit went prone in one of Shane's spell zones.

 

"Now attack his face down monster!"

 

"You attacked my Satellite Base (0/0)!"

 

"Ya! Your card is destroyed!"

 

"No fool, this card can only be destroyed by monsters whose level is five or higher."

 

Shane felt like an idiot but he didn't have any damage. And that was what mattered.

 

Damn, I just embarrassed myself for no reason.

 

"Okay I set one card and end my turn."

 

WLP:8000

SLP:8000

 

"Just give up and save me some time, I'll have my best monster out in five turns or less so just save us both the time."

 

"Quit talking you pompous jerk!"

 

"Fine, I'll sacrifice my Satellite Base to summon my Satellite Cannon in attack mode!"

 

The small puny base was replaced by a much larger monster cannon that towered above the field.

 

"Now I'll play the card Charge which makes my Satellite Cannon's attack 2000 and then I'll play the card Limiter Removal which doubles it to 4000 now I'll attack you directly!"

 

Satellite Cannon (4000/0) charged up and blasted Shane just barely missing the sniper.

 

"Now I'll just set one happy card face down and end my turn, you can go dead-last!"

 

WLP:8000

SLP:4000

 

The satellite cannon burst into flames in a giant explosion.

 

"Sadly Limiter Removal destroys the card's it effected."

 

"I'll show you dead last, now I'm going to kick your behind all the way back to that snobby castle that you crawled out of!"

 

"Someone needs to teach you to respect your superiors!"

 

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This was not good for Shane.

 

Bill had been watching the duel and in only two moves Will had drained half of Shane's life points. To bad, he felt sorry for the kid, he deserved to win after what he'd been through.

 

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Why, why is everyone so cruel to him. I have to talk to him, but not now.

 

The purple haired girl was standing front row to see her crushes' duel. She was going to talk to him after this duel, whether he won or lost.

 

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Shane had drew his card that blast hurt. He didn't now what the duel disk used to simulate the pain and frankly he didn't care, he just cared that it hurt.

 

"I'll summon the card Army Support Gunner (1800/0) in attack mode!"

 

This time a man in regular camo crouched down and planted a SAW machine gun on a stack of sandbags.

 

"This card is awesome mostly because it can attack every monster on your side of the field. I'll attack and since you don't have any monsters I'll have to provide you with a few grunts with the card Ambush. This card gives you three grunt tokens (500/0) in attack mode! And now I'll attack all three!"

 

WLP: 4000

SLP: 4000

 

"My sniper can't attack directly so I end my turn!"

 

"You trash think you can win with one lucky shot well that's not going to work because I play the card Premature Burial to summon my Satellite Cannon!"

 

WLP: 3300

SLP: 4000

 

"Then I chain the card Inferno Reckless Summon to add one more Satellite Cannon to the field (0/0)X2!"

 

"I'll summon another of my Support Gunners (1800/0) to the field."

 

"Good, I don't care, now let me play the card polymerization to let me summon Satellite Dual Cannon (2000/0)!"

 

"Crap!"

 

"I'll end my turn so my satellite is now at (3000/0)!"

 

"I draw and play uhm, my field spell No Man's Land. Now my two Support Gunners should have to attack but they are added to my magic and trap zone by the effect of No Man's Land. I'll end my turn."

 

"Please, I'll draw and play Heavy Storm now I'll attack directly with my Cannon!"

 

"Not so fast the rest of this turn is in the hand's of good ol' lady luck!"

 

WLP:3300

SLP: 2000

 

It was then that Will noticed that he had not destroyed any of the magic cards.

 

"That is an illegal move you card's should have been destroyed."

 

"No my No Man's Land deactivates the effect of your any magic or trap cards for the cost of half my life points. Now since you so hastily attacked I'll explain the effect of no man's land. First, you must attack with all of your cards during your battle phase. Second, every time you attack you flip a coin if heads you continue your attack to my life points and all of my magic and trap cards are destroyed, if tails then your attack points are reduced to zero and you take battle damage for the combined attack points of any 'army' cards in my magic or trap zones."

 

The coin flipped not a single voice could be heard, even the cheering girls had hushed to see the result.

 

It was...

 

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Chapter One End:

 

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JUST JOKING

 

Tails...

 

"You Lose, William, to make something completely clear, you are the lowest dirt on earth. The judgmental kind. When your reckless and don't pay attention you will lose. I am the victor and you are the loser so kiss my shoes."

 

William got on all fours and kissed Shane's dirty beat up sneakers.

 

"At least your a man of your word, I'm looking forward to lunch."

 

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Purple hair was looking at the scene with glee, he had one.

 

I hope he realizes that he was one coin flip away from losing. He shouldn't let it get to his head.

 

Obviously she didn't know Shane too well.

 

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A darker day is never seen

 

Then death approaching...

 

And when death is not poetic

 

And real as real can be...

 

Martyrdom is not beautiful

 

And sorrow is abound

 

Shane stood looking at the beautiful duel academy it was time for the end of the day and someone else. Shane did not know this so he simply went to shut his window. His orisis red jacket was shed across the floor and his deck smeared across his desk. His win had landed him into a special one room dorm and tomorrow he would be inaugurated into the most prestigious club in the academy, one which had never been entered by an orisis red student. And one that would not be entered by an orisis red student, at least not today.

 

A gentle and light tapping came tapping at his door.

 

A rapping so light the sound was barely heard.

 

It's just someone wanting in, but why would anyone want to meet five minutes to curfew?

 

The door was opened slowly and a muffled bang leaped into Shane's ears. A dart entered Shane's neck and caused him to break into a seizure. The mysterious man simply, albeit inhumanly, said "Don't worry you'll be dead in three minutes."

 

A crow flew into the open window. Fitting, for an end that didn't fit his fate.

 

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Adam lost his soul in the eyes of his mother weeping and his dad's stern look of acceptance not respect but acceptance. He was leaving to a Dueling Prep school and his parents were not making it very easy. He was only fifteen and still a little young to leave his parents for six years. It was a time like this that made him realize how different he was from his parents. They were both in the military and to their disappointment their son would rather play games than serve his country. His parents towered him at higher than six foot each and he was extremely short for his age. He had black curly hair while his parents had straight blond hair, and his eyes were steel gray as opposed to green. There differences were behind him as he hugged his mother and stepped into the plane, not looking back.

 

The plane was a posh private liner that was reserved specifically for the shuttling of students to the Rocky Mountain Duel Preparatory. The liner was filled with duelists looking at each other's cards, bragging, and having any matter of macho pissin' contests as his father would put it. His duel disk was packed away in his bag but he had brought around his deck. He sat down in one of the lounge room sofas when he another kid sat down next to him.

 

"Yo, it's Izzman in the house." He was scrawny and tall, he was wearing a bunch of mismatched clothes he probably plucked from a military surplus store. His hair was dyed in every color of the spectrum each sticking out in a gelled bit.

 

"Hi..." 'WTF' (censors, gotta love em)

 

"You a frosh, cool, I was just taking a pit stop before I make my shot at that blond chick."

 

'Chick, my interest is peaked.' He craned his head slightly to get a peak without making it known he was looking. She was a rather endowed girl wearing a pink mini-skirt and a spaghetti strap top. He went to say some wisecrack to the other guy being out of his league but he was already working his stuff.

 

Three minutes later...

 

Izzy was back on the couch faking an arrow through his heart.

 

"Oh love is so cruel, our relationship was great while it lasted but sadly our differences must make it end."

 

'Relationship?' "What differences?"

 

"Well I'm intensely in love with myself, and she is not."

 

'That's a difference alright.' "Hello, I think it's about time we were properly introduced. The names Adam."

 

"Likewise frosh, Ezikal is my name, but call me Izzy."

 

"Why do you keep calling me frosh?"

 

"Frosh, Freshman, you are a frosh right?"

 

"Um, I guess."

 

"I'm a sophomore, so that makes me your superior."

 

"Whatever you say." Adam was thinking something along the lines of 'retard'. "Well I'll see you later."

 

'Ya, I'll see him later. Much later, sheesh what a moron!'

 

Adam walked towards the back of the plane where the girls had been a moment ago. There were mini dueling tables back there and he needed someway to pass the ride. He was feeling stupid. Everyone was talking on the plane and making friends. The only thing he was good at was being invisible. There was one table left and he let out a sigh of relief. He didn't want to have to wait or argue over a table. He sat down in comfy cushioned chair and waited for someone to sit down. He sat his deck out on the table. And backed out a candy bar from his bag. Before he had unwrapped it fully there was already a challenger. Of course it was one of the people that Adam would definatly rather not see. It was that, what was his name Raz, Razzy, Ezzy, Izzy! His name was Izzy, good at least he wasn't going to embarrass himself in front of somebody already.

 

"Hey, your that guy I just met back in the lounge. Well hey would you like to duel?"

 

'Not you.' "Uhm, Sure."

 

"Move it frosh that seat's reserved."

 

Adam got out of the seat as fast as he could. Considering the guy that he was talking to was a giant. He stood at about 5"9 and could have weighed anywhere around 300 pounds. But sadly Adams small legs couldn't carry him fast enough because the giant grabbed him by his collar and hefted him up from the chair dropping hard on his bum.

 

"Nice to see your Tank, have you lost weight?" Izzy seemed to be acquainted with the giant.

 

"Shut the hell up boy, or I'll pop you right in the mouth!"

 

"Hey Tank no need to get violent. Just calm down you got the table. You did remember to take your steroids this morning right your looking a little thin."

 

"Same goes for you Izzy, I only agreed to this because I want to knock you down a few pegs."

 

Adam just sat their indignantly, using the wall as a rest as he watched their duel. This was one of those times when you just wanted to get out of the way. When a 300 muscle freak, and a joker that seemed to show no fear were about to duel, you really can't guess what will happen. So you have to keep watching.

 

The table lit up to life and set two small number projections by the shoulders of both of the players. The table would project chibi sized monsters instead of life size monsters.

 

ILP: 8000

TLP: 8000

 

"I'll go first." It was Izzy who didn't wait for a chance for his opponent to argue because he had already drawn a card.

 

"I summon Mist Geisha (0/0) to the field in attack mode. And I end My turn." A beautiful lady sat down on the field. She was dressed in a blue kimono with ocean wave swirls on it. Her face was whiter than snow and her hair was done up in a bun.

 

"I'll draw and summon my Mech Part - Arm Gear (1000/1000). Now I'll destroy your Mist Geisha.

 

The floating metal arm rocketed forward to punch Izzy's Geisha but it disappeared in a thin mist.

 

"When my Mist Geisha is targeted by an attack she is returned to my hand, and so is your Arm Gear!" As he was speaking the mechanical arm disappeared in a mist.

 

"Fine I'll play my card Assembly Line. It lets me summon all Mech Part cards in my hand, but they have to skip their attack next turn. And I have two Mech Part - Arm Gears (1000/1000)X2 and one Mech Part - Torso (0/1000). Now I'll end my turn."

 

ILP: 8000

TLP:8000

 

"I'll draw and summon my Mist Geisha (0/0) again. This time I'll equip her with Honor Right. Every time a card declares an attack on the card equipped with this card and fails to destroy it destroy it."

 

"I'll draw and enter my battle phase." Suddenly all of his cards disappeared and a new card disappeared. This card was a giant metal torso with arms. "This is my Partial Mech - 3/6 (1500/2000). During my Battle phase all my Mech cards contact fuse into a bigger machine. Now I can't battle so I'll end my turn."

 

"I'll draw and summon my Thunder Geisha (200/0)! When she is summoned I get to send one card to the graveyard and I chose your Partial Mech." This geisha was identical to Mist Geisha but she was wearing a yellow kimono with a lightning pattern. "Now I'll attack your life points directly with both of my geisha's."

 

Both Geisha's walked across the field slowly. They then hovered up and circled around Tank's neck singing. The Thunder Geisha was playing her drum as well.

 

ILP: 8000

TLP: 5800

 

"What the hell just happened!?!"

 

"When my geisha's attack you directly they do an extra 1000 effect damage. Now I'll set one card face down and end my turn."

 

"Ugh, my turn, I'll play the card wreck salvage. I can now summon one card from my graveyard with 'Partial Mech' in it's name to the field. I chose the only one I have Partial Mech - 3/6 (1500/2000). Now I'll play Construction line. It lets me add one normal machine card to my hand, as long as it has 4 stars or less, for each 500 life points I pay. So I'll pay 1500 to add two Mech Part - Leg (1000/1000)X2 and Mech Part - Head (0/0). Now I'll summon my Mech Part Brain."

 

The cards again reassembled to become Partial Mech - 4/6 (2000/2000).

 

"I'll attack your Thunder Geisha!" The legless machine rocketed over to destroy the geisha before a card was flipped over by Izzy.

 

"I activate the card Love Incense." Wisps of purple smoke wrapped around Mist Geisha and the Mech. The mech suddenly attacked the Mist Geisha. "It let's me redirect your attack to any of my monsters. And since it returns to my hand you fail to destroy it and your mech is destroyed!"

 

"No, since my mech gains an ability when it absorbs my Mech Part - Brain. It allows me to disassemble my mech when it is targeted by an effect. Now I'll end my turn."

 

"I'll draw and summon my Fire Geisha (300/0)!" A geisha identical to the other two appeared except she was wearing a red kimono with a fire pattern. She was carrying a traditional sakuhachi, or flute. "I'll play the field spell Tea House. It puts one tea counter on every monster on your field for each Geisha I have on my side of th field. Each turn your monster loses a tea counter and when there is at least one tea counter on the field my Geisha's can attack directly. Now I'll attack directly with both my geisha's!"

 

A large traditional Japanese house with paper walls covered the table. There was no roof so the players could see inside. The geisha's went through a similar routine of dancing around Tank playing the sakuhachi and drum.

 

ILP: 8000

TLP: 3300

 

"I'll end my turn." Izzy was looking confident. Not that he wasn't confident before.

 

"I'll draw, and play polymerization. This let's me fuse my monsters to become Partial Mech - 4/6 (2000/2000), now I'll play Finish the Job. It lets e summon all level 4 or lower normal machine monsters in my hand to the field. I'll summon my two legs. Now that I go into my battle phase, it transforms into Full Mech Suit (3000/2000)! I'll now attack your Fire Geisha!" The full suit lumbered over to the geisha and punched it as hard as it could.

 

"Stop! There is another effect to my Tea House, sorry ya big lug but I can negate one attack to one of my geisha's as long as you have a tea counter one of your monsters!"

 

"I'll end my turn." 'I've lost'

 

As if Izzy new what Tank was feeling he resummoned his Mist Geisha and attacked directly with all three geishas. The singer, drummer, and flute player circled around Tank's neck and his life points drained to zero.

 

ILP: 8000

TLP: 0000

 

The holograms on the table dissipated and Tank stormed off.

 

"Hey dude," Izzy was referring to Adam. "Don't take that personally. I didn't know he would boot you off. He's kind of a sore loser. I guess you get that way when your the lowest ranked student in the school. He has a lower rank then you Froshes that haven't even stepped foot in the academy.

 

"Whatever! It doesn't matter..." Adam stormed off, where did this guy get off trying to apologize after that. Adam went straight back to his seat and prepared for landing.

 

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Chapter One End:

 

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(AN: Please tell me what you think about the characters decks, Tank is just a filler character but advice is still accepted.)

 

Here is the oc form for creating your own character but unless it's really good no dice.

 

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height and Weight:

Eye Color and Hair Color:

Appearance/Dress:

Occupation: [small stuff, like works at the card shop, or cafeteria]

Personality:

 

Signature Card: [may be custom]

Deck Type: [may be custom]

Year: 1-6 or teacher

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Epic length? More like boring length. I had to read this through on three separate occasions to get through. Still, it's well-written, but with one grammar error all over it: You write "your" instead of "you're". (Like "your here" -> You're here)

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I kinda liked the chapter length.

 

Similar to that of a real story, which to me means - If you don't like the chapter length, books aren't for you.

 

Anyway, good story so far. You have grammer errors that need fixing, but that could be solved by getting a beta reader. There are also a few other things that could be improved on, but once again, beta readers are the way to go.

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(episode opening theme)

 

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Cf-wlvo8vak

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Chapter Two Beginning: Horror Movie Marathon!

 

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I guess I have to do this know, Great well hello my name is Adam Savage and I will be your host for this episode.

 

If you read this story up to a point you might think that this is all crazy Viruses killing civilization but it is real as I have found this is my story. You'll hear all of it. But I won't reveal anymore. This story has been released to protect any flood out there that thinks that they cannot live a real life.

 

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Adam moved forward off the plane it was then he took a look at the academy. Adam was not one to take in beauty so easily but the academy was simply beautiful. The academy was a series of stark white metal domes carved into the mountain side. There was even something that looked like the hanging gardens, and was that a farm hidden behind the garden!?!

 

Well back to the point, Adam was walking back to his dorm room he was in the freshman wing so that was left, right, left. He kept walking trying not to get run over by all the people hanging out in the hallways. People were chatting with brothers, sisters, and friends that were lucky enough to get accepted together. Adam was an only child, didn't have many friends, and didn't like the only person he's met so far so he had no such luxury. Adam nicked a can of Monster from a group of people hanging out. He wasn't a crime lord or anything, but he was thirsty and it's not like it was a bank.

 

He opened the door to see a nice room. It had a small kitchenette/washroom. And a main living room with three beds and a small T.V. There was one desk off to the side of the room. His roommate posting was stapled up on the door but he didn't care, He was unpacking his all of his stuff, which wasn't very much, until curiosity overcame him and he decided to look at it.

 

ROOMATE LIST FOR DORM 115

 

ADAM SAVAGE

EZIKAL JEMINI

KAT SAWYER

 

Now Adam was no name expert, but he was fairly sure that Kat was not a girls name, that would be a problem. Adam was never good with girls and he didn't know that the dorms were co-ed. And 'EZIKAL'! was it seriously to much to ask for god to kill just one person, I mean seriously just this guy. Adam couldn't escape him.

 

Adam lay out on his bed and took an aspirin he had a headache. He slowly drifted off into sleep...

 

"I bring the hammer down!"

 

It was a girl singing, so he was right. She had just pushed her way into the room

 

"A tiny crushing sound!"

 

It wasn't an angels voice singing thats for sure. So much for his sleep.

 

"And I'm in the yard!"

 

Well she wasn't a bad singer, it was just to loud!

 

"Smashin' Matchbox cars!"

 

God, why did she have to be a screamer. And why did people have to interrupt his sleep.

 

"An itty bitty crash!"

 

Did she even know he was sleeping. How inconsiderate.

 

"And my machine is trash!"

 

Oh yeah, he wasn't even sleeping.

 

"But I'm blastin' past!"

 

I guess I should introduce myself. Adam got up out of bed slowly rubbing his temples.

 

"Hello, my name's..."

 

'Oh,' Adam noticed the fact the girl was blaring music loudly through her headphones. They were expensive one's to, really big with great bass stereo. There was no way she could hear him.

 

"With Chickey on the dash, Chickey on the gas!"

 

"Hello!" This time Adam said it a little louder.

 

She kept singing that insanely retarded song.

 

"Oh, screw it!" he laid back down examining her she was wearing a plaid skirt and orange jacket. She of course was wearing her Mp3 player. Her hair was long and black, and she was also kangaroo plushie backpack whose pouch held her deck.

 

She took out her ear buds, finally taking notice of him. She pitched her kangaroo pack onto another one of these beds.

 

"Yo." She lowered a pair of ridiculously large orange tinted sunglasses to get a look at him.

 

"Hello? My name's Adam."

 

"Cool, my names Kat." She eyed him suspiciously. "So the dorms are co-ed?"

 

"Yeah, uh, you don't need to worry about me, uh but the other guy might worry about. I mean you might need to worry about." There he went again getting confused around a girl. Even if he didn't think a girl was cute he would get intimidated. He WAS NOT good with the opposite sex.

 

"Hmm, kay, I'll keep that in mind." She turned her Mp3 player off and started to unpack like everybody else she brought a clothes pack and a personal pack. His pack was loaded with movies and comics. He craned his neck to see what was inside hers. He laughed, not at the anime DVD's or manga that she had stashed, not even the CD's but he laughed at the noticeably large amount of plushies that she had hidden under a small towel.

 

"That's quite an extensive collection you've got there." He said pointing at the plushies. He could at least manage to crack jokes without stuttering. He was always a pro at hiding his insecurity especially with the opposite sex. Like he said he had practice he had his fair share of dumpings. Of course it didn't help when you were generally unknown and a shrimp when you were trying to keep a girlfriend. Why was he even thinking about this subject now?

 

Her ears turned scarlet and her face turned pale, kind of a reverse blush. She gripped one of them in her hand and motioned like she was going to throw it at him but she put it back in.

 

"No one, I repeat no one hears about this." She made the universal death, finger across the neck, gesture.

 

"Well I may not, if you can beat me in a duel." His raised his eyebrows, he was enjoying ticking her off.

 

"No, let me repeat you have no choice, you won't tell but I will duel you, and even if I lose this isn't getting out!" She punched him in the shoulder and he hadn't braced because, she was a girl, and girls don't punch hard like guys do.

 

Stereotype disbanded.

 

While he nursed his sore shoulder he took out his duel disk. It was like a very large watch with no fins. They also had a lot of cool features like setting enhancers and less popular pain simulators. Both duelists went down the hall to a small duel arena that they had seen when they got off the plane. Only one other duel was going off.

 

Both counters raised to 8000 and both duelists cut their opponents decks. The duel then commenced.

 

"Ladies first." It was not Kat who said it but Adam. He was being a little louse and he was going to probably have to tone it down. He never usually went this far annoying people with girls. And he would have to share a room with these two people for a year if he counted Izzy who he hadn't had a good experience with either.

 

"You'll regret that, well I summon Cyber Dj Elektro-Bot

 

Cyber Dj Elektro-Bot

Four Stars

Machine/Light

1700 ATK/ 800 DEF

This card may not declare an attack unless a spell card with "Dj Disk" in its name is face-up on the field. When this card destroys an opponents monster as a result of battle you may switch this card into Defense Position at the end of your Battle Phase.

 

A chrome block style robot appeared on the field. The wires that led from his body connected to an inactive turntable in front of him and two booming bass amps behind him. The duel disks had decided that the ambiance for this duel would be hardcore techno, for now. It changed to accommodate the duelist who was winnings style.

 

"Now I'll play the card Underground Elektro Nightclub!"

 

Underground Elektro Nightclub

Field Spell

Increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters with "Cyber Dj" in their card names by 300 points. Also once per turn you may pay 600 Life Points to search your deck for one card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name and add it to your hand.

 

"I won't use it's other effect but my robot gets a boost! It's your turn loser!"

 

That stung more than she knew, and it was the final straw, even if she was a girl she was going down. Adam may not be physically intimidating but he would show her what it feels like to be a real loser!

 

A holographic crowd of people surrounded the two duelists. Kat's monster got up on a stage. An light show was going everywhere and it looked like they were really dueling in a nightclub. He was impressed with the realism though techno wasn't his personal favorite movie genre.

 

"I draw and summon Gene-Warped Warwolf!"

 

Gene-Warped Warwolf

Four Stars

Beast-Warrior/Earth

2000 ATK/100 DEF

"This warwolf was given incalculable strength through horrific genetic manipulation. Its gentle nature was completely wiped out, and it now lives only to unleash destruction."

 

The monster who rose out resembled something that could loosely be called a werewolf. It was dripping with blood and filled with rage. It had been warped so much that it looked stronger than any other normal monster. It had four really thick arms that looked like he could crush you with.

 

"Now if I'm the loser I'm pretty sure that I wouldn't be able to completely crush that puny little robot! Now my Warwolf attack!"

 

The werewolf wrestled the robot to the ground and started to rip it apart. When it shattered the base speakers exploded with a massive sound wave and also shattered the werewolf.

 

"Twit, they had the same attack strength!"

 

"Oh I know, I had something else planned, I play Frankenstein's Experiment! You'll find out what it does soon enough! I end my turn."

 

(Card Effect Will Be Revealed When Activated)

 

Kat drew a card the lasers focused directly on her and she began to speak. "I pay 600 life points to add Dj Disk - Souls of the Underworld to my hand."

 

ALP: 8000

KLP: 7400

 

Dj Disk - Souls of the Underworld

Continuous Spell

When this card is activated, Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard that includes "Cyber Dj" in it's card name. Destroy this card during the End Phase of the turn it was activated.

 

"Now I'll special summon my Cyber Dj Elektro-Bot (2000/800) and attack you directly!"

 

The bass speakers roared and blasted Adam, he skidded back a few feet back. Then Adam... well uh ... attempted to give an evil smirk but ended up with a lopsided grin. "You know the book Frankenstein. Well a lot of energy was needed to bring the mangled corpse back to life. In the book lightnign was the power source. In duel monsters the source is life point damage, and you just supplied that energy with 2000 points of damage! Now rise Frankenstein (2600/1000)!"

 

Frankenstein's Experiment

Continuous Spell

When you take more than 2000 damage in one attack Special Summon one "Frankenstein" from your hand deck. When "Frankenstein" is Special Summoned destroy this card.

 

Frankenstein

Seven Stars

Fiend/Dark

2600 ATK/1000 DEF

This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card may only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Frankenstein's Experiment." This card is unaffected by spell cards.

 

"Uh, I'll end my turn."

 

ALP: 6000

KLP: 7400

 

The scene slightly changed. Why the field remained the same, save for the lumbering giant on Adam's field. But both players were showing wear. Those big blasts drained them. Also a dark mist started to leak into the laser lights and up-beat atmosphere.

 

"Now I'll summon the monster Vampire Henchman." He gave that non-menacing lopsided smirk/grin and slapped down a card. The hologram was a handsome looking vampire that was thin and looked starved. His teeth leaked blood and his cloak was pitch black.

 

Vampire Henchman

Four Stars

Zombie/Dark

1400 ATK/0 DEF

When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points increase your life points by half of the amount of damage this card inflicted.

 

"Now I'll attack your your Elektro-Bot with my Frankenstein!"

 

The giant mishapped thing lumbered forth smashing the robot between it's hands.

 

ALP: 6000

KLP: 6800

 

"Now attack my vampire!"

 

The vampire flew forward and latched onto Kat's neck. It faked sucked blood and flew back wards off. Kat simply screamed and stumbled backwards.

 

"Your blood has fed my vampire, and now that it's drank it's fill my life points increase." Adam's life point counter raised up a couple hundred points.

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 5400

 

The field dramatically shifted. There was only a dim light on the stage and the lights had stopped. Now there was a dark mist covering the field. You could see the monsters but not your hand in front of your face. Kat couldn't see Adam across the field.

 

"I'll end my turn after I set this card!" The disembodied voice seemed to come from nowhere thanks to a duel disk ambiance voice filter.

 

She drew and looked at her hand which she could barely see and she smiled at her trademark card. "I pay another six hundred life points to add another Dj Disk - Souls of the Underworld to my hand.

 

Dj Disk - Souls of the Underworld

Continuous Spell

When this card is activated, Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard that includes "Cyber Dj" in it's card name. Destroy this card during the End Phase of the turn it was activated.

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 4800

 

"I'll special summon my Elektro-Bot with my Dj Disk's effect. Then I'll normal summon my card Cyber Dj Novas!"

 

Cyber Dj Elektro-Bot

Four Stars

Machine/Light

1700 ATK/ 800 DEF

This card may not declare an attack unless a spell card with "Dj Disk" in its name is face-up on the field. When this card destroys an opponents monster as a result of battle you may switch this card into Defense Position at the end of your Battle Phase.

 

Cyber Dj Novas

Four Stars

Warrior/Light

1400 ATK/ 1600 DEF

This card may not declare an attack unless a spell card with "Dj Disk" in its name is face-up on the field. When this card is normal summoned successfully

 

"Now I'll special summon my Cyber Dj Quicksilver to the field by paying 500 life points!"

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 4300

 

Cyber Dj Quicksilver

Four Stars

Warrior/Light

1400 ATK/ 1700 DEF

This card may not declare an attack unless a spell card with "Dj Disk" in its name is face-up on the field. Once per turn you may remove 1 monster from your Graveyard that includes "Cyber Dj" in it's card name, in order to destroy 1 monster on your opponents side of the field with less ATK points than this cards current ATK.

 

This time it was a tall purple haired Dj with rather, revealing clothing. Her pants were baggy and to low and she was wearing skin tight clothing. It was a commonly accepted joke that only two good things came from the the virus. No more wars, and a lot of card censorship companies were simply disbanded because they went bankrupt. With no more 4kids or other companies card art wasn't ripped to shreds and completely ruined.

 

"Now I can tribute all three face up monsters on my side of the field to special summon my Cyber Dj Technoshiva!"

 

[spoiler=Cyber Dj Technoshiva]6z3yiva.jpg

 

 

"Now she gets a 300 point boost (3000/2700). Rock his Frankenstein, Technoshiva!"

 

The silver four armed goddess was the largest monster on the field controlling three disks at once she cranked up the volume on her record table and the bass speakers set out massive sound waves towards the giant fiend. The whole stage zoomed back to life illuminating the entire field, to reveal a grinning Adam.

 

"I'll discard my Disembodied Hand from my hand. I have to discard it from my hand to end your battle phase."

 

Disembodied Hand

Two Stars

Fiend/Dark

400 ATK/ 0 DEF

 

The hand leaped out and latched itself onto Technoshiva's face. When she stopped squirming the bloody broken hand shattered into pixels.

 

Kat's smile was broken, she had removed her sunglasses because of the darkness which she now donned because of the light show. She had to win. There was no way she could let her secret get out.

 

"I'll end my turn so get on with it." Her voice wasn't loud but anger could be traced.

 

Adam smile drooped, he had let the joke go to far. There was no way he would stoop so low as to reveal a secret like that but he was getting back at her for, for what exactly? She hadn't done anything to him, and come to think of it either had Izzy. Why was he so angry. He didn't miss his parents all that much. He would have to set things straight, but he would win first.

 

He drew and saw the card he had in his hand. It was his Crush Card Virus.

 

Crush Card Virus

Normal Trap

Tribute 1 DARK monster with 1000 or less ATK. Check all monsters on your opponent's side of the field, your opponent's hand, and all cards they draw (until the end of your opponent's 3rd turn after this card's activation), and destroy all monsters with 1500 or more ATK.

 

Now all he had to do was summon his Flesh Eating Zombie (800/0) and use it to destroy her Technoshiva. But should he, she didn't seem confident in her own abilities and was worried about her secret getting out. He then decided what he should do.

 

"I'll set one card face down and summon my Flesh Eating Zombie in attack mode!"

 

Flesh Eating Zombie

Three Stars

Zombie/Dark

800 ATK/ 0 DEF

When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle change control of one face up monster on the side of the field and reduce it's attack by 500. This card may not declare an attack.

 

A zombie with it's head cracked open and decaying flesh staggered around on the field. He was wearing normal street clothes but the stench was overwhelming. There were somethings that I2 went to far with.

 

Izzy had snuck in when he found that no one had been in the dorm room. He had been watching silently from the beginning. He had a feeling that Adam had a card up his sleeve.

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 4300

 

"I'll play the card Dj Disk - Miracle Stars."

 

Dj Disk - Miracle Stars

Continuous Spell

You gain 1000 Life Points when this card is activated. Destroy this card during the End Phase of your next turn.

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 5300

 

"Now I'll attack your Frankenstein with..."

 

"No you won't, I'm sorry I activate my crush card virus by tributing my Zombie. Your Technoshiva is gone."

 

Technoshiva turned a sickly purple color and started to flake. She eventually shattered into mirror shard like pixels.

 

"I end my turn, there is nothing I can do! Go ahead finish the game." She looked pissed now, and worried. She was so stupid. Had she just dished out the extra 600 life points she could have destroyed that crush card with a Dj Disk, but she had been to cheap and hadn't thought it was important enough to risk that many life points.

 

"I will, I'll sacrifice my Vampire to summon my Count Dracula!"

 

Count Dracula

Seven Stars

Zombie/Dark

2700 ATK/ 1000 DEF

This card may not be normal summoned or set. This card may only be special summoned by tributing one card with "Vampire" in it's card name. This card must destroy at least one of your opponent's monsters per turn. If this card does not send this card to the graveyard.

 

A vampire wearing a clean black cloak appeared on the field. He was wearing a respectable suit under his cloak and had smoothed back black hair. His fangs didn't drip blood but instead formed a sickening grin.

 

"Now both my Frankenstein and Dracula attack her life points!"

 

One monster lumbered and smashed his fist into her and another flew over and bit her on the shoulder. She had been able to switch off the pain simulator at the last second.

 

ALP: 6700

KLP: 0000

 

Adam walked over to help her up. He offered his hand out and pulled her up. He then gave her a forced comforting smile.

 

"Don't worry, I won't tell your secret. It's just between you and me."

 

"Thank you, I've got to get back to the room, I'm really tired."

 

"Wait, one more thing, Friends?" Adam offered his hand out to shake.

 

"Friends." She agreed and shook his hand. She still had a somewhat suspicious look on her face.

 

"Well isn't that sappy." Izzy whispered to himself as he snuck back to the room to unpack.

 

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Chapter Two End:

 

 

(Special thanks to Dj Osiris for Cyber Dj Cards.)

 

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